Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

Bhai pls change karna v mat. Dekho story k heroes ko change karne pe story hi kaise bachegi ye dono hi to h 4 line bolte h total aur fulltoo dhamal pls brother mujhe in dno ka character bahut psnd h pls bhaga mat dena in dno ko. Wese v itne jabardast story m 2 comedy hero rahenge to better h aur upar se raaz k itna sunane k baad v ye dno har waqt uske sath rhte h aage v wo raaz k sath khade rhnge.
Update k bare m mujhe v laga tha ki isme kuch special nahi h but agr ye aage se relate karega tb to thik hi hai.

Dekhna h ki wo puzzle ab tak kisi se solve hua ya nahi aur 1 month m raaz kya kar raha tha kahi humsb k lockdown jaise sirf kha aur so to nahi raha na. Pls post next update. Eagerly waiting

thanks brother...brother,baat kirdaaron ki bani hai..baat hai plot ki..wo plot jispar puri kahani likhi jaa rahi hai...

aap sab wahi padh rahe hain,samajh rahe hain jo likha jaa raha hai, padha jaa raha hai..

maine suggestions ke liye isiliye naa nahi kaha hai kyunki koi mujhe suggest kare,ye mujhe pasand nahi balki isiliye mana kiya hai kyunki jo twist and turns maine soche hain,kirdaaron ke ehmiyat ko jis tarah dhyan me rakh mai update likhta hun,usme suggestions ke liye jagah hi nahi bachti...

bore lage ya entertaining,har scene important hai.. aur ye aage clear ho bhi jaayega..bas patience rakh kar padhna zaroori hai...

har natije ka ek base hota hai..ussi base ko pakad dheere dheere aage badhne par hi us natije ke sahi swaroop ke paas pahuncha jaa sakta hai...

is process me fast forward yaa editing nahi hoti...isilye bas padhte jaaiye,jis din cheeze aur RAAZ unfold hona shuru honge,tab khud andaza lagayiyega ki jo ho raha hai, uska hona zaroori tha ya nahi...!!!

 

[Vaibhav]

thanks brother...brother,baat kirdaaron ki bani hai..baat hai plot ki..wo plot jispar puri kahani likhi jaa rahi hai...

aap sab wahi padh rahe hain,samajh rahe hain jo likha jaa raha hai, padha jaa raha hai..

maine suggestions ke liye isiliye naa nahi kaha hai kyunki koi mujhe suggest kare,ye mujhe pasand nahi balki isiliye mana kiya hai kyunki jo twist and turns maine soche hain,kirdaaron ke ehmiyat ko jis tarah dhyan me rakh mai update likhta hun,usme suggestions ke liye jagah hi nahi bachti...

bore lage ya entertaining,har scene important hai.. aur ye aage clear ho bhi jaayega..bas patience rakh kar padhna zaroori hai...

har natije ka ek base hota hai..ussi base ko pakad dheere dheere aage badhne par hi us natije ke sahi swaroop ke paas pahuncha jaa sakta hai...

is process me fast forward yaa editing nahi hoti...isilye bas padhte jaaiye,jis din cheeze aur RAAZ unfold hona shuru honge,tab khud andaza lagayiyega ki jo ho raha hai, uska hona zaroori tha ya nahi...!!!

Bhai ye to mujhe apne 1st story me bhi samjhayi thi ki mai chahu to suggestions de skta hu but change aap nahi kar paoge nahi to story ka sara mazaa kirkira ho jayega islie to maine story plot m kuch v badalne ko nahi kaha h but ek request hai pls update thoda jaldi diya karo ek apki aur ek AP bhai kihi story ka itni besabri se intezar rehta h. Apki story m jo suspense aur kab kya hoga ye soch soch k dimag hil jaye itna jabardast likhte ho pls baccho pe reham kiya kro aur thoda jaldi update diya karo agr tym ho to

 

[vj4u]

Aur Koi Change Laiyyega bhi Nahi....

Kyuki Yehi To Aapka Attitude hai..
Story ko Aage Badhane ke liye Kuchh aise Update bhi aate hain... Jo Napasnd hote hai... But Jaruri hote hai... Kuch batein Baad mein Clear hoti hai...

Main Aapki Baton se Sahmat hu..

Ksep Going Sir ji...
Mujhe Aapki Lekhni Par koi Doubt Nahi.... Aap Supper ho....

Thanks For Beautiful Story...!!

thanks brother.. second part chalu hai,but first part me update dar update kya kya hua tha,ye sab bhul gaye hain...

first part ke kul 117 updates me 9 aise updates the jiske likhne ke baad maza nahi aaya,ye nahi hota toh thik hota,iski zaroorat nahi hai,isse aage badhao,aise comments aaye the but ye 9 updates hi wo updates the jinhone kahani me ek ehem bhumika nibhayi thi aur jab wo saari chizen jinhe kuch logon ne pasand nahi kiya tha ya bor kaha tha,unfold hui toh wo sab gayab...

mai ye nahi kehta ki is part me bhi har chiz jo galat hai wo aage jaakar sahi ho jaayegi..nope..aisa hona bilkul zaroori nahi hai...

infact mujhe pata hai ki kayi saari aisi chizen honi baaki hai jo jab hongi toh kayiyon ko bura bhi lag sakta hai aur isiliye hi maine pehle hi kaha hai ki kirdaaron se dil mat lagayiye,story se lagayiye kyunki bhale hi koi kirdaar kitna hi important kyun naa lag raha ho,hai toh wo bas is story ka hissa hi,puri story nahi...

bottom line ye hai ki bas padhte jaaiye...jo hoga aur jis tarah hoga,wo kisine socha tak nahi hoga...

one more thing,ye story achi lag sakti hai,buri bhi lag sakti hai but impact iska aage chalkar bohot khatarnaak hoga and this i guarantee....

 

[vj4u]

Bhai ye to mujhe apne 1st story me bhi samjhayi thi ki mai chahu to suggestions de skta hu but change aap nahi kar paoge nahi to story ka sara mazaa kirkira ho jayega islie to maine story plot m kuch v badalne ko nahi kaha h but ek request hai pls update thoda jaldi diya karo ek apki aur ek AP bhai kihi story ka itni besabri se intezar rehta h. Apki story m jo suspense aur kab kya hoga ye soch soch k dimag hil jaye itna jabardast likhte ho pls baccho pe reham kiya kro aur thoda jaldi update diya karo agr tym ho to

tym ka hi toh locha h brother..lock down ke saath saath samaj seva bhi chalu hai...baahar se aane waale logon ke quarentine me thik se rehne ki vyavastha,yahan mere town me jo dalit log hain unke liye alag alag sceme chalu hai but unhe idea hai nahi,us scheme se milne waale faayde ko untak pahunche ka kaam dekhna padhta hai...

isme hi din nikal jaata hai..khair,koshish rahegi ki thoda jaldi likhu par guarentee nahi de sakta....

 

[Vaibhav]

tym ka hi toh locha h brother..lock down ke saath saath samaj seva bhi chalu hai...baahar se aane waale logon ke quarentine me thik se rehne ki vyavastha,yahan mere town me jo dalit log hain unke liye alag alag sceme chalu hai but unhe idea hai nahi,us scheme se milne waale faayde ko untak pahunche ka kaam dekhna padhta hai...

isme hi din nikal jaata hai..khair,koshish rahegi ki thoda jaldi likhu par guarentee nahi de sakta....

Brother ye to mere sath bhi hai. Islie to early morng ya raat m aata hu jyadatar. Apko to waise v update likhna h usme jyada tym lagta h fir v dekhlo agr ho sake to pls nahi to jab apko tym mile

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Love the attitude of raaz
Awesome update ?
Keep posting

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai

 

[Sakal]

bahot hi badhiya update bhai.....

 

[Sheera18]

Superb story
Like previous
Superb update

 

[Rajurajsingh91]

Nice update waiting next