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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Naik

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EXERTION KA FINAL CHALLENGE SHURU HO CHUKA HAI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA NE VALDIS KO SABAK SIKHA DIYA HAI, DUSRI TARAF BRAWNY AUR SLUNDER KA MORANA AUR ANWIR SE FIGHT CHAALU HAI WAHIN TEESRI TARAF RAAZ NE MABBA SE USKI HAASIL KI HUI KAALI SHAKTIYAN CHHIN KI HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA UPDATE-103


PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE MAZE



FINAL PART ( FINAL SEGMENT)





BRAWNY/SLUNDER VS ANWIR/MORANA






RAKHT VIMUTEN

BLOOD SLOW DOWN




apne haath par ek halka sa cut kar apne khoon ko nikal usse masalte hue BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ko dekhkar is pure BLACK ENERGY ke SPELL ko uccharit kiya MORANA ne jisse sun halke hairan ho gaye the BRAWNY aur SLUNDER....

reason...

jo SPELL MORANA ne bola tha,woh banned tha CHOSENS me..

waise toh har WICKED ko is SPELL ke baare me pata hota hai par 100 me se koi ek behadh strong WICKED hi aisa hota hai jo is SPELL ko successfully use me laane ke layak hota hai aur jo spell uccharan ke baad BRAWNY aur SLUNDER feel kar rahe the,usse unhe pata chal gaya tha ki woh SPELL kaa kar raha hai...

BRAWNY aur SLUNDER dono ke hi rakht pravah me dheemapan aa gaya tha...

jiska matlab tha ki un dono ke brains me khun dheeme jaane laga tha aur jiski gati guzarte palon ke saath aur kam hone waali thi..

iski wajah se un dono ko apne sir me halka bhaaripan bhi mehsoos hone laga tha aur woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki agar aisa kuch der tak aur chalta raha toh unke brains ko hamrage ka khatra ho jaayega aur isiliye..


SWATOH...

RELEASE...


apne andar jhaankte hue is SPELL jo socha bhar un dono ne jiske baad un dono ke GOD GIFTS unke hearts me chamakne lage jisse release hua ek AURA jisne un dono ke khoon ko chhu liya aur aisa hote hi MORANA ka bola SPELL kat gaya...

SLUNDER aur BRAWNY,dono hi normal ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi unhone dekha ki ANWIR ke haathon me ek BLACK SOUL SPEAR chamakne laga hai jiska matlab tha ki woh us SPEAR se unke sharir ko bhedh un dono ke SOUL ko caged karna chahta hai..


SWOOBBHHH....


tezi se aur puri taakat se feka us SPEAR ko ANWIR ne BRAWNY ki taraf par tabhi...


GHAMNIKE JAALAM...

CHANGE INTO A SNARE....


BRAWNY ke man me soche gaye is SPELL ki wajah se woh SPEAR aadhe door se hi double speed pakad wapas mood gaya aur agle hi pal ek bade se SNARE jaal me badal usne ANWIR ko jakad liya..

aisa hote dekh hairan toh tha ANWIR par saath hi us SNARE se nikalne ke liye woh taakat lagane laga par tabhi...

BLACK ENERGY ko consume karta hua woh snare WHITE ENERGY ke kano se bhar gaya jiske baad ANWIR joki us snare ko pakad todne ki koshish kar raha tha,usse ek jhatka laga aur woh neeche gir gaya..

wahin dusri taraf MORANA ne jab apne SPELL ko nishprabhavit hote dekha toh...


VARNADHE KRITYATEM

SOUL POWER DESTRUCTION


MORANA ka ye SPELL uske first SPELL se bohot zyada taakatwar aur distructive tha..

iske asar se MORANA ke sharir ke andar uske soul shakti se parmanu bomb jaise kan banane lage jinme ek aisa radiation tha jiske bahar nikalte hi opponent ka SOUL hinder hota tha..

radiation ke asar se dheere dheere opponent ka pura soul hi zakhmi ho SPELL bolne waale ka gulam ho jaata tha...

MORANA ke SPELL uccharan karte hi BRAWNY aur SLUNDER,dono hi samajh gaye ki us SPELL ko kaatne ke liye unhe apne SOUL force ko release karna hoga par agar aisa hua toh MORANA aur un dono ke SOUL RADIATION aapas me takrayenge jisse un dono ko toh kuch nahi hoga, MORANA ki power ki wajah se shayad woh bhi bach jaaye par ANWIR turant jal kar raakh ho jaayega...

but filhal un dono ko koi aur option dikh nahi raha tha aur isiliye unhone apni sochi ek maatr yukti ko use me laane ke liye SPELL uccharan karne ki thaani par woh aisa karte ki tabhi...


RELAX GUYZ....EXTREME SPELLS KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI...APNI GOD GIFTED AURA'S SE MORANA KE SEENE PAR WAAR KARO...


BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ke haathon me energy sparks dikhne lage the ki tabhi unke kaano me ye meri awaaz gunji aur meri baat sun dono hi ek dusre ko dekhne lage..

is waqt dono ke hi aankhon me hairani saaf dikh rahi thi...

reason....

ek taraf maine un dono se extreme SPELLS usne naa karne ko kaha tha aur dusri taraf maine unhe unke GIFTS ke AURA'S se waar karne ko kaha tha jo kisi bhi extreme SPELLS se 100 guna zyada dangerous tha...

par hairani ke baawjud mere faislon par behes woh dono kar sakte the nahi aur abhi toh bilkul bhi nahi isiliye...

jaisa maine kaha,un dono ne kiya..

isse pehle ki MORANA joki abhi apni aankhen band kar apne SOUL POWER ko DESTRUCTION level par pahunchane me lagi hui thi, BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ne apne GIFTS ki AURA ko release kar diya aur jab aisa hua toh....

do invisible par behadh hi strong AURA'S un dono ke sharir se nikal aage badh gayi..

wahin MORANA ne bhi apne taraf ek bohot hi ghaatak force ko aate mehsoos kar liya tha aur isiliye usne apne SOUL DESTRUCTION ENERGY RAY ko turant release kar diya par isse pehle ki woh RAY uske sharir se bahar niklati, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ki AURA'S ne usse uske seene ke thik beech me hit kar diya aur aisa hote hi...

AHHHHH....BOOM.....

pehle MORANA ke mooh se ek dardnaak cheekh nikli aur saath hi uska sharir hawa me piche ki taraf ucchal gaya par neeche naa gir beech hawa me hi rook gaya..

is beech AURA'S ke usse hit karte hi ek behadh strong energy force usse nikal aage badhi aur SLUNDER aur BRAWNY se takrayi jiske parinaam swaroop woh dono bhi halka piche hote hue neeche gir gaye par saath hi woh dono turant khade bhi ho gaye...

wahin MORANA jiska sharir hawa me thehra hua tha,uspar behoshi chhaane lagi thi par woh behosh ho nahi paa rahi thi...

reason...

uske poore sharir ko tez jhatke lag rahe the jiski wajah woh unconscious nahi ho paa rahi thi...

aur in sabke beech JAAL me phase ANWIR ko toh jo ho raha tha,woh samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha...

khair,kuch der tak jhatke lagte rahe MORANA ke body ko jiski wajah se ek nayi energy usse nikal upar uthi aur gayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi usse jhatke lagne band ho gaye jiske baad..

DHAMMM...

MORANA ka sharir neeche gir gaya jiske saath hi woh behosh bhi ho gayi aur iska matlab tha ki she was KNOCKED OUT....

aisa hote dekh BRAWNY aur SLUNDER ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi aur..


BRAWNY-hamara task bhi pura hua...

SLUNDER-hmm... chale yahan se...!!

BRAWNY-chal...


ye bol BRAWNY aur SLUNDER palatne ko hue par tabhi muskurate hue SLUNDER ki nazar ANWIR par padi jiske chehre par hairani aur sawal,dono hi bhaav dikh rahe the...

hairani MORANA jaisi strong SAVENT ke knock out hone ki aur sawal ye ki bina usse knock out kiye SLUNDER aur BRAWNY jaane ki baat kar rahe the...

palaththe hue SLUNDER ne ANWIR ke bhaav ko dekh bhi liya tha aur samajh bhi liya tha aur isiliye woh wapas uski taraf palta aur...


SLUNDER-tu toh bhul gaya par WOH kuch nahi bhulta...uspar tera ek udhaar baaki hai...

aur tera hisaab WAHI karega..


ye bol SLUNDER aur uske saath BRAWNY wapas palat nikal gaye..

wahin ANWIR SLUNDER ki baaton ka matlab samajhne ki koshish ne laga hua tha par usse zyada dimag lagane ki zaroorat padi nahi kyunki agle hi pal jawab uske saamne tha...



galatfehmi mat paalna ki tujhe zinda CHHOD DUNGA MAI....

woh hawa jisse tu saans leta hai,uska rookh bhi MOD DUNGA MAI...

sharir toh teri kategi hi par itna kaafi nahi...

jism ke saath saath teri rooh ko bhi NICHOD DUNGA MAI...

YE LINES YAAD HAI ANWIR...



ek behadh sard awaaz gunj si uthi ANWIR ke kaano me jiske impact se hi haalat kharab ho chuki thi uski aur is beech...

parath dar parath WHITE ray ke kan banane lage ANWIR ke saamne jiske beech se prakat hua mai..

aakhon me apne shikar ko dekh chamak,chehre par darindagi bhari smile aur uske upar shaant chehra..

ye sab dekh ANWIR ki haalat aur kharab hi gayi..uska mooh bhi jaise sil sa gaya tha..

khair,prakat ho mai uske theek saamne pahuncha aur...


MAI-tere diya udhaar sudh samet loutane ka waqt aa gaya hai..

par ek afsos aaj bhi reh hi jaayega...apni kahi baat ko puri tarah implify nahi kar sakta hai..

jaan se tujhe nahi maar sakta mai...

par koi baat nahi, saansein aisi chalengi teri ki zindagi tujhe teri dushman aur mout woh befawa mehbooba lagegi jisne dhoka diya hoga tujhe...


apni baat bol maine apna haath left se right swipe sa kiya aur mere aisa karte hi ANWIR jis JAAL me phasa tga,woh gayab ho gaya...

khud ko azaad dekh ANWIR joki mere paas hi tha,usne ek punch maarna chaaha mere naak par lekin uska punch mere naak se thik ek inch door hi rook gaya..

usse laga jaise kisi ne uske punch ko rok diya hai...

wahin ANWIR ke humle ko dekh...


MAI-SPELL attacks me woh maza kahan jo pyscical assault me hai...

yaad hai ye dialogue jo mujhe maarne se pehle tune kaha tha...

chal, aaj RAAZ bhi aazma kar dekhe zara,teri us dialogue ki haqiqat...


THABBB,THABBB,GHABBBB,GHABBH,KADAKKK, KADAKKK,KADAKKK,KADAKK.....
AAAAHHHHHHHH.....AHHHHHHH..

lightning speed ke saath chale mere haath jiski wajah se pehle toh ANWIR ke dono jabde,phir naak aur phir peth aur andar ki athdi ka kaam kharab ho gaya aur uske baad bade sadhe hue and andaz me maine uske dono haath aur dono pair par aise punches maare jisse wahan ki haddiyon toot gayi....

aur aisa hote hi dardnaakh cheekh ke beech neeche gir pada ANWIR..

is waqt usse dard itna ho raha tha ki uske asar se woh kabhi bhi behosh hokar challenge se bahar ho sakta tha par aisa ho,usse pehle mujhe usse kiya waade ka antim bhaag pura karna tha aur isiliye..


MAI-khade ho jaa ANWIR...


mere aisa kehte hi ANWIR ka sharir apne aap harkat me aaya aur woh tedhe pair liye khada hua..

meri shaktiyon ke asar se woh neeche gir nahi raha tha aur toote pairon par pad rahe pressure ki wahah se uske mooh se cheekh bhi nikal rahi thi aur aankhon se aansu bhi baras rahe the jinke beech woh mujhe rehem maangne ke andaz se dekh raha tha aur uske us expressions ko dekh mere chehre par smile naach uthi aur...


MAI- ye jo tere chehre par rehem ki guhar hai naa,ye mujhe tere saath saath tere ghar waalon ko bhi punish karne ke liye excite kar rahi hai...

majburi naa hoti toh abhi tere pure pariwaar ko tere hi saamne aisi mout deta ki kudrat ko bhi zindagi se nafrat ho jaati...

tere har chaahne waale ke sharir ke har ang ko,khun ke har katre ko,aatma ke har kone ko nichod deta mai...


aaj bohot din baad mere andar ka woh jaanwar jo sahi galat nahi dekhta,bahar aaya tha jise sun aur mehsoos kar rooh kaamp uthi ANWIR ki aur behadh dheeme aur ladkhadati awaaz me nikle uske mooh se bol...


ANWIR-youu arrre aaa DEVILLL RAAAZZZZ.....


ANWIR ki baat sun mere face ki smile aur badh gayi...


MAI-indeed i am...a DEVIL waiting to get unleashed....

khair, tere family ke saath naa sahi,par apni dilli khwahish tujhse toh puri kar hi sakta hun naa...

ye bol mai aage badh thik uske saamne khada hua, apna right hand uske seene par rakha aur....


AATMAM VINASHAKAM

SOUL DESTRUCTION

AAHHHHH...AHHHHHHHHHHH


mere mooh se SPELL uccharit hote hi ANWIR ke mooh se ek ek dehla dene waali cheekh nikli...

reason....

mere SPELL ke asar se uska soul uske andar hi jalne laga tha jiska impact uske baaki ke teeno AMPLIFICATION modes par bhi bohot zyada ho raha tha...

usse aisa lag raha tha ki jaise koi usse andar se nichod raha hai..

saaf shabdon me kahun toh jo haal ek aatma ka hell me pahunchne ke baad hota hai,woh ANWIR ka SOUL jeete jee mehsoos kar raha tha..

ye ek anant agni thi jiske prabhav se uska SOUL hamesha ke liye jalne bhi waala tha aur uske sharir ke andar bhi rehne waala tha..

par SOUL toh us behisaab dard ko jhel bhi le,par baaki ke AMPLIFICATION modes joki manushya ke jeeven tak hi zinda rehte hain,woh us taklif ko nahi jhel paaye aur natija...

kuch hi palon me ANWIR ka BRAIN aur BODY dead ho chuke the aur BLOOD aadha se zyada sukh chuka tha..

zinda bachi thi toh bas SOUL aur heart jo baaki ke bache BLOOD ke through behadh dheeme dheeme dhadak raha tha jiski wajah se ek living dead situation me pahunch neeche gir gaya ANWIR jiske agle hi pal uske ye third challenge aur saath hi woh zindagi jisse wakayi zindagi kaha jaata hai,khatm ho chuki thi....




ALFREEN VS MAHI



KAHAN CHALE GAYE YE SAB...!!!!


us ped ke trunk se bahar nikal idhar udhar dekhte hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne..

HIDA ne usse kamsekam 10 minute us trunk ke andar chhupe rehne ke liye bola tha par ALFREEN kareeb 15 minute baad usse bahar nikli thi par bahar nikalte hi usse koi bhi nazar nahi aaya...

kisi ko bhi aas paas naa dekh ALFREEN aage badh gayi par usse aage badhte hue abhi 1 minute bhi nahi hua tha ki tabhi uske kadam ekdum se rook gaye...

reason..

usse saamne se MAHI aati hui dikhayi di...

MAHI ne bhi usse dekh liya tha aur woh bhi apni jagah rook gayi thi...

dono ki hi nazar ek dusre ko ghur rahi thi...waise bhi ab dono me dosti jaisa kuch tha nahi aur saath hi is competition me dono hi ek dusre ki pratidwandi thi jo aur ussi haisiyat se abhi woh ek dusre ke saamne thi...

aur isiliye aankhon hi aankhon me dono ne hi ek dusre ko challenge sa
kiya aur phir....


ATUDATI...


ATTACK SPELL sabse pehle MAHI ne bola jisse KHANDAM SPELL ke saath block kar diya ALFREEN ne..

aur issike saath un dono ke beech alag alag attack aur block SPELLS ka daur shuru ho gaya..

MAHI AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ke maamle me ALFREEN se strong thi aut isiliye uske attack SPELLS ALFREEN par zyada impact kar rahe the jisse badi mushkil se sambhal paa rahi thi ALFREEN par mushkil hone ke baawjud ALFREEN kaafi ache se saamna kar rahi thi MAHI ka...

issi beech MAHI ke brain me basi BLACK ENERGY thodi thodi hulchul karne lagi thi par MAHI khudko pure control me rakh ALFREEN par normal spells se humla kar rahi thi..

par jab usne ye dekha ki ALFREEN uske har attack SPELL ko kaat rahi hai toh usne kuch aur karne ki sochi...



MADIYA DWARAM...

MAGIC DOOR..


pehle challenge me lagatar istemal kiya gaya SPELL use kiya MAHI ne jiske asar se ALFREEN ke thik piche ek MAGIC DOOR open ho gaya..

wahin ALFREEN ko bhi apne piche kuch prakat hone ka abhaas ho gaya tha aur jab usne MAHI ko gayab hote dekha toh woh uska khel samajh gayi..

aur MAGIC DOOR banane ke baad jab MAHI gayab hokar ussi door ke through prakat hui toh usne dekha ki ALFREEN ab apni jagah par nahi hai..

MAHI ki hi tarah ALFREEN bhi gayab hokar jahan pehle MAHI khadi thi,wahan pahunch chuki thi...

ye dekh MAHI toh shaant thi par uske andar basa BLACK ENERGY ab thoda zyada ufaan maarne laga aur isiliye is baar jab MAHI ne ek baar phirse ALFREEN par attack ray se waar kiya toh MAHI ke naa chaahte hue bhi us ray ke saath BLACK ENERGY ki shakti ke kuch kan bhi bahar nikal us ray ke saath ek constant beam ka roop dhar aage badh gaye..

aisa hone se aaj bohot din baad MAHI ke brain me phirse dard uth gaya tha..

wahin attack ray ko apni taraf aata dekh ALFREEN ne bhi apne aage BLOCK ray ko prakat kiya par is baar jab us ray se MAHI ka ray takraya toh ALFREEN ko tez jhatka laga..

ray ke block hone ke baad bhi usne ALFREEN ke pure sharir ko hila diya tha..

haath aage kar MAHI ke ray ko rok rahi thi ALFREEN par usse rokte hue bhi woh ghistaththe hue piche ki taraf khisakti jaa rahi thi..

woh apni puri jaan laga us attack ray ke beam ko rok rahi thi par har guzarte waqt ke saath us ray ke prabhav se uske sharir me dard uth raha tha aur saath hi uske senses bhi dheele padte jaa rahe the...

ALFREEN samajh chuki thi ki woh zyada der nahi tikne waali par phir bhi pure jasbe ke saath woh lagi hui thi...

wahin jab MAHI ke andar panap rahe BLACK ENERGY ne dekha ki ALFREEN ab bhi dati hui hai toh usne kuch extra kan us beam me beech chhode jo behadh tezi se aage badhe..

in extra kano me itni taakat thi ki jaise hi ye ALFREEN ko lagte, ALFREEN naa sirf behosh ho jaati,par saath hi uski ye behoshi challenge khatm hone ke baad bhi kaafi time tak kaayam rehti..

aur aisa hone hi waala tha ki tabhi...


KRRR.....

MAHI aur ALFREEN ke beech bane is constant ray beam ko ek naye ray ne beech se hi kaat liya jiske baad MAHI aur ALFREEN,dono hi neeche gir gaye..

par jahan MAHI girne ke baad turant uth gayi wahin ALFREEN ke senses ab bas kuch hi palon ke mehman the aur isiliye woh waise hi neeche giri rahi aur ussi position me uski nazar us disha ki taraf ghumi jahan se woh nayi ray aayi thi aur wahan dekhte hi uske face par ek smile aa gayi..

reason...

saamne mai khada tha..mujhe muskurate hue dekhne ke baad ALFREEN ki aankhen dheere dheere band ho gayi aur aisa hote hi woh mere saamne se aur is MAZE se gayab ho gayi..

wahin MAHI uthne ke baad mujhe hi dekh rahi thi...

aur usse maalum tha ki ALFREEN ki hi tarah ab usse mujhse bhi ladhna hoga par jahan ye baat uska dil maan nahi raha tha wahin uska BRAIN jisme black energy tha aur jisne mujhe mehsoos karte hi tezi se ucchalna shuru kar diya tha, woh MAHI ko mujhpar humla karne ke liye uksa raha tha..

dil aur dimag ke beech ki jung me MAHI ke chehre par tanaav dikhne laga jiska abhipraya samajh chuka tha mai aur isiliye...


MAI-ye ek challenge hai MAHI... isiliye zyada sochon mat and hit me...

aur haan,apni puri shakti se waar karna hai tumhe mujhpar.. puri shakti..samajh rahi ho naa...??


Puri shakti se mera jo matlab tha,woh samajh chuki thi MAHI..woh jaan gayi thi ki mai usse uske andar base BLACK ENERGY ki shakti ko bhi unleash karne ke liye keh raha hun..

mere aisa kehne ka kaaran toh nahi jaan paayi MAHI par phir bhi usne wahi kiya,jo kaha maine...

BLACK ENERGY ko jisse woh ab tak control karne ki koshish kar rahi thi,usse control hata liya usne apna aur aisa hote hi uske brain me base BLACK ENERGY ne usse uska pura control le liya jiske baad MAHI ka haath apne aap hi meri taraf uth gaya aur aisa hote hi ek behadh hi deadly BLACK ENERGY se labalab attack ray nikla us haath se aur tezi se meri taraf badha aur aisa hote hi maine bhi apna haath aage kar diya..

woh ray sidhe aakar mere haathon se takraya jisse bade aaram se roke rakha tha maine...

aur jab MAHI ke andar nihit BLACK ENERGY ne mehsoos kiya ki mujhe uski shakti se koi asar nahi ho raha hai toh usne apni puri taakat us ray beam me release kar di jisse bhi maine badi aaram se roke rakha..

jahan mai ray block kar araam se khada tha wahin MAHI BLACK ENERGY ke full power release karne se mentally kaafi thak gayi thi..

woh toh neehe hi gir jaati par BLACK ENERGY ne hi usse apni shakti se khade kar rakha tha..

khair,ye sab kuch der tak chalta raha aur shayad aage bhi aisa hi chalta rehta ki tabhi..

SOOBH......

mujhe apne piche se ek behadh strong BLACK ENERGY ki ray apni taraf aati feel hui aur isiliye isse pehle ki woh ray mujhe chhuti mai tezi se side ho gaya jisse ki MAHI ka attack ray aage badh gaya aur aage badh woh us ray se takraya jo mere piche se meri taraf badh raha tha aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli....

MAHI ka attack ray khatm hokar gayab ho gaya...

dusri..

MAHI turant neeche gir gayi aur girte hi behosh ho gayi jiska matlab tha ki woh bhi is challenge se bahar ho chuki thi..

aur in sabke beech khada tha mai jo side hatne aur MAHI ke behosh ho gayab hone ke baad piche palta toh paaya ki mujhse thodi door mere saamne khada tha VIDEOUS.....




HIDA VS MABBA




PEHLI BAAR MABBA KISIKE AAGE BEBAS HUI HAI HIDA...SIRF ISILIYE BAKSH DETI HUN MAI TUJHE...

CHALI JAA YAHAN SE,TERI JHUTI AKAD AUR BATTAMIZI KE LIYE MAAF KAR DUNGI MAI TUJHE...


MABBA ki baat sun HIDA ke face par ek smile naach uthi aur...


HIDA-haash..acha hua ki teri gardan aur ATTITUDE me akad lout aayi warna mai todti kisse...???

aur rahi baat teri pehli baar bebas hone ki toh woh waqt tera half yaerly exam tha,final toh ab hone waala hai...

taakat ke guroor me chur jab koi apne se kamzor ko taklif deta hai,sirf maze aur self satisfaction ke liye jab koi kisi mazloom par waar karta hai,toh us kamzor aur mazloom par kya guzarti hai,ye amplified version ke saath mehsoos karwaungi mai tujhe...


HIDA ki baat sun MABBA ke andar ban raha ghusse ka jwalamukhi phat gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...


MABBA-fine..ab dekh kya haal karti hun maiiiiiii.......


aage ki baat niklane se pehle hi MABBA ka sharir hawa me ucchal gaya tha..

reason..

HIDA ne apna haath aur attack AURA zamin ki taraf kiya jahan MABBA khadi thi,jiske baad woh jagah ukhadkar apne upar khade MABBA ko saath lete hue hawa me ud si gayi..

is achanak hue waar ke liye taiyar nahi thi MABBA isiliye hawa me udta hua uska sharir kaafi upar uth chuka tha par phir usne khudko hawa me hi shaant kar liya...

aankhon me angare liye woh HIDA ko ghurne lagi thi..

saath hi HIDA ke us waar aur us waar ki taakat se halki hairan bhi hui thi woh..

khair,hawa me hi khade khade...


SWANITOH GARDHAVA

WIND CAGE


MABBA ke is SPELL uccharit karte hi HIDA ke chaaron taraf behad tez hawa chalne lagi..

us hawa me lohe si solidity thi jo kisi cage ki tarah HIDA ko khudme rokne waali thi..

par MABBA ke is waar se halki si smile naach uthi HIDA ke face me aur...


KHANDAM SWACHAM

BLOCK CLEANER...


man me soche HIDA ke is SPELL se uske aage do invisible strong energy rays prakat hui jinhone uske aage chal rahi wind ko do hisso me kar hata diya aur aisa hote hi uske beech se hote hue HIDA aage badh gayi..

wahin apne pehle SPELL ko uccharit karne ke baad MABBA ussi wind ko jo HIDA ko ghere hue thi, ek paash me badalkar HIDA ka gala ghotne waali thi par woh aisa karti,usse pehle hi HIDA uske SPELL numa chakravyuh se bahar aa chuki thi jisse dekh MABBA bohot zyada chownk uthi thi..

wahin cage se bahar nikal..


HIDA- 2 aur mouke deti hun mai tujhe MABBA...try kar le.. teesre ke baad chouwtha waar mera hoga jisse jhel nahi paayegi tu..


HIDA ke is baat yaa phir ye kahun ki challenge ko sun behadh krodh me apna haath uske aage kar


ANGAM VIBHAJANAM

BODY CUT


MABBA ka ye SPELL kaafi deadly tha jiske uccharit hote hi bohot se invisible par dhaardhaar blades uske aage ban tivr gati se HIDA ki taraf badh chale..

MABBA HIDA ke sharir ke har bhaag ko tukdo me baatna chahti thi aur woh dhaardhar blades uske issi mansha ko pura karne ke liye aage badh chuke the par isse pehle ki woh blades HIDA tak pahunchte...


RUVATAH PRAVAH

REVERSE THE IMPACT


HIDA ke SPELL sochte hi uski taraf badh rahe spells ki disha ghum gayi aur woh dugni raftaar ke saath MABBA ki taraf badh gaye aur isse pehle ki MABBA un blades ko sense kar paati,woh uske paas pahunch chuke the par tabhi...

MABBA ko nuksaan pahunchane se pehle hi woh blades khatm ho gaye jisse mehsoos kar MABBA hairani se HIDA ko dekhne lagi jispar..


HIDA-maine kaha tha aur ki do mouke aur dungi tujhe.

mouke khatm hone se pehle koi nuksaan nahi hoga tujhe par haan,mouke khatm hote hi koi tujhe hone waale nuksaan se bacha bhi nahi paayega...

aakhri mouka hai,give it your best shot...


pehli baar HIDA ke aage halki nervous dikhne lagi thi MABBA par phir khudko shaant kar apni aankhen band ki usne aur...


SAMASTAM RIHATUKAM VINASHAKAM

COMPLETE AMPLIFICATION DESTRUCTION


apne pure AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ko ek kar uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MABBA ne jiske baad uske pure sharir se yaa phir ye kahun ki chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes se ek maarak shatki kunj nikal HIDA ki taraf badh gaya jisse mehsoos kar HIDA ne bhi apni aankhen band ki aur...


RIHATUKAM AURAVA STHUNE

AMPLIFICATION AURA HIT


HIDA ke uccharit SPELL se uske bhi andar se uski AMPLIFICATION AURA release hui aur tezi se aage badh MABBA ke AMPLIFICATION powers se takra gayi aur aisa hote hi MABBA ki powers ek jhatke me khatm ho gayi...

waise toh is takraav se pysically MABBA ko kuch nahi hua par HIDA aur uske AMPLIFICATION power aur AURA ke takraane se usse HIDA ki shakti ka halka sa abhaas ho gaya jisse mehsoos kar uski aankhen badi ho gayi thi..

wahin MABBA ke SPELL ko kaat..


HIDA-time up MABBA...now it's my turn...


apni baat bolte hue hi man hi man...


KSHATI VIMUKHE

PAIJ SENSOR..


ek chota sa par hadh se zyada powerful SPELL socha HIDA ne aur uske aisa karte hi..

MABBA ki badi aankhen jaise fath si gayi..

reason....

uske brain me ek saath un saare SAVENTS aur logon ki tadap gunjne aur mehsoos hone lagi jinpar MABBA ne atyachaar kiya tha..

un pidit logon ki sankhya aur unhe feel hua dard aur humiliation itna zyada tha ki MABBA ka brain itna dabav jhel nahi paaya aur usne us dard ko MABBA ke baaki ke teen AMPLIFICATION modes ki taraf transfer karna shuru kar diya aur jab aisa hua toh...


AHHH..AGHHRRR....AHHHH...NAHIII....

alag alag awaaz aur zor se NAHI bol MABBA ka pura sharir tadapne laga aur woh neech gir kisi mirgi patient ki tarah tadapne lagi..

kuch der tak aisa hota raha par jab us asahaniya dard ko naa jhel paa MABBA ke senses band hohne lage toh achanak se hi woh saara dard gayab ho gaya yaa fir ye kahun ki HIDA ne us dard ko gayab kar diya jiske agle hi pal MABBA ka sharir hawa me lehrata hua jhool sa raha tha..

bhale hi MABBA behosh nahi hui thi,par haalat uski kisi bejaan insaan jaisi hi thi abhi par ye toh sirf trailer tha..

picture toh usse ab dekhni thi aur isiliye....



KANKALAM BHAGDATE

SKELETON WITHDRAW



HIDA ne apna haath aage kar bohot zor se is SPELL ko bola aur uske aisa karte hi ek second ki khaamoshi ke baad...

AAAAAHHHHHHHHAAAAHHHHHHH...


ek praan ghatak cheekh nikal gayi MABBA ke mooh se...

reason...


HIDA ke uccharit SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya tha...

MABBA ke jism me darar padni shuru ho gayi thi aur kuch hi palon me uske sharir ko faadte hue uska pura skeleton bahar aa gaya tha..

us skeleton ke beech MABBA ka dhadakta hua dil bhi tha jo kisi bhi waqt rook sakta tha par aisa ho,usse pehle hi...


SHAKTIYEM BANDHAM

POWER ROPE


HIDA ke soche SPELL se WHITE ENERGY se bana ek dhardhar rope us kankal ke chaaron taraf lapeta gaya jisse naa sirf woh kankaal bandh gaya par saath hi saath us rope ke dhardhar rays se usme halke ched bhi ho gaye aur jab aisa ho gaya toh HIDA ne us skeleton ko MABBA ke sharir ke andar bhej us sharir ko pehle jaisa kar diya..

wahin MABBA ka sharir joki us SKELETON ke bahar nikalne se murda ho gaya tha,apne haddiyon aur dil ke wapas khudme samane se uske pran wapas aa chuke the par jab aisa hua toh...

us dhaardhar rays ki wajah se joki uske haddiyon ko penetrate kar rahe the,ek behadh tez chikh nikli MABBA ke mooh se aur woh neeche zamin par gir firse tadapne lagi...

ye tadap mout se hazar kuna kashtdayi thi jisse jhel nahi paa rahi thi MABBA..

aankhon me daya ki guhar liye woh neeche zamin me tadapte hue HIDA ki taraf palti par aaj HIDA ki aankhon me koi rehem nahi thi..

itne saalon ka frustration aaj MABBA ki cheekhon ke saath jaise sukoon me badal raha tha..

wahin aise hi kuch der tak tadapte hue MABBA ke senses jawab dene lage aur is baar HIDA ne bhi MABBA ko behosh hone diya..

isiliye kuch der aur tadapte rehne ke baad MABBA ki aankhen band ho gayi aur issike saath woh sirf is challenge se hi nahi balki asli duniya se bhi partially out ho chuki thi...




RAAZ VS VIDEOUS




TEENO CHALLENGES ME AB TAK KE PERFORMANCES AUR ABHI PICHE SE HUE WAAR SE BACHNE KE LIYE REFLEXES PHASE 2 SAVENTS KE HISAAB SE KUCH ZYADA HI TEZ NAHI HAIN...!!!!


muskurat ke saath mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad bhi mai bas usse shanti se khada dekhta raha jispar...


VIDEOUS-waise koi badi hairani bhi nahi hai..ab THE PROHIBITED ARCHIVE me chhupi shakti jiske saath DHANUR ke powers bhi moujud the,unhe haasil karne ke baad itni taakat ka hona toh banta hi hai...


ek gehri muskaan ke saath mere RAAZ ko unfold karte hue kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad...


MAI-kaise pata chala tujhe...???

VIDEOUS-naam RAAZ hone ka matlab ye nahi hai ki tu VIDEOUS se kuch chhupa sakta hai aur khaas kar ussiki duniya me....

CHOSENS ki ek jagah jo hokar bhi gayab hai,aur jo VIDEOUS bhi sense nahi kar paa raha hai..

is baat ka toh ek hi matlab ho sakta hai ki us jagah ko tere liye chhupaya gaya hai...

aur phir jab normal form me badalne ke kuch waqt baad tere performences me achanak se positive changes aane lage,toh mai samajh gaya ki woh us chhupi hui jagah ne khudko tere saamne ujagar kar diya hai...

MAI-waise aloukik shaktiyon ko temporary khatm karne ke piche ka ek prayojan tera bhi toh yahi tha naa ki woh chhupi hui jagah mere through bahar aa jaaye taaki koi bhi angle tujhse bacha naa reh paaye...

VIDEOUS-not bad RAAZ...andaza toh sahi lag gaya tera...

MAI-andaze tu lagata hai VIDEOUS, RAAZ facts batata hai..jaise ki purane successful WICKEDS ki powers copy kar unhe sangrah me rakha tune aur ab woh saari shaktiyan teri dhamniyon me doud rahi hain...

hain naa ye fact...???!!!


mere is revelation ko sun ek pal ke liye VIDEOUS ke chehre ki smile gayab hui par phir woh smile wapas aa gayi aur...


VIDEOUS-very good...waise ye taarif tere liye nahi hai,is CHOSENS ke sabse purane jaankar DHANUR ke liye hai..

kyunki i am sure,ek wahi hai jo purane se purane SAVENTS ki shaktiyon ko sense kar sakta hai aur jinke through tujhe ye RAAZ pata chala hai...

par actually,taarif ka thoda sa hakhdar toh tu bhi hai hi...

kyunki ye jaante hue bhi ki BLACK ENERGY se bhari shaktiyon se bhara hua hun mai,tu yun nidar hokar khada hua hai mere aage...

but RAAZ.... himmat dikhane aur bewakufi dikhane me bas halka sa hi fark hota hai aur filhal jo tu dikha raha hai,woh himmat nahi bewakufi hai...

tujhe wakayi lagta hai ki PROHIBITED ARCHIVE se haasil kiye chand ancient magic skills se tu mujhe hara sakta hai...

bilkul nahi...meri dhamniyon me beh rahi shakti aaj bhi mortal world me sabse shaktishaali hai jiske aage mai kisi ko bhi hara sakta hun,jhuka sakta hun...

aur is kisi me tu bhi aata hai... isiliye agar waqt se pehle khatm nahi hona chahta, hamare us battle se pehle jisse dono FATHERS ki niyati bhi judi hai, sharminda nahi hona chahta toh jhuk jaa mere aage..

aaj ke liye baksh dunga tujhe...

MAI-pata hai tujhme aur mujhme sabse bada fark kya hai...???

tu chahta hai ki saara bramhaand tere aage jhuke aur meri khawish ki
pure bramhaand me aisi koi taakat naa ho,jo mujhe jhuka sake...

aur filhal faisla ye karna hai ki teri chaahat me zyada dum hai yaa phir meri khawahish me...

VIDEOUS-ab tu yah chahta hai toh yahi sahi...waise bhi teri khudke liye paali galatfehmi door karne me zyada waqt lagega nahi..

MAI-galatfehmi kaun paal raha hai,ye toh pata chal hi jaana hai par haan,ek baat sahi hai teri ki galatfehmi kisi ki bhi ho,khatm hone me zyada waqt lagega nahi....



SOOBHH.....

SOOBH.....

BOOMMMM BOOMMMMMMM


apni baat khatm karte hi mere right hand se ek devastating attack beam nikal VIDEOUS ki taraf chal di jiske jawab me VIDEOUS ne bhi same beam mere beam ke upar chhodi...

hum dono ki hi beam aadhe raaste me ek dusre se takrayi jisse lagatar tez dhamake hone lage...

hum dono ki hi shakti se jo heat pressure release ho raha tha,woh bohot zyada tha jiski wajah se aas paas ke ped poudhe aur neeche beechi ghaans jal kar raakh ho jaa rahi thi..

khair,ek haath se beam release kar VIDEOUS ne apna dusra haath apne mooh ke paas kiya aur flying kiss dene ke andaz me usne ek phoonk maari aur uske aisa karte hi ek behad deadly poison gaadhe grey colour ke dhuen ka roop dhar uske mooh se bahar nikal tezi se meri taraf badhi..

wahin VIDEOUS ke is second attack ko dekh maine bhi apne left hand ko ek ray me upar niche kiya aur mere aisa karte hi us poisonous dhuen ke theek upar baadal ban gaye jisse musladhar baarish hone lagi.

us baarish ke paani me force itna zyada tha ki uske impact se woh dhuan niche dabne laga aur kuch hi palon me neeche ghaans me gir woh dhuan khatm ho gata jiske baad baarish hona bhi band ho gayi..

aur jab aisa hua toh uske agle hi pal...



APRATAKSHIT VAJRAGHATAM

UNPREDICTABLE LIGHTNING

GADDADGADGAD....




mere man me soche is spell ke baad ek hi time me alag alag disha se behadh taakatwar bijli paida hone lagi jo sidhe VIDEOUS ke sharir se jaakar takraye..

aisa hone ki wajah se VIDEOUS ke kapde halke halke jalne lage aur saath hi uska balance bhi bigadne laga par phir bhi usne naa toh apni position chhodi aur naa hi uske right hand se nikalte beam me koi change aaya...

par taklif toh usse ho rahi thi aur isiliye..


VAJRA KHANDAM

LIGHTNING BLOCK


uske mooh se ye SPELL uccharit hua jiske baad uske chaaron taraf ek invisible SHIELD numa cover ban gaya jisse takrakar meri create ki gayi lightning rookne lagi..

khair, apne cover ko banane ke baad...


NAAG PAASHAM

SNAKE CAGE

ADINAH SHAKTIYEM


pehla SPELL mooh se aur dusra SPELL man me uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne jiske asar se ek saath do chizen hui....

pehle SPELL se mere chaaron taraf bohot saare deadly snakes pragat hue aur ek ghere me badalne lage..

pehla ghera banane ke baad baaki shakes ek ladder ko tarah neeche ke ghere waale saanpo ke upar dusra ghera banane lage...

ye proccess kaafi speed se jo raha tha..

wahin dusra SPELL jisse VIDEOUS ne man hi man socha tha,usse uske attack beam ki strength 10 guna tak badh gayi jiski wajah se mai kuch 3 metre tak piche khisak gaya tha aur jab aisa hua toh...

FFFHOOKHHHH....

mere just piche se ye awaaz aayi joki saanpo ki thi jo ghera banate hue bhi mujhe dasne ki koshish kar rahe the..

ek taraf attack beam ki strength aur uska pressure aur dusri taraf un saanpo ka ghera jisme pure BLACK ENERGY nihit thi jo agar apna pura ghera complete kar leti toh usse unke andar vaas kar rahe BLACK ENERGY ka zeher nikal mere sharir pat lagta jisse mai automatically behosh ho jaata..

khair,piche sarakne ke baad maine bas apne right hand ko halka jhatka diya jisse mere ENERGY beam ki taakat bhi kaafi badh gayi aur saath hi saath maine apne pair ko zamin par zor se maara aur jab maine aisa kiya toh mere pair ke energy force se aas paas ki puri zamin kaamp gayi jiski wajah se woh saare saanp kayi feet hawa me uth gaye..

aisa hote hi woh saanp joki mere aur VIDEOUS ke beam ghere ki chapet me aaye,woh toh turant jal kar raakh gaye aur jo bache the,unke liye maine socha ek SPELL...


PAKSHIYEM GHAATAM

EAGLE ATTACK


mere is SPELL ko sochte hi achanak se hi beech hawa me bohot se eagle prakat hue jinhone isse pehle ki woh saare saanp wapas zameen par gire,unhe khaa liya aur aisa kar gayab ho gaye..

wahin apne double attack ko yun zaaya hota dekh aur mujhe ab tak apne saamne mazbooti se tike dekh VIDEOUS ke jabde sakhti se aapas me bheench gaye aur...


VIDEOUS-DEHEM PRATADAM

BODY TEAR


apne energy beam ki power ko aur badhate hue is naye SPELL ko uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne.

ye uska mujhpar bola gaya pehla praanghaatak SPELL tha jisse behadh tez invisible lava nikal meri taraf badh gaya...

khair,is praanghaatak aakraman ko dekh meri bhi aankhon me halki intensity dikhne lagi aur uske agle hi pal mere aankhon se do extreme energy light nikal mere aur VIDEOUS ke beech waali zamen se jaa takraye aur aisa hote hi woh jagah fath gayi aur us khaali jagah me lava ka chota sa pond ban gaya..

itna hi nahi,us lava ke pond me behadh strong gravitational pull tha jisne uske upar se nikalte us invisible laava ko bhi naa sirf sense kar liya balki usse apne me kheench bhi liya...

aur aisa hote hi woh lava ka pond gayab ho chuka tha..

apne itne taakatwar SPELL ko zaaya hota dekh VIDEOUS ki ankhon me bhi surkhi dikhne lagi aur hile uske honth..


VIDEOUS-bas bohot hua....

MAI-bilkul..wakayi bohot hua...tere SPELLS ko toh tod diya maine,ab tere ATTITUDE ko todne ki baari hai..


meri baat sun VIDEOUS ne apna dusra haath bhi aage kiya aur...


SHATRU VINASHAKAM

ENEMY DESTRUCTION


jaise hi VIDEOUS ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya,toh uske dusre haath se ek invincible killing BLACK ENERGY se labalabh bhari hui beam nikal meri taraf lapki aur mere right hand par aa lagi aur aisa hote hi..

AGGGGHHHHHH.....

ek dard aur zidh se mili hui gurrahat nikli mere mooh se..

reason....

jaise hi VIDEOUS ki ray mere haath par padi jahan pehle se hi ek beam hit kar rahi thi toh,mai ek jhatke me ghisaththe hue kareeb 20 metre tak piche chala gaya..

saath hi us beam se release ho rahe heat ke tarango ki wajah se mere kapde bhi kaafi jagah fathne lage the..

piche ki taraf dhakka khata hua kuch pal apne aap ko ho rahi taklif ke saath abhyasth kiya maine aur phir meri nazar padi VIDEOUS par jiski aakhon me mujhe ho rahi taklif ko dekh ek chamak aa gayi thi...

us chamak ko dekh mere face par bhi ek halki si smile aa gayi jiske baad maine shuru kiya apni shakti ka asli pradarshan...

aankh band kar mai apne hi andar behta chala gaya aur jab aisa hua toh maine release kiya mere emotions power ko aur jab aisa hua toh...

DHAKKHHHHH.....

ek jhatke me piche ki taraf udta chala gaya VIDEOUS aur kareeb 50 metre tak udne ke baad neeche zamin par aaya..

haalaki zamin par aane ke baad bhi woh neeche gira nahi tha par uski haalat dekhne jaisi thi..

uske dono haath jinse abhi bhi beams nikal rahe the,woh mere beam ke pressure se kaampne lage the.. uske sharir ka adha se zyada kapda fath chuka tha aur apne zindagi me pehli baar uske face par dard ki lakeeren saaf dikh rahi thi jisse woh chhupane ki naakamiyab koshish kar raha tha...

par ye sirf tab tak hi tha jab tak mai apni jagah par khada hua tha...

apne emotions power ko release karne ke baad ek pal ruk maine apne apne kadam aage badhaye aur jab maine aisa kiya toh mere powers ka pressure bhi badhne laga jiska impact VIDEOUS ke chehre par saaf dikhne laga tha..

chehra uska halka halka kaampne laga tha aur jaise jaise mere kadam aage badh rahe the,uske pair ghistaththe hue piche jaa rahe the...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....

ek gurrahat se bhari awaaz nikalne lagi VIDEOUS ki jo praman thi ki woh apni puri taakat laga khudko piche jaane se rokne ki koshish kar raha tha jisme woh kaamiyab nahi ho paa raha tha..

har guzarte pal aur aage badhte hue mere kadam ke saath VIDEOUS ki pyscical energy uska saath chhod rahi thi aur ab woh ye samajh gaya tha ki woh is battle me haarne waala hai but having said that,jo asaani se haar maan jaaye,woh VIDEOUS nahi..

bhale hi imandari se ho yaa fir chhal se, VIDEOUS ko bas apni jeet se matlab hota tha aur isiliye issi tark ko saabit karne ke liye usne apni aankhen band ki aur kuch naam pukare aur uske aisa karte hi uske side me teen kaale dhuen banane lage aur kuch hi palon me woh dhuen apne swaroop me the..


THE THREE DEVOTEES...

apne teeno shaktishali gulamo ko bulaya tha VIDEOUS ne apni madad ke liye aur isiliye prakat hone ke agle hi pal woh teeno wapas dhuen mle badal ek dusre ke saath merge ho gaye..

aisa kar un teeno ne khudko VIDEOUS ke dono haathon me lapeth sa liya aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..


pehli.. VIDEOUS normal ho gaya...uske facial expressions change ho chuke the..teeno DEVOTEES ki powers joki ab uske dono haathon me thi,shakti ke is aseem vridhi ki wajah se uske chehre ki smile wapas lout aayi thi..

dusri...uske haathon se nikalne waali power beams ki taakat 10 guna tak badh chuki thi aur issike saath table turn hi chuka tha...

kuch der pehle jo haal VIDEOUS ka tha,ab wahi haal mera ho raha tha..

kapde mere garm hokar halke halke jalne lage the aut kadam ab mere piche ki taraf fisalte hue jaane lage the..

aur aisa hote dekh...


VIDEOUS-haar maan jaa RAAZ...ab tu jeet nahi sakta...

sir is waqt neeche tha mera aur excessive power use karne ki wajah se kaamp raha tha par jab VIDEOUS ne mujhe haar maanane ke liye kaha toh waise hi kaampte hue maine apna sir upar uthaya,uski aankhon me dekha aur...


MAI-baazi tere haath me hai phir bhi jeetne ki bheek maang raha hai...

par afsos aaj mere paas chhute nahi hain tere liye...


ye bol maine apni aaankhen band ki aur agle hi pal maine apne andar chuppe GOD GIFTS ke AURA ko feel kar unhe bahar aane ki permission de di aur jab aisa hua toh..

BOOMMMMM....


behadh tezi se ek invincible power force mere andar se nikal mere hathon me jagmaga rahe beam ke saath mil aage badhi aur sidhe VIDEOUS ke haathon se takrayi aur aisa hote hi uske haathon se lipte woh kaalr dhuen joki uske teeno DEVOTEES the,unke andar ek dhamaka hua aur woh VIDEOUS ke haathon se chhitak kar apne asli swaroop me aate hue door jaa gire..

wahin VIDEOUS ki toh haalat hi kharab ho chuki thi...

uske sharir ke upari vastra lagbhagh pure hi fath gaye jinke andar uski shaktishaali body bhi lagatar fathne lagi..


haan fathne ke baad uske body heal bhi ho rahi thi par heal se zyada tezi se naye cuts padh rahe the uski body par jisse asahaniya pida uthne lagi thi VIDEOUS ke sharir par..

par is dard ke beech VIDEOUS ke chehre par zamane bhar ki hairani thi jisse woh mujhe dekhte hue dekh raha tha..

mere is nayi release ki hui shakti ko saaf mehsoos kiya tha usne aur yahi uski hairat ki wajah thi..

saath hi saath har guzarte hue pal ke saath apne pure zor ko lagane ke baawjud bhi uske ghutne mudne lage the...

wahin door chhitakne ke baad teeno DEVOTEES ko wapas khade hone tak me dikkat ho rahi thi..

is beech VIDEOUS ke ghutne pure mood chuke the jiski wajah se woh pehle toh zameen par baith gaya par phir turant hi shakti ke abhaav aur mere rays ke prabhav se neeche gir pada...

jahan ek taraf ab VIDEOUS ki haalat itni buri ho chuki thi ki woh apne haath pair bhi nahi hila sakta tha wahin dusri taraf is haalat me aane ke baad bhi mere release kiye gaye power ki wajah se woh behosh bhi nahi ho paa raha tha..

aur jab teeno DEVOTEES ne apne master ki ye haalat dekhi toh woh jaan gaye ki agar aisa hi kuch der aur hota raha toh VIDEOUS ek aise mental state me pahunch jaayega jahan se wapas aane me usse kaafi waqt lagega aur isiliye..


1ST DEVOTEE-rook jaao RAAZ... tum jeet chuke ho.. release kar do master ko apne power beam se..

2ND DEVOTEE-haan RAAZ..ye tumhare aur master ke beech ki nirnayak ladhayi nahi hai..isme tum inhe maar nahi sakte...

3RD DEVOTEE-agar tumne apna assault nahi roka toh master khatm toh honge nahi par haan,aise state me zaroor pahunch jaayenge jahan se unhe wapas aane me kaafi waqt lag jaayega..

isse tumhe toh koi faayda hoga nahi par jab bhi LORD loutenge,baaki sabko bohot nuksaan ho jaayega.

1ST DEVOTEE-haan RAAZ... mat bhulo ki ye kahani hamare LORD ke hisaab se hi chalegi...

aur agar inhe zyada aghaath pahuncha toh ye is kahani ke niyam phir se badal denge jisse sabse zyada nuksaan tumhe hi hoga...


is waqt meri nazar un teeno DEVOTEES par hi thi jinki zubaan se dhamki nikal rahi thi par aankhon me apne master ke liye dar saaf dikh raha tha aur mujhe ye dar ACHA LAGA...

isiliye chehre par muskaan liye maine apne haath ko niche kar liya jiske baad VIDEOUS ke sharir par meri power beam padni band ho gayi..

jahan ye dekh teeno DEVOTEES ne raahat ki saans li wahin VIDEOUS ke sharir me abhi bhi mere waar ki wajah se halke halke jhakte lag rahe the..

uske saare cuts kaafi speedily thik ho rahe the aur mujhe maalum tha ki jaise hi uska sharir pura thik hoga,uska mind shaant hokar usse behosh kar dega..

bas kuch hi seconds bache the VIDEOUS ko behosh hone me isiliye mai uski taraf badh gaya..

aur mujhe apne master ki taraf badhta dekh teeno DEVOTEES ke chehre par ek baar phirse tention dikhne lagi..

aur isiliye woh teeno latte patte khade hue aur VIDEOUS ke paas jaakar khade ho gaye aur..


1ST-stop RAAZ...

MAI-nahi toh...


meri baat sun mooh se kuch nikal hi nahi paaya un teeno ka...

wahin un teeno ke chehre par aayi bebasi ko dekh...


HAHAHAHAHA.....


ek baar zor se hasa mai aur phir un teeno ko dekh hile mere honth...


MAI-daro mat.....



maine toh bas dikh rahi gandagi ko SAAF KIYA....

chuppi kamzori ko be-pardaaye LIHAAF KIYA.....

tumhari dhamki me chhupa dar acha laga mujhe, isiliye.....

jao,aaj tumhare BAAP ko uske BAAP ne MAAF KIYA.....














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....













AAPKA APNA V....J.....
Excellent mind blowing update brother
Keep posting
Thanks for lovely update
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EXERTION KE FINAL SEGMENT ME JAHAN EK TARAF BRAWNY, SLUNDER,ANWIR AUR MORANA KO HARA DETE HAIN,DUSRI TARAF HIDA MABBA KO HARA DETI HAI, TEESRI TARAF MAHI ALFREEN KO HARANE KE BAAD EK ANJAAN RAY KE LAGNE SE KHUD BHI BEHOSH HOKAR COMPETITION SE BAHAR HO JAATI HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF RAAZ AUR VIDEOUS KE FIRST FACE OFF ME RAAZ VIDEOUS KO HARA DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-104



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE-STADIUM





UNBELIEVABLE.... ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT......CHOSENS KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS KA YE BEST EXERTION RAHA HAI...


kaafi der tak pin drop silence rehne ke baad ye pehli baat thi joki EXERTION ke sutradhaar matlab REGIS ke mooh se nikli thi...

chaliye,aage badhne se pehle is pin drop silence ka RAAZ jaan lete hain..

waise reason kaafi normal aur jaayaz hai...

VIDEOUS ke behosh hote hi woh bhi gayab ho competition se bahar ho chuka tha aur ussike saath RAAZ and company ke liye ye competition bhi khtam ho chuka tha jiske baad...

MIDDLE GROUND....ek saath uccharit kiya tha ye shabd maine aur mere doston ne jiske baad hum sabhi wapas stadium me pahunch chuke the par jab hum as winners pahunche,toh normally aise mouke par jo taaliyan aur hooting bajti hai,woh nahi baji..

reason...

baaki sabhi SAVENTS joki EXERTION se behosh hokar out hue the,woh sab toh hosh me aakar normally khade hue the par un sab participants me 6 logon ab bhi behosh the...

VALDIS,MAHI,MABBA ANWIR MORANA AUR VIDEOUS...

par jahan VALDIS MAHI aur MORANA bas behosh hi lag rahe the,wahin VIDEOUS ki haalat thodi kharab thi...

uske kapde bohot jagah se phat gaye the aur uske sharir se mere SPELLS ke asar se ab bhi dhuan nikal raha tha...

haan uski healing process on thi par mere GOD GIFT powers ke release aur usse touch hone ki wajah se naa sirf woh process kaafi slow ho chuki thi balki saath hi VIDEOUS ke behosh chehre par bhi dard ki lakeeren saaf dekhi jaa sakti thi...

aur ANWIR ki haalat bhi dekhne layak thi..

woh tha toh behosh par dekhne se aisa lag raha tha maano mar chuka ho...

aankhen puri band nahi hui thi aur jo aankhon ka halka hissa khula hua tha,woh kisi murde ki tarah palta hua tha....

wahin sabse buri haalat thi MABBA ki... skeleton ke bahar nikal wapas jism ke andar jaane ki wajah se uske dono haath piche ki taraf ghume hue the..

neeche zamin par pade hone ke baad bhi uski kamar upar ki taraf uthi hui thi maano neeche koi adrishya takiya rakha gaya ho...

gardan bhi aise thedhi hui thi jaise kisine uski gardan tod di ho...

pure sharir ke alag alag bhaagon se khun rees raha tha jaa jo iske kapdon se hote hue khule bhaagon se bahar nika raha tha..

honth ke side se mirgi patient ki tarah jhaag nikal rahi thi aur behosh hone ke baawjud uska sharir halka halka kaamp raha tha...

uski waisi haalat dekh wahan khade sab naa sirf dar gaye the balki unhe andaza ho gaya tha ki usse kis level ka pain jhela hoga...

kuch WICKEDS bhi the wahan moujud the jo ANWIR aur unki favourite WHIZZ MABBA ki haalat dekh dar gaye the...

aur yahi sab dekh WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur stands me baithe sabhi parents shocked aur dar se gaye the...

wahin teeno SOVES jaante the ki jab tak ye behosh SAVENTS aur MABBA yunhi stadium me rahenge tab tak parents normal nahi ho paayenge aur isiliye...

MAHI, VIDEOUS, ANWIR aur MORANA ki bodies ko unhone unke ABODES me gayab kar pahuncha diya aur MABBA ki body apne aap gayab ho gayi jisse dekh woh teeno samajh gaye the ki ye kaam uski behen ne kiya hai...

khair,un 6 logon ke gayab hone ke baad us chhayi hui khamoshi ko ab REGIS tod chuke the aur isiliye apni baat ko aage badhate hue

REGIS-jo results aaye hain,waisa kuch kabhi hoga,woh kisine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha...

aisa pehli baar hua hai ki STELLARS kisi competition me first toh door ki baat hai, second tak nahi aa paaye hain wahin WEAKLINGS PHASE 2 ke sabse bade competition EXERTION me first aaye hain aur woh bhi ek lambe margin se...

brilliant....

aur ab mai chahunga ki hamare teeno SOVEREIGN'S WEAKLINGS ko is competition ke CHAMPIONS declare kar unhe winners TROPHY apne haathon se den...


jahan REGIS ki baat sun teeno SOVES stage par aakar khade ho gaye jiske beech abhi ek bohot badi si chamchamati trophy rakhi hui thi wahin REGIS ne jo bhi kaha,usse sun stands me sabhi parents aur yahan ground me khade saare SAVENTS clap karne lage the.

in SAVENTS me ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi shaamil the joki aaj second position me the par phir bhi bohot khush nazar aa rahe the..

khair,us TROPHY ke paas pahunch....


SHAILA-WEAKLINGS...aapke performance ki taarif me jitne shabd kahe jaa sakte the, REGIS pehle hi keh chuke hain..

waise bhi EXERTION jaise deadly competition me naa sirf survive karna balki itne strong opponents ko harate hue bina kisi pyscical damage ke saath yahan khada hona bohot badi baat hai...

you really are CHAMPIONS...aur jab mai champion keh rahi hun toh ye shabd sirf WEAKLINGS ke liye hi nahi balki GROOMERS se bhaag liye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi hai kyunki in dono ne bhi naa sirf pure competition me behatarin perform kiya hai par saath hi KNOCK OUT challenge ko apne catagory me bas in dono ne hi successfully paar kiya hai...

aur isiliye prize ke hakhdaar ye dono bhi hain...

so all the members of WEAKLINGS and with them ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, come on stage....


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun baaki sab behadh khush dikh rahe the wahin ALFREEN halka sharminda feel kar rahi thi kyunki hamare catagory me bas ek wahi thi jiska performance baaki members jitna strong nahi tha...

yahi reason tha ki SHAILA ke bulane par baaki sab toh stage ki taraf badh gaye par ALFREEN apni iagah par hi sir jhukaye khadi rahi jisse dekh mai uske paas gaya aur...


MAI-ALFREEN....haar ho yaa jeet...ye matter nahi karta ki kaise hui hai...matter bas result karta hai..

aur result yahi hai ki tum winner ho...that sit...admit it,feel it & own it...

chalen..!!!


haath uski taraf badhate hue kahi maine ye baat jisse sun muskurate hue dekha usne mujhe aur mera haath pakad stage ki taraf badh chali..

ye sab stands par baithe FLORIN aur MARIA bhi dekh rahe the aur is waqt unke face par garv aur aankhon me khushi ke aansu the..

waise khushi ke aansuon ka stock un dono ke baaju mai baithe BRAWNY ke parents NAOMI aur SHALTON ke paas bhi tha jo is waqt behadh garv ke saath apne bete ko stage me ek winner ki tarah khade hote dekh rahe the aur ye khushi aur garv us waqt chaar guna aur badh gayi jab mere aur ALFREEN ke stage me chadhne ke baad hum sabne us TROPHY ko lift kiya...

jahan mai trophy ko hold kar normally hi khada raha wahin kuch der baad jab ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko unki khushi bardasht nahi hui toh un teeno ne trophy ko thaame hue idhar udhar zoron se hilte hue ek tarah ka dance hi shuru kar diya tha jisse dekh sabki hasi nikal gayi thi....

khair, taaliyon aur hooting ke beech kuch der wahin stage me khade rehne ke baad hum sab neeche utarne hi waale the ki tabhi...


AKSHAANT-one minute SAVENTS...aap sabka performance sirf ek TROPHY deserve nahi karta balki aap sabki hi tarah kuch extra ordinary gifts bhi deserve karta hai jo ab aapko milega isiliye fall in line....


AKSHAANT ki baat aur gift ke baare me sun sabhi behadh excitement ke saath ek dusre ke left right me khade hote hue ek line alignment kar chuke the aur aisa hone ke baad teeno SOVES right end ki taraf jahan BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the, unke saamne jaakar khade ho gaye aur apne apne haath unke aage kar diya aur unke aisa karte hi unke hatheliyon par ek ek DECANTER aa gaya jisse unhone un teeno ki taraf kar diya...

(DECANTAR-3 inchi perfume ki transparent shishi.is DECANTER me fark bas itna tha ki iske upari bhaag me sprayer ki jagah knob tha)


khair,DECANTAR ko apne haathon me thaam woh teeno aakhon me sawal liye teeno SOVES ko dekhne late jispar...


SHAILA-is DECANTAR ke andar ka perfume sirf ek baar hi bahar nikal sakta hai...

saath hi iske andar ek ek note hai jo tum teeno se related hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun woh teeno us DECANTAR ke knob ko kholne lage par aisa karte waqt unhe aascharya hua..

reason...

woh knob ghuma hi nahi..unhone taakat bhi lagayi par natija same raha jisse dekh jab unhone teeno SOVES ko dekha toh...


MOKALSAR-is DECANTAR ka knob sirf tabhi khulega jab iske khulne ka sahi waqt aayega...


ye bol MOKALSAR baaju me taraf gaye jahan HIDA khadi thi...


MOKALSAR-aaj aapne jo performance di hai,usse aapne saabit kar diya ki PHASE 2 me tumse behtar koi WHIZZ nahi hai..

isiliye like your SAVENT BRAWNY,aap ab se WEAKLINGS ki nahi balki STELLARS ki WHIZZ hain...

ye baat MOKALSAR ne zor se kahi thi jo ground me khade sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi suni aur anouncement ko sun woh sabhi kaafi khush hokar HIDA ke naam ki chanting karne lage..

pehle MOKALSAR ki anouncement aur ab apne naam ka chant sun HIDA kaafi emotional hone lagi thi par kisi tarah woh khud ko sambhaale hue thi...

khair, MOKALSAR jab HIDA ke saamne khade the tab AKSHAANT unhe cross karte hue ALFREEN ke paas jaakar khade ho chuke the aur jaise hi MOKALSAR ki baat khatm hui toh unhone ALFREEN ke aage apna haath kar kar diya jisme is waqt ek average size ka FLASK tha jiske andar paani jaisa hi liquid bhara hua tha jisse thaam jab ALFREEN ne AKSHAANT ki taraf dekha toh...


AKSHAANT- jab paani bhi tumhari pyaas naa bujha paaye tab iske andar ka paani tumhe rahat pahunchayega...

isse sambhal kar rakhna...


AKSHAANT ki baat ka matlab toh ALFREEN nahi samajh paayi par phir bhi usne haan me apna sir hila diya..


issi beech SHAILA mere saamne khadi ho mujhe muskurate hue dekh rahi thi aur fir jaise hi AKSHAANT ki baat khatm hui toh unhone apna haath saamne ki taraf lehraya aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur mere beech hawa me hi ek 3 inch ka red metal box aa gaya jisse garm bhaamp sa nikal raha tha..

us bhaamp ko mehsoos kar hi hum sab samajh gaye the ki ye metal box kitna garam hoga...

khair,jaise hi box hawa me prakat hua toh..


SHAILA-tumhare sarvshrestha performance ke liye inaam hai ye RAAZ...

hold karo isse...


jahan SHAILA ki baat sun hairan ho gaye sabhi wahin maine bina kuch soche us box ko pakad liya...

par shocking baat ye thi ki mujhe woh boz bas maamuli sa hi garam lag raha tha..

khair,mere box ko pakadte hi...


SHAILA-is box ko tumhare alawa koi nahi chhu sakta..

agar koi kosish kare toh uska haath jal kar raakh ho jaayega...

anyways, is box ke andar jo bhi chiz hai,usse akele me dekhna par woh kis kaam aa sakti hai,woh tumhe figure out karna hai....

SHAILA ki baat par haan me sir hilaya maine jiske baad ek baar phirse hum sab ko badhayi dete hue SOVES ne aaj ka day off ghoshit kar diya...

aisa hote hi hum sab stage se neeche utre..

jahan stage se utar haathon me TROPHY ko pakad BRAWNY sidhe apne parents ki taraf badh gaya wahin ALFREEN bhi apne mom dad ke paas chali gayi....

usne mujhe bhi chalne ko kaha tha par maine baad me milne ka bol usse jaane diya....

aur is beech BRAWNY apne mom dad ke paas pahunch gaya jispar...


SHALTON-proud of you son....


apne bete ko gale se lagate hue kahi ye baat SHALTON ne..

SHALTON ke baad NAOMI ne bhi pehle apne bete ka maatha chuma aur phir usse apne seene se laga liya...

aaj najaane kitne arse ke baad dil se khush the SHALTON aur NAOMI aur woh khushi unke chehre par saaf dikh rahi thi aur us khushi ko unka beta BRAWNY bhi mehsoos kar behadh khush ho gaya tha..

khair,kuch pal baad jab BRAWNY apni mom dad se alag hua toh usne apne haathon me pakdi trophy un dono ke aage kar di jisse behadh garv ke saath un dono ne thaam liya...


GARV...yahi toh woh expressions the jo najaane kab se BRAWNY apne liye apne mom dad ke face par dekhna chahta tha aur aaj jab uski ye khwahish puri hui toh usne nazar ghumate hue meri taraf dekha..

is waqt uski aankhon me mere liye bohot zyada samman tha aur ye feeling SHALTON aur NAOMI se bhi chhupi naa reh paayi aur isiliye...


NAOMI-beta ek baat puchun...???


NAOMI ki awaaz sun BRAWNY apne mom dad ki taraf palta aur apni mom ko dekh woh unke sawal ko bhi samajh gaya...


BRAWNY-RAAZ ke baare me puchna chahte hain naa aap dono...???


BRAWNY ke sawal par haan me sir hilaya un dono ne jiske baad...


BRAWNY- mom dad..i know ki jo kuch bhi usne aap dono ke saath kiya,uske liye aap dono ke hi man me uske liye bohot kadwahat hai aur aisa hi kuch kuch waqt pehle tak mere man me bhi tha..

par ajeeb baat ye hai ki RAAZ bhi yahi chahta tha ki mera man uske liye ghusse ki aakhri hadh tak bhar jaaye aur isiliye hi usne aap dono ke saath bura vyavahar kiya tha...


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske mom dad chownke aur..


SHALTON-matlab...!!!!

BRAWNY-details toh mujhe bhi nahi pata par jitna jaanta hun,bata deta hun..

darasal kuch SAVENTS me special talent hota hai jisse bahar laane ka tarika bhi kaafi unique hota hai..

mere maamle me mere chuppe kaabiliyat ko bahar nikalne ka tarika anger aur frustration tha..

aisa frustration jiske aage life bhi choti lage..

RAAZ ye baat jaanta tha...aur mere pichle PHASE se is PHASE ke safar ko dekh usse is baat ka bhi andaza ho gaya tha ki life and death level ka frustration mujhe meri insult hone se nahi niklega..

waisa karne ke liye bas ek hi tarika tha aur woh tarika tha aap dono ki insult..

ek aisi insult jo mere bardasht ke bahar ho aur aisa hua bhi...

aap dono ke insult se mere andar ka rage mere hidden talent ko saath dhakelte hue bahar aa gaya...

aur phir RAAZ ne hi us talent ko nurture karne me meri madad ki jiska result aaj aapke saamne hai...


RAAZ ko unke bete ke andar chuppe talent aur us talent ko bahar nikalne ka tarika kaise pata chala,ye sawal SHALTON aur NAOMI,dono ke hi man me aaya tha par phir jiska naam hi RAAZ ho,uske baare me RAAZ janana asaan toh tha nahi...

aur saath hi jo baat sabse important thi,woh thi BRAWNY ki tarakki isiliye saare sawalon ko dimag se jhatak SHALTON aur NAOMI apne bete ki kaamiyabi par uske saath milkar khush hone lage....

wahin same waqt par jab ALFREEN aur BRAWNY apne apne parents ke paas gaye, toh mai apne ABODE ke liye nikalne hi waala tha ki tabhi....


RAAZZZZ....????


mere naam ko ek unsure sawal ki tarah pukara mere piche se kisi ne jisse sun jab mai piche palta toh mere saamne first PHASE ke chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS OPHILIA, VIOLET,NOX aur OMMIN khade the..

darasal PHASE 2 ki activities aur life style PHASE 1 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko pata nahi chalta hai..

pichle PHASE me mere gayab hone aur phir PHASE khatm hone ke baad mera zikr tak unme se kisike saamne nahi hua tha...

par EXERTION se pehle in chaaron ki mulakat EDWINA se hui thi jinhone PHASE ke baare me batate waqt baaton
hi baaton me mere zikr kar diya jisse sun woh chaaron hairan ho gaye..

aur uske upar mere is PHASE ke achievements ko sun toh unhe yakin hi nahi hua tha aur isiliye aaj woh chaaron yahan mujhse milne aaye hue the..

PHASE 2 me bhale hi aaj EXERTION tha par PHASE 1 me toh regular classes chaalu the isiliye apni classes khatm karne ke baad woh chaaron yahan aaye the aur us waqt hamara knock out challenge on tha...

competition ke baad stage me jab unhone mujhe dekha yaa phir ye kahun ki mere badle hue swaroop se rubaroo hue toh unhe laga jhatka..

aur phir jab mujhe trophy mila aur SHAILA ne mere performance ki taarif ki toh un chaaron ke ek baar phirse bohot zyada shock laga..

aankhon se sab dekhne ke baad bhi woh unsure se the aur isiliye mere paas aane ke baad bhi ek unsure awaaz ke saath mera naam pukara tha OPHILIA ne...

jisse sun jab mai unki taraf palta toh unke sawal ki hairani unke aur baaki teeno ke face par bhi dikhne lagi..

reason...

ab hairan toh hona hi tha...kahan pichle PHASE ka woh dubla patla saawla dabbu sa ladka aur kahan woh ladka jo is waqt un sabke saamne tha joki us purane RAAZ ka complete contrast tha...

khair,un chaaron ko dekh ek smile aa gayi mere chehre par aur...


MAI-mujhe mera naam bata rahi hain yaa phir puch rahi hain...???


pehle mera badla hua roop,uske baad mera smile karna,joki last PHASE me maine kabhi nahi kiya tha,ye sab dekh unka doubt aur gehra hone laga tha par meri awaaz sun aur usse pehchaan jaise unke mere RAAZ hone ka 90 percent doubt chala gaya tha...

aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-tum batao..itna change toh sirf magic se hi ho sakta hai koi toh aise me doubt toh hoga hi naa...

dimag toh maan bhi le par dil nahi maan raha ki tum wahi RAAZ ko jisse hum jaante the...!!!!

MAI-hahaha...ek kaam kijiye...apni aankhon se meri taswir kheench uske reel ko dil me utaar lijiye...

jo dhadkan khudke ehsaas ko chhupane lage toh dil ko yakin ho hi jaayega ki taswir ka maalik RAAZ hi hai...


ek baar phirse meri baat sun aankhen badi aur mooh khul gaya tha un chaaron ka...

jahan aaj se pehle jab bhi un chaaron ne mere mooh se kuch suna tha toh woh katu vaani hi hua karti thi wahin aaj bol mere shayraana the aur lehza ashiqana...

itna mitha bhi bolunga mai kabhi,ye socha nahi tha un chaaron ne..

haan par tab me aur ab me ek baat common bhi thi aur woh ye ki tab meri kahi kadwi baaton ka bhi jawab un sabke paas nahi hota tha aur ab mere diye mithe tark ka bhi tod nahi tha unke dimag me..

khair,hum paanchon me se koi baat ko aage badhata ki tabhi...


RAAZ....!!!!!


ek baar phirse mere piche se kisine pukara mujhe par is baar is awaaz me narmi yaa hairani nahi balki ek guraahat thi jisse maine toh sirf suna tha par mere saamne khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne jab mere piche khade shaksh ko dekha toh naa sirf woh sab hairan hua balki un chaaron ki haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

wahin un sabke facial expressions dekh mere face par phirse ek smile naach uthi aur mai dheere se palta piche aur dekha ki mere saamne kuch door par kaale labaade me dhaki ek behadh white skin ki milkiyat liye lady khadi hai...

kareeb 5.10 inch lambi behadh khubsoorat lady jiske chehre par ghamand aur rubaabh saaf jhalak raha tha...

aur apne teekhe nain naksh aur badi kaali gehri aankhon ke saath woh mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi..

khair,jaise hi mai us lady ki taraf palta toh ek pal aur unhone mujhe ghoora par phir unki nazar mere piche khade chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS par gayi joki ek ishara tha jisse un chaaron ne turant samajh liya aur agle hi pal woh sab wahan se gayab ho chuke the aur jab aisa ho gaya toh us lady ki anzar wapas mujhpar aakar tik gayi aur tabhi...


MAI-chehre par naarazgi par aankhon me dard, har pal badalte bhaavon ke beech ek thehri hui fikrmandi...

aisa toh tab hi hota hai jab koi apna yaa toh mar gaya ho yaa phir mout jaisi haalat me ho aur saamne woh banda khada ho jisne us apne ko us haalat me pahunchaya hai..

aur agar mera ye calculation sahi hai jo hamesha hota hi hai toh aap SEBIL hain, MABBA ki SISTER....


meri baaton ko sun ek pal us lady ke aankhon me zalzala sa aaya par phir khudko normal kar woh chalte hue mere paas aayi aur thik mere saamne aakar khadi ho gayi...

shaant aankhon ke piche se uski mere liye umad rahi nafrat jhaank rahi thi jisse dekh meri smile aur gehri ho gayi..

wahin kuch der mujhe dekhne ke baad...


SEBIL- tumhara calculation toh wakayi sahi hai par life me pehli baar SEBIL se kisiki taakat ko toulne me galti hui hai jiska natija uski behen ne bhugta hai...

par haan,mai ye bhi nahi maan sakti ki ek PHASE 2 ka SAVENT MABBA jaisi strong sorcerer ko naa sirf maat de de par saath hi usse us condition me pahuncha de jisme woh abhi hai...

EARTH PLANET se aaya ek anath ladka jo achanak se hi PHASE 1 me gayab ho gaya tha aur phir jab louta toh uski puri kaaya hi badal gayi...

is kaaya palat ke piche chuppe RAAZ yaa phir background ko bina jaane MABBA bhid gayi tujhse aur yahi uski galti thi...

par uski hi tarah tune bhi same galti kar di... MABBA se bhidne se pehle tujhe uske piche kaun khada hai,ye ache se jaan aur samajh lena chahiye tha...

woh rishte me behen thi meri par rakha maine usse apni bacchi ki tarah tha jiske jism par halki si kharoch bhi bardasht nahi thi mujhe aur tune toh usse ek tadapti mout si zindagi de di...

uske sharir ke baahri ghaav ke saath usse hamesha ke liye tadapne waale andruni zakhm bhi diye hain tune....

aur ye kar tune apne liye jeeteji HELL chun liya hai ladke...

tere sharir aur aatma ke har hisse ka khandan kar dungi mai...aisi haalat ho jaayegi teri ki taklif shabd ko bhi bepanaha taklif mehsoos hone lagegi....

kuch waqt jee le tu DHANG se,phir toh sukoon ko nikal jaana hi hai tere ANG ANG se....


apni baat keh us baat ke asar se meri aankhon me dikhne waale khouf ko dhundne lagi SEBIL par jo bhaav mujhme hai hi nahi woh bhala nazar kahan se aaye..

khair, SEBIL ki baat sun ab maine uski aankhon me jhaanka aur...


MAI-RAAZ...is naam ke piche ka ek RAAZ ye bhi hai ki tu jis HELL ki baat kar rahi hai,woh bhi is naam ko sun apna thikana badal leti hai...


mujhse takrakar hi teri behen ne apni bigdi HAALAT kar li...

aur sikhne ki jagah tune bhi uski tarah mujhse BAGAWAT kar li...


par isme teri bhi kya galti...ab kutte ki tedhi dum ke baare me duniya jaanti hai aur misaal deti hai,bas kutta hi hai jo apni is bewakufi se anjaan hai....

aur jis waqt ki tu baat kar rahi hai, woh mere liye nahi balki tere liye ek vardan ki tarah hai...

apne mastishk ke chakshayu ko khol man ki aankhon se apni behen ki haalat ko dekh aur tay kar apni niyati...

agar is dauran buddhi brasht karne waala sarp naa dase tujhe toh apni raah par chalte rehna par agar chutiyape ki goli hazam kar li tune toh aa jaana hamari gali...

vaada hai RAAZ ka,swagat me koi kami nahi rahegi...

par haan,mera raasta kaatne se pehle apni shakti ka aakhri kan tak ikattha kar lena kyunki...



tera kade se kada waar bhi RAAZ ke liye NARAM HI HOGA.....

par mera waar jhelne ka DUM tujhme KAM HI HOGA......

aage badhe pair piche hath sakte hain.....

par jo meri taraf chali tu,toh woh teri zindagi ka AAKHRI KADAM HI HOGA.....














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......














AAPKA APNA V....J......
Mind blowing fantastic update brother
Bahot shaandar mazedaar lajawab update
Thanks for lovely update
 

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MIND BLOWING FANTASTIC OUTSTANDING SIR

YE UPDATE NI ZALZALA THA ABHI TAK DO TEEN BAAR PADH CHUKA HOON TAB BHI SAME EXCITEMENT HOTI HAI LAST KI LINES PADHNE MEIN

ISLIYE VIDEOUS MAHI MEIN DIRECTLY BLACK ENERGY KO ENTER NI KARA PAYA KYONKI VO BHI SADHARAN MANUSHYA NI HAI

BOHOT HI SHAANDAAR AND WAITING FOR THE NEXT FABULOUS UPDATE !!!!
 

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