• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

Iron Man

Try and fail. But never give up trying
37,530
94,695
304
Update 70 Ruhi And The Diaries

Ruhi ne jab diaries padna shuru kiya to bahot khush hui. Usske dil mein kuch aise ehsaas jaage jo pichle 25 saalon mein jaise Ruhi ne dafna diye the… unn dinon ko yaad to karti thi magar sab ab ussko dhundla nazar ata tha, magar Abhi ki daries ne saare dhundlepan ko mita diye, jaise ke baarish mein ek car ke windshield par paani padhne se saaf nahin dikhaayi deta, Ruhi ke andar wo yaadein uss tarah the aur Abhi ki diaries ne ek wiper ka kaam kiya sab saaf kar diya aur sab kuch saaf dikhne laga dobara Ruhi ko…..

Padhna shuru kiya to kuch aise chizein maloom hui Ruhi ko jisska ussko tab pata bhi nahin tha wo ussko aaj pata chala…..

Jaise shuru mein Abhi ne likha tha ke ek aurat (Ruhi ki maa) ne Ruhi ka naam phukaarte hue ussko bus dekhne ko bulaya, aur kiss tarah se Abhi bechain wait karne laga tha ke kab wo Ruhi naam wali ladki kitchen ke chaukath par aaye bus ko dekhne ke liye taake Abhi uss ladki ko dekh sake….. yeh to first din ko hua tha jab Abhi wahan pehli baar gaya tha aur iss baat ke baare mein Ruhi ko bilkool bhi pata nahin tha yeh ussko aaj 25 saal baad pata chala diaries mein padhne ke baad…. Yeh part padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot acha laga ke aate hi Abhi ne ussko dekhne ke liye itna utavla ho gaya tha, Abhi ko usska naam sute hi pyar ho gaya tha, bina ussko dekhe, sirf usski awaaz sunke, kitchen ke andar se Ruhi jawaab de rahi thi aur usski awaaz Abhi ke kaanon tak jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss awaaz ki maalkin ko dekhne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. yeh padh kar Ruhi ko itna acha laga ke usska mann kiya ke wo din dobara wapas aaye aur wo ek bar firse, ussi taraf kitchen mein pakaaye aur usski maa ussko bulaaye Mehboob ka bus dekhne ke liye aur Ruhi wapas aaye stairs par dekhne ke liye taake Abhi ussko dekh sake….

Sochne ki baat hai ke Ruhi ko yeh padhte hue kaise feel ho raha hoga…. Ussko pata bhi nahin tha ke koyi ussko dekhne ke liye intezaar kar raha tha aur wo kitchen mein pakaane mein vyast thi…

Dairies to English mein likha hai Abhi ne magar yahan paathakon ke liye Hinglish mein sab hoga aur wohi hoga jo aap sab ne updates mein padhe hein pehle…… revive those days.....

Ab aap sab paathakon ko buss yun samajhna hai ke jaise Ruhi iss kahani ke update 1 se lekar update 46 tak padh rahi hai…. Khud ussne jo kuch kiya Abhi ke saath, Abhi ne jitney pal bhi guzaare uss aangan mein sab Ruhi padh rahi hai…. Kitna waqt Ruhi ne Abhi ke saath guzara, kitna Abhi tadpa, kitna Ruhi ke taraf se ikraar ya inkaar dikhaayi diya…. Yeh sab Ruhi ne padha…

Aur ab kyunke Ruhi ne kaha tha ke Abhi ko iss baar likh kar reply karegi, to yaaro….. aisa samjho ke Ruhi ne unn tamaan updates par apna review likha… kuch aisa hi samajhna hoga kyunke jo kuch iss kahani mein Update 1 se update 46 tak likha gaya hai wo sab Abhi ke unn diaries mein hein jo Ruhi ko Abhi ne diya!

Bahot saare aise events the jissko padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot achcha lag raha tha, muskura rahi thi, hanssti jaa rahi thi, jaise ke update 5 mein THE FIRST DAY OF WORK mein yeh part Ruhi ne padhne ke baad Ruhi ne yeh likha as reply to Abhi….

Reply karne ke liye Ruhi ne a writing pad kharida… ussi mein diaries ke replies likhne lagi Ruhi… to yeh part padha Ruhi ne:


{Bus stop se utar kar marammat karne wale bus tak pahunchne mein koyi 5 minat lagta tha, aur jab uss aangan mein daakhil hua abhi to usski nazar seedhe uss kitchen wale stairs par pahunche, bus par nahin. Chalte waqt bus tak reach hone ke liye abhi ki nazrein idhar udhar dekhta gaya, right mein jo ghar hai matlab jiss ghar mein wo ladki rehti hai, uss ghar ka saamne wale hisse ko ghaur se dekha abhi ne, jo pehla tap tha wahan dekha phir nazron ko uss taraf kiya jahan tap number 2 tha aur ek washing stone bhi tha uss dusre nal ke paas. Aur akhir mein uss jagah pahuncha jahan washroom tha. Aur ab wo washroom to direct uss kitchen ke opposite tha jahan kal Ruhi nazar ayi thi, uss washroom se kitchen ke andar nazar araha tha. Abhi ne ghaur se andar dekha. Koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ne sochna shuru kiya ke kal issi kitchen mein wo ladki paka rahi thi jiss waqt usski maa ussko awaaz de rahi thi……. Abhi ne ek vision kiya jo flashback ki tarah usske aankhon ke saamne aaye….


Ussne dekha ke ussi neeli dress mein ladki apni stove ke paas karhaayi mein kuch pakaa rahi hai aur Abhi ussko dekh rahi hai phir Abhi uss se ishaare se baat kar raha hai…..

Vision khatam hone ke baad Abhi ne socha kia aisa kabhi hoga bhi? Kia yeh mumkin hai? 4 se 6 mahinon tak yahin kaam karna hai kuch to baat aaguey badhegi zaroor….. Ek ajeeb si feeling ho raha tha abhi ko, uss kitchen ke andar dekhte hue, soch raha tha jaise usski maa pakaati hai kitchen mein weise hi ladki bhi kal paka rahi thi, ussko pakana ata hai, kia kabi kuch paka kar khilaegi Abhi ko? Wo sochne laga Abhi, usske haath ka paka hua kaisa lagega? Swadisht hoga? Abhi ussko kitchen stove ke paas dekhna chahta tha, ussko pakaate hue dekhna chahta tha, usska dil kar raha tha ke wo ladki wahan aaye aur Abhi usske paas jaakar ussko piche se jakre aur uss se pyar kare…. Aise feelings aa rahe the abhi ke dil mein kapde change karte waqt… }

Ruhi ne yeh padhne ke baad likha:

“Mujhe nahin pata tha aap pehle din se mujh mein itna interest le rahe the Abhi. Yeh sab padh kar bahot hi acha laga mujhe, wo puraane din wapas agaye. Kitna acha likhte ho aap. Aap ne meri aangan ko kitna achah describe kiya hai, mere ghar ko, kitchen ko, washing stone aur taps, sabko itne details mein likha hai? Main ne khud kabhi unn jizon ko nahin describe kiya jaise aap ne kiye hein. Aaj to wo sab baaki nahin hai Abhi magar aap ne sab likh kar unn chizon ko ab tak zinda rakha hai, its very very beautiful, you made me go back to those days Abhi….. Rahi baat aap ko mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue dekhna aur yeh sochna ke kia kabhi aap mere haath ki pakaaye hue kha paoge, to Abhi wo wish to puri hui thi nah aap ki at least? Main ne aap ko lunch par invite kiya tha aur khud apne haath se pakaaya hua khilaya tha aap ko…. Hai nah Abhi? Dekha aap ne first day of work ko jo wish kiya tha wo puri hui thi Abhi! Aur rahi mujhe pakate waqt piche se aakar jakarne ki baat… Abhi aap ne first day ko hi yeh sab soch liya tha? Really? Kaash main wapas unn dinon mein jaa sakti to aap ko zaroor mauka deti mujhe aakar piche se kitchen mein jakarne ke liye….”

Aur dhire dhire aise hi Ruhi padhti gayi… aur yeh read kiya to Ruhi ne :

{Abhi baar baar uss ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha kaam karte hue, soch raha tha kia wo abhi tak so rahi hogi? Ussko dekhne ka bada mann tha abhi ko, magar wo bilkool nazar nahin arahi thi. Kia wo kaam par chali gayi hogi? Kia college gayi hogi? Ya university ki student hogi? Usski maa kayi baar nazar aayi. Mehboob bhi kayi baar aaye, sabse baat kiye, Mehboob ki biwi, Rahima bhi aayi, chai dene aayi sabko phir wapas chali bhi gayi magar wo ladki nahin dikhi thi Abhi ko din ke barah bajne ko tha. Bus ko nanga kar diya gaya tha, sirf bus ki chasis nazar arahe the apne 6 wheels par. }



Ruhi ne jawaab mein likha,

“Aap pehle din se hi mujhko itna dhund rahe the Abhi, I was not aware at all Abhi, pata hota to zaroor aap ke saamne aati main… kaash mujhe tab aap ka pyar ka pata chala hota Abhi…. Main hi andhi thi Abhi….”

Ruhi ne padha kaam ke dusre din ki events ko Abhi ne kuch aisa likha tha:

{ Abhi ko sharam feel ho raha tha aur kitchen ke taraf dekhna bandh kar diya apna turn wait kiya khud ko fresh karne ke liye; magar usska dil nahin maan raha tha ke wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein nah dekhe, usska mann tha ke wo ussko dekhe pakaate hue, ussko admire kare, to Abhi ne apne doston ke peeth piche chhup chhup kar Ruhi ko dekhna jaari rakha….. ussne ek baar dekha ke Ruhi ki maa ussko kuch keh rahi thi aur Ruhi zor se hanssi aur usske taraf dekha, wo khilkhila kar hanssi thi, Abhi usski uss hanssi par fida ho gaya, ussko Ruhi ko aur weise hansste hue dekhne ko mann kar raha tha…. hanssne ke baad Ruhi chulhe par ek dish mein mein ek ladki wale spoon se kuch chala rahi thi, matlab mix kar rahi thi, tarkaari paka rahi hogi Abhi ne socha.. aur weise hanssne ke baad Ruhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan baaki tha aur ussne apne niche wale honth ko daanton mein dabaate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur ussko kuch kaha, phir ek haath se Ruhi apne chehre se ek latt ko apne sar ke upar kiya tab weise hi ek honth ko daant mein dabaaye hue hi Abhi ke tarraf phir se dekha aur donon ke nazrein mile…. Abhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan ban gaya tha apne aap Ruhi ko admire karte hue.}



Ruhi ne reply likha:

Haan Abhi yeh din mujhe bahot achchi tarah se yaad hai. Yaad hai main kitni zor se hanssi thi kyunke main ne turant realise kiya tha ke kitne log hein aaj aangan mein aur main aise hanss rahi hoon…. Abhi aap mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue bhi describe kiye ho!!kitna acha likha hai aap ne sab kuch Abhi, yahan tak ke main ek lakdi wale spoon use kar rahi thi yeh bhi likha hai aap ne Abhi? Aap washroom se apne doston ke piche chhup chhup kar mujhko dekh rahe the isska bhi pata nahin tha mujhko Abhi, magar haan main ne bhi aap ko dekha tha ekaat baar udhar yeh sach hai…. Aap ne mere chehre ko, mere sar ke baal ko, mere honthon ko, mere muskurahat ko sab ko itni achi tarike se kaise describe kiya hai Abhi? Aap ne mujhko tabhi kyun nahin diya tha yeh sab padhne ke liye Abhi? Agar main yeh sab uss waqt padhti to aap par fida main ho jaati Abhi… Itna admire karte the aap mujhe Abhi, I regret so much that I was really blind not to see all that at that time Abhi."


Ruhi ne aaguey read kiya:

{Aur jiss waqt Abhi apne baalon mein kanghi kar raha tha khud ko aine mein dekhte hue ussne dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein uss par the. Ruhi Abhi ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi thoda muskuraate hue. Aur donon ke beech ziada faasla bhi nahin tha, aamne saamne the donon, yeh pehli bar tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko itne karib se dekh raha tha. Bahot hi acha feel hua Abhi ko. Usska dil machalne laga, bahot khush tha wo. Ussne ekaat baar Ruhi ko dekha weise hi muskuraate hue, aur iss baar Ruhi hanss padi Abhi ko dekhte hue, pata nahin kyun ussko hanssee aayi. Abhi ne dobara aine mein dekha Ruhi ko hansste hue dekh kar ke kahin usske chehre mein kuch aur to nahin laga hua hai, sab saaf tha to kyun hanssi wo Abhi ne socha!}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“haan Abhi yeh mujhe bilkool yaad hai. It was the first time I looked well at you. Wo aap ka dusre din tha work ka yes I remember. Haan main hanssi thi pata hai kyun hanssi thi main, main kaafi der se aap ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke ladke bhi aine ke saamne itna time lete hein, aap apne look ka care karte the, apne aap ko aine mein dekhe jaa rahe the aur baal banaate jaa rahe the, aur yahan ab main samjhi ke wo sab aap mere liye kar rahe the, mujhko impress karne ke liye ya mere saamne acha dikhne ke liye aap itna tayyaar ho rahe the, awwww Abhi….. love you so much, I miss those days so so much Abhi…. Wo pehli baar tha ke main bhi aap ko utna karib se dekha tha aur sach bataun aap mujhe bahot achche lage the uss din, aur usssi din ke baad main ne bhi aap ko dekhna shuru kiya tha kyunke meri samajh mein agaya tha ke aap mere taraf kitna dekh rahe ho….”

{Ek blue Jean aur ek white Tshirt mein dressed tha Abhi aur ab ek handsome young man dikh raha tha. ussne khud ko kayi baar aine mein dekha, chehre par haath ferra kayi baar aur Ruhi ki nazrein uss par tikke rahe muskuraate hue. Ruhi ab Saeed ko nahin sirf Abhi ko dekh rahi thi; aur jab Abhi tayaar hua wahan se nikalne ke liye to Mehboob nikla ghar se aur Saeed ke paas khade hokar baat karne laga…. Tab tak Abhi chalte hue Saeed tak reach hua apne bag ko kaandhe par taange hue, aur ek nazar Ruhi par kiye hue. Ruhi ki nazar Abhi par hi thi jab wo ruka}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“Abhi sach hai jab tak aap chal kar wahan se nahin gaye meri nazar aap par hi tikke rahe the, you are right… aur hey Abhi aap ne apne aap ko bhi describe kiya hai…. Aap ko aksar uss Blue Jean aur white Shirt mein visualie karti hoon Abhi aaj bhi….”

Jab Ruhi ne yeh read kiya:

{“I wish I would be living in that village of hers. Thus, I could go there any time and look at her. What could she be doing at this time? Had she already had dinner? Must she be watching TV with her family? How nice it would have been if I suddenly reach there at this time and she gets surprised to see me! Would her mother ask me to get inside and watch TV with them? Would I get a seat close to Ruhi and we both hold each other’s hands and watch TV?”


Ek sapna likh raha tha Abhi, ussko iss sapne ko sach karna tha.}



Ruhi ne likha:

“Ek Sapna hi likh rahe the aap Abhi, wo sapna hi ban kar reh gaya, agar main ne saath diya hota to aap ka wo sapna zaroor pura hota Abhi. I am very sorry abhi for not making your dream come true. Abhi I would have loved to receive you at my place and you sit by my side and we would be watching TV together like you have written…”

Aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Aur aaj subha 6.30 ko abhi reach ho gaya uss muhalle mein. Shop se cigarrte kharida aur kasht maarte hue uss aangan mein dakhil hua, aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhte hue aaguey badhta gaya ke achanak ussko garden mein koyi dikha…. Garden right hand side mein hai, plan mein dekh lena update 4 par…. Abhi ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke itne savere wo Ruhi ka saamna karega….. Ruhi night gown mein thi aur garden se gulaab ke phool pick kar rahi thi… usski haath mein ek kainchi thi jiss se wo phool kaat rahi thi, usski left hand mein koyi 4 ya 5 gulaab already the aur wo aur kaat rahi thi, usski nightgown pale blue color ki thi, lambi thi usski pura jism dhaka hua tha niche tak, yahan tak ke usski chappal par uss dress ki last end chhuh rahe the…..}

Ruhi ne likha:

“Abhi main iss din ko aksar sochti hoon. Yeh mujhko bahot achi tarah se yaad hai jaise yeh kal hi hua tha. AAp ne uss din mujhko pehli baar good morning kaha tha aur main ne reply nahin kiya tha aura ap ne isska shikayat bhi kiya tha mujhse…. Bilkool yaad hai sab mujhe…. Abhi baat yeh thi ke yahan ham sheher mein nahin hein nah yahan kissi ko bhi wo aadat thi hi nahin ke koyi kissi ko good morning kare ya koyi usska reply de, aap to sheher ke paas se ho to aap ko good morning, good evening ya afternoon karne ki aadat thi, yahan par koyi nahin karta hai issi liye meri samajh mein nahin aya tha ke aap ko kia jawaab doon issi liye main ne uss din aap ko koyi jawaab nahin diya tha aur sharminda bhi feel kiya tha main ne…. aap ne mere nightdress ko bhi describe kiya hai Abhi…. Mujhe khud yaad nahin wo kaun si wala nightdress thi….”

{“Sala ek good morning ka reply karne mein kia jata hai? Mera din ban jata aaj agar ussne mujhe good morning keh diya hota to, din mazedaar guzarta aaj mera… magar ab to mood hi kharab ho gaya savere savere yaar, main kyun aaj itni savere agaya yahan…. Kaash wo ab kitchen mein ajaaye to main dobara ussko good morning karunga aur kahunga ke good morning ka jawaab dete hein khamosh nahin rehte….!”}

Yeh padh ke ruhi ne likha, I AM SORRY ABHI.

Aur aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Phir turant Ruhi apne ghar ke saamne wale hise par aayi tap one ke paas wahan jharu lagaane aayi, kal bhi wohi kiya tha, ek chota sa baramde par jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ke bus do kadam ki doorie par thi, jhuk kar jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ki nazrein uss se hatt hi nahin rahe the…. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ussi ko dekhe jaa raha hai, aur ussne nazrein utha kar Abhi ko dekha ek halki si muskaan ke saath. Abhi cigarette pee raha tha, to Ruhi ne apni meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“cigarette pina achi baat nahin hai ji!”}

Ruhi ne jawaab likha:

“Abhi aaj bata doon aap ko ke main khaas kar aap ke liye hi wahan ziada aya karti thi, aap mujhe ache lagne lage the, aap se baat karne ka mera bhi mann kar raha tha, haan mujhe pata chal gaya tha ke aap sirf mujhko dekhte rehte ho, aur mujhko dhundte ho har baar, aur aap shaayd hichkichate the mujhse baat karne mein to main ne uss din khud socha ke aap se kuch kahun to dekha aap cigarette pee rahe the, to ussi ke bare mein kaha tha aap se…. Thanks for describing me brooming my terrace Abhi, loved it.”

Dosto yeh update lamba chalega.. may be

Or updates mein sab end hoga, tab Abhi aega milne Ruhi se….

To be continued….. (3303 words)
Awesome update
 

PK@yadav

Member
188
940
108
Wow casi bhai just wow.... Aapne ek baar fir se un yaadon mein khich liya jisse maine bahut hi chaav se padhe the.. Kasam se mazaa aa gayaa fir se un sab incidents ko yaad kar aur khaskar kar Ruhi ka viewpoint jaankar har ek situation par..
Absolutely amazing bro...Thanks once again...
 

Kirti.s

Member
404
1,361
123
Hmmmm
Point kuch had tak sahi hai....
OR aisa jarur karna chahiye....agar ye fiction kahani hoti....

Fiction ko aap kanhi bhi mod sakte hai....har ak character ko apne hisaab se good or bad dikha sakte hai ya usko samajh dar or bewakoof...

But Ye fiction nahi hai....ak biography hai....jiski reality ke baare mai.....
Mai khud jaanta hu....

OR biography mai changes nahi hote...har character ko uske asli roop me hee or asli khubiyo or khaamiyo ke saath dikhaya jata hai....

I hope you understand this....

OR waise bhi Shweta ko bhi to kisi ka pyar nahi mila...na maa baap ka na Ruhi ka....

To Aisi situation mai use laga hoga ki agar wo Ruhi ke saath hoti to shaayad jyada khush hoti....Jo ki na ho saka....
OR wo isi baat se gussa hai...
mai aap ki baat se sahmat hu ki ye kisi ki real life pe based story hai or use exact usi tarike se pesh bhi krna hai lekin kbhi kbhi is tarah ki stories mein writer bhi thode bht changes kr hi dete hai
or rahi baat shweta ke character ki toh story padh ke kahi bhi aisa nhi lga ki use kbhi kisi chiz ki kami hui ho ya kisi ne use pyar na diya ho infact uske maa,papa se le ke sb use bht pyar krte the or ruhi jo pyar use maa ban ke na de payi use ek badi bahan ke taur pe de rhi thi.agar ruhi shweta ko sbki baat maan kr ek anathashram mein chor deti tb uski condition kya hoti ? lekin ye mera point of view tha sir ji or aap ke reply ke liye bht bht shukriya
 

Kirti.s

Member
404
1,361
123
bahot bahot shukriya Kirti dear.... magar kia kahun aap se ab main....
shuru se kehte aya hoon aap regular nahin the thread par to aap ko shaayad pata nahin.... aur shaayd aap ne mere replies nahin padhe jo main ne kayi readers ko kiya ke yeh ek kahani nahin hai, yeh ek hakikat hai aur jaise guzra hai exactly weise hi likha hai main ne isse.... agar yeh ek kalpanik story hoti to main zaroor weise likhta jaise aap ne kaha jaise apne baaki ke kahaniyon mein likhta hoon...
aur ek baat hai ke yeh kahani Abhi ke taraf se kahi jaa rahi hai.... jab abhi ko kuch bhi nahin pata tha ruhi aur usske taraf beete hue life ke baare mein to kaise hum sab ko pata chalta jab tak abhi ko nahin pata chalta?
Abi 25 saal baad Ruhi se mila... iss se pehle wo Shweta se mil gaya tha 18 saa; baad, to shweta comes first in his life after 1986... so abhi got her love before going back to Ruhi.... ruhi ke ghar se dhake khaa kar nikala gaya tha abhi to kaise uss ghar ke chawkath par wapas jaata....
so jo aap ne kaha ke ruhi se hokar shweta ke taraf jaata abhi that was not possible at all
haan agar main yeh kahani likh raha hota tab zaroor ruhi ki life ko saath saath batata chalta sabko....
#hope you hot it and understood it now
thanks very much for the concern about the story Kirti dear
thanku sir reply ke liye maine padha hua tha ki story real life based hai or kisi ki jeevani likh rhe ho.or ye story ka main kirdar abhi hai or usi ki jubani hm story padh rhe hai.lekin abhi ka pyar hi thoda ajeeb hai agar starting se dekhu toh abhi ka bachpan ka pyar ruhi(1) thi jo videsh chali gyi lekin abhi use kbhi bhul nhi paya
or har ldki mein ruhi ko dhundta raha or uski khoj ja ke ruhi(2) pe ruki jise woh bht pyar krta hai lekin us se bhi use juda hona pada or woh puri tarah toot gya phir uski life mein navina ki entry hoti h jo bilkul perfect h uske baad abhi apne sare dard bhula ke life mein aage badh gya phir yha entry hoti h shweta.orshweta
 

Vikram singh rana

Active Member
509
3,075
138
mai aap ki baat se sahmat hu ki ye kisi ki real life pe based story hai or use exact usi tarike se pesh bhi krna hai lekin kbhi kbhi is tarah ki stories mein writer bhi thode bht changes kr hi dete hai
or rahi baat shweta ke character ki toh story padh ke kahi bhi aisa nhi lga ki use kbhi kisi chiz ki kami hui ho ya kisi ne use pyar na diya ho infact uske maa,papa se le ke sb use bht pyar krte the or ruhi jo pyar use maa ban ke na de payi use ek badi bahan ke taur pe de rhi thi.agar ruhi shweta ko sbki baat maan kr ek anathashram mein chor deti tb uski condition kya hoti ? lekin ye mera point of view tha sir ji or aap ke reply ke liye bht bht shukriya
Waise to aapki har ak baat ka counter hai mere pass ....
OR kaafi achcha hai....
Lekin mujhe lagta hai ki.. iss baat ko yanhi chhod dena chahiye....
Thanks.....
 

Indian001

Active Member
1,102
6,330
143
mai aap ki baat se sahmat hu ki ye kisi ki real life pe based story hai or use exact usi tarike se pesh bhi krna hai lekin kbhi kbhi is tarah ki stories mein writer bhi thode bht changes kr hi dete hai
or rahi baat shweta ke character ki toh story padh ke kahi bhi aisa nhi lga ki use kbhi kisi chiz ki kami hui ho ya kisi ne use pyar na diya ho infact uske maa,papa se le ke sb use bht pyar krte the or ruhi jo pyar use maa ban ke na de payi use ek badi bahan ke taur pe de rhi thi.agar ruhi shweta ko sbki baat maan kr ek anathashram mein chor deti tb uski condition kya hoti ? lekin ye mera point of view tha sir ji or aap ke reply ke liye bht bht shukriya

please Naraz mat hona main bhi aap ko kuch kehna chahta hoon,
aap ne kahan ke shweta ke baare mein padhke kahin bhi aisa nahin laga ke ussko kissi bhi chij ki kammi hui ho, ya kissi ne usse pyar nah diya ho in fact uske maa baap se leke sab usse bahut pyar karte the..... is ke baare mein mujhe yeh kehna hai ke aap kahani ko thik se nahin padh rahi ho.... iss update ko shayad aap ne tthik se nahin padhi hai quote karta hoon iss part ko aap ke liye ... from update 67

Shweta ko itni Khushi ho rahi thi Aruhi ko utna khush dekh kar ke khud apni bachpan yaad karne lagi thi, ke ussko itna pyar nahin mila tha bilkool bachpan mein, jo usska baap bana tha ussko lagao hi nahin tha Shweta se, maa busy rehti thi kaam mein ussko nursery chorr diya jaat tha, din bhar nursery mein rehti, hosh sambhala to kindergarten mein rehti thi, shaam 5 baje ek van ussko ya to supermarket mein chorrta jahan se baap raat ko usse band karta tan Shweta ghar aati, maa to hospital mein rehti ya to raat bhar ya din bhar… Shweta ko nah maa ki nah baap ka pyar mila tha….
 
Last edited:

Indian001

Active Member
1,102
6,330
143
Update 70 Ruhi And The Diaries

Ruhi ne jab diaries padna shuru kiya to bahot khush hui. Usske dil mein kuch aise ehsaas jaage jo pichle 25 saalon mein jaise Ruhi ne dafna diye the… unn dinon ko yaad to karti thi magar sab ab ussko dhundla nazar ata tha, magar Abhi ki daries ne saare dhundlepan ko mita diye, jaise ke baarish mein ek car ke windshield par paani padhne se saaf nahin dikhaayi deta, Ruhi ke andar wo yaadein uss tarah the aur Abhi ki diaries ne ek wiper ka kaam kiya sab saaf kar diya aur sab kuch saaf dikhne laga dobara Ruhi ko…..

Padhna shuru kiya to kuch aise chizein maloom hui Ruhi ko jisska ussko tab pata bhi nahin tha wo ussko aaj pata chala…..

Jaise shuru mein Abhi ne likha tha ke ek aurat (Ruhi ki maa) ne Ruhi ka naam phukaarte hue ussko bus dekhne ko bulaya, aur kiss tarah se Abhi bechain wait karne laga tha ke kab wo Ruhi naam wali ladki kitchen ke chaukath par aaye bus ko dekhne ke liye taake Abhi uss ladki ko dekh sake….. yeh to first din ko hua tha jab Abhi wahan pehli baar gaya tha aur iss baat ke baare mein Ruhi ko bilkool bhi pata nahin tha yeh ussko aaj 25 saal baad pata chala diaries mein padhne ke baad…. Yeh part padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot acha laga ke aate hi Abhi ne ussko dekhne ke liye itna utavla ho gaya tha, Abhi ko usska naam sute hi pyar ho gaya tha, bina ussko dekhe, sirf usski awaaz sunke, kitchen ke andar se Ruhi jawaab de rahi thi aur usski awaaz Abhi ke kaanon tak jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss awaaz ki maalkin ko dekhne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. yeh padh kar Ruhi ko itna acha laga ke usska mann kiya ke wo din dobara wapas aaye aur wo ek bar firse, ussi taraf kitchen mein pakaaye aur usski maa ussko bulaaye Mehboob ka bus dekhne ke liye aur Ruhi wapas aaye stairs par dekhne ke liye taake Abhi ussko dekh sake….

Sochne ki baat hai ke Ruhi ko yeh padhte hue kaise feel ho raha hoga…. Ussko pata bhi nahin tha ke koyi ussko dekhne ke liye intezaar kar raha tha aur wo kitchen mein pakaane mein vyast thi…

Dairies to English mein likha hai Abhi ne magar yahan paathakon ke liye Hinglish mein sab hoga aur wohi hoga jo aap sab ne updates mein padhe hein pehle…… revive those days.....

Ab aap sab paathakon ko buss yun samajhna hai ke jaise Ruhi iss kahani ke update 1 se lekar update 46 tak padh rahi hai…. Khud ussne jo kuch kiya Abhi ke saath, Abhi ne jitney pal bhi guzaare uss aangan mein sab Ruhi padh rahi hai…. Kitna waqt Ruhi ne Abhi ke saath guzara, kitna Abhi tadpa, kitna Ruhi ke taraf se ikraar ya inkaar dikhaayi diya…. Yeh sab Ruhi ne padha…

Aur ab kyunke Ruhi ne kaha tha ke Abhi ko iss baar likh kar reply karegi, to yaaro….. aisa samjho ke Ruhi ne unn tamaan updates par apna review likha… kuch aisa hi samajhna hoga kyunke jo kuch iss kahani mein Update 1 se update 46 tak likha gaya hai wo sab Abhi ke unn diaries mein hein jo Ruhi ko Abhi ne diya!

Bahot saare aise events the jissko padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot achcha lag raha tha, muskura rahi thi, hanssti jaa rahi thi, jaise ke update 5 mein THE FIRST DAY OF WORK mein yeh part Ruhi ne padhne ke baad Ruhi ne yeh likha as reply to Abhi….

Reply karne ke liye Ruhi ne a writing pad kharida… ussi mein diaries ke replies likhne lagi Ruhi… to yeh part padha Ruhi ne:


{Bus stop se utar kar marammat karne wale bus tak pahunchne mein koyi 5 minat lagta tha, aur jab uss aangan mein daakhil hua abhi to usski nazar seedhe uss kitchen wale stairs par pahunche, bus par nahin. Chalte waqt bus tak reach hone ke liye abhi ki nazrein idhar udhar dekhta gaya, right mein jo ghar hai matlab jiss ghar mein wo ladki rehti hai, uss ghar ka saamne wale hisse ko ghaur se dekha abhi ne, jo pehla tap tha wahan dekha phir nazron ko uss taraf kiya jahan tap number 2 tha aur ek washing stone bhi tha uss dusre nal ke paas. Aur akhir mein uss jagah pahuncha jahan washroom tha. Aur ab wo washroom to direct uss kitchen ke opposite tha jahan kal Ruhi nazar ayi thi, uss washroom se kitchen ke andar nazar araha tha. Abhi ne ghaur se andar dekha. Koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ne sochna shuru kiya ke kal issi kitchen mein wo ladki paka rahi thi jiss waqt usski maa ussko awaaz de rahi thi……. Abhi ne ek vision kiya jo flashback ki tarah usske aankhon ke saamne aaye….


Ussne dekha ke ussi neeli dress mein ladki apni stove ke paas karhaayi mein kuch pakaa rahi hai aur Abhi ussko dekh rahi hai phir Abhi uss se ishaare se baat kar raha hai…..

Vision khatam hone ke baad Abhi ne socha kia aisa kabhi hoga bhi? Kia yeh mumkin hai? 4 se 6 mahinon tak yahin kaam karna hai kuch to baat aaguey badhegi zaroor….. Ek ajeeb si feeling ho raha tha abhi ko, uss kitchen ke andar dekhte hue, soch raha tha jaise usski maa pakaati hai kitchen mein weise hi ladki bhi kal paka rahi thi, ussko pakana ata hai, kia kabi kuch paka kar khilaegi Abhi ko? Wo sochne laga Abhi, usske haath ka paka hua kaisa lagega? Swadisht hoga? Abhi ussko kitchen stove ke paas dekhna chahta tha, ussko pakaate hue dekhna chahta tha, usska dil kar raha tha ke wo ladki wahan aaye aur Abhi usske paas jaakar ussko piche se jakre aur uss se pyar kare…. Aise feelings aa rahe the abhi ke dil mein kapde change karte waqt… }

Ruhi ne yeh padhne ke baad likha:

“Mujhe nahin pata tha aap pehle din se mujh mein itna interest le rahe the Abhi. Yeh sab padh kar bahot hi acha laga mujhe, wo puraane din wapas agaye. Kitna acha likhte ho aap. Aap ne meri aangan ko kitna achah describe kiya hai, mere ghar ko, kitchen ko, washing stone aur taps, sabko itne details mein likha hai? Main ne khud kabhi unn jizon ko nahin describe kiya jaise aap ne kiye hein. Aaj to wo sab baaki nahin hai Abhi magar aap ne sab likh kar unn chizon ko ab tak zinda rakha hai, its very very beautiful, you made me go back to those days Abhi….. Rahi baat aap ko mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue dekhna aur yeh sochna ke kia kabhi aap mere haath ki pakaaye hue kha paoge, to Abhi wo wish to puri hui thi nah aap ki at least? Main ne aap ko lunch par invite kiya tha aur khud apne haath se pakaaya hua khilaya tha aap ko…. Hai nah Abhi? Dekha aap ne first day of work ko jo wish kiya tha wo puri hui thi Abhi! Aur rahi mujhe pakate waqt piche se aakar jakarne ki baat… Abhi aap ne first day ko hi yeh sab soch liya tha? Really? Kaash main wapas unn dinon mein jaa sakti to aap ko zaroor mauka deti mujhe aakar piche se kitchen mein jakarne ke liye….”

Aur dhire dhire aise hi Ruhi padhti gayi… aur yeh read kiya to Ruhi ne :

{Abhi baar baar uss ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha kaam karte hue, soch raha tha kia wo abhi tak so rahi hogi? Ussko dekhne ka bada mann tha abhi ko, magar wo bilkool nazar nahin arahi thi. Kia wo kaam par chali gayi hogi? Kia college gayi hogi? Ya university ki student hogi? Usski maa kayi baar nazar aayi. Mehboob bhi kayi baar aaye, sabse baat kiye, Mehboob ki biwi, Rahima bhi aayi, chai dene aayi sabko phir wapas chali bhi gayi magar wo ladki nahin dikhi thi Abhi ko din ke barah bajne ko tha. Bus ko nanga kar diya gaya tha, sirf bus ki chasis nazar arahe the apne 6 wheels par. }



Ruhi ne jawaab mein likha,

“Aap pehle din se hi mujhko itna dhund rahe the Abhi, I was not aware at all Abhi, pata hota to zaroor aap ke saamne aati main… kaash mujhe tab aap ka pyar ka pata chala hota Abhi…. Main hi andhi thi Abhi….”

Ruhi ne padha kaam ke dusre din ki events ko Abhi ne kuch aisa likha tha:

{ Abhi ko sharam feel ho raha tha aur kitchen ke taraf dekhna bandh kar diya apna turn wait kiya khud ko fresh karne ke liye; magar usska dil nahin maan raha tha ke wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein nah dekhe, usska mann tha ke wo ussko dekhe pakaate hue, ussko admire kare, to Abhi ne apne doston ke peeth piche chhup chhup kar Ruhi ko dekhna jaari rakha….. ussne ek baar dekha ke Ruhi ki maa ussko kuch keh rahi thi aur Ruhi zor se hanssi aur usske taraf dekha, wo khilkhila kar hanssi thi, Abhi usski uss hanssi par fida ho gaya, ussko Ruhi ko aur weise hansste hue dekhne ko mann kar raha tha…. hanssne ke baad Ruhi chulhe par ek dish mein mein ek ladki wale spoon se kuch chala rahi thi, matlab mix kar rahi thi, tarkaari paka rahi hogi Abhi ne socha.. aur weise hanssne ke baad Ruhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan baaki tha aur ussne apne niche wale honth ko daanton mein dabaate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur ussko kuch kaha, phir ek haath se Ruhi apne chehre se ek latt ko apne sar ke upar kiya tab weise hi ek honth ko daant mein dabaaye hue hi Abhi ke tarraf phir se dekha aur donon ke nazrein mile…. Abhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan ban gaya tha apne aap Ruhi ko admire karte hue.}



Ruhi ne reply likha:

Haan Abhi yeh din mujhe bahot achchi tarah se yaad hai. Yaad hai main kitni zor se hanssi thi kyunke main ne turant realise kiya tha ke kitne log hein aaj aangan mein aur main aise hanss rahi hoon…. Abhi aap mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue bhi describe kiye ho!!kitna acha likha hai aap ne sab kuch Abhi, yahan tak ke main ek lakdi wale spoon use kar rahi thi yeh bhi likha hai aap ne Abhi? Aap washroom se apne doston ke piche chhup chhup kar mujhko dekh rahe the isska bhi pata nahin tha mujhko Abhi, magar haan main ne bhi aap ko dekha tha ekaat baar udhar yeh sach hai…. Aap ne mere chehre ko, mere sar ke baal ko, mere honthon ko, mere muskurahat ko sab ko itni achi tarike se kaise describe kiya hai Abhi? Aap ne mujhko tabhi kyun nahin diya tha yeh sab padhne ke liye Abhi? Agar main yeh sab uss waqt padhti to aap par fida main ho jaati Abhi… Itna admire karte the aap mujhe Abhi, I regret so much that I was really blind not to see all that at that time Abhi."


Ruhi ne aaguey read kiya:

{Aur jiss waqt Abhi apne baalon mein kanghi kar raha tha khud ko aine mein dekhte hue ussne dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein uss par the. Ruhi Abhi ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi thoda muskuraate hue. Aur donon ke beech ziada faasla bhi nahin tha, aamne saamne the donon, yeh pehli bar tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko itne karib se dekh raha tha. Bahot hi acha feel hua Abhi ko. Usska dil machalne laga, bahot khush tha wo. Ussne ekaat baar Ruhi ko dekha weise hi muskuraate hue, aur iss baar Ruhi hanss padi Abhi ko dekhte hue, pata nahin kyun ussko hanssee aayi. Abhi ne dobara aine mein dekha Ruhi ko hansste hue dekh kar ke kahin usske chehre mein kuch aur to nahin laga hua hai, sab saaf tha to kyun hanssi wo Abhi ne socha!}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“haan Abhi yeh mujhe bilkool yaad hai. It was the first time I looked well at you. Wo aap ka dusre din tha work ka yes I remember. Haan main hanssi thi pata hai kyun hanssi thi main, main kaafi der se aap ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke ladke bhi aine ke saamne itna time lete hein, aap apne look ka care karte the, apne aap ko aine mein dekhe jaa rahe the aur baal banaate jaa rahe the, aur yahan ab main samjhi ke wo sab aap mere liye kar rahe the, mujhko impress karne ke liye ya mere saamne acha dikhne ke liye aap itna tayyaar ho rahe the, awwww Abhi….. love you so much, I miss those days so so much Abhi…. Wo pehli baar tha ke main bhi aap ko utna karib se dekha tha aur sach bataun aap mujhe bahot achche lage the uss din, aur usssi din ke baad main ne bhi aap ko dekhna shuru kiya tha kyunke meri samajh mein agaya tha ke aap mere taraf kitna dekh rahe ho….”

{Ek blue Jean aur ek white Tshirt mein dressed tha Abhi aur ab ek handsome young man dikh raha tha. ussne khud ko kayi baar aine mein dekha, chehre par haath ferra kayi baar aur Ruhi ki nazrein uss par tikke rahe muskuraate hue. Ruhi ab Saeed ko nahin sirf Abhi ko dekh rahi thi; aur jab Abhi tayaar hua wahan se nikalne ke liye to Mehboob nikla ghar se aur Saeed ke paas khade hokar baat karne laga…. Tab tak Abhi chalte hue Saeed tak reach hua apne bag ko kaandhe par taange hue, aur ek nazar Ruhi par kiye hue. Ruhi ki nazar Abhi par hi thi jab wo ruka}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“Abhi sach hai jab tak aap chal kar wahan se nahin gaye meri nazar aap par hi tikke rahe the, you are right… aur hey Abhi aap ne apne aap ko bhi describe kiya hai…. Aap ko aksar uss Blue Jean aur white Shirt mein visualie karti hoon Abhi aaj bhi….”

Jab Ruhi ne yeh read kiya:

{“I wish I would be living in that village of hers. Thus, I could go there any time and look at her. What could she be doing at this time? Had she already had dinner? Must she be watching TV with her family? How nice it would have been if I suddenly reach there at this time and she gets surprised to see me! Would her mother ask me to get inside and watch TV with them? Would I get a seat close to Ruhi and we both hold each other’s hands and watch TV?”


Ek sapna likh raha tha Abhi, ussko iss sapne ko sach karna tha.}



Ruhi ne likha:

“Ek Sapna hi likh rahe the aap Abhi, wo sapna hi ban kar reh gaya, agar main ne saath diya hota to aap ka wo sapna zaroor pura hota Abhi. I am very sorry abhi for not making your dream come true. Abhi I would have loved to receive you at my place and you sit by my side and we would be watching TV together like you have written…”

Aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Aur aaj subha 6.30 ko abhi reach ho gaya uss muhalle mein. Shop se cigarrte kharida aur kasht maarte hue uss aangan mein dakhil hua, aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhte hue aaguey badhta gaya ke achanak ussko garden mein koyi dikha…. Garden right hand side mein hai, plan mein dekh lena update 4 par…. Abhi ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke itne savere wo Ruhi ka saamna karega….. Ruhi night gown mein thi aur garden se gulaab ke phool pick kar rahi thi… usski haath mein ek kainchi thi jiss se wo phool kaat rahi thi, usski left hand mein koyi 4 ya 5 gulaab already the aur wo aur kaat rahi thi, usski nightgown pale blue color ki thi, lambi thi usski pura jism dhaka hua tha niche tak, yahan tak ke usski chappal par uss dress ki last end chhuh rahe the…..}

Ruhi ne likha:

“Abhi main iss din ko aksar sochti hoon. Yeh mujhko bahot achi tarah se yaad hai jaise yeh kal hi hua tha. AAp ne uss din mujhko pehli baar good morning kaha tha aur main ne reply nahin kiya tha aura ap ne isska shikayat bhi kiya tha mujhse…. Bilkool yaad hai sab mujhe…. Abhi baat yeh thi ke yahan ham sheher mein nahin hein nah yahan kissi ko bhi wo aadat thi hi nahin ke koyi kissi ko good morning kare ya koyi usska reply de, aap to sheher ke paas se ho to aap ko good morning, good evening ya afternoon karne ki aadat thi, yahan par koyi nahin karta hai issi liye meri samajh mein nahin aya tha ke aap ko kia jawaab doon issi liye main ne uss din aap ko koyi jawaab nahin diya tha aur sharminda bhi feel kiya tha main ne…. aap ne mere nightdress ko bhi describe kiya hai Abhi…. Mujhe khud yaad nahin wo kaun si wala nightdress thi….”

{“Sala ek good morning ka reply karne mein kia jata hai? Mera din ban jata aaj agar ussne mujhe good morning keh diya hota to, din mazedaar guzarta aaj mera… magar ab to mood hi kharab ho gaya savere savere yaar, main kyun aaj itni savere agaya yahan…. Kaash wo ab kitchen mein ajaaye to main dobara ussko good morning karunga aur kahunga ke good morning ka jawaab dete hein khamosh nahin rehte….!”}

Yeh padh ke ruhi ne likha, I AM SORRY ABHI.

Aur aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Phir turant Ruhi apne ghar ke saamne wale hise par aayi tap one ke paas wahan jharu lagaane aayi, kal bhi wohi kiya tha, ek chota sa baramde par jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ke bus do kadam ki doorie par thi, jhuk kar jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ki nazrein uss se hatt hi nahin rahe the…. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ussi ko dekhe jaa raha hai, aur ussne nazrein utha kar Abhi ko dekha ek halki si muskaan ke saath. Abhi cigarette pee raha tha, to Ruhi ne apni meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“cigarette pina achi baat nahin hai ji!”}

Ruhi ne jawaab likha:

“Abhi aaj bata doon aap ko ke main khaas kar aap ke liye hi wahan ziada aya karti thi, aap mujhe ache lagne lage the, aap se baat karne ka mera bhi mann kar raha tha, haan mujhe pata chal gaya tha ke aap sirf mujhko dekhte rehte ho, aur mujhko dhundte ho har baar, aur aap shaayd hichkichate the mujhse baat karne mein to main ne uss din khud socha ke aap se kuch kahun to dekha aap cigarette pee rahe the, to ussi ke bare mein kaha tha aap se…. Thanks for describing me brooming my terrace Abhi, loved it.”

Dosto yeh update lamba chalega.. may be

Or updates mein sab end hoga, tab Abhi aega milne Ruhi se….

To be continued….. (3303 words)

Behtareen update Casi bhai.
Mast aaproach liya hai aap ne sab dobara prastut karke. Bahut acha ja rahe ho, aise hi chalte dena han tak Ruhi saare replies nah likh de. Bahut achab lag raha hai ab Ruhi ki nazar se sab kuch dobara padhne ko.
Fantastic way to live those moments once again bhai.
Jabardast update.
 

Amity

Banned
532
4,092
123
Update 69 The Next Morning

Abhi: “Navina ke paas obviously…. This is my real house. I will stay here the most. Navina will always be my priority, yeh hamesha yaad rakhna tum…. Usske baghair main aaj yeh nahin hota jo abhi hoon…. Wo nahin hoti to pata nahin main aaj kahan hota, ho sakta hai ke apne life mein aaj itna bada ghar bhi nahin hota mera, ho sakta hai navina meri life mein nahin aati to mera garage bhi nahin hota….. kuch bhi nahin hota agar Navina mujhe nahin milti to!! She is my angel, farishta hai wo meri life ki!”



Ab aaguey….

Navina itni achi thi ke Aruhi usske saath itni ghul mil gayi jaise wo sach mein usski ek aur maa thi. Aruhi usske saath rehna chahti thi. Wapas ghar nahin jaana chahti thi. Dinner kiya bhi to Navina ke saath, kitchen ke saare kaam jab Navina karne gayi to Shweta usski help karne gayi to Aruhi bhi saath rahi apni maa ke nahin balke Navina ke saath.

Raat ke 11 baj gaye the aur tab tak Aruhi Navina ke goad mein thi, jab Shweta ne uss se jaane ke liye kaha to Aruhi ne bina jhijak ke kaha,

“Nahin aaj main badi mummy ke saath rahungi, usske paas soungi main.”

Shweta ko jaise ek khatra dikha. Ye khatra ke usski beti chhiin jaegi. Shweta ko dikh gaya ke Navina mein maamta bhara hua tha…. wo thi to teacher/lecturer, life bhar ussko bachon se paala pada hai aur usske saare students Navina ko behad pyar karte hein… unn students mein se seinkron ussko maa bulate the, Navina ke students mein se kayi ladkiyan aaj maa ban chuke hein aur ab bhi milte hein to Navina ko maa bulaate hein…. Navina hai hi aisi sirf pyar karti hai, pyar baantti hai sabke saath

Shweta ko darr tha ke kahin aisa nah ho ke maa hote hue bhi wo ek din bina aulad ke nah reh jaaye….. iss bare mein ek kone mein jaa kar Shweta ne Abhi se baat kiye…. Tab Abhi ne Shweta ko samjhaya ke agar Navina ke maamta mein se thoda pyar Aruhi ko mil jata hai to harj kia hai, usski biological maa to Shweta hi rahegi, bahot samjhaane ke baad Shweta maan gayi ke aaj Aruhi Navina ke saath reh sakti hai….

To decide hua ke Shweta bhi aaj abhi ke ghar hi rahegi….. magar Shweta apni ghar jaana chahti thi, apni mummy matlab wohi Ruhi ki chahi ke ghar….

Tab Navina ne Abhi ko ek taraf bula kar kaha ke wo chala jaaye aaj Shweta ke saath rahe raat bhar, aur kal subha aakar Aruhi ko lejaaye…. Magar Abhi ne Navina se kaha ke behtar hoga ke aaj Shweta yahin ruk jati… to dhire se Navina ne kaha,

“okay you go to sleep with her I don’t mind, mujhe Aruhi mil gayi main bahot khush hoon Aruhi will sleep in your place on my bed tonight!”

To Abhi gaya Shweta ko manaane ke wo aaj raat ko ussi ke ghar ruk jaaye…. Aur Shweta maan gayi…. Aruhi ko neendh aane lagi thi, to Navina ussko lekar apni bedroom mein chali gayi… ussko Abhi ka ek tshirt pehnaya gaya ek nighdress bana kar…. Aur Navina ne Shweta ko apni ek nighdress diya pehenne ke liye…..

Abhi Shweta ko ek dusre room mein legaya…. Shweta ko nahin pata tha ke Abhi ussi ke saath soega…. Wo chahunk gayi jab Abhi ko undress hote dekha….. wo nahin maan rahi thi…. Well usska mann to bahot tha ke Abhi ke saath love making kare magar ussne bilkool nahin socha tha ke Navina ke hote hue usske ghar mein yeh mumkin hoga…..

Iss raat ko Abhi to normal tha magar Shweta ne daarte hue love making kiya Abhi ke saath…. Abhi iss liye normal tha, bilkool josh mein tha, kyunke wo apne ghar mein tha aur Navina ki razamandi thi, magar Shweta iss liye darr rahi thi kyunke ussko darr tha ke Navina ko pata nah chal jaaye ke Abhi usske saat usske bed par hai…. Ishk farmaate waqt Shweta kaamp rahi thi aur dheemi dheemi awaaz mein baar baar keh rahi thi,

“uff jaldi karo, mujhe darr lag raha hai, aap ki wife sun legi, kia hoga agar ussko pata chala to, ofo mere saare kapde mat utaro, agar ussne kamra achanak open kiya to mujhe kapde pehhene ka mauka hi nahin milega…. Uff chhorro nah buss karo I am scared Abhi… kia kar rahe ho aap… ab buss bhi karo nah…..”

Shweta itni darrti, tadapti jaa rahi thi ke Abhi ko aur bhi ziada maza araha tha sab karne mein….

********************************************************************

Subha ko Navina pehle uth gayi thi, kitchen mein busy thi breakfast tayyaar karne mein….. kitchen mein plates aur cups ki awaaz se Shweta ki neendh tuti, to ghabraate hue Abhi ko jagaya aur kaha,

“Aap ki wife jaag gayi hai aap jaldi se niklo…. Dekho please ussko khabar nahin hona chahiye ke aap mere paas soye the raat bhar…. Bolo aap ab kia karoge kaise nikloge yahan se?!”

Abhi ne ubaasi lete hue kaha,

“Don’t worry darling, kitchen to niche hai nah, hum to upar hein main nikal lunga ussko pata bhi nahin chalega… aur tab main tumhare door knock karne aunga tumko uthaane ke liye okay? Stop worrying sweetheart.”

Aur Abhi ne wohi kiya…. Kuch der baad Shweta ke darwaze ko knock kiya aur oochi awaaz mein kaha,

“hello Shweta it’s time to wake up…. Chalo aao tumko dikhata hon kidhar toothbrush, toothpaste etc rakhe hue hein….”

Niche se Navina Abhi ko dekh kar usske saath hanss rahi thi….

Kuch der baad Aruhi aur Shweta ne jaldi se breakfat liye aur abhi unn donon ko pehle unnke ghar chorrne gaya. Wahan se Ab Shweta ki zimedaari thi tayyaar hona aur Aruhi ko tayyaar karke school bhejna. Ahi wapas aya aur Navina ko lekar college chorrne gaya, phir ussko time mila Navina ko chorr kar wapas Shweta ke jaakar unn donon ko lekar Aruhi ko usske school chorra aur Shweta ko usski school.

Shweta bahot khush thi. School jaate waqt Shweta ne Abhi ko raaste bhar usske baahon ke niche haath daal kar apne sar ko usske kaandhe par rakhe hue gayi.

Aur baat katte hue ussne kaha,

“Aruhi kaha ke usski badi maa bahot hi achi hai aur usske paas har weekend bitaane jaegi.”

Abhi khush hua aur kaha,

“That’s great. Main bhi yehi chahta tha. Uss tarah se Navina weekends mein busy rahegi Aruhi ke saath and we can have time to spend together won’t you be happy sweetheart?”

Shweta ne khushi se haan kaha aur kaha,

“Socha nahin tha itna sab kuch ho jaega aur sab itna asaan bhi hoga…. Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ke Navina hum donon ke baare mein jaanti hai? Does not she know about us Abhi?!”

Abhi: “Do you think if she would have known she would be quiet and accepted that I sleep with you?”

Shweta: “No, but she is so kind that I feel that she is aware but does not want to hurt us by letting us know that she is aware of our relationship.”

Abhi: “Do you want me to ask her?”

Shweta: “Are you mad? Yeh koyi puchne ki baat hai?!”

Abhi: “Then stop thinking about it.!”

Abhi ne Shweta ko school chorrne ke baad garage gaya aur apne working uniform mein bus mein kaam karne gaya…. Haan ab tamaam workers ke uniform hote the, dark blue colour ki , har ek worker ko har saal ek pair shoes, gloves aur 2 set of uniforms deta tha Abhi.

Abhi ko aaj bhi bus mein kaam karna passand tha. Har roz to nahin karta tha, magar jab bhi free rehta zaroor apne uniform mein garage mein paaya jata tha kissi bus mein weld karte hue ya kabhi alluminium sheets chipkaate hue….. aur kabhi kissi naye bande ko kaam seekhata Abhi.

Abhi ne plan kiya tha ke Aruhi aur Shweta ko saath lekar Ruhi se milne jaega, magar ab plan badal raha tha kyunke ussko Ruhi se pehle akele mein milna tha Diaries lene ke liye aur Ruhi se uss baare mein kuch aur baat karne ke liye usske baad Shweta aur Aruhi ko lekar jata wahan.

To Abhi ne Ruhi ko usski mobile par phone kiya…. 25 saalon mein aaj pehli baar dono ek dusre se baat karne jaa rahe the phone par.

Jaise Ruhi ne Abhi ki awaaz suni usska rona shuru ho gaya…. Iss liye ro rahi thi ke puri diaries padh liya tha aur itna royi thi har ek din ko diaries mein padhte hue aur Abhi ko miss karte aur uss par saare sitam karte hue dekh kar itna royi thi ke kal se usski aankhen sujhe hue the, aur upar se Abhi ke jawaab likh rahi thi….

Abhi ne ussko bataya ke jiss surprise ko wo dene wala tha kal nahin dega balke do din ke baad surprise dega ussko, kal sirf diaries aur usska jawab wapas lene ko aega.

Ruhi ne kaha ussko koyi surprise nahin chahiye ussko sirf abhi wapas chahiye…. Aur phone par hi rote hue Ruhi Abhi se maafi maangne lagi uss par der mahinon tak zulm karne ke liye, usske dil ko dukhaane ke liye, ussko utna tadpaane ke liye….

Abhi ne kaha ke kal batein karenge magar Ruhi bolti jaa rahi thi,

“Abhi mujhe isska ehsaas bilkool nahin tha unn dinon ke aap ko itna dukh de rahi thi main, diaries padhne ke baad ek ek baat saaf saamne dikh rahe the mujhe, ap ne ek ek pal ko itni clear likhe hein ke mujhe laga 1986 wapas agaya hai ya main wahan pahunch gayi hoon, Abhi main sach mein unn saare palon ko phir se jiya hoon aap ke diaries padhte hue, Abhi pease mujhe maaf kar dijiye, main ne aap par bahot zulam kiye the unn dinon please forgive me Abhi, mujhe issi liye upar wale ne sazaa di hai ke main aaj abahij ho chuki hoon, aap ke sacha aur saaf dil ko main ne bahot thess pahunchaye hein…..”

Abhi ke aankhen bhar aaye aur kaam ka bahana karte hue call ko end kiya aur kaha kal uss se milne aa raha hai.

To be continued…………

Good to see them united.
Happy that Aruhi loved Navina that much that she wished to spend the weekend with her. Too good.
Happy also to see Abhi down to earth working with his garage workers in his uniform.
He called Ruhi. They talked on the phone for the first time in their lives. Ruhi started crying asking forgiveness with Abhi. That had to happen I was sure. She will keep crying realising what she missed and lost in Abhi, the atrocities Abhi faced because of her will damn torture Ruhi mentally.
Very good update casinar ji.
 

Amity

Banned
532
4,092
123
Update 70 Ruhi And The Diaries

Ruhi ne jab diaries padna shuru kiya to bahot khush hui. Usske dil mein kuch aise ehsaas jaage jo pichle 25 saalon mein jaise Ruhi ne dafna diye the… unn dinon ko yaad to karti thi magar sab ab ussko dhundla nazar ata tha, magar Abhi ki daries ne saare dhundlepan ko mita diye, jaise ke baarish mein ek car ke windshield par paani padhne se saaf nahin dikhaayi deta, Ruhi ke andar wo yaadein uss tarah the aur Abhi ki diaries ne ek wiper ka kaam kiya sab saaf kar diya aur sab kuch saaf dikhne laga dobara Ruhi ko…..

Padhna shuru kiya to kuch aise chizein maloom hui Ruhi ko jisska ussko tab pata bhi nahin tha wo ussko aaj pata chala…..

Jaise shuru mein Abhi ne likha tha ke ek aurat (Ruhi ki maa) ne Ruhi ka naam phukaarte hue ussko bus dekhne ko bulaya, aur kiss tarah se Abhi bechain wait karne laga tha ke kab wo Ruhi naam wali ladki kitchen ke chaukath par aaye bus ko dekhne ke liye taake Abhi uss ladki ko dekh sake….. yeh to first din ko hua tha jab Abhi wahan pehli baar gaya tha aur iss baat ke baare mein Ruhi ko bilkool bhi pata nahin tha yeh ussko aaj 25 saal baad pata chala diaries mein padhne ke baad…. Yeh part padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot acha laga ke aate hi Abhi ne ussko dekhne ke liye itna utavla ho gaya tha, Abhi ko usska naam sute hi pyar ho gaya tha, bina ussko dekhe, sirf usski awaaz sunke, kitchen ke andar se Ruhi jawaab de rahi thi aur usski awaaz Abhi ke kaanon tak jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss awaaz ki maalkin ko dekhne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. yeh padh kar Ruhi ko itna acha laga ke usska mann kiya ke wo din dobara wapas aaye aur wo ek bar firse, ussi taraf kitchen mein pakaaye aur usski maa ussko bulaaye Mehboob ka bus dekhne ke liye aur Ruhi wapas aaye stairs par dekhne ke liye taake Abhi ussko dekh sake….

Sochne ki baat hai ke Ruhi ko yeh padhte hue kaise feel ho raha hoga…. Ussko pata bhi nahin tha ke koyi ussko dekhne ke liye intezaar kar raha tha aur wo kitchen mein pakaane mein vyast thi…

Dairies to English mein likha hai Abhi ne magar yahan paathakon ke liye Hinglish mein sab hoga aur wohi hoga jo aap sab ne updates mein padhe hein pehle…… revive those days.....

Ab aap sab paathakon ko buss yun samajhna hai ke jaise Ruhi iss kahani ke update 1 se lekar update 46 tak padh rahi hai…. Khud ussne jo kuch kiya Abhi ke saath, Abhi ne jitney pal bhi guzaare uss aangan mein sab Ruhi padh rahi hai…. Kitna waqt Ruhi ne Abhi ke saath guzara, kitna Abhi tadpa, kitna Ruhi ke taraf se ikraar ya inkaar dikhaayi diya…. Yeh sab Ruhi ne padha…

Aur ab kyunke Ruhi ne kaha tha ke Abhi ko iss baar likh kar reply karegi, to yaaro….. aisa samjho ke Ruhi ne unn tamaan updates par apna review likha… kuch aisa hi samajhna hoga kyunke jo kuch iss kahani mein Update 1 se update 46 tak likha gaya hai wo sab Abhi ke unn diaries mein hein jo Ruhi ko Abhi ne diya!

Bahot saare aise events the jissko padhte hue Ruhi ko bahot achcha lag raha tha, muskura rahi thi, hanssti jaa rahi thi, jaise ke update 5 mein THE FIRST DAY OF WORK mein yeh part Ruhi ne padhne ke baad Ruhi ne yeh likha as reply to Abhi….

Reply karne ke liye Ruhi ne a writing pad kharida… ussi mein diaries ke replies likhne lagi Ruhi… to yeh part padha Ruhi ne:


{Bus stop se utar kar marammat karne wale bus tak pahunchne mein koyi 5 minat lagta tha, aur jab uss aangan mein daakhil hua abhi to usski nazar seedhe uss kitchen wale stairs par pahunche, bus par nahin. Chalte waqt bus tak reach hone ke liye abhi ki nazrein idhar udhar dekhta gaya, right mein jo ghar hai matlab jiss ghar mein wo ladki rehti hai, uss ghar ka saamne wale hisse ko ghaur se dekha abhi ne, jo pehla tap tha wahan dekha phir nazron ko uss taraf kiya jahan tap number 2 tha aur ek washing stone bhi tha uss dusre nal ke paas. Aur akhir mein uss jagah pahuncha jahan washroom tha. Aur ab wo washroom to direct uss kitchen ke opposite tha jahan kal Ruhi nazar ayi thi, uss washroom se kitchen ke andar nazar araha tha. Abhi ne ghaur se andar dekha. Koyi bhi nahin tha. Abhi ne sochna shuru kiya ke kal issi kitchen mein wo ladki paka rahi thi jiss waqt usski maa ussko awaaz de rahi thi……. Abhi ne ek vision kiya jo flashback ki tarah usske aankhon ke saamne aaye….


Ussne dekha ke ussi neeli dress mein ladki apni stove ke paas karhaayi mein kuch pakaa rahi hai aur Abhi ussko dekh rahi hai phir Abhi uss se ishaare se baat kar raha hai…..

Vision khatam hone ke baad Abhi ne socha kia aisa kabhi hoga bhi? Kia yeh mumkin hai? 4 se 6 mahinon tak yahin kaam karna hai kuch to baat aaguey badhegi zaroor….. Ek ajeeb si feeling ho raha tha abhi ko, uss kitchen ke andar dekhte hue, soch raha tha jaise usski maa pakaati hai kitchen mein weise hi ladki bhi kal paka rahi thi, ussko pakana ata hai, kia kabi kuch paka kar khilaegi Abhi ko? Wo sochne laga Abhi, usske haath ka paka hua kaisa lagega? Swadisht hoga? Abhi ussko kitchen stove ke paas dekhna chahta tha, ussko pakaate hue dekhna chahta tha, usska dil kar raha tha ke wo ladki wahan aaye aur Abhi usske paas jaakar ussko piche se jakre aur uss se pyar kare…. Aise feelings aa rahe the abhi ke dil mein kapde change karte waqt… }

Ruhi ne yeh padhne ke baad likha:

“Mujhe nahin pata tha aap pehle din se mujh mein itna interest le rahe the Abhi. Yeh sab padh kar bahot hi acha laga mujhe, wo puraane din wapas agaye. Kitna acha likhte ho aap. Aap ne meri aangan ko kitna achah describe kiya hai, mere ghar ko, kitchen ko, washing stone aur taps, sabko itne details mein likha hai? Main ne khud kabhi unn jizon ko nahin describe kiya jaise aap ne kiye hein. Aaj to wo sab baaki nahin hai Abhi magar aap ne sab likh kar unn chizon ko ab tak zinda rakha hai, its very very beautiful, you made me go back to those days Abhi….. Rahi baat aap ko mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue dekhna aur yeh sochna ke kia kabhi aap mere haath ki pakaaye hue kha paoge, to Abhi wo wish to puri hui thi nah aap ki at least? Main ne aap ko lunch par invite kiya tha aur khud apne haath se pakaaya hua khilaya tha aap ko…. Hai nah Abhi? Dekha aap ne first day of work ko jo wish kiya tha wo puri hui thi Abhi! Aur rahi mujhe pakate waqt piche se aakar jakarne ki baat… Abhi aap ne first day ko hi yeh sab soch liya tha? Really? Kaash main wapas unn dinon mein jaa sakti to aap ko zaroor mauka deti mujhe aakar piche se kitchen mein jakarne ke liye….”

Aur dhire dhire aise hi Ruhi padhti gayi… aur yeh read kiya to Ruhi ne :

{Abhi baar baar uss ghar ke taraf dekhe jaa raha tha kaam karte hue, soch raha tha kia wo abhi tak so rahi hogi? Ussko dekhne ka bada mann tha abhi ko, magar wo bilkool nazar nahin arahi thi. Kia wo kaam par chali gayi hogi? Kia college gayi hogi? Ya university ki student hogi? Usski maa kayi baar nazar aayi. Mehboob bhi kayi baar aaye, sabse baat kiye, Mehboob ki biwi, Rahima bhi aayi, chai dene aayi sabko phir wapas chali bhi gayi magar wo ladki nahin dikhi thi Abhi ko din ke barah bajne ko tha. Bus ko nanga kar diya gaya tha, sirf bus ki chasis nazar arahe the apne 6 wheels par. }



Ruhi ne jawaab mein likha,

“Aap pehle din se hi mujhko itna dhund rahe the Abhi, I was not aware at all Abhi, pata hota to zaroor aap ke saamne aati main… kaash mujhe tab aap ka pyar ka pata chala hota Abhi…. Main hi andhi thi Abhi….”

Ruhi ne padha kaam ke dusre din ki events ko Abhi ne kuch aisa likha tha:

{ Abhi ko sharam feel ho raha tha aur kitchen ke taraf dekhna bandh kar diya apna turn wait kiya khud ko fresh karne ke liye; magar usska dil nahin maan raha tha ke wo Ruhi ko kitchen mein nah dekhe, usska mann tha ke wo ussko dekhe pakaate hue, ussko admire kare, to Abhi ne apne doston ke peeth piche chhup chhup kar Ruhi ko dekhna jaari rakha….. ussne ek baar dekha ke Ruhi ki maa ussko kuch keh rahi thi aur Ruhi zor se hanssi aur usske taraf dekha, wo khilkhila kar hanssi thi, Abhi usski uss hanssi par fida ho gaya, ussko Ruhi ko aur weise hansste hue dekhne ko mann kar raha tha…. hanssne ke baad Ruhi chulhe par ek dish mein mein ek ladki wale spoon se kuch chala rahi thi, matlab mix kar rahi thi, tarkaari paka rahi hogi Abhi ne socha.. aur weise hanssne ke baad Ruhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan baaki tha aur ussne apne niche wale honth ko daanton mein dabaate hue apni maa ke taraf dekha aur ussko kuch kaha, phir ek haath se Ruhi apne chehre se ek latt ko apne sar ke upar kiya tab weise hi ek honth ko daant mein dabaaye hue hi Abhi ke tarraf phir se dekha aur donon ke nazrein mile…. Abhi ke chehre par ek Muskaan ban gaya tha apne aap Ruhi ko admire karte hue.}



Ruhi ne reply likha:

Haan Abhi yeh din mujhe bahot achchi tarah se yaad hai. Yaad hai main kitni zor se hanssi thi kyunke main ne turant realise kiya tha ke kitne log hein aaj aangan mein aur main aise hanss rahi hoon…. Abhi aap mujhe kitchen mein pakaate hue bhi describe kiye ho!!kitna acha likha hai aap ne sab kuch Abhi, yahan tak ke main ek lakdi wale spoon use kar rahi thi yeh bhi likha hai aap ne Abhi? Aap washroom se apne doston ke piche chhup chhup kar mujhko dekh rahe the isska bhi pata nahin tha mujhko Abhi, magar haan main ne bhi aap ko dekha tha ekaat baar udhar yeh sach hai…. Aap ne mere chehre ko, mere sar ke baal ko, mere honthon ko, mere muskurahat ko sab ko itni achi tarike se kaise describe kiya hai Abhi? Aap ne mujhko tabhi kyun nahin diya tha yeh sab padhne ke liye Abhi? Agar main yeh sab uss waqt padhti to aap par fida main ho jaati Abhi… Itna admire karte the aap mujhe Abhi, I regret so much that I was really blind not to see all that at that time Abhi."


Ruhi ne aaguey read kiya:

{Aur jiss waqt Abhi apne baalon mein kanghi kar raha tha khud ko aine mein dekhte hue ussne dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein uss par the. Ruhi Abhi ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi thoda muskuraate hue. Aur donon ke beech ziada faasla bhi nahin tha, aamne saamne the donon, yeh pehli bar tha ke Abhi Ruhi ko itne karib se dekh raha tha. Bahot hi acha feel hua Abhi ko. Usska dil machalne laga, bahot khush tha wo. Ussne ekaat baar Ruhi ko dekha weise hi muskuraate hue, aur iss baar Ruhi hanss padi Abhi ko dekhte hue, pata nahin kyun ussko hanssee aayi. Abhi ne dobara aine mein dekha Ruhi ko hansste hue dekh kar ke kahin usske chehre mein kuch aur to nahin laga hua hai, sab saaf tha to kyun hanssi wo Abhi ne socha!}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“haan Abhi yeh mujhe bilkool yaad hai. It was the first time I looked well at you. Wo aap ka dusre din tha work ka yes I remember. Haan main hanssi thi pata hai kyun hanssi thi main, main kaafi der se aap ko baal banaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke ladke bhi aine ke saamne itna time lete hein, aap apne look ka care karte the, apne aap ko aine mein dekhe jaa rahe the aur baal banaate jaa rahe the, aur yahan ab main samjhi ke wo sab aap mere liye kar rahe the, mujhko impress karne ke liye ya mere saamne acha dikhne ke liye aap itna tayyaar ho rahe the, awwww Abhi….. love you so much, I miss those days so so much Abhi…. Wo pehli baar tha ke main bhi aap ko utna karib se dekha tha aur sach bataun aap mujhe bahot achche lage the uss din, aur usssi din ke baad main ne bhi aap ko dekhna shuru kiya tha kyunke meri samajh mein agaya tha ke aap mere taraf kitna dekh rahe ho….”

{Ek blue Jean aur ek white Tshirt mein dressed tha Abhi aur ab ek handsome young man dikh raha tha. ussne khud ko kayi baar aine mein dekha, chehre par haath ferra kayi baar aur Ruhi ki nazrein uss par tikke rahe muskuraate hue. Ruhi ab Saeed ko nahin sirf Abhi ko dekh rahi thi; aur jab Abhi tayaar hua wahan se nikalne ke liye to Mehboob nikla ghar se aur Saeed ke paas khade hokar baat karne laga…. Tab tak Abhi chalte hue Saeed tak reach hua apne bag ko kaandhe par taange hue, aur ek nazar Ruhi par kiye hue. Ruhi ki nazar Abhi par hi thi jab wo ruka}

Ruhi ne reply likha:

“Abhi sach hai jab tak aap chal kar wahan se nahin gaye meri nazar aap par hi tikke rahe the, you are right… aur hey Abhi aap ne apne aap ko bhi describe kiya hai…. Aap ko aksar uss Blue Jean aur white Shirt mein visualie karti hoon Abhi aaj bhi….”

Jab Ruhi ne yeh read kiya:

{“I wish I would be living in that village of hers. Thus, I could go there any time and look at her. What could she be doing at this time? Had she already had dinner? Must she be watching TV with her family? How nice it would have been if I suddenly reach there at this time and she gets surprised to see me! Would her mother ask me to get inside and watch TV with them? Would I get a seat close to Ruhi and we both hold each other’s hands and watch TV?”


Ek sapna likh raha tha Abhi, ussko iss sapne ko sach karna tha.}



Ruhi ne likha:

“Ek Sapna hi likh rahe the aap Abhi, wo sapna hi ban kar reh gaya, agar main ne saath diya hota to aap ka wo sapna zaroor pura hota Abhi. I am very sorry abhi for not making your dream come true. Abhi I would have loved to receive you at my place and you sit by my side and we would be watching TV together like you have written…”

Aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Aur aaj subha 6.30 ko abhi reach ho gaya uss muhalle mein. Shop se cigarrte kharida aur kasht maarte hue uss aangan mein dakhil hua, aur Ruhi ke ghar ke taraf dekhte hue aaguey badhta gaya ke achanak ussko garden mein koyi dikha…. Garden right hand side mein hai, plan mein dekh lena update 4 par…. Abhi ne bilkool bhi nahin socha tha ke itne savere wo Ruhi ka saamna karega….. Ruhi night gown mein thi aur garden se gulaab ke phool pick kar rahi thi… usski haath mein ek kainchi thi jiss se wo phool kaat rahi thi, usski left hand mein koyi 4 ya 5 gulaab already the aur wo aur kaat rahi thi, usski nightgown pale blue color ki thi, lambi thi usski pura jism dhaka hua tha niche tak, yahan tak ke usski chappal par uss dress ki last end chhuh rahe the…..}

Ruhi ne likha:

“Abhi main iss din ko aksar sochti hoon. Yeh mujhko bahot achi tarah se yaad hai jaise yeh kal hi hua tha. AAp ne uss din mujhko pehli baar good morning kaha tha aur main ne reply nahin kiya tha aura ap ne isska shikayat bhi kiya tha mujhse…. Bilkool yaad hai sab mujhe…. Abhi baat yeh thi ke yahan ham sheher mein nahin hein nah yahan kissi ko bhi wo aadat thi hi nahin ke koyi kissi ko good morning kare ya koyi usska reply de, aap to sheher ke paas se ho to aap ko good morning, good evening ya afternoon karne ki aadat thi, yahan par koyi nahin karta hai issi liye meri samajh mein nahin aya tha ke aap ko kia jawaab doon issi liye main ne uss din aap ko koyi jawaab nahin diya tha aur sharminda bhi feel kiya tha main ne…. aap ne mere nightdress ko bhi describe kiya hai Abhi…. Mujhe khud yaad nahin wo kaun si wala nightdress thi….”

{“Sala ek good morning ka reply karne mein kia jata hai? Mera din ban jata aaj agar ussne mujhe good morning keh diya hota to, din mazedaar guzarta aaj mera… magar ab to mood hi kharab ho gaya savere savere yaar, main kyun aaj itni savere agaya yahan…. Kaash wo ab kitchen mein ajaaye to main dobara ussko good morning karunga aur kahunga ke good morning ka jawaab dete hein khamosh nahin rehte….!”}

Yeh padh ke ruhi ne likha, I AM SORRY ABHI.

Aur aaguey read kiya ruhi ne:

{ Phir turant Ruhi apne ghar ke saamne wale hise par aayi tap one ke paas wahan jharu lagaane aayi, kal bhi wohi kiya tha, ek chota sa baramde par jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ke bus do kadam ki doorie par thi, jhuk kar jharu lagaa rahi thi aur Abhi ki nazrein uss se hatt hi nahin rahe the…. Ruhi ko pata tha ke Abhi ussi ko dekhe jaa raha hai, aur ussne nazrein utha kar Abhi ko dekha ek halki si muskaan ke saath. Abhi cigarette pee raha tha, to Ruhi ne apni meethi awaaz mein kaha,

“cigarette pina achi baat nahin hai ji!”}

Ruhi ne jawaab likha:

“Abhi aaj bata doon aap ko ke main khaas kar aap ke liye hi wahan ziada aya karti thi, aap mujhe ache lagne lage the, aap se baat karne ka mera bhi mann kar raha tha, haan mujhe pata chal gaya tha ke aap sirf mujhko dekhte rehte ho, aur mujhko dhundte ho har baar, aur aap shaayd hichkichate the mujhse baat karne mein to main ne uss din khud socha ke aap se kuch kahun to dekha aap cigarette pee rahe the, to ussi ke bare mein kaha tha aap se…. Thanks for describing me brooming my terrace Abhi, loved it.”

Dosto yeh update lamba chalega.. may be

Or updates mein sab end hoga, tab Abhi aega milne Ruhi se….

To be continued….. (3303 words)

Casinar ji, you hv a unique way of story telling which is very interesting and makes the read much more intense and gripping.
You hv once again started adding several parts already written in the start to get the replies of Ruhi upon them. Very very interesting indeed to re-read and live those parts again. Its real pleasure to once again read and feel what Abhi had been through together with Ruhi.
Its like some movies which have repeated scenes several times, thats the idea behind I think, but it is very good Casinar ji.
It may look repetitive to few but I love it this way, keep it going like this till Ruhi finishes it. Its a great idea and makes us also re-live those lovely moments Abhi had there, in that yard.
Ruhi's replies are coming good, that is how they should be and you are presenting it particularly well my dear. Keep it up and hats off.
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
 
Last edited:
Top