Kya adhura chhoda bhai. Pls batayeNice update
Lekin aap bhi dusre writer ki tarah hi aadha chod diye.........
thnx for ur comments and supports aage aage dekhiye sab ki lega deva khabar. aur hum yahi aap sab logo ko batana chahte hae ki thrill, suspance aur action aage bahot milega but romance aur sex ki aage gunjaish thodi kam ho jayegi to please story ke saath bane rahe aur aap sab apna saath banaye rakhe. aur story ke har pahloo ko enjoy kare kyu ki jab jis cheez ka samay aayega wo bharpoor milegiWah kya dialog baji thi last wale seen mai. Kya attitude h bhai. Mst ab to thakur ke aadmio ne galti kar di or I think under thakur ka beta he hoga jo Deva ke bhabhi se galat harkat karne gaya ho. Ab to usko wo saja dena ke marte dum tak yaad rakhe. Jaan se nhi marna but halat kutte se bhi bater karwana. Action is awaiting. Super update bs thoda action or kuch thrill add kariye. Good story.
Waiting for next dhasu update.