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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

sam4321

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Raaz aur uska attitude ........dekhate hai Alfreen raaz ka aatitude todne me kamyab hoti bhi hai ya khud ka attitude change karva leti hai......agar raaz ka attitude tuta to bohot buri tarahse tutega....... Aur aagar use aage jana hai to apna attitude change karna jaruri bahi hai ...... Agar uska aaisa hi attitude raha to koi uska dost nahi hoga.....koi uska sath nahi dega..... Wo aakela rah jayega....... Is story ka negative patr bankar.
 

Jay Sutar

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well nice update...bhavishya ka dusra naam hai SANGHARSH man ki ichha agar aaj puri nahi hoti toh man bhavishya ki YOJANA banane lag jata hai bhavishya mein ichha purn hogi aisi kalpna karta rehta hai kintu jivan......jivan na toh atit mein hai na bhavishya mein jivan toh is skhan ka naam hai..is skhan ka anubhav hi jivan ka anubhav hai par agar yeh jante hue bhi ALFREEN itna sa satya samajh nahi payi aur yaa toh vo bite hue smarno ko gher kar baith gayi ya phir aane wale samay ke liye kuch yojna banane lagi toh yeh JIVAN beet jayega...
agar ek baat vo apne dil mein baitha le ke naa vo bhavishya dekh sakti hai aur naa usse bana sakti hai toh uske liye JIVAN ka har pal jivan se bhar jayega aur ab tak jitna bhi usne miss kiya hai vo sab kuch vo phir se dugna paayegi...
RAAZka nature hi aisa hai start se yeh baat toh FLORIN keh di thi par shayad ALFREEN ne issi baat ko nazar andaaz kar diya hai aur ab shayad uske dil mein Raaz ke liye nafrat aayi ho waise bhi Raaz ko isse shayad hi koi pharak pade usse toh apne mein rehna achha lagta hai...
rahi baat MAHI ki toh keh nahi sakte shayad usse RAAZ ko ab tak notice hi naa kiya ho thik se...
aur un do namuno ke intro ka intazaar rahega...
well let's see what happens next.
PEACE :applause: .
 

janu2016

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Gajab aur lajwaab update bhai...
:superb:

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Sirf ek baat samjh m nahi aayi ki raaz ko time se pehle q dala gaya???
Agar sayad raaz time se pehle nahi dala jata to alfreen yahan hoti he na :hmm2:

Jabardast update :applause:
 

Chinturocky

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Hero ki jo analytical approach hai wo kewal satya dekhati hai usake liye koi bhi baat ya ghatana sahi ya galat nahi hoti wo kewal ghatana hoti hai jisaka prabhav Jis per jaisa hota hai wo waisa hi dekhata hai.
Per Jis samaj me ham rahte hai waha emotion/bhawanaye bahut mayane rakhati hai aur adhiktar log usi prabhav se nirnay lete hai.
Jabki hame gyat hai bramhand Kitana Vishal hai aur hum Hamari prithvi hi nahi hamara saurmandal bhi usake samane tuchchh kan ke bhati hai. Fir bhi hum sochate hai ki parampita ko kewal Hamari hi fikar hai ki hum use kis naam se bulate hai kis tarah se pujate hai, Sab kuchh jaankar bhi agyani bane rahate hai.
Mere khayal se VJ aur raaz me sirf ek cheej ka farak hai.
VJ apane aas paas ke logo ki parwah karta tha aur raaz ko wo bhi nahi hai.
Aur Insan galati na Kare jab wo kisi bade ohade yaa pad per ho to ye gun mahatwapurn hoti hai wo bhawnao me na aakar sahi aur galat ke hisab se faisale Le.
 

Rahul

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badhiya update bhaiya ji
 
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vj4u

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well nice update...bhavishya ka dusra naam hai SANGHARSH man ki ichha agar aaj puri nahi hoti toh man bhavishya ki YOJANA banane lag jata hai bhavishya mein ichha purn hogi aisi kalpna karta rehta hai kintu jivan......jivan na toh atit mein hai na bhavishya mein jivan toh is skhan ka naam hai..is skhan ka anubhav hi jivan ka anubhav hai par agar yeh jante hue bhi ALFREEN itna sa satya samajh nahi payi aur yaa toh vo bite hue smarno ko gher kar baith gayi ya phir aane wale samay ke liye kuch yojna banane lagi toh yeh JIVAN beet jayega...
agar ek baat vo apne dil mein baitha le ke naa vo bhavishya dekh sakti hai aur naa usse bana sakti hai toh uske liye JIVAN ka har pal jivan se bhar jayega aur ab tak jitna bhi usne miss kiya hai vo sab kuch vo phir se dugna paayegi...
RAAZka nature hi aisa hai start se yeh baat toh FLORIN keh di thi par shayad ALFREEN ne issi baat ko nazar andaaz kar diya hai aur ab shayad uske dil mein Raaz ke liye nafrat aayi ho waise bhi Raaz ko isse shayad hi koi pharak pade usse toh apne mein rehna achha lagta hai...
rahi baat MAHI ki toh keh nahi sakte shayad usse RAAZ ko ab tak notice hi naa kiya ho thik se...
aur un do namuno ke intro ka intazaar rahega...
well let's see what happens next.
PEACE :applause: .
thanks for the review brother... brother,is kahani ke hisaab se har God gifted bache ki khubi baaki insaano ke mukable zyadi batayi gayi hai...aur issi tark par ALFREEN bhi talented hai...update me bataya hai ki ALFREEN ki INSTINCT power bohot zyada hai...

is power me jealousy ki koi jagah nahi... ALFREEN ka dimag RAAZ ko galat bata raha hai aur RAAZ ke behaviour ne us soch ka sahi thehra diya...bas itni si baat hai shayad!!!!
 
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