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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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ERRAPEL...... nice name
bro apki story ki ek khasiyat ye bhi hai ki iske characters ke names bade hi mast hote hain.esa feel hota hai jese koi GREEK mythology ki hindi dubbed film dekh raha hun. ab zahirsi baat hai jab characters hi various planets ko belong karte hain to naam bhi usi hisabse honge hi.

ajke update me videous ka part boht mast laga
agar unhe chot pahunchi toh RAAZ ko khabar ho jaayegi aur RAAZ ko khabar matlab tumhari kabar.. Hahaha ye VIDEOUS bhi na..... shayerana hogya hai...... :D :D :D
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVES RAAZ AND FRIENDS KO UN SABKE EXERTION ME BEHTARIN PRADARSHAN KE LIYE TROPHY AUR HAR EK KO INDIVIDUAL GIFTS DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR SEBIL EK DUSRE SE PEHLI BAAR MILTE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-105



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-CELESTE MOUNTAIN







YE BABA BHI MUJHE KAHAN KAHAN BHEJTE REHTE HAIN HAIN....???


BABA BHEJTE HAIN....!!!!!JADIBUTIYON AUR DUSRI HEALING SUBSTANCES KA NAAM SUNTE HI TERA MAN KHUDBAKHUD KHEENCHATA HAI USKE MILNE WAALI JAGAH KI TARAF...

AUR YAHAN BHI USSIKE LIYE AAYI HAI TU....


khudse hi sawal aur shikayat kar aur phir khudhi se hi khudko jawab dete hue kahi ye saari baat ek ladki ne...

subah ka waqt hai...aur is waqt woh ladki sir se lekar pair tak alag alag kapdon ke layers se dhaki hui thi...

reason...

CELESTE naam ke jis pahad me woh is waqt chal rahi thi,ye ek barfila pahad tha jisme filhal is waqt behad thandi hawayein chal rahi thi..

zyada uncha pahad nahi tha ye,par haan,lambayi iski kayi kelometres tak faili hui thi aur pichle 1 ghante se lagatar chalte rehne ke baad bhi yahan par padne waali sardi ki wajah se us ladki ke sharir me zyada garmi nahi chadh paayi thi...

ek LINER BALACLAVA joki sir se lekar gardan ka ka innerwear hota hai aur behad garm bhi,usse pehna hue tha us ladki ne...

sharir par bhi teen layers chadhaye hue the usne jisme sabse upar tha PUFFY JACKET jo filhal gale tak bandh tha..

fur ke hand gloves aur pairon me insulated winter boots pehne woh ladki badi tezi se us barf se dhake mountain par chadhi jaa rahi thi ki tabhi...

GRRRRR.......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ne us ladki ke tezi se badhte kadamo ko jaise ek jhatke me rok liya tha..

par uske pairon ke rukne ka kaaran awaaz nahi balki us awaaz ke piche jhalak raha dard tha jisse sun kar ansuna nahi kar paayi woh ladki aur uske kadam turant hi apne left ki taraf mood gaye jahan se woh awaaz aayi thi...

tezi se aage badhti hui woh ladki kuch aage hi gayi thi ki tabhi uske kadam ek baar phirse rook gaye..

reason...

usse thode hi aage ek bohot bada sa SNOW LEOPARD barf me gira pada hua tha...

ye ek gigantic WHITE LEOPARD tha jo kareeb 10 feet lamba aur 6 feet upar ki taraf utha hua tha...

is waqt uske pet se thoda neeche ek spere jaisa bada hathiyar ghusa hua tha jiski wajah se woh chhatpata tha hua barf par gira apni antim saansein le raha tha...

us spear ko dekh woh ladki saara maajra samajh gayi....

darasal mountain ke dusri taraf yahan se kareeb 10 km door ek shikari kabila rehta tha aur uske hi logon ne joki bohot hi khatarnaak aur daksh shikari hote hain, us leopard par humla kar uske andar ye spear ghusaya tha..

par yahan ke leopard bade se bade ghaav ko jhelte hue bhi kaafi der tak tezi se doud sakte hain aur isiliye hi ye leopard yahan tak pahunch paaya tha aur jab usse laga ki woh un shikariyon ki pohonch se door nikal aaya hai toh apne dard ka izhar karte hue jisse us ladki ne bhi suna tha,neeche gir gaya....

khair,uski aisi haalat dekh kar us ladki ko bohot bura laga aur usne turant apne kadam us leopard ki taraf badha diye..

wahin dheere dheere band hoti hui aankhon ke beech jab us leaopard ne kisi shaksh ko apni taraf aate dekha toh us bigdi haalat me bhi darane ke udeshya se halka sa gurra utha jisse sun us ladki ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

woh ruki nahi aur kuch hi palon me woh us leopard ke saamne baithi uske sir ko sehlane lagi...

us leaopard ko abhi bhi apne saamne baithe shaksh me ek dushman hi nazar aa raha tha jo uski buri haalat ka faayda uthane aaya hua tha..

yahi wahah thi ki us ladki ke usse chunne se woh apni bachi hui jaan aur shakti ko laga hilne dulne laga...

woh ladki bhi us leaopard ke dar ko samajh chuki thi aur isiliye...


LADKI-shhhh......daro mat shaant ho jaao....mai dushman nahi dost hun...mera naam ERRAPEL hai....


jaise hi us ladki ne naam bataya,woh leopard bilkul shaant ho gaya.uska chhatpatana band ho gaya aur woh tukoor tukoor apne saamne baithi ladki ko yun dekhne laga jaise usse barso se jaanta ho...

us leopard ki is harkat par ERRAPEL bhi halki muskura di jispar...


OOONNNN......


ek ejeeb si awaaz nikaal wo leopard ERRAPEL ke pair me apna sir ragadne laga maano keh raha ho ki usse bohot dard ho raha hai....

uski is harkat par ERRAPEL par uspar behadh pyarbbhi aaya aur uski is kashtdayi situation par daya bhi aayi aur...


ERRAPEL-toh tum mujhe jaante ho..fikr mat karo...kuch nahi hoga tumhe....

kuch hi palon me puri tarah thik ho jaaoge tum...

ye bol ERRAPEL ne apne PUFFY JACKET ki chain ko khola aur aisa kar usne apne haath andar daal ek choti sa pocket bag,jo usne apne jacket ke andar rakha hua tha,usse bahar nikala...

ERRAPEL ne us pocket bag ke chain ko bhi khola aur uske andar se do choti choti jadibuti nikali..

ek haath me dono jadi buti ko pakadte hue usne apne dusre haath se us spear ko pakda aur...


ERAPPEL-thoda sa dard hoga dost....jhel lena...


ye bol ek jhatke se u spear ko bahar kheench liya ERRAPEL ne aur uske aisa karte hi dk saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

ek dakar si nikli us LEOPARD ke mooh se joki saboot tha uske asahaniya dard ka aur dusri....

woh khoon jo us spear ki wajah se rooka hua tha, spear ke nikalte hi bhalbhala ke wahan jama khoon bahar nikalne laga...

wahin spear ko nikaalne par jaise hi leaopard ne dakar maari aur uska mooh khula toh ERRAPEL ne ek jadibuti ko turant uske mooh me daal diya aur aisa karne ke agle hi pal usne dusri jadibuti ko uske pet ke us bhaag me jahan se khoon nikal raha tha,uspar malna shuru kar diya...

us jadibuti ko zakhm par malte hue ERRAPEL kuch mantra budbudane lagi thi...

usse aisa karte hue kuch hi seconds beete the ki tabhi uske haathon ke neeche bane zakhm me ek white roshni ujagar hone lagi...

same roshni us leopard ke mooh se hote hue uske andar bhi jagmane lagi jahan pehli jadibuti gayi thi....

kuch pal yunhi enchant karne ke baad ERRAPEL ka mooh band hua aur woh khadi ho gayi..

abhi usse khade hue 30 second bhi nahi hua tha ki tabhi us LEOPARD ke saare ghaav us second jadibuti aur usse utpann roshni rupi urja se puri tarah bhar gaye aur saath hi saath jo pehli jadbuti uske mooh se hote hue uske andar gayi thi,usne bhi apna kaam kar diya tha...

jo blood loss us LEOPARD ko hua tha,woh wapas bhar gaya tha aur saath hi us spear ke nok me mile zeher ka bhi prabhav khatm ho chuka tha...

ek nayi urja bhar chuki thi us LEOPARD me aur isiliye woh jhat se apne chaaron pairon par khada ho chuka tha..

khade hote hi us leopard ne apna sir ERRAPEL ke kadmo me jhuka diya jisse dekh muskura uthi ERRAPEL aur...


ERRAPEL-ab tum pehle se zyada shaktishaali ho dost....saath hi jadibutiyon ki atirikt urja ki wajah se tumhare sharir ka bahari khaal aur saath hi anduri self heal ki shakti bohot zyada badh gayi hai...

ab koi bhaala aur aam shashtra tumhe aghaat nahi pahuncha paayenge....

par ye nayi shakti tumhe isiliye mili hai taaki tumhe nuksaan naa pahunchne...

isiliye nahi taaki tum kisi par akaran humla kar apna shakti pradarshan karo...

agar aisa kuch kiya toh mai khud tumhe maar dungi..


behad aaram se kahi thi ye saari baat ERRAPEL ne par uski is nirmal awaaz me bhi ek aisi dridhta aur sacchayi thi jisse sun aur samajh bhi gaya woh LEOPARD...

yahi wajah thi ki ERRAPEL ki baat khatm hote hi uske boots ko chaatkar jaise haami bhari us LEOPARD ne...


ERRAPEL-ab tum jaao dost..mujhe bhi kahin jaana hai aur mai pehle hi der ho chuki hun...


ERRAPEL ki baat sun ek baar phirse uske boots ko chaat woh LEOPARD tezi se ek disha ki taraf chala gaya...

LEOPARD ke jaate hi ERRAPEL ne bhi apne kadam apne manzil ki taraf badhaye hi the ki tabhi...


ERRAPEL.....KAHAN HO TUM....???GHAR LOUTO TURANT....


ERRAPEL ke kaano ne gunji ye awaaz jo thi uske baba ki..

kareeb 5 km door se pukari gayi ye awaaz sun li thi ERRAPEL ne...

khair,apne baba ki awaaz sun....


ERRAPEL-ye baba bhi naa..ek pal chain nahi rehta inhe...abhi toh aur najaane kitne door jaana hai aur ye wapas bula rahe hain mujhe...

par ab baba ne awaaz de di hai toh ghar jaana hi padega...ek kaam karti hun,kal thodi aur subah niklungi ghar se taaki waqt par apne kaam ki jadibuti haasil kar ghar bhi pahunch jaaun...

ye sab soch ERRAPEL ke kadam wapas apne ghar ki disha ki taraf mood gaye....






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-MAHI'S ABODE






HOW ARE YOU FEELING NOW MISTRESS....????


MAHI jiski just kuch seconds pehle hi behoshi tuti thi aur woh apne bed par uth kar baithi thi,uske saamne khadi ELUSORY ne usse ye sawal kiya tha...

kuch ghante pehle behoshi ki haalat me jaise hi MAHI ki body yahan uske ABODE me prakat hui toh uski ELUSORY usse turant HEALING ROOM me le gayi jahan ye baat pakki ho gayi ki MAHI bas behosh hai aur kuch der me uski sense wapas aa jaayegi..

ELUSORY ne usse wapas uske room ke bed par leta diya tha jiske baad abhi usse hosh aaya tha....

aur filhal uska sir behadh halka lag raha tha...

khair, ELUSORY ke sawal ko sun...


MAHI-ya i am feeling good...

ELUSORY-MASTER RAAZ aapse milne aaye hain aur abhi hall me baithe hue hain...kya aap unse milna chahengi...???


ELUSORY ki baat sun MAHI jo abhi apna sir neeche kiye hue EXERTION ke waqt yaa phir ye kahun ki RAAZ ke saath compete karte waqt jo feel kar rahi thi,uske baare me hi soch rahi thi tabhi ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jisse sun bina kuch kahe woh turant apne bed se utri aur hall ki taraf badh gayi....


MAHI-RAAZ...


hall me mai baithe hi hua tha ki tabhi MAHI ki awaaz sun mera chehra uski taraf ghuma aur...


MAI-how are you feeling now....??

MAHI-i am good... great actually...and all thanks to you...tumne apna promise pura kiya...

tumne kaha tha ki EXERTION ke baad mai puri tarah theek ho jaaungi aur wakayi mai ho gayi...

MAI-kisne kaha ki tum thik ho gayi ho....??


meri baat sun halki chownki MAHI aur...


MAHI-matlab...!!!kya mai thik nahi hui...???par i am feeling perfectly ok now...

itne dino me pehli baar mera dimag pura halka lag raha hai...

MAI-woh isiliye kyunki exertion me jo ray tumhe lagi thi,uski wajah se tumhare brain me basi BLACK ENERGY behosh ho gayi hai...

par hai woh ab bhi tumhare andar hi...


meri baat sun pehle toh halki maayus hui MAHI par phir kuch soch...


MAHI-phir mai thik kaise ho paaungi aur mujhe pata kaise chalega ki mai thik ho gayi..???

kyunki tum keh rahe ho ki mere andar ab bhi BLACK ENERGY hai lekin feel toh mai waisa hi kar rahi hun jaisa un books ko padhne se pehle karti thi...

MAI-kya relaxation ke saath koi guilt feel ho raha hai tumhe...!!!!

MAHI-guilt!!nahi..aur is baat ka guilt...???

MAI-jab thik ho jaaogi toh guilt bhi hoga aur us guilt ka reason bhi pata chal jaayega...

MAHI-pata nahi tum kya kya bolte rehte ho...?samajh hi nahi aata...

EXERTION se pehle bhi tumne kaha tha ki competition ke waqt mai tumse baat naa karun par iska reason nahi bataya...

aur abhi kuch der pehle tumne kaha ki mere brain me basi BLACK ENERGY behosh ho gayi hai...

par ye kaise hua,ye nahi bataya...???

MAI-kyunki tumne pucha nahi....

MAHI-jaise mai puchti aur tum bata dete...!!!!

MAI-EXERTION se shuru karte hain...baat naa karne ki baat maine isiliye kahi thi kyunki competition me competitors ko apne dushman ko tarah samajhta hai BLACK ENERGY..

aise me us competition me tumhara mujhse normally baat karna usse acha nahi lagta aur woh tumhe pain deta....

aur rahi baat tumhare andar base us BLACK ENERGY ke behosh hone ki toh tumhe ye toh yaad hi hoga ki tumhare behosh hone ka kaaran ek ray ka tumhe hit karna tha..

wo ray VIDEOUS ki thi jo usne mujhe target kar chhodi thi par lag woh tumhe gayi..

ab VIDEOUS bhi wahi books padhta hai jisse padhkar tumhare andar woh negetive energy rook gayi hai isiliye uske waar se bhi ussi black energy ke kan nikle the aur jab woh kan tumhe lage toh tumhare saath us BLACK ENERGY se bhare ray ne apne hi tarah ke ray ko hit kiya aur issi wajah se tumhare saath tumhare brain se chipki ENERGY bhi behosh ho gayi hai...

simple...

MAHI-ohhh...par tumne ye nahi bataya ki ye mujhme se bahar kaise niklegi..???

MAI-negetivity ko sirf positivity hi door kar sakti hai...

ek negetive stuff chant karne se brain pierce hua hai tumhara,jo sirf kisi positive stuff ke intake se hi wapas pehle jaisa ho sakta hai...

MAHI-positive stuff..!!!woh bhi CHOSENS me..tum bhul rahe ho ki CHOSENS me positive aur negetive jaisa kuch bhi nahi hai...

lMAI-postive aur negetive chizen nahi sirf dekhne ka nazariya hota hai MAHI.. anyways,har bande ki beeti journey me uske future ke raaste ko banane ka hint zaroor hota hai,bas jhaankne aur samajhne ki der hai..

aankhen band karo apni aur maaro reverse gear...dekho,koi medicine guzre raaste me gir toh nahi gayi..!!!


meri baat sun ek pal mujhe dekh MAHI nr apni aankhen band ki jiske agle hi pal uske dimag me beete lamho ke flashes chalne lage..

EXERTION se hote hue woh piche jaane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh
dekhte dekhte woh pahunchi FORBIDDEN FOREST ke 2 din waale adventure tour par aur jab aisa hua toh ek jhatke me uski aankhen khul gayi aur aisa hote hi usse laga shock..

reason...

main palat kar jaa raha tha aur mujhe yun jaata dekh..


MAHI-RAAZ mujhe..

MAI-jawab mil gaya hai..pata hai mujhe...


uski baat ko maine pura kiya jisse sun woh ek baar phirse chownki aur..


MAHI-tumhe kaise pata...???


ab tak mai exit door tak pahunch chuka tha par MAHI ke is sawal par wahin rook bina palte...


MAI-jisse jawab ke liye sawal ki zaroorat ho,woh RAAZ nahi...


jahan ye bol mai gate se bahar nikal gaya wahin meri baat sun MAHI halki muskurayi aur..


MAHI-kuch bhi bolta hai ye ladka...


ye bol MAHI ki nazar apne right ki taraf sofe ke aage rakhe table par gayi jahan dekh woh ek baar phirse chownk gayi aur turant us table par rakhe chiz joki ek patli si book thi,usse utha liya aur usse utha woh hairan bhi dikh rahi thi aur khush bhi..


MAHI-FINDING RADHA.....


yahi tha woh book ka naam jo is waqt MAHI ke haath me tha aur issi book se ho related tha woh jawab jo MAHI ko aankh band karte hue mila tha..

darasal FORBIDDEN FOREST me SAVENT OF THE DAY ko jeetne ke liye RAAZ ne jo RADHA KRISHNA ka example diya tha,us example se hi MAHI ke andar basa BLACK ENERGY sabse zyada unstable hua tha..

MAHI ko us waqt aisa kag raha tha jaise uske BRAIN me kuch hai jo RADHA KRISHNA ki kahani nahi sunana chahti jisse MAHI samajh gayi thi ki ye do naam hi usse BLACK ENERGY se nijaat dila sakte hain...

us book ko haath me pakad halki muskurayi MAHI aur..


MAHI-jisse jawab ke liye sawal ki zaroorat ho,woh RAAZ nahi...


jaane se pehle mere kahe aakhri lines dohraye MAHI ne aur...


MAHI-ye ladka wakayi apne naam ki hi tarah hai..ek RAAZ....





PLACE-VIDEOUS ABODE





AANKHON ME ITNI SHARMINDAGI KYUN...????


hosh me aane ke baad ye pehle shabd nikle VIDEOUS ke mooh se jisse sunane ke baad bhi teeno DEVOTEES chup chaap sir jhukaye baithe rahe jispar...


VIDEOUS-jeet ki neev agar haar ke imarat ke neeche bhi rakhi jaaye toh us haar ki taakat jeet se kayi guna zyada hoti hai....


VIDEOUS ki baat sun teeno DEVOTEES ke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uth gaye jinme ab sharmindagi ki jagah sawal dikhne laga tha jisse dekh...


VIDEOUS-sabse pehle mere ek sawal ka jawab do....

aaj mai kisse haara hun....???

1ST DEVOTEE-RAAZ se...


halke dar ke saath jhijhakte hue kahi ye baat us DEVOTEE ne jispar pehle toh VIDEOUS muskuraya par phir...


VIDEOUS-galat....mai RAAZ se nahi balki apne dono FATHERS se haara hun...


VIDEOUS ki baat se halke hairan ho...


TEENO-matlab..???

VIDEOUS-matab RAAZ ke aage aaj mai bas isiliye tik nahi paaya kyunki iska intazam badi chaalaki se aur ek behtarin plan ke saath mere dono FATHERS ne bohot pehle hi implant kiya tha...


VIDEOUS ki baat ka matlab ab bhi RAAZ hi tha un teeno DEVOTEES ke liye aur isiliye unke facial expressions pehle se hi the jisse dekh VIDEOUS ne apni baat age badhayi...


VIDEOUS-shakti ke maamle me RAAZ mere aage nahi tik sakta,ye baat bohot ache se pata thi mere dono FATHERS ko aur woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki woh RAAZ ko directly extra shakti nahi de sakte isiliye unhone ek dusra tarika dhund liya..

WEAKLINGS SAVENTS ke andar unhone shakti ke alag alag hisso ko ikattha kiya taaki RAAZ unke zariye us taakat ko extract kar sake...

unhe ye bhi pata tha ki sirf WEAKLINGS hi aisi catagory hai jispar mai kabhi dhyan nahi dunga isiliye unka plan kaamiyab zaroor hoga aur hua bhi...

behadh salike se aur mere naak ke neeche se RAAZ ne un WEAKLINGS ki shaktiyon ko khud me samet liya....

MASTER STROKE.....


jahan apni baat keh muskurane laga tha VIDEOUS wahin VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki planning ko jaan halke ghusse ho gaye teeno DEVOTEES aur...


1ST DEVOTEE-aadesh den LORD...hum un sabhi WEAKLINGS ko jinki wajah se aaj aapki haar hui hai,abhi khatm kar dete hain..

VIDEOUS-waah,kya josh hai...waise behosh toh mujhe RAAZ ne kiya tha,usse maarne ki baat nahi nikli tumhare mooh se...


VIDEOUS ke vyang ko samajh hadbada gaye teeno DEVOTEES jispar..


VIDEOUS-hmm..aukaad se bahar hai naa woh masla...arre murkhon,jinhe khatm karne ki baat tum kar rahe ho,woh sab apni baanti hui shaktiyon ki wajah se RAAZ ke saath jude hue hain...

agar unhe chot pahunchi toh RAAZ ko khabar ho jaayegi aur RAAZ ko khabar matlab tumhari kabar..

ek baat aur,GOD GIFT shaktiyan jo un WEAKLINGS se RAAZ ko mili hai,uska aadha hissa ab bhi unme hi hai aur isiliye unhe maarna asaan nahi hai kamsekam tab tak toh nahi jab tak RAAZ zinda hai...

aur waise mai chahta bhi nahi ki un sabko kuch ho..un sabko toh bohot sambhaal kar rakhna hai mujhe...


ek devilish smile naach uthi thi VIDEOUS ke face par ye baat kehte hue jisse sun...


TEENO-hum samjhe nahi....????!!!!

VIDEOUS-samajne waali baat ye hai ki jab saamna buddhi se ho, toh jawab bhi buddhi se hi diya jaata hai...

FATHERS ne apni chaal chal di aur ab meri baari,par meri chaal se mujhe afsos bas is baat ka reh jaayega ki mai RAAZ ko khatm nahi kar paaunga...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun bohot zyada hi shocked ho gaye the uske teeno DEVOTEES..

ab jis bande ko khatm karna hi VIDEOUS ka lakshya hai,usse woh khatm nahi karega,ye sun shock toh hona hi tha un teeno ko aur isiliye..


2ND DEVOTEE-aap RAAZ ko khatm nahi karenge toh apne FATHERS ko kaise haraayenge...???

VIDEOUS-tum teeno wakayi bwwakuf ho yaar...lines toh theek se sun liya karo..

maine kaha mai usse khatm nahi kar paaunga,ye toh nahi kaha ki woh khtam hi nahi hoga...

jin WEAKLINGS ko FATHERS ne RAAZ ke shakti kunj ki tarah chuna hai,jin WEAKLINGS ke zariye aaj RAAZ ne mujhe shikast di hai,ab wahi WEAKLINGS RAAZ KO MAARENGE.....


VIDEOUS ne jo faisla liya,woh kaise hoga,ye toh teeno DEVOTEES nahi jaante the par VIDEOUS ki planning fail nahi ho sakti,ye woh teeno bohot ache se jaante the aur isiliye unke chehre par bhi muskaan naach gayi aur...


3RD DEVOTEE-hamare liye kya aadesh hai...???

VIDEOUS-zyada nahi,bas nazar rakho un WEAKLINGS par...


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek baar uske aage sir jhukakar gayab ho gaye teeno DEVOTEES wahin unke jaane ke baad apne chehre ki muskaan barkarar rakhte hue..


VIDEOUS-FATHERS... tikdam toh bohot sahi lagaya aapne aur ye zaroori bhi tha kyunki...




ek VIDEOUS aap sab par akela BHAARI HAI.......

RAAZ,aaj tune jo kiya woh tera mujhpar UDHAARI HAI....

baazi bhale tune jeet li hai aaj magar......????!!

jung jeetne ki ab,meri BAARI HAI..........















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....
















AAPKA APNA V...J......
Superb update bhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVES RAAZ AND FRIENDS KO UN SABKE EXERTION ME BEHTARIN PRADARSHAN KE LIYE TROPHY AUR HAR EK KO INDIVIDUAL GIFTS DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR SEBIL EK DUSRE SE PEHLI BAAR MILTE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-105



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-CELESTE MOUNTAIN







YE BABA BHI MUJHE KAHAN KAHAN BHEJTE REHTE HAIN HAIN....???


BABA BHEJTE HAIN....!!!!!JADIBUTIYON AUR DUSRI HEALING SUBSTANCES KA NAAM SUNTE HI TERA MAN KHUDBAKHUD KHEENCHATA HAI USKE MILNE WAALI JAGAH KI TARAF...

AUR YAHAN BHI USSIKE LIYE AAYI HAI TU....


khudse hi sawal aur shikayat kar aur phir khudhi se hi khudko jawab dete hue kahi ye saari baat ek ladki ne...

subah ka waqt hai...aur is waqt woh ladki sir se lekar pair tak alag alag kapdon ke layers se dhaki hui thi...

reason...

CELESTE naam ke jis pahad me woh is waqt chal rahi thi,ye ek barfila pahad tha jisme filhal is waqt behad thandi hawayein chal rahi thi..

zyada uncha pahad nahi tha ye,par haan,lambayi iski kayi kelometres tak faili hui thi aur pichle 1 ghante se lagatar chalte rehne ke baad bhi yahan par padne waali sardi ki wajah se us ladki ke sharir me zyada garmi nahi chadh paayi thi...

ek LINER BALACLAVA joki sir se lekar gardan ka ka innerwear hota hai aur behad garm bhi,usse pehna hue tha us ladki ne...

sharir par bhi teen layers chadhaye hue the usne jisme sabse upar tha PUFFY JACKET jo filhal gale tak bandh tha..

fur ke hand gloves aur pairon me insulated winter boots pehne woh ladki badi tezi se us barf se dhake mountain par chadhi jaa rahi thi ki tabhi...

GRRRRR.......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ne us ladki ke tezi se badhte kadamo ko jaise ek jhatke me rok liya tha..

par uske pairon ke rukne ka kaaran awaaz nahi balki us awaaz ke piche jhalak raha dard tha jisse sun kar ansuna nahi kar paayi woh ladki aur uske kadam turant hi apne left ki taraf mood gaye jahan se woh awaaz aayi thi...

tezi se aage badhti hui woh ladki kuch aage hi gayi thi ki tabhi uske kadam ek baar phirse rook gaye..

reason...

usse thode hi aage ek bohot bada sa SNOW LEOPARD barf me gira pada hua tha...

ye ek gigantic WHITE LEOPARD tha jo kareeb 10 feet lamba aur 6 feet upar ki taraf utha hua tha...

is waqt uske pet se thoda neeche ek spere jaisa bada hathiyar ghusa hua tha jiski wajah se woh chhatpata tha hua barf par gira apni antim saansein le raha tha...

us spear ko dekh woh ladki saara maajra samajh gayi....

darasal mountain ke dusri taraf yahan se kareeb 10 km door ek shikari kabila rehta tha aur uske hi logon ne joki bohot hi khatarnaak aur daksh shikari hote hain, us leopard par humla kar uske andar ye spear ghusaya tha..

par yahan ke leopard bade se bade ghaav ko jhelte hue bhi kaafi der tak tezi se doud sakte hain aur isiliye hi ye leopard yahan tak pahunch paaya tha aur jab usse laga ki woh un shikariyon ki pohonch se door nikal aaya hai toh apne dard ka izhar karte hue jisse us ladki ne bhi suna tha,neeche gir gaya....

khair,uski aisi haalat dekh kar us ladki ko bohot bura laga aur usne turant apne kadam us leopard ki taraf badha diye..

wahin dheere dheere band hoti hui aankhon ke beech jab us leaopard ne kisi shaksh ko apni taraf aate dekha toh us bigdi haalat me bhi darane ke udeshya se halka sa gurra utha jisse sun us ladki ke chehre par smile aa gayi...

woh ruki nahi aur kuch hi palon me woh us leopard ke saamne baithi uske sir ko sehlane lagi...

us leaopard ko abhi bhi apne saamne baithe shaksh me ek dushman hi nazar aa raha tha jo uski buri haalat ka faayda uthane aaya hua tha..

yahi wahah thi ki us ladki ke usse chunne se woh apni bachi hui jaan aur shakti ko laga hilne dulne laga...

woh ladki bhi us leaopard ke dar ko samajh chuki thi aur isiliye...


LADKI-shhhh......daro mat shaant ho jaao....mai dushman nahi dost hun...mera naam ERRAPEL hai....


jaise hi us ladki ne naam bataya,woh leopard bilkul shaant ho gaya.uska chhatpatana band ho gaya aur woh tukoor tukoor apne saamne baithi ladki ko yun dekhne laga jaise usse barso se jaanta ho...

us leopard ki is harkat par ERRAPEL bhi halki muskura di jispar...


OOONNNN......


ek ejeeb si awaaz nikaal wo leopard ERRAPEL ke pair me apna sir ragadne laga maano keh raha ho ki usse bohot dard ho raha hai....

uski is harkat par ERRAPEL par uspar behadh pyarbbhi aaya aur uski is kashtdayi situation par daya bhi aayi aur...


ERRAPEL-toh tum mujhe jaante ho..fikr mat karo...kuch nahi hoga tumhe....

kuch hi palon me puri tarah thik ho jaaoge tum...

ye bol ERRAPEL ne apne PUFFY JACKET ki chain ko khola aur aisa kar usne apne haath andar daal ek choti sa pocket bag,jo usne apne jacket ke andar rakha hua tha,usse bahar nikala...

ERRAPEL ne us pocket bag ke chain ko bhi khola aur uske andar se do choti choti jadibuti nikali..

ek haath me dono jadi buti ko pakadte hue usne apne dusre haath se us spear ko pakda aur...


ERAPPEL-thoda sa dard hoga dost....jhel lena...


ye bol ek jhatke se u spear ko bahar kheench liya ERRAPEL ne aur uske aisa karte hi dk saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

ek dakar si nikli us LEOPARD ke mooh se joki saboot tha uske asahaniya dard ka aur dusri....

woh khoon jo us spear ki wajah se rooka hua tha, spear ke nikalte hi bhalbhala ke wahan jama khoon bahar nikalne laga...

wahin spear ko nikaalne par jaise hi leaopard ne dakar maari aur uska mooh khula toh ERRAPEL ne ek jadibuti ko turant uske mooh me daal diya aur aisa karne ke agle hi pal usne dusri jadibuti ko uske pet ke us bhaag me jahan se khoon nikal raha tha,uspar malna shuru kar diya...

us jadibuti ko zakhm par malte hue ERRAPEL kuch mantra budbudane lagi thi...

usse aisa karte hue kuch hi seconds beete the ki tabhi uske haathon ke neeche bane zakhm me ek white roshni ujagar hone lagi...

same roshni us leopard ke mooh se hote hue uske andar bhi jagmane lagi jahan pehli jadibuti gayi thi....

kuch pal yunhi enchant karne ke baad ERRAPEL ka mooh band hua aur woh khadi ho gayi..

abhi usse khade hue 30 second bhi nahi hua tha ki tabhi us LEOPARD ke saare ghaav us second jadibuti aur usse utpann roshni rupi urja se puri tarah bhar gaye aur saath hi saath jo pehli jadbuti uske mooh se hote hue uske andar gayi thi,usne bhi apna kaam kar diya tha...

jo blood loss us LEOPARD ko hua tha,woh wapas bhar gaya tha aur saath hi us spear ke nok me mile zeher ka bhi prabhav khatm ho chuka tha...

ek nayi urja bhar chuki thi us LEOPARD me aur isiliye woh jhat se apne chaaron pairon par khada ho chuka tha..

khade hote hi us leopard ne apna sir ERRAPEL ke kadmo me jhuka diya jisse dekh muskura uthi ERRAPEL aur...


ERRAPEL-ab tum pehle se zyada shaktishaali ho dost....saath hi jadibutiyon ki atirikt urja ki wajah se tumhare sharir ka bahari khaal aur saath hi anduri self heal ki shakti bohot zyada badh gayi hai...

ab koi bhaala aur aam shashtra tumhe aghaat nahi pahuncha paayenge....

par ye nayi shakti tumhe isiliye mili hai taaki tumhe nuksaan naa pahunchne...

isiliye nahi taaki tum kisi par akaran humla kar apna shakti pradarshan karo...

agar aisa kuch kiya toh mai khud tumhe maar dungi..


behad aaram se kahi thi ye saari baat ERRAPEL ne par uski is nirmal awaaz me bhi ek aisi dridhta aur sacchayi thi jisse sun aur samajh bhi gaya woh LEOPARD...

yahi wajah thi ki ERRAPEL ki baat khatm hote hi uske boots ko chaatkar jaise haami bhari us LEOPARD ne...


ERRAPEL-ab tum jaao dost..mujhe bhi kahin jaana hai aur mai pehle hi der ho chuki hun...


ERRAPEL ki baat sun ek baar phirse uske boots ko chaat woh LEOPARD tezi se ek disha ki taraf chala gaya...

LEOPARD ke jaate hi ERRAPEL ne bhi apne kadam apne manzil ki taraf badhaye hi the ki tabhi...


ERRAPEL.....KAHAN HO TUM....???GHAR LOUTO TURANT....


ERRAPEL ke kaano ne gunji ye awaaz jo thi uske baba ki..

kareeb 5 km door se pukari gayi ye awaaz sun li thi ERRAPEL ne...

khair,apne baba ki awaaz sun....


ERRAPEL-ye baba bhi naa..ek pal chain nahi rehta inhe...abhi toh aur najaane kitne door jaana hai aur ye wapas bula rahe hain mujhe...

par ab baba ne awaaz de di hai toh ghar jaana hi padega...ek kaam karti hun,kal thodi aur subah niklungi ghar se taaki waqt par apne kaam ki jadibuti haasil kar ghar bhi pahunch jaaun...

ye sab soch ERRAPEL ke kadam wapas apne ghar ki disha ki taraf mood gaye....






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-MAHI'S ABODE






HOW ARE YOU FEELING NOW MISTRESS....????


MAHI jiski just kuch seconds pehle hi behoshi tuti thi aur woh apne bed par uth kar baithi thi,uske saamne khadi ELUSORY ne usse ye sawal kiya tha...

kuch ghante pehle behoshi ki haalat me jaise hi MAHI ki body yahan uske ABODE me prakat hui toh uski ELUSORY usse turant HEALING ROOM me le gayi jahan ye baat pakki ho gayi ki MAHI bas behosh hai aur kuch der me uski sense wapas aa jaayegi..

ELUSORY ne usse wapas uske room ke bed par leta diya tha jiske baad abhi usse hosh aaya tha....

aur filhal uska sir behadh halka lag raha tha...

khair, ELUSORY ke sawal ko sun...


MAHI-ya i am feeling good...

ELUSORY-MASTER RAAZ aapse milne aaye hain aur abhi hall me baithe hue hain...kya aap unse milna chahengi...???


ELUSORY ki baat sun MAHI jo abhi apna sir neeche kiye hue EXERTION ke waqt yaa phir ye kahun ki RAAZ ke saath compete karte waqt jo feel kar rahi thi,uske baare me hi soch rahi thi tabhi ELUSORY ne ye baat kahi jisse sun bina kuch kahe woh turant apne bed se utri aur hall ki taraf badh gayi....


MAHI-RAAZ...


hall me mai baithe hi hua tha ki tabhi MAHI ki awaaz sun mera chehra uski taraf ghuma aur...


MAI-how are you feeling now....??

MAHI-i am good... great actually...and all thanks to you...tumne apna promise pura kiya...

tumne kaha tha ki EXERTION ke baad mai puri tarah theek ho jaaungi aur wakayi mai ho gayi...

MAI-kisne kaha ki tum thik ho gayi ho....??


meri baat sun halki chownki MAHI aur...


MAHI-matlab...!!!kya mai thik nahi hui...???par i am feeling perfectly ok now...

itne dino me pehli baar mera dimag pura halka lag raha hai...

MAI-woh isiliye kyunki exertion me jo ray tumhe lagi thi,uski wajah se tumhare brain me basi BLACK ENERGY behosh ho gayi hai...

par hai woh ab bhi tumhare andar hi...


meri baat sun pehle toh halki maayus hui MAHI par phir kuch soch...


MAHI-phir mai thik kaise ho paaungi aur mujhe pata kaise chalega ki mai thik ho gayi..???

kyunki tum keh rahe ho ki mere andar ab bhi BLACK ENERGY hai lekin feel toh mai waisa hi kar rahi hun jaisa un books ko padhne se pehle karti thi...

MAI-kya relaxation ke saath koi guilt feel ho raha hai tumhe...!!!!

MAHI-guilt!!nahi..aur is baat ka guilt...???

MAI-jab thik ho jaaogi toh guilt bhi hoga aur us guilt ka reason bhi pata chal jaayega...

MAHI-pata nahi tum kya kya bolte rehte ho...?samajh hi nahi aata...

EXERTION se pehle bhi tumne kaha tha ki competition ke waqt mai tumse baat naa karun par iska reason nahi bataya...

aur abhi kuch der pehle tumne kaha ki mere brain me basi BLACK ENERGY behosh ho gayi hai...

par ye kaise hua,ye nahi bataya...???

MAI-kyunki tumne pucha nahi....

MAHI-jaise mai puchti aur tum bata dete...!!!!

MAI-EXERTION se shuru karte hain...baat naa karne ki baat maine isiliye kahi thi kyunki competition me competitors ko apne dushman ko tarah samajhta hai BLACK ENERGY..

aise me us competition me tumhara mujhse normally baat karna usse acha nahi lagta aur woh tumhe pain deta....

aur rahi baat tumhare andar base us BLACK ENERGY ke behosh hone ki toh tumhe ye toh yaad hi hoga ki tumhare behosh hone ka kaaran ek ray ka tumhe hit karna tha..

wo ray VIDEOUS ki thi jo usne mujhe target kar chhodi thi par lag woh tumhe gayi..

ab VIDEOUS bhi wahi books padhta hai jisse padhkar tumhare andar woh negetive energy rook gayi hai isiliye uske waar se bhi ussi black energy ke kan nikle the aur jab woh kan tumhe lage toh tumhare saath us BLACK ENERGY se bhare ray ne apne hi tarah ke ray ko hit kiya aur issi wajah se tumhare saath tumhare brain se chipki ENERGY bhi behosh ho gayi hai...

simple...

MAHI-ohhh...par tumne ye nahi bataya ki ye mujhme se bahar kaise niklegi..???

MAI-negetivity ko sirf positivity hi door kar sakti hai...

ek negetive stuff chant karne se brain pierce hua hai tumhara,jo sirf kisi positive stuff ke intake se hi wapas pehle jaisa ho sakta hai...

MAHI-positive stuff..!!!woh bhi CHOSENS me..tum bhul rahe ho ki CHOSENS me positive aur negetive jaisa kuch bhi nahi hai...

lMAI-postive aur negetive chizen nahi sirf dekhne ka nazariya hota hai MAHI.. anyways,har bande ki beeti journey me uske future ke raaste ko banane ka hint zaroor hota hai,bas jhaankne aur samajhne ki der hai..

aankhen band karo apni aur maaro reverse gear...dekho,koi medicine guzre raaste me gir toh nahi gayi..!!!


meri baat sun ek pal mujhe dekh MAHI nr apni aankhen band ki jiske agle hi pal uske dimag me beete lamho ke flashes chalne lage..

EXERTION se hote hue woh piche jaane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh
dekhte dekhte woh pahunchi FORBIDDEN FOREST ke 2 din waale adventure tour par aur jab aisa hua toh ek jhatke me uski aankhen khul gayi aur aisa hote hi usse laga shock..

reason...

main palat kar jaa raha tha aur mujhe yun jaata dekh..


MAHI-RAAZ mujhe..

MAI-jawab mil gaya hai..pata hai mujhe...


uski baat ko maine pura kiya jisse sun woh ek baar phirse chownki aur..


MAHI-tumhe kaise pata...???


ab tak mai exit door tak pahunch chuka tha par MAHI ke is sawal par wahin rook bina palte...


MAI-jisse jawab ke liye sawal ki zaroorat ho,woh RAAZ nahi...


jahan ye bol mai gate se bahar nikal gaya wahin meri baat sun MAHI halki muskurayi aur..


MAHI-kuch bhi bolta hai ye ladka...


ye bol MAHI ki nazar apne right ki taraf sofe ke aage rakhe table par gayi jahan dekh woh ek baar phirse chownk gayi aur turant us table par rakhe chiz joki ek patli si book thi,usse utha liya aur usse utha woh hairan bhi dikh rahi thi aur khush bhi..


MAHI-FINDING RADHA.....


yahi tha woh book ka naam jo is waqt MAHI ke haath me tha aur issi book se ho related tha woh jawab jo MAHI ko aankh band karte hue mila tha..

darasal FORBIDDEN FOREST me SAVENT OF THE DAY ko jeetne ke liye RAAZ ne jo RADHA KRISHNA ka example diya tha,us example se hi MAHI ke andar basa BLACK ENERGY sabse zyada unstable hua tha..

MAHI ko us waqt aisa kag raha tha jaise uske BRAIN me kuch hai jo RADHA KRISHNA ki kahani nahi sunana chahti jisse MAHI samajh gayi thi ki ye do naam hi usse BLACK ENERGY se nijaat dila sakte hain...

us book ko haath me pakad halki muskurayi MAHI aur..


MAHI-jisse jawab ke liye sawal ki zaroorat ho,woh RAAZ nahi...


jaane se pehle mere kahe aakhri lines dohraye MAHI ne aur...


MAHI-ye ladka wakayi apne naam ki hi tarah hai..ek RAAZ....





PLACE-VIDEOUS ABODE





AANKHON ME ITNI SHARMINDAGI KYUN...????


hosh me aane ke baad ye pehle shabd nikle VIDEOUS ke mooh se jisse sunane ke baad bhi teeno DEVOTEES chup chaap sir jhukaye baithe rahe jispar...


VIDEOUS-jeet ki neev agar haar ke imarat ke neeche bhi rakhi jaaye toh us haar ki taakat jeet se kayi guna zyada hoti hai....


VIDEOUS ki baat sun teeno DEVOTEES ke jhuke hue sir ek jhatke me upar uth gaye jinme ab sharmindagi ki jagah sawal dikhne laga tha jisse dekh...


VIDEOUS-sabse pehle mere ek sawal ka jawab do....

aaj mai kisse haara hun....???

1ST DEVOTEE-RAAZ se...


halke dar ke saath jhijhakte hue kahi ye baat us DEVOTEE ne jispar pehle toh VIDEOUS muskuraya par phir...


VIDEOUS-galat....mai RAAZ se nahi balki apne dono FATHERS se haara hun...


VIDEOUS ki baat se halke hairan ho...


TEENO-matlab..???

VIDEOUS-matab RAAZ ke aage aaj mai bas isiliye tik nahi paaya kyunki iska intazam badi chaalaki se aur ek behtarin plan ke saath mere dono FATHERS ne bohot pehle hi implant kiya tha...


VIDEOUS ki baat ka matlab ab bhi RAAZ hi tha un teeno DEVOTEES ke liye aur isiliye unke facial expressions pehle se hi the jisse dekh VIDEOUS ne apni baat age badhayi...


VIDEOUS-shakti ke maamle me RAAZ mere aage nahi tik sakta,ye baat bohot ache se pata thi mere dono FATHERS ko aur woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki woh RAAZ ko directly extra shakti nahi de sakte isiliye unhone ek dusra tarika dhund liya..

WEAKLINGS SAVENTS ke andar unhone shakti ke alag alag hisso ko ikattha kiya taaki RAAZ unke zariye us taakat ko extract kar sake...

unhe ye bhi pata tha ki sirf WEAKLINGS hi aisi catagory hai jispar mai kabhi dhyan nahi dunga isiliye unka plan kaamiyab zaroor hoga aur hua bhi...

behadh salike se aur mere naak ke neeche se RAAZ ne un WEAKLINGS ki shaktiyon ko khud me samet liya....

MASTER STROKE.....


jahan apni baat keh muskurane laga tha VIDEOUS wahin VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ki planning ko jaan halke ghusse ho gaye teeno DEVOTEES aur...


1ST DEVOTEE-aadesh den LORD...hum un sabhi WEAKLINGS ko jinki wajah se aaj aapki haar hui hai,abhi khatm kar dete hain..

VIDEOUS-waah,kya josh hai...waise behosh toh mujhe RAAZ ne kiya tha,usse maarne ki baat nahi nikli tumhare mooh se...


VIDEOUS ke vyang ko samajh hadbada gaye teeno DEVOTEES jispar..


VIDEOUS-hmm..aukaad se bahar hai naa woh masla...arre murkhon,jinhe khatm karne ki baat tum kar rahe ho,woh sab apni baanti hui shaktiyon ki wajah se RAAZ ke saath jude hue hain...

agar unhe chot pahunchi toh RAAZ ko khabar ho jaayegi aur RAAZ ko khabar matlab tumhari kabar..

ek baat aur,GOD GIFT shaktiyan jo un WEAKLINGS se RAAZ ko mili hai,uska aadha hissa ab bhi unme hi hai aur isiliye unhe maarna asaan nahi hai kamsekam tab tak toh nahi jab tak RAAZ zinda hai...

aur waise mai chahta bhi nahi ki un sabko kuch ho..un sabko toh bohot sambhaal kar rakhna hai mujhe...


ek devilish smile naach uthi thi VIDEOUS ke face par ye baat kehte hue jisse sun...


TEENO-hum samjhe nahi....????!!!!

VIDEOUS-samajne waali baat ye hai ki jab saamna buddhi se ho, toh jawab bhi buddhi se hi diya jaata hai...

FATHERS ne apni chaal chal di aur ab meri baari,par meri chaal se mujhe afsos bas is baat ka reh jaayega ki mai RAAZ ko khatm nahi kar paaunga...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun bohot zyada hi shocked ho gaye the uske teeno DEVOTEES..

ab jis bande ko khatm karna hi VIDEOUS ka lakshya hai,usse woh khatm nahi karega,ye sun shock toh hona hi tha un teeno ko aur isiliye..


2ND DEVOTEE-aap RAAZ ko khatm nahi karenge toh apne FATHERS ko kaise haraayenge...???

VIDEOUS-tum teeno wakayi bwwakuf ho yaar...lines toh theek se sun liya karo..

maine kaha mai usse khatm nahi kar paaunga,ye toh nahi kaha ki woh khtam hi nahi hoga...

jin WEAKLINGS ko FATHERS ne RAAZ ke shakti kunj ki tarah chuna hai,jin WEAKLINGS ke zariye aaj RAAZ ne mujhe shikast di hai,ab wahi WEAKLINGS RAAZ KO MAARENGE.....


VIDEOUS ne jo faisla liya,woh kaise hoga,ye toh teeno DEVOTEES nahi jaante the par VIDEOUS ki planning fail nahi ho sakti,ye woh teeno bohot ache se jaante the aur isiliye unke chehre par bhi muskaan naach gayi aur...


3RD DEVOTEE-hamare liye kya aadesh hai...???

VIDEOUS-zyada nahi,bas nazar rakho un WEAKLINGS par...


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek baar uske aage sir jhukakar gayab ho gaye teeno DEVOTEES wahin unke jaane ke baad apne chehre ki muskaan barkarar rakhte hue..


VIDEOUS-FATHERS... tikdam toh bohot sahi lagaya aapne aur ye zaroori bhi tha kyunki...




ek VIDEOUS aap sab par akela BHAARI HAI.......

RAAZ,aaj tune jo kiya woh tera mujhpar UDHAARI HAI....

baazi bhale tune jeet li hai aaj magar......????!!

jung jeetne ki ab,meri BAARI HAI..........















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....
















AAPKA APNA V...J......
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