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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Casi bhai bahut bahut dard hua mujhe.
Bahut bahut emotional update hai.
Main der tak rota raha. Khud ko abhi samajh baitha main.
Jab Ruhi aur Abhi sabke saamne gale milkar roye to main bhi roya. Bahut dard hua hab Ruhi ne kaha I am going Abhi main fut ke roya.
Ek tassalli hai ke Abhi k paas address hai to ye umeed hai k Abhi jarur udhar jaega.
Bhai kamaal ka writer ho aap. Likh kar itna rulaya wah bhai wah
Hats off itna badhya kahani likhne k liye Casi bhai. :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :yourock:

bahot bahot shukriya Indian bhai appreciate karne ke liye
 

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Bhai kuch bhi hi ye Ruhi Abhi se bahut pyar karti hai. Guarantee hai mera jhoot bol rahi hai Abhi ko kyunke usski maa ne ussko wo sab kehne ki kaha hai.
Ruhi ne bus wo chewing gum diya Abhi ko yehi saboot hai ke wo Abhi ko bahuy pyar karti hai magar majboor hai.
Bhai bahut emotional update hai, Abhi k liye bahut feel ho raha hai mujhe. Main samajh sakta hoon uss par kia beet rahi hai. Bahut mushkil hai iss situation ko jhelna.
Wonderful writing bhai

bahot baahot shukriya supar bhai ..
 

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Kitna rulaoge Casi bhai? Kitne dinon se rula rahe ho? May be 6 last update se sirf rona jaari hai iss thread par.
Lekhak to aap kamaal ka ho hi, itni achi script, itna bada update 570p words magar pura ke pura sad painful dard se bhapur, itna bada emotional update likhte kaise ho ye jaanna hai mujhe. Saare scenes aur situations original hai nah kabhi dekha na suna nah kabhi padha.
Itni achi aur badhya plot aur kahani aap ko sujha kaise bhai? Hats off bhai.
Ab aata hun update par. Main ne last review mein kaha nah ke Ruhi Abhi se bahut pyar karti hai, dekha nah main ne sahi kaha varna sabke saamne Abhi ko iss tarah se gale nahin milti nahin roti Abhi ke gale lag ke, aur rote hue nahin kehti ke main jaa rahi hoon Abhi. ..... kitna sad aur emotional tha wo bichadne wala scene yaar. Kaise create kiya aap ne itna badhya scene casi bhai? :bow: :bow: :boe:
Mujhe magar asha ki kiran dikhayi diye jab khud Abhi ki maa ko pachtawa hua aur saB bak diya mummy ji ne ke Ruhi kahan thehregi aur address de diya usski chacha ke shop ka jahan Ruhi ka bhai Manoj kaam karta hai aur Ruhi bhi wahin hogi help karne ko.
Kyun de diya mummy ne pata?
Kia chahti hai wo ke Abhi jaakar mile Ruhi se? Jitna donon ki juda karna chahti hai utna hi apne aap ussne bak diya..
Abhi ka aakhri din aur raat dukhdai raha uss aangan mein afsos ke jaisa Abhi chahta tha ke last day end ho vaisa nahin hua.
Aakhir bus ban gayi, magar Abhi ka pyar nahin ban paaya very very sad.

appreciation ke liye bahot baot shukriya supar bhai
 

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casinar bhai.....................ab to kahani aise mod par hai

ki

mein koi review hi nahin de sakta

ruhi ka hi pata nahin ki wo kya chahti hai.................kabhi haan...kabhi naa
aur abhi.... wo khud to chhodo......... ruhi ke kahne par bhi patience nahin rakh pa raha
aisa hota hai........... pyar mein ..............khone ka dar

ruhi ki maa ne jo logic diya..... abhi ke kam ki wajah se proposal reject karne ka
wo sahi bhi ho sakta hai
aur bahana bhi........... kisi aur wajah ko chhupane ka

ab ............abhi na sahi.....
lekin mein....mein patience rakhunga
faisla hone tak..... aar ya paar

keep it up dear bro

bahot shukriya Kamdev bhai...
agar aap story ki end ka wait karoge to wo to update ke baad aa sakta hai bhai :D
 

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Heartbreaking to the extreme.
Oh my God.
How is Abhi bearing so much pain. Poor Abhi.
What does Ruhi's parent want then? Are they looking for a real prince for Ruhi?
They are lying this is obvious. The father is a cool person but is a yes man no doubt.
But why Ruhi did not raise her voice?
Why she is also telling Abhi all that her parents are saying?
Why is she siding with her parents? There must be something behind all these.
I think either there is someone at her grandmother's place who is preventing Ruhi and family to accept Abhi or the parents are squarely against the union.
What does it mean when a girl gives a boy a chewing gum? It has a certain meaning, does Ruhi know that?
They all refused Abhi who wept and went back in the bus to continue his work but is it possible to work in such a condition?
Poor Abhi . My heart aches for him.

thanks very very much Amity dear for the lovely appreciation
 

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Very very very painful and tearful update casinar ji.
You are a GENIUS to succeed to write an emotional update of 5000 plus words. Not an easy task at all . Respect you for that.
My eyes were leaving tears like I had lost someone dear to me. I felt my heart torn into pieces and I wonder what must have been going with Abhi and Ruhi.
Ruhi loves Abhi very much but she is may be forced to do that she is forced to leave. Her parents are moving her away purposely so that Abhi cant convince her in the last day.
Ruhi's mother must have visualized what the scenarion could have been if it was Abhi who would be leaving the place after the completion of the work, then Abhi would have met Ruhi to say goodbye and Ruhi could not have held her tears she would have asked Abhi to keep coming even when the work is terminated there.
Sunil reminded Abhi that Ruhi 's mother did the same with her elder sister. So the the game is played with Ruhi to keep her away from Abhi.
Her mother planned all this to get Ruhi out specially on the last day of work. Remember yesterday was supposed to be the last day and so yesterday also she had taken Ruhi away with her expecting when she will return Abhi woulb be gone by then. So when she learnt that today is the last day of work she again moved Ruhi away so that Abhi does not come to say goodbye to Ruhi as it is sure that Ruhi would weep a lot seeing Abhi going for ever.
I feel that is the main reason of moving Ruhi so that she does not keep the memory of a separation with Abhi....
The part where Abhi hugged Ruhi and they kissed then the parting was too emotional.... that made me cry a lot. I got to stop reading cry then continue to read.
The way Ruhi said "bye Abhi, I am going Abhi" was heartbreakin. And what Abhi told her was also terribly touching.
Wonderful, fantastic, mindblowing, amazing, fabulous, magnificent update casinar ji.
:adore: :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore: :adore:

tthank you very very much Amity dear for the lovely appreciative review :love:
 

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Woooooowww........
Very good and fantastic updates......
Very well written and beautifully described........

Mostly second update.....and abhi's pain......kaafi achchi tarah se aapne ise dikhaya hai......
A very good creation.......


And now let's latke about story......

To pahle baat karte hai abhi ke point of view se........
Ab Abhi ka dimaag chal raha hai......kyoki wo bhi ab chijo me differences ko jaan ne laga hai......Ruhi ke behaviour ki or uske love ki tulna karne laga hai.....sachchai se.....ak tarah se kahe to Ruhi ko observ karne laga hai....
OR kisi ke observation se hee hame saamne waale ke baare me sahi sahi chije pata chalti hai.....
Uske dikhaave or uski reality ke bich ka difference pata chalta hai......


Abhi ke liye Ruhi ka ye ignorance isliye bhi jaanleva hai kyoki.........
Ruhi pahle bhi kai bar aisa kar chuki hai....lekin tab Abhi uss chij ko dil se sochta tha......OR jab bhi Ruhi aisa karti thi use lagta tha ki Ruhi kisi kaam mai fast hui hai.....ya uski koi mazburi hai.....

Lekin ab Abhi dil ke saath dimaag bhi lagaane laga hai.....OR kisi bhi chij me ye jaruri bhi hai.....
Use pata hai ki Ruhi ki koi mazburi nahi hai.....na hee use koi rok ne wala .....phir bhi agar Ruhi use ignore kar rahi hai.....

To wo sirf isliye.....KYOKI WO KHUD CHAHTI HAI USE IGNORE KARNA.....

Abhi ko yeh baat samajh aa chuki hai.....OR yahi baat uske liye jyada takleef dene waali hai.....

Abhi ne khat likha lekin khat me 3 din kyo likha....Ruhi to use 15 se hee ignore kar rahi hai......bas ye hai ki pichle 3 din se ye thoda jyada ho gaya hai.....

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ki Ruhi bimaar hai....OK.....Abhi ki baat jab uski maa ne use bataayi tab wo khidki par aa gayi....ye bhi thik hai.....
Thik nahi hai wo hai ki wo abhi ke bulaane par piche kyo nahi aayi.....kya sirf darwaze par ya piche ke hisse mai hee log dekhte hai.....
Jis Khidki par do log aaram se khade hai or bahar ki tarah jhuk kar baat kar rahe hai....wo kisi bhi tarah chhoti to nahi hogi.....to kya uss khidki se baat karte hue log nahi dekhenge......

Ha wo jo Abhi ne ghar ke kaam or apne maa ke baare me bataya wo kaafi achcha laga.....kyoki same situation mere saath bhi hai.....

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha ki jo hona hai wo hoga hee.....iss baat ka kya matlab nikala jaaye samajh nahi aa raha.....
Ak tarah wo dono ke bich massanger ka kaam kar rahi hai to dusri taraf Abhi ko mana bhi kar rahi hai ki Ruhi bahar nahi aayegi......

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki to....
TO waise to Mai iss story me romance padhne ke liye aata hu.....lekin aaj ka or pichle kuch updates mujhe romantic kam thrilling jyada lage.....OR aaj ka to khas kar....

Aisa laga jaise koi pre planed game chal raha hai.....Jo ki kaafi bada hai....OR kaafi achche se khela gaya hai.....
Jiski ki kisi ko bhi bhanak nahi hai.....other then.....RUHI'S family.....

OR Ruhi ki current activities or uska aisi situation me bhi dil jamaane waali baat kahna....sab isi baat ki taraf ishaara karta.....ki it's a big game......

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki to Ruhi ka behaviour Abhi strange nahi hua hai......wo starting se hee hai......
Mid ke kuch updates me kaafi achcha tha.....lekin unme bhi kanhi na kanhi koi na koi gadbad jarur thi......puri tarah kabhi bhi wo samarpit nahi lagi.....Abhi ki tarah

Bas ab wo none stability kaafi jyada badh gayi hai......


Ab baat kare Ruhi ke uss line ki .....to

Abhi agar ham ise aise dekhe ki wo mazaak kar rahi hai....to aisi situation me or iss stage par mazaak kaafi dikkat wala ho sakta hai........

OR agar ye sach hai to......ab kabhi bhi Ruhi ise clear nahi kar paayegi.....

Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Anyways
Very beautiful update....
Thanks....

bhot baot shukriya vikram bhai aap ki iss behtareen analysis aur appreciation ke liye yaar
aap ki review kamaal ke hote hein bhai
weise bhai aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke aap kuch ziada expect kar rahe ho kahani mein magar end mein kuch bahot saadharan sa reason nikle ruhi ki rawayye kie? tab umeed hai ke aap niraash nahin honge :D
 

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I myself felt the pain and emotions of Abhi after reading both updates... The way you chose your words and rythm is just awesome... This is what make you one of the best writer of previous Xossip and now XForum. I have followed all your thread from both latform... Thank you once again for your wonderful writing skill..

As of now you have earlier mentioned that happy ending is for sure...That's bit relaxing.
From this situation how you will turn all this negative marking into positive sign to make this as happy ending that's will be rally very exciting to wait and read...

thanks so very much for your appreciation bro.
I really appreciate your interest in the story
as far as the happy end that is too far from now bro...
this is a different story which could be in the middle many readers will not appreciate,
but i get to stick with my plot and will undergo as i have planned it :D
hope to see you soon and on every updates Yadav bro and thanks again
and welcome if i did not welcome you earlier
 

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Rula diya na firse bidu.
Aur kitna rulaoge yaar. Kitne dinon se rula rahe ho hamein?
Main ne Abhi mein apne aap ko paya iss update me.
Mujh par kuch similar hua hai life mein yaar.
Aise haadse life me aadmi ko aur majbut banata hai.
Mujhe isska tajurba hai bidu.
Ye thokar Abhi ko jiada majbut karega. Bahut dukh ho raha hai usske liye mujhe.
Magar Ruhi msjbooran ja rahi hai aisa pah raha hai muje. Kuch to hai jo Ruhi nahin bata pa rahi hai Abhi ko.
Bidu fantastic likha hai bidu bahut extraordinary writing hai. Ek novel jaisa lag raha sab kuch.
:yourock: :yourock: :yourock:
bahot bahot shukriua King bhai appreciation keliye
 
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