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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Vipul

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF HIDA WEAKLINGS KO SPELLAR AUR REFINER KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL SE FRIENDLY HOKAR BAAT KARTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


( UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-65



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-RIVER BANK







WELL,WELL,WELL.....LOOK WHO WE FOUND....A SUSPECT....



subah ka waqt hai.nadi kinare baithi ek ladki,jiske siway aankh aur honth waale area ke baaki ka pura chehra dhaka hua tha. skin tight stretchable dark red outfit pehne wo ladki neeche baith kar nadi se paani pee rahi thi,tabhi uske piche se ye awaaz aayi thi jisse sun wo turant palti aur dekha ki uske saamne hawa me 2 log khade usse dekh rahe the aur dheere dheere niche zamin par utar rahe the.....

waise toh wo dono shaksh us ladki ke liye anjaan the,par unka usse suspect kehne se usse anuman ho gaya tha ki wo dono kaun ho sakte hain isiliye...


LADKI-chale jaao yahan se....acha rahega tum dono ke liye...

ladki ke jawab ko sun wo dono shaksh man hi man chownke the..

pehli baar ho raha tha un dono ka us ladki se aamna saamna,par aise me bhi wo ladki naa toh ghabrayi thi aur naahi usne un dono ke baare me janane ki koi icha jatayi..

aur aisa hona ajeeb bhi tha asadharan bhi...

1ST-hume dekhkar dari nahi tum...is grah par jeeven ko panpe kuch hi waqt beeta hai,jahan filhal human existence shuru bhi nahi hui hai,wahan khadi ho tum.

in sabse pata chalta hai ki sadharn toh bilkul nahi ho sakti tum...aur yahan is jagah par tumhara pahunchna,ye batata hai ki METAPHYSICAL capabilities bhi hai tumme...

aur agar tum sadharan nahi ho,toh tumhe hamare AURA toh sense ho hi rahe honge jisse tum hamari shakti ka ek halka sa hi sahi,aakalan toh kar paa hi rahi hogi...

kya tumhe nahi lagta ki hume yahan se jaane ki dhamki dena tumhare liya khatarnaak ho sakta hai...

us shaksh ki baat sun us ladki ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi jisse dhake hone ki wajah se wo dono shaksh nahi dekh paaye the...


LADKI-yahan khatarnaak sirf mai hun...toh darne ki zaroorat mujhe nahi,tum dono ko hai...

khair,tumhari baaton se ek baat ti clear ho hi gayi hai ki bina pite tum dono jaaoge nahi..

toh isse pehle ki khel shuru karen,ek baat ka jawab do....kaun hai wo jo dhund raha hai mujhe...

mai suspect hun,ye kaise tay kar liya tum dono ne..

2ND-tum hume maarogi....achi galatfehmi hai...khair, pehle tumhare sawalon ke jawab de dete hain kyunki fir tum us haalat me rahogi nahi ki kuch bhi sun yaa samajh paao...

1ST-arre manners bhul gaya kya..?? conversation shuru karne se pehle introduction zaroori hota hai.. toh pehle wo kar len...???

2nd-ye baat bhi sahi hai...toh lady,myself DORIAN....

1ST-aur mai GASTON hun...

DORIAN-well,humne toh apna intro de diya...ab agar naam batane se aapki is chuppi hui personality ka RAAZ nahi khul jaayega,toh kya hum aapka naam jaan sakte hain...

LADKI-FALLON......

DORIAN-FALLON....nice..toh FALLON,baat kuch aisi hai ki humare LORD ne hume kisiki talash karne ko kaha hai...

ab wo kaun hai,iske baare me toh hume pata nahi hai par uski urja ki shakti ko hamare LORD ne hume mehsoos karwaya tha taaki hum uske zariye usse detect kar saken...

unhone hume ye bhi bataya tha ki aisa ho sakta hai ki jinki talash unhe hai,wo hume directly naa mile toh aise me agar hum kisi aur me usse milte julte urja ke prabhaav ko mehsoos karen,toh iska arth hoga ki wo shaksh unka saathi hai,jiski LORD ko talash hai...

and guess what...itne dino ki lagatar khoj ke baad aakhirkhaar hume ek aisa shaksh mil hi gaya jiski body se hume us WANTED shaksh jaisi urja feel hui hai...

toh hui naa tum hamari suspect....

FALLON-kya naam hai tumhare LORD ka...???

DORIAN- jab hum tumhe unke paas lekar chalenge,toh tum khud hi unse puch lena...

FALLON-milna toh mai chahti hun tumhare LORD se par unfortunately abhi iska waqt nahi aaya hai....

par yahan se mere jaane ka waqt ab zaroor aa gaya hai... isiliye,khel shuru karte hain...

agar khudki jaan bacha paaye,toh tum dono bhi chale jaana..


FALLON ka chehra nahi dikh raha tha par uski awaaz me jo confidence tha,wo DORIAN aur GASTON bohot ache se feel kar paa rahe the...

unhe apni taakat par pura bharosa tha par ek anjaan dushman ko kam aankna,ye bewakufi wo nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye...

GASTON turant gayab hua aur FALLON ke piche aa gaya...

ab DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi FALLON ke dono taraf the jiska matlab ki wo uspar dono taraf se ek saath waar karne waale the...

FALLON bhi un dono ki ran neeti se anjaan nahi thi....

usne pehle apne saamne khade DORIAN ko dekha aur fir palaththe hue uski nazar GASTON par padi aur tabhi....

FALLON ke chehre ko piche ki taraf ghumta dekha DORIAN ke haathon se ek CURRENT ROPE nikal FALLON ki taraf badhi....

par FALLON jaise pehle se hi jaanti thi ki aisa kuch hone waala hai aur isiliye hi usne hawa me ek ulta cart wheel maara aur DORIAN ke chhode CURRENT ROPE ke upar se guzarti hui jaane lagi...

ye action kaafi speed tha par DORIAN aur GASTON jaise A + SORCERERS ki aankhon ke liye normal hi tha aur isiliye FALLON ke hawa me rehte hue hi GASTON ne apni taraf se ek dusri CURRENT RAY feki uske taraf par tabhi...

FALLON ka right hand uske waist ki taraf jahan usne ek red belt pehni hui thi,uspar gayi...

abhi hawa me hi thi FALLON...par ussi akward aur moving position me usne us belt ko apne waist se naa sirf kheencha,balki agle nano second se bhi kam waqt par wo belt uske haath me the...

belt ko haath me lete hi usne usse ek jhatka diya aur aisa hote hi hui do cheezen...

pehli....belt saamp ki tarah lehra gayi aur agle ho pal us belt ki length 10 feet ki ho chuki thi...

dusri....belt ke lehrate hi usse do behad strong shock waves nikli jisme se ek sidhi padi DORIAN ke CURRENT ROPE par aur dusri padi GASTON ke chhode CURRENT ROPE par aur aisa hote hi wo dono ROPES dhuen me badal gayab ho gaye...

wahan wo ropes gayab hue aur yahan FALLON ka pair zameen par aaya...

abhi abhi jo hua tha,usse dekh ek pal ke liye aankhen hairat se badi hi gayi thi DORIAN aur GASTON ki...

unhone dekha ki FALLON ke haathon me jo chaabul numa badi si belt hai,uske dono side se halki halki urja nikal rahi thi jiska matlab tha ki wo belt ek maayavi astr thi aur usse bohot se metaphisycal activities ko anjaam diya jaa sakta tha....

jahan wo dono ye sab soch rahe the wahin FALLON ab un dono ko mouka nahi dena chahti thi aur isiliye....

jaise hi uske pair zameen ko chhue toh uske agle hi pal usne ek baar fir apne lambe se belt jo kisi chaabuk se kam nahi thi,usse zor se jhatakte hue zamin par maara aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

us belt ke zamin se takrate hi aas paas ki puri zamin asthir ho gayi aur us zamin ke har hisse me vibrations hone lagi...

dusri....

zamin se takrane par us belt me bhi ek strong impact pada jiske baad uske dono ends se anginat lambe lambe keel nikalne lage...

ye keel us belt ki shakti urja se bane the aur isiliye wo sab jaan leva bhi the...

ek taraf zamin par ho rahe vibrations aur dusri taraf wo anginat keel...

ek saath is dohre hamle se hadbada gaye the DORIAN aur GASTON....

wo khudko zamin par stable bhi nahi kar paa rahe the aur aise me unhe un keelo se bhi bachna tha...

par DORIAN aur GASTON bhi koi kacche khiladi toh the nahi...

zamin ke hilte hi wo dono halke hawa me uth chuke the...wahin hawa me uth un dono ne apne saamne ek ek NON LIVING WORLD DOOR khol diye jiske khulte hi wo keel unme samane lage...

jab FALLON ne apne daanw ko khaali jaate hue dekha toh usne apne belt ko ek baar punah hawa me lehraya aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse us belt se keel nikalne lage par is baar unki disha straight nahi thi...

ek nishchit doori tak pahunchne ke baad wo keel apni disha badalte hue chaaron taraf se ghum ghum kar GASTON aur DORIAN ki taraf badh chale...

ye sab hote dekh ek pal ke liye DORIAN aur GASTON ke chehre par chinta ki lakire ubhri...

kyunki ye wakayi ek ajeeb problem thi...DORIAN aur GASTON ek saath bohot se world doors nahi khol sakte the...

waqt kam tha aur problem badi.. kuch pal aur,uske baad wo saare keel in dono ko cheer dene waale the...

par GASTON aur DORIAN aisa kaise hone de sakte the aur isiliye...

dono ne mind to mind ek dusre se baat ki aur agle hi pal...

dono ke saamne bane WORLD DOOR gayab ho gaye...

aur fir....

DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi apni apni jagah par gol ghumne lage...un dono ki raftar behad tez thi...

wahin wo saari keelen chaaron taraf se hoti hui un dono ke paas pahuncha chuki thi par isse pehle ki wo unhe chhu paati...

GASTON aur DORIAN,dono ke hi shariron ke ghumne se unke bodies ke charaon taraf ek SHIELD numa AURA banane lagi jisse takrakar wo saari keelen gayab hone lagi...

GASTON aur DORIAN ki yukti se apne naye waar ko bekaar hote dekh ek pal ke liye FALLON hairan hui par fir wo dobara ek naya waar karne ki waali thi lekin tabhi....


WAPAS AA JAAO FALLON....


uske kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi...


wahin jab DORIAN aur GASTON ko un keelon ki ENERGY mehsoos honi band ho gayi toh unhone ghumna band kar diya..

par ghumna band karne se pehle hi un dono ne apne waar kar diye the...

un dono ke hi bodies se do ray numa bhala nikal FALLON ki taraf badh gaya tha par waar karne ke baad jab GASTON aur DORIAN ki body ruki aur unki nazar saamne gayi tih dono hairan ar ghussa dono ho gaye...

reason....

FALLON gayab ho chuki thi.....





PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-CHOSENS






CONGRATS ACCHUTA & SLUNDER....aapne aaj apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai...

aur itni jaldi aisa karne waale aap dono pehle WEAKLINGS bane hain...

aapki is uplabdhi par mai aap dono ke liye bohot khush hun...

chehre par khushi ke bhaav liye HIDA ne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki baachein hi khil gayi thi...

gourav aur khushi...jab ye dono bhaav ek saath ek hi waqt par mehsoos ho toh us feeling ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai...

aur yahi dono feelings is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER mehsoos kar rahe the...

aaj class shuru hone ke baad in dono ne REFINER ki practice nahi ki thi aur wo isiliye kyunki us process me bhi kaafi energy release hoti hai jisse SOUL AMPLIFICATION process me problem hoti hai...

one at a time..is quote ko aadhar banakar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne aaj sirf apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ki sochi thi aur unki ye soch kaargar bhi sidh hui...

lagatar 3 baar fail hone ke baad finally chowthe attempt me ye dono apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho hi gaye...

wahin in sabke beech tha BRAWNY jisse ek taraf toh apne dono group mates ke liye khushi toh ho hi rahi thi wahin dusri taraf apne nirantar haar ke liye sharm bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi..

waise toh usse hamesha se hi apne underperformance se taklif hoti thi par aaj jab usne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dobara apne apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karte hue dekha toh wo taklif kaafi badh gayi thi...

apne disability par BRAWNY koft kar hi raha tha ki tabhi HIDA ne apni baat aage badhayi...


HIDA-well..ab aap dono ne achievements haasil kiye hain toh aap dono ko prize bhi milega...

aur prize hai catagory upgradation....kal se aap dono is class me nahi balki GROOMERS ki class me baithenge...

itna hi nahi,har GROOMER ki hi tarah aap dono ki bhi life style hogi...

shaam ko aapke quarter me aapki bikes pahunch jaayegi jiske gps me aapke naye apartments ka location set hoga...

ab se aap dono ko is WEAKLINGS ki dress ko 24/7 pehenane ki zaroorat hai...infact kabhi bhi pehenane ki zaroorat nahi hai....

aapke apartments me aapke pahunchne se pehle hi aapki GROOMERS ki uniform aur kuch casual dresses rakhwa di jaayengi aur saath hi har wo cheez jo ek GROOMER ko milti hai...

so congrats again...aaj ki class yahi khatm hoti hai...


jahan ye bol HIDA hall se nikal gayi wahin BRAWNY bhi unke piche piche hi nikal pada...

uske yun nikalne ka kaaran ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER achi tarah samajh rahe the aur unhe uske liye bura bhiag raha tha par wo kar bhi kya sakte the...

wo dono BRAWNY ko hi dekh rahe the ki tabhi un dono ke kaano me padi meri awaaz...


MAI-bohot bura lag raha hai BRAWNY ke liye...


apni khushi me wo dono kuch palon ke liye meri moujudgi ko bhul se gaye the par meri awaaz sun naa sirf unhe mere unke paas hone ka ehsaas hua par saath hi wo dono turant piche palte aur jo hamesha hota aaya hai wahi hua..

dono ke chehron par dar dikhne laga...


MAI-dar kyun rahe ho...aaj toh tum dono ke liye khushi ka din hai.... WEAKLINGS ki pathetic life style se finally azaadi mil hi gayi tum dono ko...

i am very happy for you....


meri aakhri line sun un dono ko hi shock laga...i was happy for them...ye sunkar unhe hairani bhi hui aur khushi bhi...


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-thanks RAAZ...

MAI-hmm...chalo, aakhri baar apne quater ko dekh lo..shaam ko toh usse alvida kehna hi hai...


is waqt mera chehra bilkul shaant tha...

aur jab is tarah se maine apni baat kahi toh un dono ke cheharon par smile aa gayi aur wo wapas palat aage badh gaye wahin mai bhi unke piche ho liya....

par isse pehle ki hum teeno hall se bahar nikalte....


WELL WELL WELL ... DEKHO TOH KAUN AA RAHA HAI....THE THREE LOOSERS...


ye awaaz thi VALDIS ki jo ki ACCHUTA ki taraf hi aa raha tha..

darasal STELLARS ki class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS bahar nikalne lage tab VALDIS ki nazar hall ke beech khade hum teeno par padi aur hume dekh wo rook gaya tha aur ab jab hum ussi ki taraf aa rahe the tab usne ye saari baatein kahin jispar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, pehle toh ek raat pehle hue dhulayi ko yaad kar halke ghabraye par fir jab unhone VALDIS ko mujhe looser bolte suna toh unhe aa gaya ghussa....


ACCHUTA-abbe bakwaas band kar...warna LU***D phek kar maarunga,GA**D se pregnant ho jayega tu...

SLUNDER-saale chaman chutiye...apne grahakon ko apni GAA**D ki rishwat dekar unse ghirwakar hume maarta hai aur khudko taakatwar samajhta hai...

saale MALE RAA***D hai tu...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sun behad ghusse se bhar unki taraf badha VALDIS aur jab aisa hua tab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko realize hua ki ghusse me kuch zyada hi bol gaye hain wo dono...

VALDIS ek 4 percent AMPLIFICATION waala banda tha upar se STELLAR bhi jinka influence CHOSENS me sabse zyada hota hai toh aise me ye situation unke liye sahi nahi thi...

par zuban se nikli baat aur usse hone waale consequences se bhaaga toh jaa sakta tha nahi isiliye wo dono bhi VALDIS se bhidne ke liye ready ho gaye the..

wahin tezi se badhtha hua VALDIS ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch gaya...

ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki taakat se VALDIS ne usse dhakka dene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...

behad tezi se mai ACCHUTA aur VALDIS ke beech aa gaya jisse VALDIS ka haath ACCHUTA ke chaati se naa lag meri chaati ko laga aur jab aisa hua toh...

VALDIS ki push ka asar kuch hua nahi...mai apni jagah par hi khada raha..

pehle mujhe yun tezi se ACCHUTA ke saamne aata dekh VALDIS chownka par fir uske SOUL power ki use ke saath diye gaye push se bhi jab ek inch bhi mujhe naa hilte dekha usne toh uski hairani badh gayi...

usse ACCHUTA ki mere baare me kahi gayi kal ki baat yaad aane lagi thi...

wahin apni chhati me uske haath ko dekh maine apne dono haath aage badhaye aur VALDIS ke haathon ko pakad liya....


HMMPHHH..HAMMPHHHH


mere aisa karte hi VALDIS ne apne haathon ko mere haathon se chhudane ke liye pehle normal,fir halki awaaz ke saath average aur aakhir me tez awaaz ke saath apni puri taakat laga di par uska haath mere haathon se chhuta nahi...

jahan aisa hote dekh VALDIS behad chownka tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hasi nikal gayi aur...


ACCHUTA-kyun re lau*e.... bohot dum hai naa tere me.... laga le fir..ga**d se tatti nikal jaayegi par RAAZ ke haath se tera haath nahi nikal paayega...

VALDIS-haath chhod RAAZ.. warna acha nahi hoga...


bebasi me bhi akad ka darwaza pakde gurraya VALDIS jispar...


MAI-abhi maine sirf tera haath pakda hai...agar dabana shuru kar dun toh tere haathon ke zariye teri rooh fana ho jaayegi...

taakat dikhane ka bada shouk hai naa tujhe....ye mouka bhi tujhe milega...par jab tak wo mouka nahi aata,apne haathon ko, apni aukad ko apne dayre me rakh...salamat rahega...

ab nikal....


ye bol maine VALDIS ke haathon ko chhod diya jiske baad apne kalaayion ko masalte hue usne ek baar mujhe aur ek baar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko ghura par fir chupchaap nikal gaya...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ...


mujhe yun beech me ghus un dono ko defend karta dekh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ke hi aankhon me mere liye khushi respect thi,jo ACCHUTA ke thanks kehne par aur saaf dikhne lagi thi..


MAI-no need dude..what are friends for...???!!!


meri baat sun aur mujhe unhe as friends bolne par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono shock bhi hue aur bhaavuk bhi...

SLUNDER toh ab bhi thoda hichkicha raha tha par ACCHUTA,wo turant aage badha aur mere gale lag gaya aur usse aisa karte dekh SLUNDER ne bhi waisa hi kiya....

apni khushi ko dikha ye dono mere gale lage hi the ki tabhi....


KAAM HO GAYA MASTER.....



ek awaaz gunj uthi mere dimag me jisse sun mere chehre par aa gayi muskaan...

toh chaliye,is scene ko khatm karne se pehle us scene ki taraf chalte hain jiski wajah se mere dimag me ye awaaz gunji thi..





PLANET-MASSOR


PLACE-THE JUNGLE





OH..MY... GOD.......KA...KYA HAI YE..???


kampti hue awaaz me ek aadmi ne ye baat kahi jispar uske jeep ke saamne khade vikral aur ajeeb body ke jaanwar ne pehle apne sir ko jo ki aadha tiger aur adha wolf ka bana tha,halka jhatka diya aur...


ANIMAL-WOOGER HUN MAI....


ek jaanwar ke mooh se insano ki bhasha sunkar wo aadmi jo aur koi nahi balki ACCHUTA ke father the,hairan ho gaye the...

waise hairan toh unke baaju me baithe SLUNDER ke pitah aur jeep ki pichli seat par baithi un dono ki patniyan bhi ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA ke pitah jinhone SLUNDER ke parents ko apne is naye planet me invite kiya tha aur filhal woh chaaron ek bohot hi advanced hunt jeep me MASSOR ke ek jungle me shikar karne aaye the,unhone apne wildest dream me bhi nahi socha tha ki jungle ke beech unka saamna ek daiytyakaar jaanwar se hoga jo human language me baat kar sakta tha...

wahin dono royal families ki suraksha ke liye jo kuch sipahi aaye the aur unke jeep ke piche dusri gaadiyon me follow kar rahe the,us jaanwar ko dekh un sabki haalat bhi kharab ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pitah,jo kuch der pehle tak ek hiran ko dekh uske shikar ke liye uske piche gaadi douda rahe the,ab khud ek shikar ki tarah us WOOGER naam ke jaanwar ke saamne khade the..

khair, jaise hi WOOGER ne apna naam bataya toh...


SLUNDER FATHER-ho kaun tum...???aur is tarah hamare saamne aane ka kaaran kya hai...???


apni puri himmat jama kar kahi thi ye baat SLUNDER ke father ne jispar....


WOOGER-mai kaun hun,ye chhodo bas itna jaan lo ki mai tum chaaron ko tumhari zindagi se azaad karne aaya hun...


bohot normally kahi thi ye baat WOOGER ne par uski baat sun un sabki haalat aur kharab ho gayi thi...


ACCHUTA MOTHER-par kyun maarna chahte ho tum hume.. humne tumhara kya bigada hai..???

WOOGER-bigada toh us hiran ne bhi tumhara kuch nahi hai jiske shikar ke liye tum sab nikle ho...


WOOGER ki baat sun un sabko laga ki hiran ki wajah se WOOGER un sabko maarna chahata tha isiliye..


SLUNDER MOTHER-hum nahi karenge us hiran ka shikar...infact,hum kisi bhi jaanwar ka shikar nahi karenge..hum wapas chale jaate hain..


SLUNDER ki mom ki baat puri hui hi thi ki uske agle hi pal unki aur unke saath baaki sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi..

reason...

jis hiran ki baat abhi ho rahi thi,wo hiran hawa me udte hue unki taraf aaya aur thik WOOGER ke saamne aakar rook gaya jiske agle hi pal wo hiran WOOGER ke mooh me chala gaya tha...

hiran ko nigalne ke baad..


WOOGER-hiran ho yaa manushya.. kamzoron ko mar hi jaana chahiye...

ek kamzor toh mar gaya..ab tum sabhi ki baari hai...

ACCHUTA FATHER-dekh kya rahe ho..maar daalo isse...

piche apne sipahiyon ko dekhte hue chilla uthe ACCHUTA ke father aur unke aisa karte hi jaise ek sammohan se jaage the saare sainik...

apne king ki awaaz sun wo sabhi turant apni jeep se utre..un sabhi ke haathon me lezer beam guns thi jiska ek shot kisi haathi ko bhi raakh kar sakta tha..

jeep se niche utar position lete hue un sabhi siphahiyon ne WOOGER par gun taan di aur aisa karte hi...

sabne trigger daba diya tha jiske baad guns se nikli lazer beams sidhe WOOGER ki taraf lapki par ye kya...!!!???


WOOGER se ek feet door wo saari beams hawa me hi rook gayi..is karishme ko dekh sabhi hairan ho hi rahe the ki tabhi...

un beams ne apna rookh moda aur wapas us disha ki taraf badh chali jahan se wo aayi thi..

aur aisa hone par ek pal bhi nahi laga un saare sipahiyon ko raakh hone ke liye...

jahan apne sipahiyon ka haal dekh ab chaaron royals thar thar kaampne lage the wahin WOOGER dheere dheere chalte hue un chaaron ki taraf aaya aur....


WOOGER-do option hai tum chaaron ke paas...

pehli...jis gun se tumhare siphahi mujhe maarne waale the,ussi se khudko shoot kar lo...

dusri...mai tum chaaron ko zinda chaba jaata hun...

maroge toh tum chaaron dono hi suraton me bas fark itna hoga ki agar tum chaaron ne khudko shoot kiya toh sirf tum chaaron ki hi jaan jaayegi par agar mujhe tum logon ko maarna pada toh tum chaaron ke baad mai tum dono ke hi grah ke har baashinde ko maar dunga...

aur aakhir me tumhare bete bhi maare jaayenge....

sab tumpar hai...jaldi faisla karo....


WOOGER ki baat sun un chaaron ki hi aankhon me aansu aa gaye the..

marne se darte nahi the wo chaaron par is tarah marna unhe gawara nahi tha...

par option bhi nahi tha unke paas..unki praja aur unke bacchon ki bali wo kaise de sakte the aur isiliye....

kaampte hue haathon se un chaaron ne ek ek gun uthai aur apne sir par rakh di...

aankh band ho gaye the un chaaron ke...unki band aankhon ke saamne unke grah CARAPACE aur ARROW ghum gaye..unki praja aur unka prem dikhne laga unhe.

aur aakhir me dikhe unhe unke bacche.. ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinke chehron ko yaad kar ek baar fir un chaaron ke aansu chalak uthe...

ane bacchon ke chehron ko aakhri baad yaad kar....


SCCHHH......


chaar halki halki awaaz nikli un chaaron gun se jiske agle hi pal ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents ke sir unke dhad se alag hokar raakh ho chuke the...

aur ye hote hi nikle WOOGER ke mooh se wo shabd jo gunje the RAAZ ke kaano me....


WOOGER-KAAM HO GAYA MASTER....




BACK TO RAAZ:-



QUATER JAO TUM DONO....


khudse alag karte hue kahi maine ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se...

wahin alag hone par jab un dono ne mujhe muskurate hue dekha toh unhe laga ki shayad mai unhe dost kehne aur unke mujhe gale lagne ki wajah se hi muskura raha hun...

unhe kahan maalum tha ki ye muskaan un dono ke parents ki zabardasti karwayi gayi khudkhushi ki wajah se aayi thi..

khair,meri baat sun.....


ACCHUTA-tum nahi aa rahe ho...!!!

MAI-mai baad me aata hun...


meri baat sun un dono ne fir aage kuch kaha nahi aur palatthe hue aage badh gaye par fir wo dono hi wapas meri taraf palte aur...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ,humare liye ladhne ke liye...

SLUNDER-and thanks hume dost maanane ke liye....


jahan ye bol wo dono wapas palat chale gaye wahin unki baat sun...



MAI-log kehte hain,


dosti ki hai toh
NIBHANI HOGI......

par RAAZ se dosti me,
jaan GAWAANI HOGI.......

jeena hai toh meri nazar
ko apni ehmiyat DIKHANI HOGI.....

ye meri duniya hai.....

isme meri,bas meri,sirf meri hi
MANMAANI HOGI..










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......









AAPKA APNA V...J.......
Bhai maan gaye yeh to willen se bhi 100 kadam age nikala dono hi kamine hain sala Asmodeus abhi tak kuchh khas nahi kar paya magar us bichare ko bhi koi chance do akhir woh bhi toh willen hain and nice update bhai...
 

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nahi,nahi,nahi abhi bhi raaz kya hai samaj nahi aya uska charecter kya hai samaj nahi aya or ye fallon ki kya chakkar hai

poora laal kapdonse ladhe ye ladki hai kon

aage kya hoga ye tho v.j bhai hi bata sakta hai


per mere nazar me story aisi hogi

videos,fallon,gaston,dorain,valdis,alfreen,anwir or uske sath wo ladki jiska naam yaad nahi aa raha ye sab ek teem


raaz,mahi,mabel,achuta,slunder,browny,hida,
wooger

yaha wooger raaz ka hi ek ansh hai

per yaha videos ki ansh bi koi nahi hai matlub ki wooger jaise koi janwar dragon jaise koi....

in do teem me fight hogi

jaha videos ki teem wickeds kehlayegi

raaz ki moran kuch aise sahi se yaad nahi us dusri teem ki naam jo sweep-stake copetetion me bhaag li thi

ye sab meri kahani hai v.j bhai ki nahi

or v.j bhai bura mat manna likhne ko kuch sooj nahi raha tha tho jo man me aye likh diya sorry...
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF HIDA WEAKLINGS KO SPELLAR AUR REFINER KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS MAHI, ALFREEN AUR MABEL SE FRIENDLY HOKAR BAAT KARTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


( UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-65



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-RIVER BANK







WELL,WELL,WELL.....LOOK WHO WE FOUND....A SUSPECT....



subah ka waqt hai.nadi kinare baithi ek ladki,jiske siway aankh aur honth waale area ke baaki ka pura chehra dhaka hua tha. skin tight stretchable dark red outfit pehne wo ladki neeche baith kar nadi se paani pee rahi thi,tabhi uske piche se ye awaaz aayi thi jisse sun wo turant palti aur dekha ki uske saamne hawa me 2 log khade usse dekh rahe the aur dheere dheere niche zamin par utar rahe the.....

waise toh wo dono shaksh us ladki ke liye anjaan the,par unka usse suspect kehne se usse anuman ho gaya tha ki wo dono kaun ho sakte hain isiliye...


LADKI-chale jaao yahan se....acha rahega tum dono ke liye...

ladki ke jawab ko sun wo dono shaksh man hi man chownke the..

pehli baar ho raha tha un dono ka us ladki se aamna saamna,par aise me bhi wo ladki naa toh ghabrayi thi aur naahi usne un dono ke baare me janane ki koi icha jatayi..

aur aisa hona ajeeb bhi tha asadharan bhi...

1ST-hume dekhkar dari nahi tum...is grah par jeeven ko panpe kuch hi waqt beeta hai,jahan filhal human existence shuru bhi nahi hui hai,wahan khadi ho tum.

in sabse pata chalta hai ki sadharn toh bilkul nahi ho sakti tum...aur yahan is jagah par tumhara pahunchna,ye batata hai ki METAPHYSICAL capabilities bhi hai tumme...

aur agar tum sadharan nahi ho,toh tumhe hamare AURA toh sense ho hi rahe honge jisse tum hamari shakti ka ek halka sa hi sahi,aakalan toh kar paa hi rahi hogi...

kya tumhe nahi lagta ki hume yahan se jaane ki dhamki dena tumhare liya khatarnaak ho sakta hai...

us shaksh ki baat sun us ladki ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi jisse dhake hone ki wajah se wo dono shaksh nahi dekh paaye the...


LADKI-yahan khatarnaak sirf mai hun...toh darne ki zaroorat mujhe nahi,tum dono ko hai...

khair,tumhari baaton se ek baat ti clear ho hi gayi hai ki bina pite tum dono jaaoge nahi..

toh isse pehle ki khel shuru karen,ek baat ka jawab do....kaun hai wo jo dhund raha hai mujhe...

mai suspect hun,ye kaise tay kar liya tum dono ne..

2ND-tum hume maarogi....achi galatfehmi hai...khair, pehle tumhare sawalon ke jawab de dete hain kyunki fir tum us haalat me rahogi nahi ki kuch bhi sun yaa samajh paao...

1ST-arre manners bhul gaya kya..?? conversation shuru karne se pehle introduction zaroori hota hai.. toh pehle wo kar len...???

2nd-ye baat bhi sahi hai...toh lady,myself DORIAN....

1ST-aur mai GASTON hun...

DORIAN-well,humne toh apna intro de diya...ab agar naam batane se aapki is chuppi hui personality ka RAAZ nahi khul jaayega,toh kya hum aapka naam jaan sakte hain...

LADKI-FALLON......

DORIAN-FALLON....nice..toh FALLON,baat kuch aisi hai ki humare LORD ne hume kisiki talash karne ko kaha hai...

ab wo kaun hai,iske baare me toh hume pata nahi hai par uski urja ki shakti ko hamare LORD ne hume mehsoos karwaya tha taaki hum uske zariye usse detect kar saken...

unhone hume ye bhi bataya tha ki aisa ho sakta hai ki jinki talash unhe hai,wo hume directly naa mile toh aise me agar hum kisi aur me usse milte julte urja ke prabhaav ko mehsoos karen,toh iska arth hoga ki wo shaksh unka saathi hai,jiski LORD ko talash hai...

and guess what...itne dino ki lagatar khoj ke baad aakhirkhaar hume ek aisa shaksh mil hi gaya jiski body se hume us WANTED shaksh jaisi urja feel hui hai...

toh hui naa tum hamari suspect....

FALLON-kya naam hai tumhare LORD ka...???

DORIAN- jab hum tumhe unke paas lekar chalenge,toh tum khud hi unse puch lena...

FALLON-milna toh mai chahti hun tumhare LORD se par unfortunately abhi iska waqt nahi aaya hai....

par yahan se mere jaane ka waqt ab zaroor aa gaya hai... isiliye,khel shuru karte hain...

agar khudki jaan bacha paaye,toh tum dono bhi chale jaana..


FALLON ka chehra nahi dikh raha tha par uski awaaz me jo confidence tha,wo DORIAN aur GASTON bohot ache se feel kar paa rahe the...

unhe apni taakat par pura bharosa tha par ek anjaan dushman ko kam aankna,ye bewakufi wo nahi kar sakte the aur isiliye...

GASTON turant gayab hua aur FALLON ke piche aa gaya...

ab DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi FALLON ke dono taraf the jiska matlab ki wo uspar dono taraf se ek saath waar karne waale the...

FALLON bhi un dono ki ran neeti se anjaan nahi thi....

usne pehle apne saamne khade DORIAN ko dekha aur fir palaththe hue uski nazar GASTON par padi aur tabhi....

FALLON ke chehre ko piche ki taraf ghumta dekha DORIAN ke haathon se ek CURRENT ROPE nikal FALLON ki taraf badhi....

par FALLON jaise pehle se hi jaanti thi ki aisa kuch hone waala hai aur isiliye hi usne hawa me ek ulta cart wheel maara aur DORIAN ke chhode CURRENT ROPE ke upar se guzarti hui jaane lagi...

ye action kaafi speed tha par DORIAN aur GASTON jaise A + SORCERERS ki aankhon ke liye normal hi tha aur isiliye FALLON ke hawa me rehte hue hi GASTON ne apni taraf se ek dusri CURRENT RAY feki uske taraf par tabhi...

FALLON ka right hand uske waist ki taraf jahan usne ek red belt pehni hui thi,uspar gayi...

abhi hawa me hi thi FALLON...par ussi akward aur moving position me usne us belt ko apne waist se naa sirf kheencha,balki agle nano second se bhi kam waqt par wo belt uske haath me the...

belt ko haath me lete hi usne usse ek jhatka diya aur aisa hote hi hui do cheezen...

pehli....belt saamp ki tarah lehra gayi aur agle ho pal us belt ki length 10 feet ki ho chuki thi...

dusri....belt ke lehrate hi usse do behad strong shock waves nikli jisme se ek sidhi padi DORIAN ke CURRENT ROPE par aur dusri padi GASTON ke chhode CURRENT ROPE par aur aisa hote hi wo dono ROPES dhuen me badal gayab ho gaye...

wahan wo ropes gayab hue aur yahan FALLON ka pair zameen par aaya...

abhi abhi jo hua tha,usse dekh ek pal ke liye aankhen hairat se badi hi gayi thi DORIAN aur GASTON ki...

unhone dekha ki FALLON ke haathon me jo chaabul numa badi si belt hai,uske dono side se halki halki urja nikal rahi thi jiska matlab tha ki wo belt ek maayavi astr thi aur usse bohot se metaphisycal activities ko anjaam diya jaa sakta tha....

jahan wo dono ye sab soch rahe the wahin FALLON ab un dono ko mouka nahi dena chahti thi aur isiliye....

jaise hi uske pair zameen ko chhue toh uske agle hi pal usne ek baar fir apne lambe se belt jo kisi chaabuk se kam nahi thi,usse zor se jhatakte hue zamin par maara aur aisa hote hi....

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

us belt ke zamin se takrate hi aas paas ki puri zamin asthir ho gayi aur us zamin ke har hisse me vibrations hone lagi...

dusri....

zamin se takrane par us belt me bhi ek strong impact pada jiske baad uske dono ends se anginat lambe lambe keel nikalne lage...

ye keel us belt ki shakti urja se bane the aur isiliye wo sab jaan leva bhi the...

ek taraf zamin par ho rahe vibrations aur dusri taraf wo anginat keel...

ek saath is dohre hamle se hadbada gaye the DORIAN aur GASTON....

wo khudko zamin par stable bhi nahi kar paa rahe the aur aise me unhe un keelo se bhi bachna tha...

par DORIAN aur GASTON bhi koi kacche khiladi toh the nahi...

zamin ke hilte hi wo dono halke hawa me uth chuke the...wahin hawa me uth un dono ne apne saamne ek ek NON LIVING WORLD DOOR khol diye jiske khulte hi wo keel unme samane lage...

jab FALLON ne apne daanw ko khaali jaate hue dekha toh usne apne belt ko ek baar punah hawa me lehraya aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse us belt se keel nikalne lage par is baar unki disha straight nahi thi...

ek nishchit doori tak pahunchne ke baad wo keel apni disha badalte hue chaaron taraf se ghum ghum kar GASTON aur DORIAN ki taraf badh chale...

ye sab hote dekh ek pal ke liye DORIAN aur GASTON ke chehre par chinta ki lakire ubhri...

kyunki ye wakayi ek ajeeb problem thi...DORIAN aur GASTON ek saath bohot se world doors nahi khol sakte the...

waqt kam tha aur problem badi.. kuch pal aur,uske baad wo saare keel in dono ko cheer dene waale the...

par GASTON aur DORIAN aisa kaise hone de sakte the aur isiliye...

dono ne mind to mind ek dusre se baat ki aur agle hi pal...

dono ke saamne bane WORLD DOOR gayab ho gaye...

aur fir....

DORIAN aur GASTON,dono hi apni apni jagah par gol ghumne lage...un dono ki raftar behad tez thi...

wahin wo saari keelen chaaron taraf se hoti hui un dono ke paas pahuncha chuki thi par isse pehle ki wo unhe chhu paati...

GASTON aur DORIAN,dono ke hi shariron ke ghumne se unke bodies ke charaon taraf ek SHIELD numa AURA banane lagi jisse takrakar wo saari keelen gayab hone lagi...

GASTON aur DORIAN ki yukti se apne naye waar ko bekaar hote dekh ek pal ke liye FALLON hairan hui par fir wo dobara ek naya waar karne ki waali thi lekin tabhi....


WAPAS AA JAAO FALLON....


uske kaano me ye awaaz gunj uthi...


wahin jab DORIAN aur GASTON ko un keelon ki ENERGY mehsoos honi band ho gayi toh unhone ghumna band kar diya..

par ghumna band karne se pehle hi un dono ne apne waar kar diye the...

un dono ke hi bodies se do ray numa bhala nikal FALLON ki taraf badh gaya tha par waar karne ke baad jab GASTON aur DORIAN ki body ruki aur unki nazar saamne gayi tih dono hairan ar ghussa dono ho gaye...

reason....

FALLON gayab ho chuki thi.....





PLANET-ELYSIAN



PLACE-CHOSENS






CONGRATS ACCHUTA & SLUNDER....aapne aaj apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya hai...

aur itni jaldi aisa karne waale aap dono pehle WEAKLINGS bane hain...

aapki is uplabdhi par mai aap dono ke liye bohot khush hun...

chehre par khushi ke bhaav liye HIDA ne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se ye baat kahi jisse sun un dono ki baachein hi khil gayi thi...

gourav aur khushi...jab ye dono bhaav ek saath ek hi waqt par mehsoos ho toh us feeling ki baat hi kuch aur hoti hai...

aur yahi dono feelings is waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER mehsoos kar rahe the...

aaj class shuru hone ke baad in dono ne REFINER ki practice nahi ki thi aur wo isiliye kyunki us process me bhi kaafi energy release hoti hai jisse SOUL AMPLIFICATION process me problem hoti hai...

one at a time..is quote ko aadhar banakar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne aaj sirf apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ki sochi thi aur unki ye soch kaargar bhi sidh hui...

lagatar 3 baar fail hone ke baad finally chowthe attempt me ye dono apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab ho hi gaye...

wahin in sabke beech tha BRAWNY jisse ek taraf toh apne dono group mates ke liye khushi toh ho hi rahi thi wahin dusri taraf apne nirantar haar ke liye sharm bhi mehsoos ho rahi thi..

waise toh usse hamesha se hi apne underperformance se taklif hoti thi par aaj jab usne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dobara apne apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karte hue dekha toh wo taklif kaafi badh gayi thi...

apne disability par BRAWNY koft kar hi raha tha ki tabhi HIDA ne apni baat aage badhayi...


HIDA-well..ab aap dono ne achievements haasil kiye hain toh aap dono ko prize bhi milega...

aur prize hai catagory upgradation....kal se aap dono is class me nahi balki GROOMERS ki class me baithenge...

itna hi nahi,har GROOMER ki hi tarah aap dono ki bhi life style hogi...

shaam ko aapke quarter me aapki bikes pahunch jaayegi jiske gps me aapke naye apartments ka location set hoga...

ab se aap dono ko is WEAKLINGS ki dress ko 24/7 pehenane ki zaroorat hai...infact kabhi bhi pehenane ki zaroorat nahi hai....

aapke apartments me aapke pahunchne se pehle hi aapki GROOMERS ki uniform aur kuch casual dresses rakhwa di jaayengi aur saath hi har wo cheez jo ek GROOMER ko milti hai...

so congrats again...aaj ki class yahi khatm hoti hai...


jahan ye bol HIDA hall se nikal gayi wahin BRAWNY bhi unke piche piche hi nikal pada...

uske yun nikalne ka kaaran ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER achi tarah samajh rahe the aur unhe uske liye bura bhiag raha tha par wo kar bhi kya sakte the...

wo dono BRAWNY ko hi dekh rahe the ki tabhi un dono ke kaano me padi meri awaaz...


MAI-bohot bura lag raha hai BRAWNY ke liye...


apni khushi me wo dono kuch palon ke liye meri moujudgi ko bhul se gaye the par meri awaaz sun naa sirf unhe mere unke paas hone ka ehsaas hua par saath hi wo dono turant piche palte aur jo hamesha hota aaya hai wahi hua..

dono ke chehron par dar dikhne laga...


MAI-dar kyun rahe ho...aaj toh tum dono ke liye khushi ka din hai.... WEAKLINGS ki pathetic life style se finally azaadi mil hi gayi tum dono ko...

i am very happy for you....


meri aakhri line sun un dono ko hi shock laga...i was happy for them...ye sunkar unhe hairani bhi hui aur khushi bhi...


ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-thanks RAAZ...

MAI-hmm...chalo, aakhri baar apne quater ko dekh lo..shaam ko toh usse alvida kehna hi hai...


is waqt mera chehra bilkul shaant tha...

aur jab is tarah se maine apni baat kahi toh un dono ke cheharon par smile aa gayi aur wo wapas palat aage badh gaye wahin mai bhi unke piche ho liya....

par isse pehle ki hum teeno hall se bahar nikalte....


WELL WELL WELL ... DEKHO TOH KAUN AA RAHA HAI....THE THREE LOOSERS...


ye awaaz thi VALDIS ki jo ki ACCHUTA ki taraf hi aa raha tha..

darasal STELLARS ki class khatm hone ke baad jab saare SAVENTS bahar nikalne lage tab VALDIS ki nazar hall ke beech khade hum teeno par padi aur hume dekh wo rook gaya tha aur ab jab hum ussi ki taraf aa rahe the tab usne ye saari baatein kahin jispar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER, pehle toh ek raat pehle hue dhulayi ko yaad kar halke ghabraye par fir jab unhone VALDIS ko mujhe looser bolte suna toh unhe aa gaya ghussa....


ACCHUTA-abbe bakwaas band kar...warna LU***D phek kar maarunga,GA**D se pregnant ho jayega tu...

SLUNDER-saale chaman chutiye...apne grahakon ko apni GAA**D ki rishwat dekar unse ghirwakar hume maarta hai aur khudko taakatwar samajhta hai...

saale MALE RAA***D hai tu...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki baat sun behad ghusse se bhar unki taraf badha VALDIS aur jab aisa hua tab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko realize hua ki ghusse me kuch zyada hi bol gaye hain wo dono...

VALDIS ek 4 percent AMPLIFICATION waala banda tha upar se STELLAR bhi jinka influence CHOSENS me sabse zyada hota hai toh aise me ye situation unke liye sahi nahi thi...

par zuban se nikli baat aur usse hone waale consequences se bhaaga toh jaa sakta tha nahi isiliye wo dono bhi VALDIS se bhidne ke liye ready ho gaye the..

wahin tezi se badhtha hua VALDIS ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch gaya...

ACCHUTA ke saamne pahunch apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki taakat se VALDIS ne usse dhakka dene ke liye haath aage badhaya par tabhi...

behad tezi se mai ACCHUTA aur VALDIS ke beech aa gaya jisse VALDIS ka haath ACCHUTA ke chaati se naa lag meri chaati ko laga aur jab aisa hua toh...

VALDIS ki push ka asar kuch hua nahi...mai apni jagah par hi khada raha..

pehle mujhe yun tezi se ACCHUTA ke saamne aata dekh VALDIS chownka par fir uske SOUL power ki use ke saath diye gaye push se bhi jab ek inch bhi mujhe naa hilte dekha usne toh uski hairani badh gayi...

usse ACCHUTA ki mere baare me kahi gayi kal ki baat yaad aane lagi thi...

wahin apni chhati me uske haath ko dekh maine apne dono haath aage badhaye aur VALDIS ke haathon ko pakad liya....


HMMPHHH..HAMMPHHHH


mere aisa karte hi VALDIS ne apne haathon ko mere haathon se chhudane ke liye pehle normal,fir halki awaaz ke saath average aur aakhir me tez awaaz ke saath apni puri taakat laga di par uska haath mere haathon se chhuta nahi...

jahan aisa hote dekh VALDIS behad chownka tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hasi nikal gayi aur...


ACCHUTA-kyun re lau*e.... bohot dum hai naa tere me.... laga le fir..ga**d se tatti nikal jaayegi par RAAZ ke haath se tera haath nahi nikal paayega...

VALDIS-haath chhod RAAZ.. warna acha nahi hoga...


bebasi me bhi akad ka darwaza pakde gurraya VALDIS jispar...


MAI-abhi maine sirf tera haath pakda hai...agar dabana shuru kar dun toh tere haathon ke zariye teri rooh fana ho jaayegi...

taakat dikhane ka bada shouk hai naa tujhe....ye mouka bhi tujhe milega...par jab tak wo mouka nahi aata,apne haathon ko, apni aukad ko apne dayre me rakh...salamat rahega...

ab nikal....


ye bol maine VALDIS ke haathon ko chhod diya jiske baad apne kalaayion ko masalte hue usne ek baar mujhe aur ek baar ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko ghura par fir chupchaap nikal gaya...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ...


mujhe yun beech me ghus un dono ko defend karta dekh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ke hi aankhon me mere liye khushi respect thi,jo ACCHUTA ke thanks kehne par aur saaf dikhne lagi thi..


MAI-no need dude..what are friends for...???!!!


meri baat sun aur mujhe unhe as friends bolne par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono shock bhi hue aur bhaavuk bhi...

SLUNDER toh ab bhi thoda hichkicha raha tha par ACCHUTA,wo turant aage badha aur mere gale lag gaya aur usse aisa karte dekh SLUNDER ne bhi waisa hi kiya....

apni khushi ko dikha ye dono mere gale lage hi the ki tabhi....


KAAM HO GAYA MASTER.....



ek awaaz gunj uthi mere dimag me jisse sun mere chehre par aa gayi muskaan...

toh chaliye,is scene ko khatm karne se pehle us scene ki taraf chalte hain jiski wajah se mere dimag me ye awaaz gunji thi..





PLANET-MASSOR


PLACE-THE JUNGLE





OH..MY... GOD.......KA...KYA HAI YE..???


kampti hue awaaz me ek aadmi ne ye baat kahi jispar uske jeep ke saamne khade vikral aur ajeeb body ke jaanwar ne pehle apne sir ko jo ki aadha tiger aur adha wolf ka bana tha,halka jhatka diya aur...


ANIMAL-WOOGER HUN MAI....


ek jaanwar ke mooh se insano ki bhasha sunkar wo aadmi jo aur koi nahi balki ACCHUTA ke father the,hairan ho gaye the...

waise hairan toh unke baaju me baithe SLUNDER ke pitah aur jeep ki pichli seat par baithi un dono ki patniyan bhi ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA ke pitah jinhone SLUNDER ke parents ko apne is naye planet me invite kiya tha aur filhal woh chaaron ek bohot hi advanced hunt jeep me MASSOR ke ek jungle me shikar karne aaye the,unhone apne wildest dream me bhi nahi socha tha ki jungle ke beech unka saamna ek daiytyakaar jaanwar se hoga jo human language me baat kar sakta tha...

wahin dono royal families ki suraksha ke liye jo kuch sipahi aaye the aur unke jeep ke piche dusri gaadiyon me follow kar rahe the,us jaanwar ko dekh un sabki haalat bhi kharab ho gayi thi....

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pitah,jo kuch der pehle tak ek hiran ko dekh uske shikar ke liye uske piche gaadi douda rahe the,ab khud ek shikar ki tarah us WOOGER naam ke jaanwar ke saamne khade the..

khair, jaise hi WOOGER ne apna naam bataya toh...


SLUNDER FATHER-ho kaun tum...???aur is tarah hamare saamne aane ka kaaran kya hai...???


apni puri himmat jama kar kahi thi ye baat SLUNDER ke father ne jispar....


WOOGER-mai kaun hun,ye chhodo bas itna jaan lo ki mai tum chaaron ko tumhari zindagi se azaad karne aaya hun...


bohot normally kahi thi ye baat WOOGER ne par uski baat sun un sabki haalat aur kharab ho gayi thi...


ACCHUTA MOTHER-par kyun maarna chahte ho tum hume.. humne tumhara kya bigada hai..???

WOOGER-bigada toh us hiran ne bhi tumhara kuch nahi hai jiske shikar ke liye tum sab nikle ho...


WOOGER ki baat sun un sabko laga ki hiran ki wajah se WOOGER un sabko maarna chahata tha isiliye..


SLUNDER MOTHER-hum nahi karenge us hiran ka shikar...infact,hum kisi bhi jaanwar ka shikar nahi karenge..hum wapas chale jaate hain..


SLUNDER ki mom ki baat puri hui hi thi ki uske agle hi pal unki aur unke saath baaki sabhi ki aankhen badi ho gayi..

reason...

jis hiran ki baat abhi ho rahi thi,wo hiran hawa me udte hue unki taraf aaya aur thik WOOGER ke saamne aakar rook gaya jiske agle hi pal wo hiran WOOGER ke mooh me chala gaya tha...

hiran ko nigalne ke baad..


WOOGER-hiran ho yaa manushya.. kamzoron ko mar hi jaana chahiye...

ek kamzor toh mar gaya..ab tum sabhi ki baari hai...

ACCHUTA FATHER-dekh kya rahe ho..maar daalo isse...

piche apne sipahiyon ko dekhte hue chilla uthe ACCHUTA ke father aur unke aisa karte hi jaise ek sammohan se jaage the saare sainik...

apne king ki awaaz sun wo sabhi turant apni jeep se utre..un sabhi ke haathon me lezer beam guns thi jiska ek shot kisi haathi ko bhi raakh kar sakta tha..

jeep se niche utar position lete hue un sabhi siphahiyon ne WOOGER par gun taan di aur aisa karte hi...

sabne trigger daba diya tha jiske baad guns se nikli lazer beams sidhe WOOGER ki taraf lapki par ye kya...!!!???


WOOGER se ek feet door wo saari beams hawa me hi rook gayi..is karishme ko dekh sabhi hairan ho hi rahe the ki tabhi...

un beams ne apna rookh moda aur wapas us disha ki taraf badh chali jahan se wo aayi thi..

aur aisa hone par ek pal bhi nahi laga un saare sipahiyon ko raakh hone ke liye...

jahan apne sipahiyon ka haal dekh ab chaaron royals thar thar kaampne lage the wahin WOOGER dheere dheere chalte hue un chaaron ki taraf aaya aur....


WOOGER-do option hai tum chaaron ke paas...

pehli...jis gun se tumhare siphahi mujhe maarne waale the,ussi se khudko shoot kar lo...

dusri...mai tum chaaron ko zinda chaba jaata hun...

maroge toh tum chaaron dono hi suraton me bas fark itna hoga ki agar tum chaaron ne khudko shoot kiya toh sirf tum chaaron ki hi jaan jaayegi par agar mujhe tum logon ko maarna pada toh tum chaaron ke baad mai tum dono ke hi grah ke har baashinde ko maar dunga...

aur aakhir me tumhare bete bhi maare jaayenge....

sab tumpar hai...jaldi faisla karo....


WOOGER ki baat sun un chaaron ki hi aankhon me aansu aa gaye the..

marne se darte nahi the wo chaaron par is tarah marna unhe gawara nahi tha...

par option bhi nahi tha unke paas..unki praja aur unke bacchon ki bali wo kaise de sakte the aur isiliye....

kaampte hue haathon se un chaaron ne ek ek gun uthai aur apne sir par rakh di...

aankh band ho gaye the un chaaron ke...unki band aankhon ke saamne unke grah CARAPACE aur ARROW ghum gaye..unki praja aur unka prem dikhne laga unhe.

aur aakhir me dikhe unhe unke bacche.. ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinke chehron ko yaad kar ek baar fir un chaaron ke aansu chalak uthe...

ane bacchon ke chehron ko aakhri baad yaad kar....


SCCHHH......


chaar halki halki awaaz nikli un chaaron gun se jiske agle hi pal ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents ke sir unke dhad se alag hokar raakh ho chuke the...

aur ye hote hi nikle WOOGER ke mooh se wo shabd jo gunje the RAAZ ke kaano me....


WOOGER-KAAM HO GAYA MASTER....




BACK TO RAAZ:-



QUATER JAO TUM DONO....


khudse alag karte hue kahi maine ye baat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se...

wahin alag hone par jab un dono ne mujhe muskurate hue dekha toh unhe laga ki shayad mai unhe dost kehne aur unke mujhe gale lagne ki wajah se hi muskura raha hun...

unhe kahan maalum tha ki ye muskaan un dono ke parents ki zabardasti karwayi gayi khudkhushi ki wajah se aayi thi..

khair,meri baat sun.....


ACCHUTA-tum nahi aa rahe ho...!!!

MAI-mai baad me aata hun...


meri baat sun un dono ne fir aage kuch kaha nahi aur palatthe hue aage badh gaye par fir wo dono hi wapas meri taraf palte aur...


ACCHUTA-thanks RAAZ,humare liye ladhne ke liye...

SLUNDER-and thanks hume dost maanane ke liye....


jahan ye bol wo dono wapas palat chale gaye wahin unki baat sun...



MAI-log kehte hain,


dosti ki hai toh
NIBHANI HOGI......

par RAAZ se dosti me,
jaan GAWAANI HOGI.......

jeena hai toh meri nazar
ko apni ehmiyat DIKHANI HOGI.....

ye meri duniya hai.....

isme meri,bas meri,sirf meri hi
MANMAANI HOGI..










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......









AAPKA APNA V...J.......
Dorian aur Gastoun ek ladki Floran ki aura se ushe suspect samjhkar uthane ke liye aate hai parntu Floran unhe muh ki khila kar gayab ho jati hai.
Idhar Acchuta aur Sllunder Apni soul power ko 2% aply kar ke grummer ki class me pahunchne ke liye yogye ho jate hai. Fir class ke baad unper Valdis apni 4% soul power se attack karta hai tab RAAZ unhe bachata hai. Valdish maat kha kar chala jata hai aur dono RAAZ ko thanks kahte hai aur friend bolte hai.
Vahi Acchuta father and Sllunder father wooger ke kahne per apne aap ko shoot kar lete hai aur wooger aakar Raaz ko kaam hone ki ittlah de deta hai.
Tab Raaz kahta hai meri dosti ke liye kurbani toh deni hi padegi.
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