Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Raguhalkal]

Tuesday matlab kal tha brother....aur kal update aa gaya tha...

acha acha thik hai thik hai wo dyan nahi rah

 

[K S Lover]

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update

 

[Asif khan]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, MABEL, ALFREEN AUR UNKE PARENTS PHASE 2 KE APNE NAYE GHAR NE ENTER KARTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIKRAM AUR ASMODEUS HEAVEN ME SABKO VIDEOUS KI PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)





UPDATE-53



PLACE-HEAVEN





TOH AAKHIR WO WAQT AA HI GAYA JAB IS KAHANI KE VILLAIN KE BANAYE KHEL ME AAP DONO KA BANAYA VILLAIN UTARNE WAALA HAI....


muskurate hue AVANTIKA ne ye baat kahi jisse sun VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ke chehre par bhi muskaan aa gayi....


VIKRAM-is khel me RAAZ utar toh bohot pehle hi gaya tha par haan,uske khelne ki baari ab aayi hai...

ASMODEUS-waise hamare waale villain ko villain banane ka pura shray mujhe jaata hai...

kyunki ye janab us WAQT darshak hi the....


VIKRAM ko dekhte hue ASMODEUS ne ye baat kahi jispar...


VIKRAM-bilkul BHAI...jo bhi ho paaya hai,ye aapki wajah se hi ho paaya hai....

us kriya ko karte waqt aapne apni immortality daav par lagayi thi...aise me mai koi shray le bhi kaise sakta hun...!!!!????


VIKRAM ne ASMODEUS ki baat par puri tarah sehmati dikhayi jispar...


ASMODEUS-yaar kabhi toh aisa vyavahar dikha jaise ek PARMESHWAR PUTR ko dikhana chahiye....

mujhse bhi bohot upar hai tu mere BHAI...teri pratispraddha,tera COMPETITION kisi se ho hi nahi sakta bhai aur iska ek jeevant udaharan wahi kriya hai jisse hum apni yojna ko anjaam de paaye hain...

log apni galtiyon se sikhte hain,par tu dusron tak ki jeet ko unke zariye apni jeet me badalne ki nazar aur hunar rakhta hai...

maana maine apni immortality daaw par lagayi thi,par tune naa sirf us daaw ka kaaran dhund nikala tha balki meri immorality par koi aanch naa aaye,iske liye bhi tu ready tha....

aur mujhe maalum hai ki humne jaisa socha tha,agar us planning me halki si aur gadbad hui hoti toh tu mujhe bachane ke liye khudko daaw par laga deta...

par sabse mahatvpurn baat...tu ye kaise bhul jaata ki hum dono jude hue hain...

teri har soch se mai bhali bhaati parichit rehta hun..aur mujhe maalum hai ki tune meri badhayi isiliye ki taaki mai khudse tujhe sarvshresta maanu....haina..!!???


ASMODEUS ki baat par VIKRAM ke saath saath AVANTIKA aur ALESENDRA bhi has pade par fir...


ALESENDRA-atahas bohot hua...ab aap dono ke us kaam ka waqt ho gaya hai jisse KAHANI ke agle padaw ka raasta banega...

ASMODEUS-acha..!!!kya hum jaan sakte hain ki aap kis kaam ko baat kar rahi hain...???

AVANTIKA-aapke mitra aur CHOSENS ke teeno SOVEREIGN'S ko unki neend se jagane ka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ki wajah se unki bhuli yuhi yaadasht unhe wapas dene ka kaam....

VIKRAM-wakayi waqt ke saath aap dono kaafi akalmand ho gayi hain...


VIKRAM ki baat par wo dono bas muskura di jiske baad....

VIKRAM ne apna right hand aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi teeno SOVEREIGN'S ki behosh body hawa me prakat hui aur wahin rook gayi.....

aisa hone ke baad VIKRAM ke left hand se teen CHETNA URJA nikal aage badhe aur AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sir me sama gaye jiske kuch pal baad teeno ki hi aankhen dheere dheere khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh unki body sidhi hoti hui zamin par aa gayi...

kaafi samay ke baad teeno SOVEREIGN'S ek mout jaisi neend se jaage the jiski wajah se unhe normal hone me kuch waqt laga par jab wo normal hue toh apne saamne LORD OF ANGELS aur CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ko dekh turant apne ghutno par aa gaye....

ghutno par aate hi unke dimag me wo saare drishya ghum gaye jiski wajah se wo teeno behosh hue the aur wo sab yaad kar unke man me ek baar fir RAAZ ko lekar jigyasa ne janm liya par wo teeno chup hi rahe...


VIKRAM-khade ho jaaiye....


VIKRAM ke aisa bolte hi teeno khade ho gaye jiske baad...


VIKRAM-kuch sawal chal rahe hain ap teeno ke man me...!!!!puchna nahi chahenge unhe...!!!

AKSHAANT-LORD...aapse kya chuppa hua hai...???aapko toh sab pata hai....


waise toh AKSHAANT ya fir baaki ke dono VIKRAM ko normally naam se hi bulate the par jab bhi ASMODEUS saamne hota tha,tab ye teeno VIKRAM ko bhi as a friend nahi balki uske ohde ke hisaab se hi baat karte the...


SHAILA-kya aaj aap hume RAAZ ke baare me batayenge....??

VIKRAM-nahi....


VIKRAM ki naa sun teeno man hi man nirash ho gaye par tabhi...


VIKRAM-ab hume tum teeno ko kuch bhi batane ki zaroorat nahi hai...kyunki apni jis shakti ke bhaag ko aur ussi tyag ke saath apni yaadasht ke jis bhaag ko dekar tum teeno ne FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko banaya tha,ab tumhari wo shakti tumhe wapas milne waali hai....

aur jab aisa hoga,tab tum teeno ko sirf RAAZ ke baare me hi nahi,balki puri kahani hi yaad aa jaayegi...


VIKRAM ki baat sun teeno SOVEREIGN'S hairan ho gaye.. kyunki bhale hi unhe apni Shakti ke sabse bade bhaag ke tyag ki wajah se hi jo kuch bhi ho raha hai,uski jaankari nahi thi par unhe ye zaroor bata diya gaya tha ki kisi bohot hi mahatvpurn CHEEZ ki raksha ke liye hi unki shakti roopi kawach ki rachna hui thi aur ab jab VIKRAM keh raha hai ki unki wo shakti unhe wapas milne waali hai toh iska matlab tha ki wo khaas CHEEZ ab beparda ho sakti hai....

(writers note:-toh baat ye hai ki jab AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR CHOSENS ke SOVEREIGN'S bane tab VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS ne unki shakti ko ek shield ne badla aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagaya par iske saath un dono ne in teeno ki yaadasht bhi le li aur wo isiliye kyunki agar wo aisa nahi karte toh RAAZ ko banane ki planning VIDEOUS ko pata chal jaati,saath hi FORBIDDEN FOREST me SHIELD lagte waqt ek aur chiz hui thi,uske baare me bhi usse pata chal jaata par ab jab RAAZ saamne aa chuka hai toh aise me SHIELD shakti ke through yaadasht ko lautane me koi harz nahi hai)



SOVEREIGN'S ki soch ko VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS dono hi samajh rahe the aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS-zyada mat socho.. jaise hi tum teeno ko tumhari shakti wapas milegi tab tumhe apne aap hi tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil jaayenge....


jaise hi ASMODEUS ki baat khatm hui,VIKRAM ne apna haath aage kiya jiske baad uske haathon se ek saath teen rays nikli...

ye teen rays FORBIDDEN FOREST ki wahi kawach thi jo RAAZ ke BARRIER lagane se pehle pichle 25 thousand years se us FOREST ka kawach bani hui thi....

dekhte hi dekhte wo shakti numa rays apne asli maalik THE THREE SOVEREIGN'S ke body me samati chali gayi jisse feel kar un teeno ki aankhen band ho gayi....

is prakriya ke douran naa sirf un teeno ko apni khoyi hui shakti wapas mil rahi thi,balki saath hi unki bhul chuki yaadasht bhi unhe wapas milti jaa rahi thi...


VIDEOUS ka janm,uski demands,ZEAL ke VIKRAM ki utpatti,uska aur pure ZEAL ka vinash aur uske baad RAAZ ki utpatti ka idea, CHOSENS ka banana aur uske baad wo khaas CHIZ jiski suraksha ke liye unhe apni shakti ka 75 pratishat bhaag aur apni yaadasht ko kurbaan karna pada,wo sab yaad aa gaya...

itna hi nahi,unke behosh hone ke baad CHOSENS me kya kya hua tha,wo sab bhi unhe pata chal gaya aur aise unhe ASMODEUS ki baat ka matlab samajh aaya jisme usne kaha tha ki unke saare sawalon ke jawab unhe unki shakti milne par apne aap pata chal jaayenge....

kuch waqt laga,is shakti ke adaan pradaan ki kriya ko pura hone me par jab aisa hua toh AKSHAANT, SHAILA aur MOKALSAR ke sharir me ek baar firse ANGELS ke kapde aa gaye...

aur aisa hote hi wo teeno ek baar firse ASMODEUS aur VIKRAM ke saamne jhukne ko hue par...


VIKRAM-jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai doston...aapko bas wahi mila hai jo pehle se aapka tha...

aur ab jab aapko saari kahani dobara yaad aa gayi hai toh ye batane ki zaroorat nahi hai ki aapko apne diye padh aur kartavya par wapas loutna hai aur is khel ke agle padhav ka raasta banana hai...

AKSHAANT-aisa hi hoga LORD....

ASMODEUS-hume pata hai ki aap teeno apni bhaawnao ko sayyamit rakhenge par is khel ka wo chuppa hua bhaag,jo ab apko yaad aa chuka hai,usse VIDEOUS se chupana atti aawashyak hai aur isiliye....


ASMODEUS ke haathon se ek GODS BARRIER ray nikli aur aage badhte hue teeno SOVEREIGN'S ke dimag ke us hisse me fit ho gayi jisme wo jaankari thi jisse VIDEOUS se chuppana tha...

aur jab ASMODEUS ne apna kaam kar diya toh...


ASMODEUS-ab aap teeno jaa sakte hain...


ek baar un dono ke saamne jhuk aur fir ALESENDRA aur AVANTIKA ko smile dekar wo teeno gayab ho gaye....


ALESENDRA-abhi tak kisi naa kisi tarah aap dono ka is kahani me hastakshep raha hai par ab aakhir wo waqt aa hi gaya jab aap dono bhi sirf ek darshak banane waale ho....

ASMODEUS-iska bhi apna ek maza hai.....

AVANTIKA-par kya aapko ye soch kar dar nahi lagta, ghabrahat nahi hoti ki jaisa RAAZ hai,usse kahin puri baazi ulti naa padh jaaye....

aur uske upar VIDEOUS jisne itne varshon me apni shakti aur badha bhi li hai aur sthir bhi kar liya hai...

VIKRAM-dar,ghabrahat soch ke hi hisse hote hain...aur soch faisla lene se pehle li gayi cheez hai,baad ki nahi...

aur faisla toh hum pehle hi le chuke hain... toh ab darne ya ghabrane ka koi arth nahi...

VIDEOUS ne jo chaha,wo usne kar diya hai...RAAZ jo chahega,wo karega...

laskhya uska fixed hai,dekhna ye hai ki us lakshya tak pahunchne ke liye uska raasta kya hota hai..???

waise shuruat toh achi hai...


neeche ZEAL ki taraf dekhte hue VIKRAM ne ye baat kahi jiske baad sabhi ki nazar wahan chali gayi jahan is waqt paalthi maarkar baitha hua tha RAAZ....

KYUN???aayiye khud jaan lijiye...





PLANET-ZEAL


PLACE-THE CAVERN





AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA


is waqt paalthi maar baitha hua tha mai aur mere saamne hawa me rooki hui thi meri talwar...

aur lagatar baar baar ye SPELL nikal raha tha mere mooh se jiski wajah se mere sir se lekar pair tak,har jagah se ek gaadhi ray nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

par hai kya ye SPELL aur mere iske uccharan karne ki wajah kya hai!!!


toh baat ye hai ki mera jo pehla padaaw tha aur jo ki mera agla padhav bhi tha,THE CHOSEN'S,wahan jaane ke liye is spell ko kaam me laana zaroori tha...


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA...


jiska matlab hai SUBMERGE MY POWERS...


aur iske asar se is waqt mere BRAIN,BLOOD, BODY ke aur khaas kar SOUL ki lagbhag puri shakti nikalkar mere SWORD me sama rahi thi....

mere aisa karne ka kaaran ye tha ki mai apni shaktiyon ke saath CHOSENS me as a SAVENT nahi ghus sakta tha...

aur wo isiliye kyunki CHOSENS me SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke jis kriya ke dwara shakti ko naapa jaata hai,mera SOUL is AMPLIFICATION ke daayre se baahar tha....

meri shakti ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...par fir bhi agar jigyasa purv isse measure kiya bhi jaaye toh meri SOUL ki shakti ka 1 percent bhi kisi 20 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION waale SAVENT se zyada powerful tha....

aise me apni SOUL ki power ko chuppana hi sahi tha warna agar ye halka sa bhi kaam me aa jaata toh pura hi CHOSENS hil jaane tha...

ye toh hui SOUL ki baat.....ab agar baat karen baaki teen power sources ki matlab BRAIN, BODY, aur BLOOD ki toh mere sharir ka ye bhaag bhi kuch zyada hi shaktishaali tha...

sidhi bhaasha me kahun toh mera BRAIN,meri BODY aur mera BLOOD itne AMPLIFIED the ki wo kisi bhi COMPLETE 100 % SOUL AMPLIFIED SAVENT ko bhi araam se hara sakta tha....

aur isiliye hi mai apni shaktiyon ke bohot bade bhaag ko ek ghere me,ek kawach me bhar kar apne SWORD ke andar daal raha tha kyunki ek meri sword hi aisi chiz thi jo naa sirf mere shaktiyon ke kendron ko sambhal sakti thi,balki unhe khudme chuppakar khudko aur un shaktiyon ko invisible bhi kar sakti thi....

kyunki mai iska DHAARAK tha, isiliye mujhe chhod isse koi detect bhi nahi kar sakta tha....VIDEOUS bhi nahi....

par ye kriya time taking thi aur isiliye....


AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


yahan mera spell uccharit karna chalu hi raha aur wahan....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST




AMAGNA VIRYAVATTA....


RAAZ dwara ki jaa rahi enchantment ki awaaz FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar bhi gunj rahi thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan 2 behosh nirjeev se pade shariron ke saamne khada tha WOOGER....

aur ussike dimag me gunj rahi thi ye enchantment jisse sun...


WOOGER-MASTER ne apni kriya shuru kar di jiska arth hai ki mere kaam ka waqt aa gaya....

apni baat bol WOOGER ne ek disha me dekha aur uske aisa karte hi kuch door par bane ek poudhe me halki hulchul hui aur fir....

tezi se kuch phool jo ki asal me CHETNA BUTI the,wo us poudhe se toot kar udte hue aaye aur WOOGER me sama gaye aur kyunki WOOGER RAAZ ka hi hissa tha, isiliye usme samate hi wo buti RAAZ ke paas pahunch chuke the....

jab ye kaam pura hua toh WOOGER wapas un do behosh logon ki taraf jo ki ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the,palta aur....


WOOGER-bohot khushnaseeb ho tum dono kyunki tum dono mere MASTER ke kaam aane waale ho...

kuch din ki neend aur le lo,fir aankh toh khul hi jaayegi...

haan,par kitne waqt ke liye khuli reh paayengi tum dono ki aankhen,kitna jeeven shesh bacha hai tumhara,ye toh MASTER hi decide karenge...

filhal toh ghar waapsi ka waqt ho chala hai tum dono ka...


WOOGER ke aisa kehte hi uske right aur left,dono side ek ek WORLD DOOR khul gaye...

ek taraf tha CARAPACE matlab SLUNDER ka world aur dusri taraf tha ARROW jo ki ACCHUTA ki duniya thi...

aisa hone ke baad ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur agle hi pal dono ka sharir apne apne WORLD ke DOOR se hota hua dusri taraf chala gaya...

dono hi doors ke dusri taraf tha wahi room jiske aalishan beds par dono Planets ke rulers jo ko ACHHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents the,unke VEGITATIVE STATE waale bodies ko rakha gaya tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke bodies bhi unke PARENTS ke side me jaakar sthir ho gaye aur aisa hone par WORLD DOOR band ho gaya...

wahin yahan ka apna kaam khtam hote hi WOOGER bhi gaayab ho gaya par akele nahi,apne saath le gaya WOOGER wo SHIELD jo ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi hui thi.....

jiska matlab tha ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST me bina rok tok sabhi ka swagat hai....






PLACE-INSIDE THE CONCEAL




TUMHE AISA KYUN LAGTA HAI VIDEOUS KI TUM HUME UN DONO KI NAZRON SE CHHUPA SAKTE HO....!!!!


ye baat do logon ne ek saath kahi thi jisse sun....


VIDEOUS-mujhe lagta nahi hai..mai jaanta hun ki mere FATHERS VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS tumhe tab tak nahi dekh sakte jab tak tum yahan par ho...

ye jagah meri hai..sirf meri jo ki meri shaktiyon ke kawach se bani hai...isse bheda nahi jaa sakta...

haan,agar tum chaaho tob yahan se nikalkar apne aakaon se meri shikayat kar sakte ho...

mai rokunga nahi tumhe..bas jo maine pucha hai,mere us sawal ka jawab de do...


UNKNOWN-arre,tum toh hamare LORDS ki urja se bane ho..mind read karna toh tumhare gifts me se ek hai...

padh lo dimag aur jaan lo sach....

VIDEOUS-sarcastic,haan...!!!!


tumhare dimag ke information wala bhaag blocked hai jisse filhal mai bhed nahi paa raha hun...

ye blockage tabhi hatega jab tum dono dil se aisa chahoge par mai jaanta hun ki tum dono aisa karoge nahi.

koi naa, alternative toh har kisi ka hota hai....is problem ka bhi hai....


VIDEOUS ne ye baat kahi hi thi ki tabhi usse FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke hatne ka sense hua jisse mehsoos kar uske chehre par smile aa gayi aur....


VIDEOUS-ab tum dono ki mujhe zaroorat nahi...

afsos ki IMMORTAL ho tum dono..maar mai tum dono ko sakta nahi par.....

mout se milti julti haalat me toh pahuncha hi sakta hun naa...


SARVATOMUKHA UPPARUNADHI

LOCK THE SOUL


ye spell bhi ABANDON tha.iska prayag nishedh tha...


reason...is spell ko asar me sirf isse bolne waale ki SOUL hi laa sakti hai...aur isiliye isse bolne waale ke SOUL ko bohot powerful aur negetive hona hi chahiye...

jispar bhi ye SPELL uccharit hota hai,uska SOUL uski body ke andar ek jail me kaid ho jaata hai..

ek aisi jail jisme SOUL ke saath saath us SOUL ke maalik ka sharir bhi bhale hi wo kisi bhi form me ho,nirjeev sa ho jaata hai aur abhi yahi hua....

VIDEOUS ke spell uccharit karte hi uske SOUL se hota hua ek ray saamne baithe un dono shaksh ke body se takraya aur us body ko bhedte hue wo ray unke andar gaya jiske agle hi pal un dono ka sharir dheela padh gaya aur neeche gir pade...

BEELZEBUB aur DEFENDER....










AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V..J...

Kia baat h behad shandar dhmakedar update

 

[Asif khan]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF TEENO SOVEREIGN'S KO HOSH AA JAATA HAI,DUSRI TARAF RAAZ APNE POWERS KO LIMIT KARNE KE LIYE EK SPELL BOL RAHA HAI,TEESRI TARAF WOOGER NE ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KO UNKE PLANETS ME WAPAS BHEJ DIYA HAI WAHIN CHOWTHI TARAF VIDEOUS NE BEELZEBUB AUR DEFENDER KI SOUL KO KAID KAR UNHE MURCHIT KAR DIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-54



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-FORBIDDEN FOREST





YE SAB ACHANAK KAISE HO GAYA??? IS FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD AISE HI GAYAB HO GAYI, YUNHI....

KAUN HO SAKTA HAI JISNE IS NAYI SHIELD KO YAHAN LAGAYA AUR FIR BADE AARAM SE ISSE HATA BHI DIYA...BINA SAAMNE AAYE....


FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD ke haththe hi uske pressure ke absense ko feel kiya tha chattan ke andar khudko chupaye hue DORIAN ne aur aisa feel hote hi wo us chattan se baahar aaya aur jab us saamne dekha toh SHIELD ko gayab dekh hairan ho gaya...

usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye anhoni aakhir hui kaise par jab kaafi der baad bhi uske dimag me uske sawal ka koi jawab nahi aaya toh usne apne dimag ko jhatka aur FORBIDDEN FOREST ki dehliz ko paar kar uske andar pahuncha...

A+ level ka banda tha DORIAN...nidar,takatwar aur aatm vishwas se bharpoor par aaj jab uske FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar ghusne ka barso purana sapna pura ho raha tha,usko jo daayitv mila tha,wo usse pura karne waala tha,toh uske man me ek ajeeb si ghabrahat ,bechaini aur khushi,teeno ne janm le liya tha...

fihal raat ka waqt tha,har taraf andhera hi andhera tha,par apne chamakdaar vision ke sahare DORIAN aage badhta chala jaa raha tha...

chalte hue uski nazaren har taraf ghum rahi thi aur wo un saari cheezon ko dekh raha tha,jisse usne aaj se pehle sirf FORBIDDEN FOREST ki book me padhi thi...

usse is baat ki bohot khushi thi ki aisa karne waala wo pehla banda ban chuka tha par saath hi usse CHOSENS ke current SAVENTS par halka koft bhi ho raha tha aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan aisi aisi cheezen thi,jisse current SAVENTS explore kar khudko aur nikharne waale the...

khair, FORBIDDEN FOREST ke un saare hisson ko jo ki uske yahan ke manzil par pahunchne se pehle aane waali thi,un sabko checkout karte hue finally wo us jagah par pahunch hi gaya jahan usse pahunchna tha...


ASPRIT CRYSTAL....


wo chiz jiske liye wo yahan aaya tha... ASPRIT CRYSTAL ek trikon shape liye BLUE CRYSTEL tha par filhal DORIAN ke saamne uska desired CRYSTEL nahi balki ek PED tha jiska naam tha CUPOLA jiska ek matlab VAULT bhi hota hai...

ek pal us ped ko dekh DORIAN aage badha aur usne us ped ke saamne pahunch usse khudme aise lapeta jaise usse gale laga raha ho aur...


APRADHATA SAKRAYATE SHAKTIYEM

RELEASE THE COMPLETE POWER


ped ko upar uthane ki koshish karte hue DORIAN ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya jiske baad uski sharirik shakti chaar guna badh gayi aur aisa hote hi....

CRCRCRCR.......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath us ped ka jad ukhadne laga....

is waqt chaaron PRIMES ki shakti moujud thi DORIAN ke andar par uske baad bhi usse kaafi masakkat karni padh rahi thi us ped ko ukhadne me par dheere dheere hi sahi, CUPOLA naam ke us ped ka root aakhir ukhad hi gaya par aisa hote hi jahan CUPOLA ka jad tha,wahan se ek tez prakash baahar aaya jiske prabhav se DORIAN ki aankhen kuch palon ke liye band ho gayi....

us prakash ki teevrata se aaspaas ka saara drishya bhi ab saaf dikhne laga tha...

kuch der tak aakhen band rakhne ke baad DORIAN ne apni aakhen kholi...

tej toh ab bhi utna hi tha par us roshni se DORIAN ki ankhon me koi taklif nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye DORIAN ne neeche jhuk haath aage kiya aur agle hi pal CUPOLA ped ki jad se usne baahar nikala THE ASPRIT CRYSTAL jo ki ek dues ball ke size ka triangular shaped CRYSTEL tha...

apni is uplabdhi ko kuch pal tak mehsoos karta raha DORIAN aur fir wo us ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke saath gayab ho gaya...




PLACE-CHOSENS




IMPOSSIBLE...????MUJHE FORBIDDEN FOREST KI SHIELD MEHSOOS KYUN NAHI HO RAHI HAI....????


soyi hui thi MARILIZA WHIZZ par phir achanak unhe unke lagaye sensors se jo ki missing SAVENTS ke maamle ke baad unhone sirf CHOSENS me hi nahi balki pure ELYSIAN me laga diya tha,FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD mehsoos hona band ho gaya jiski wajah se unki aankhen khul gayi...

ab ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..pehle bhi ek baar SHIELD badal chuki thi aur jab aisa hua tha toh unke INSTITUTION ke teen SAVENTS lapata ho gaye the aur ab toh SHIELD hi gayab ho chuki thi jiske baad pata nahi kya hone waala tha....

yahi sab soch MARILIZA turant apne bed se utri aur wo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jaane ke liye antardhyan hone hi waali thi ki tabhi....


KAHIN JAANE KI ZAROORAT NAHI HAI MARILIZA....


WHIZZ MARILIZA ke saamne ek saath teen tez roshniyan prakat hui jisme se ye awaaz aayi thi

wahin kuch wo teen roshniyan dheere dheere maanav aakruti me badalne lagi aur jab wo aakruti puri tarah se human form me aayi toh WHIZZ MARILIZA hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi...

teeno SOVEREIGN'S uske saamne the toh aise me hairan aur khush hona toh laazmi hi tha par fir achanak se hi MARILIZA ke chehre ke bhaav badle aur wo nirash ho gayi jisse dekh teeno SOVEREIGN'S muskura uthe...


SHAILA-kya baat hai MARILIZA...???kya aap hume dekhkar khush nahi hui...???

MARILIZA-aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta SOVEREIGN....!!!!par mai aapke saamne aane ke laayak nahi hun...

aap teeno ne is INSTITUTION ki zimmedari mujhe di thi par unfortunately me fail ho gayi..

CHOSENS ke 25 thousand years ke itihaas me aisa pehli baar hua jab yahan se SAVENTS gayab ho gaye aur ye hua mere incharge hone ke baad...


sir ko neeche rakh MARILIZA ne ye baat kahi jispar...


AKSHAANT-isme aapki koi galti nahi hai MARILIZA...???jo hua,wo bas ek sanjog tha....



AKSHAANT ki baat samajh me nahi aayi MARILIZA ko...


MARILIZA-mai samjhi nahi...

ab sach toh bata nahi sakte the SOVEREIGN'S aur kya batana hai,ye toh unhone pehle hi soch liya tha aur isiliye....


MOKALSAR-ye toh aapko pata hi hai ki us FOREST ki SHIELD humari shaktiyon se bani thi...

par ab us SHIELD ki zaroorat nahi hai...

par usse ek jhatke me hataya nahi jaa sakta tha kyunki wo SHIELD sirf zamin ke upar hi nahi balki uske andar is grah ke core tak dhasi hui thi...

aur isiliye hume pehle usse uske jad se hilana tha,usse kamzor karna tha aur wahi humne kiya...

par jab humne ye kiya, toh durbhagyapurn vash ye wahi waqt tha jab us SHIELD ke paas wo teeno SAVENTS moujud the...

humare pehli koshish me wo SHIELD kamzor hui aur dusri koshish ke baad SHIELD hat gayi par aisa hote waqt us SHIELD se ek gravitational pull ENERGY ke form me baahar nikla aur un teen SAVENTS se takraya jiski wajah se wo teeno FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar kheencha gaye...

MARILIZA-oh..par jab SHIELD hatane ka waqt aa gaya tha toh fir wahan pichle kuch samay tak ek dusri SHIELD lagi hui thi...aisa kyun hua aur wo SHIELD kisiki thi...???

AKSHAANT-humse upar bhi shaktiyan hain MARILIZA aur wo SHIELD unhi shaktiyon me se ek ki thi...

aur wo laga isiliye tha kyunki jaisa ki MOKALSAR ne bataya ki hamari SHIELD ka asar is PLANET ke core tak tha toh isiliye jab humara SHIELD hata toh uska asar yahan ke core me bhi hua aur usse thik karne ke kiye hi naya SHIELD lagaya gaya aur ab jab core ne khudko stable kar liya hai toh aise me us SHIELD ki koi zaroorat nahi thi isiliye wo SHIELD bhi hat gaya...

MARILIZA-aur un missing SAVENTS ka kya hua.???sabse important sawal toh ye hai ki CHOSENS se itni door wo gaye kaise...???

aur kya abhi bhi wo wahin hain...??i hope they are alright now...???


ek saath kayi sawal kar diye MARILIZA ne jispar...


SHAILA-nahi wo teeno ab wahan nahi hain..darasal FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar pull hone se pehle hi wo teeno behosh ho chuke the aur wo sab kaafi injured bhi the...

aur jab unhe us force se FOREST ke andar kheencha gaya toh unki haalat aur kharab ho gayi..

isiliye humne unhe ek dusri jagah par shift kar diya tha jahan unka upchaar ho sakta tha... filhal toh wo teeno behosh hi hain par bohot jald unhe hosh aa jaayega aur wo wapas aa jaayenge...

aur rahi baat ki wo teeno wahan FOREST ke paas pahunche kaise toh ye tum khud hi dekh lo...


SHAILA ke aisa bolte hi uske haathon se wk ray nikal MARILIZA ke saamne hawa me rook gayi...

ye ray ek chalchitra thi par khaas baat ye thi ki ye ek fake, jhutti chalchitra thi jisse MARILIZA ke man ko shaant karne ke liye banaya gaya tha..

khair, chalchitra shuru ho chuka tha aur aisa hote hi MARILIZA hairan ho gayi...

reason....

chalchitra me scene ye tha ki ek taraf RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER khade the aur dusri taraf MORANA aur ANWIR khade the jinhone apne puri SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki shakti ka istemal karte hue un teeno par ray chhoda jiske prabhav se RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,teeno hi hawa me piche ki taraf ud gaye aur ussi condition me zakhmi aur behosh hokar unki bodies FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne jakar giri...

scene ke yahan pahunchte hi chalchitra band hi gaya...


MARILIZA- ANWIR aur MORANA toh PHASE 2 me the aur ye teeno PHASE 1 me...aise me inki kya dushmani ho sakti hai....???

AKSHAANT-ye CHOSENS hai MARILIZA..yahan taakatwar kamzor ke saath kuch bhi kar sakta hai...

aur jahan tak mujhe maalum hai, RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER PHASE 1 ke sabse kamzor SAVENTS the aur ANWIR aur MORANA kamzoron ko kaise treat karte hain,ye chuppi baat toh hai nahi...

unke khudke PHASE me unhone najaane kitne SAVENTS ko takleef pahuchayi hai...

MARILIZA-par ye niyam second PHASE se lagu hota hai..aur ye teeno first PHASE ke the...

inke saath kuch galat karne ki permission PHASE 2 ya 3 ke SAVENTS ko nahi thi...

AKSHAANT-par jis jagah wo teeno khade the,wo PHASE 3 ki thi..unhe secure rakhne ke liye har waqt kisi strong SAVENT ka yaa fir WHIZZ aur WHIZZDER ka unke saath hona zaroori tha par aisa hua nahi...

aur waise bhi,ye sab purani baatein hain,isiliye is baare me soch kar koi faayda nahi...

important hai aage jo hone waala hai, uske baare me sochna...

aur issi baare me baat karne ke liye hum yahan aaye hain....


iske baad SHAILA ne MARILIZA ko kuch baatein batayi jisse sun...


MARILIZA-par SOVEREIGN,ye kaise possible hai..??

AKSHAANT-kiske liye...???


AKSHAANT ki baat sun MARILIZA chup ho gayi...

reason....

MARILIZA flow flow me ye bhul gayi thi ki uske saamne wo teen shaksh khade hain jinhone is institution ki rachna ki hai toh aise me jo bhi hoga,unke hisaab se hi hoga...

wahin jab SOVEREIGN'S ko laga ki MARILIZA saari baatein samajh gayi hain toh wo teeno bhi baat ko lamba naa kheenchte hue gayab ho gaye...





PLANET-THE PAGAN



PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL





FINALLY!!!!HUME ASPRIT CRYSTAL MIL HI GAYA.....


DORIAN ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil kar sidhe yahan CONCEAL ke saamne pahuncha tha...

uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL chamak raha tha jisse dekh behad khushi ke saath GASTON ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


TRISTEN-wo sab toh thik hai par us nayi SHIELD ke yun achanak gayab hone ke baare me kuch pata chala...


DORIAN ko dekh TRISTEN ne ye sawal kiya....


DORIAN-nahi...jo bhi hua,wo itne achanak aur gupt tarike se hue ki kuch pata hi nahi chala....

UBEL-par ye ache sanket nahi hain... kyunki jis shield ko hum chaaron ki samast shakti bhi milkar tod nahi paayi,usse banane waala humare liye kitna khatarnaak saabit ho sakta hai,iska hum andaza bhi nahi laga sakte...

TRISTEN-bilkul satya kaha tumne...hume kisi bhi tarah us SHIELD aur usse lagane waale ke baare me pata lagana padega....


KAAM TUM SABKO BAS WAHI KARNA HAI JISKA TUMHE AADESH MILE...AUR KUCH NAHI....


ek nayi awaaz padi un chaaron ke kaano par jisse sun us awaaz ki disha me ghum gaya chaaron ka sir aur jab aisa hua toh un chaaron ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason...

jis CONCEAL numa shakti ke baahar wo chaaron khade the,us CONCEAL ke beech ka area khul gaya tha aur uske beech ek kaafi young but handsome aur lamba chowda ladka khada un chaaron kl dekh raha tha...

us ladke ke chehre me,uski personality me ek aisi vibe thi jisse mehsoos kar un chaaron ko apne andar ek ajeeb sa dar mehsoos hua jisse wo samajh nahi paa rahe the...

wahin apni baat keh woh ladka aage badha aur theek un chaaron ke beech DORIAN ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya aur aisa karne me baad usne DORIAN ki taraf apna haath aage badhaya..

pata nahi kya tha us bande me ki uske aisa karte hi DORIAN ne bina kuch kahe uske haathon me ASPRIT CRYSTAL rakh diya....

ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko haath me lekar wo ladka ek baar muskuraya aur fir...


UNKNOWN-VIDEOUS naam hai mera...aur mai wahin hun jisse tum chaaron ka astitv hai..

jisse tum sabko shakti bhi milti hai aur aadesh bhi....


bina koi bhumika baandhe VIDEOUS ne apne baare me bata diya jiske baad kuch pal ke liye wo chaaron shocked ho gaye par fir wo sab turant apne ghutno par aane ko hue jispar...


VIDEOUS-kya mujhe dekhkar,mere saamne khade hokar tum chaaron ko dar lag raha hai....???


VIDEOUS ki baat sun un chaaron ne ek baar ek dusre ko dekha aur fir...


SAB-ji....

VIDEOUS-toh fir jhukne ki zaroorat nahi hai..meri moujudgi se man me paida hone waala dar hi mujhe diya jaane waala samman hai....

aur kisi samman ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai....


ye bol VIDEOUS firse ASPRIT CRYSTAL ko dekhne laga...wahin is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke baare me jaanane ki tivr icha hui uske saamne khade un chaaron ke andar jisse VIDEOUS jaan chuka tha aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-ELYSIAN, CHOSENS aur FORBIDDEN FOREST....

in teeno ka nirman ek hi waqt par hua tha..

saath hi un chizon ka bhi jo FORBIDDEN FOREST ke andar hain siway is ASPRIT CRYSTAL ke....

iski utappati ka waqt thik uske baad ka hai jab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke aage uski SHIELD lag rahi thi..

parat dar parat FORBIDDEN FOREST ki SHIELD lagi thi aur jab baari aayi thi us aakhri parat ki jiske baad FORBIDDEN FOREST impenetrable hone waala tha,tab maine ek alag si urja mehsoos ki thi...

jo SHIELD ke us aakhri hisse ke lagne se pehle FOREST ke andar ghussi thi...

ussi urja ke kuch kan us jungle ke ek bhaag me gire the...

aur unhi kano se bana tha ye ASPRIT CRYSTAL....

DORIAN-oh.. toh iske zariye aap us anjaan urja ke baare me pata laga paayenge...

VIDEOUS-hmm... khair,tum chaaron ke jaane ka waqt ho chuka hai...


VIDEOUS ke aisa kehte hi un chaaron ke dimag me unke aage ka kaam,unka daayitv ek circular ki tarah ghum gaya jiske baad ek baar apna apna sir VIDEOUS ke aage jhuka wo chaaron gayab ho gaye...

ab us jagah par akela bacha tha VIDEOUS aur isiliye....

VIDEOUS ne apne right hand ke index finger ko us CRYSTEL ke upar rakha aur...


GATHIYAME RAHASYAM

UNFOLD THE HIDDEN TRUTH


SPELL ke uccharit hote hi VIDEOUS ki ungli se wo ray nikli jisme uski WHITE ENERGY ki shakti thi aur aisa hote hi ek kamal ke phool ki tarah wo CRYSTEL khul gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....

ek AURA nikli uske andar se aur VIDEOUS ke ussi index finger ke tip me sama gayi jisse VIDEOUS ki aankhen band ho gayi...

is waqt VIDEOUS ka dimag us AURA ke through us crystal ke RAAZ ko jaanane ki koshish me lag gaya par usse isme koi safalta nahi mili...

uske baad VIDEOUS ka dimag us crystal ka central point matlab uske origin ko dhundne me lag gaya aur is baar usse mili safalta aur aisa hote hi jhatt se khul gayi VIDEOUS ki aankhen....


VIDEOUS-toh aap dono hain iske piche RONIT aur ANJALI....

hahahahaha.....

koi baat nahi,koi baat nahi.....




SANKET banaye hain aapne..
mai unhe ULJHAUNGA...

raaste aapke hain,aapke hi rahenge,

mai toh bas un raaston me
KAATEIN BICHAUNGA.....








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