Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Brother aapne iss update ke ''ab tak'' mein aapne likh diya ke DORIAN ne shield ko tor diya ,shayad mistake ho gyi likhne mein pls check

Baaki update bohot hi gazab hai
IS baar ki CHUNOTI DUMDAAR HAI KYONKI DUM
NIKAL RAHI HAI

Fabulous UPDATE BRO

edited brother..thanks for correcting...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

HAMESHA KI TARAH HI MIND BLOWING, AWESOME UPDATE BHAI. JO INVISIBLE RAY NIKAL KEY FOREST MEY CHALA GEYA SAYED YE RAY BHI WOOGAR KI YA RAAZ KI BAJAH SEY HI INKI ANDER AAYA THA, NAHI TO YE FOREST MEY KEYSEY GHUSGEYA, DEKHTEY HEY AGEY YE Q AUR KIS BAJAH SEY HUWA THA, JAB RAAZ KI BODY AUR BLOOD AMPLIFY MEY ITNA TAKLIF HO RAHA HEY TO SOUL AMPLIFY MEY KITNA HOGA YE DIKHNA JABARDAST HOGA.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR

thanks brother..aage aur catchy lines hain..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Bhai ji gajab update hai

Super update hai bhai

Amazing wonderful update bhai

Bhai words hi nhi hai describe krne ke liye...
Behatareen update brother....m

Zabardast update

Bole to jhakkas 1no update bhai keep it up bro

thanks brothers.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Awesome update ????. Well Alfreen ka apne parents ke samne apne feelings ko express karne wala part kafi achha tha......wahi jo invisible ray nikali hai usne kaise us shield ko break ki jo 4 PRIMES ke joint powers se bhi nahi break hui.......zaroor is ka bhi koi bada RAAZ hoga.......well let's see what happens next.

thanks for appreciating brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

HAMESHA KI TARAH HI MIND BLOWING, AWESOME UPDATE BHAI. JO INVISIBLE RAY NIKAL KEY FOREST MEY CHALA GEYA SAYED YE RAY BHI WOOGAR KI YA RAAZ KI BAJAH SEY HI INKI ANDER AAYA THA, NAHI TO YE FOREST MEY KEYSEY GHUSGEYA, DEKHTEY HEY AGEY YE Q AUR KIS BAJAH SEY HUWA THA, JAB RAAZ KI BODY AUR BLOOD AMPLIFY MEY ITNA TAKLIF HO RAHA HEY TO SOUL AMPLIFY MEY KITNA HOGA YE DIKHNA JABARDAST HOGA.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR

guess sahi hona asaan nahi hoga brother...par try karte rahiye..sahi hue toh mention zaroor karunga..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

bhai bhot hi shandar update... maza aa gia padh k.... i think jo ray un teeno se nikal kr forbidden forest me gai woh alfreen k raaz k liay uski jo feelings shift aayi hai shayad is wajah se... usay apni galti ka ehsas ho gia k woh apni nafrat ko dusron pr force nhi kr sakti... aur shayad jo nafrat uske dil me thi woh wooger ya phr raaz k 90% brain ki wajah se created thi...i think woh rays sirf tab tak k liay effected thi jab tak alfreen ko uske behaviour k liay usay guilt feel nhi hota aur ab jab usko apne behaviour pr guilt feel hua to un rays ka effect khatam ho gia... and i think raaz apne complete body parts hasil kernay k bad jahan se usne apni journey shuru ki thi usi jagah woh wapis aaye ga, i mean forbidden forest me jahan achutta aur slunder gehri behoshi me hain just like un dono k parents ki tarah aur maybe raaz unhe theek karay us cheez se joh forbidden forest k andar hai and sirf usi se sovereigns and baki effecteds ko theek kia ja sakta hai... to jab raaz forbidden forest me jab wapis aaye to yeh jo rays florin, maria aur alfreen se nikal kr gai hein woh raaz me sama jae gin aur usko pata lag jae ga k ab alfreen ko uske behaviour k liay guilt felt ho gai hai....
aur rahi bat raaz k blood ko hasil kernay ki to ab to next uske liay soul hasil kernay mein to usay sab se zyada takleef hone wali hai... kiun k soul to blood se bhot zyada pure hoti hai... agar blood ki wajah se usay itni difficulties aa rahi hain to soul ki dafa bhot mushkil hone wala hai raaz k liay...

bohot ai cheezen predict ki hain aapne..jawab toh waqt aane par hi milega but abhi bas itna jaan lijiye ki...

jo yunhi samajhme aane lage, waisa kuch likha nahi jaayega...

aur jo hoga, usse jhooth saccha aur sach jhoota ban jaayega...

yunhi saath bane rahiye...

 

[vj4u]

update 1 ghante ke baad...

 

[Tiwari_baba]

update 1 ghante ke baad...

waiting

 

[Iron Man]

update 1 ghante ke baad...

Besabri se intazr hai

 

[Vk248517]

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