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[_ABHAY]

link do men ju
apan bhi padhega

Story ka yaa jo behas hui thi... Uska.. 1481 page no. Per hai...

 

[meerkhan]

_ABHAY shandaar launde Badhiya tarah se likhe ho. Full entertainment. Ab apne ko toh koi dikkat nahi hai iss se par ladies logo ko ho sakti hai. Abhi toh shayad unme se kisi ne dekha nahi hai par agar pata laga toh zaroor kuchh na kuchh bawal ho sakta hai.

Baaki meri taraf se toh koi chinta karne waali baat nahi. Badhiya tha. Maza aaya.

Idea bhi achha tha aur characters ko justify bhi kiya unke recent interactions ne. Thodi spelling mistakes zaroor hui hai.

Keara nahi... Kaera hai woh. But chalta hai. Kul mila ke shuru se end tak kahi boriyat nahi hui. So, good work.

Sahi bole ek dum

 

[Ristrcted]

Story ka yaa jo behas hui thi... Uska.. 1481 page no. Per hai...

woky

 

[meerkhan]

woky

Bc kya kya dekhna pad raha hai xf pe

 

[abida jahan]

Accha ji

Jee haan
aap try kijiyega

 

[Ristrcted]

Bc kya kya dekhna pad raha hai xf pe

ye Bilal Khan ju hi to nahi men

 

[meerkhan]

Jee haan
aap try kijiyega

Lo abhi try kar lete hai apna adress batao abhi aate hain

 

[meerkhan]

ye Bilal Khan ju hi to nahi men

Are ghantha mere itne bure din nahi aye ki dharam ke naam par ladu yaha jab ladna hota hai to seedha agle ke samne se ladta hu ni ki kisi dharm ka shara le ke

 

[abida jahan]

Lo abhi try kar lete hai apna adress batao abhi aate hain

H. No. 420
Roop mahal
Prem gali
Chinchpokli mumbai

 

[meerkhan]

H. No. 420
Roop mahal
Prem gali
Chinchpokli mumbai

Pure xf ko leke aunga phir mat kehna jagah Kam pad gayi mere yaha