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Update 27 Abhi Spent The Night At Ruhi’s

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.


Ab aaguey….

Jiss waqt donon bus ke piche uss darkhat ke paas kiss kar rahe the ek donon ko baahon mein bhade tabhi lane mein Shweta ki awaaz sunaayi diye kehte hue,

“naiii main nahin bheegi hoon aap ke sar ke baal bheeg gaye hein”

Ruhi darr gayi aur Abhi ko itna zor se jakra ke Abhi ko laga usski pasliyan tutne wale hein, to Ruhi ne darrte hue kaha,

“uff manoj bhai aur Shweta, agar humko yahan dekh liya to musibat ajaegi ab kia karen Abhi?!”

Abhi ne phusphusate hue kaha,

“Sshhhh andhera hai koyi humko nahin dekh paega, buss niche baith jao yahin aur bilkool khamosh raho, jab donon ghar ke andar chale jaenge tab hum unnke piche jaenge….”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko jakre hue hi baith gaye. Ab of course kyunke andhera tha aur donon buss ke uss taraf the, aur halki si barish bhi thi to Manoj tez kadmon se seedhe apne kitchen ke darwaze tak gaya bina idhar udhar dekhe aur Shweta ko utara kitchen mein…..

Utarte hi Shweta chillaayi,

“Ruhiiiiiiii didiiiiiiiiii main agayiiiiiiii”

Idhar Bus ke kone mein Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Ufff wo mera hi naam phukaar rahi hai, mujhko dhundne gayi hogi, chalo ab jaldi….”

To donon piche se gaye kitchen mein jaise daakhil hue Shweta andar se wapas laut rahi thi Ruhi ko dhundte hue, andar Ruhi ki maa ne Shweta se kaha ke Ruhi ghar par nahin hai iss liye wo wapas kitchen mein arahi thi aur jaise Abhi ko dekha wahin ruk gayi jahan reach hui thi achanak! Phir zor se “Abhiiiiiiii” chilaate hue usske taraf badhi donon baahon ko khole to Abhi apne tangon par baith gaya usske nanhi baahon ko apne kaandon par lene ke liye….

Tab tak Manoj toilet gaya hua tha aur ussne andar se Shweta ko Abhi ka naam utna zor se chillaate hue suna to ussko taahjub hua ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi kitchen mein agayi thi. Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko wo plastic bag thama diya aur tangon par baithe hue baby Shweta ke hug mein gum raha. Ussko zor se seene se lagaya hua tha. Dada ji bhi aaye apni Tv program chorr kar aur Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh kar bola;

“Bahot lagao ho gaya isski Abhi ke saath, ho bhi kyun nahin Abhi bada pyara bacha khud hai”

Iss baat ko Manoj ne suna kyunke tab tak wo baahar nikal chuka tha toilet se aur khada Shweta ko Abhi ke baahon mein dekh raha tha, aur muskura raha tha Ruhi ko aur apni maa ko dekhte hue. Ussne ishaare se Ruhi se pucha ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise. To Ruhi ne phusphussate hue kaha,

“aaj hamare yahan rahega!”

To manoj Ruhi ko dekh kar hanssa aur andar chala gaya.

Tab Ruhi ne Shweta se kaha,

“Ari wah re Shwetu, ab bhi mujhse nahin mili tu, phukaar to mujhe rahi thi aur Abhi ke paas chali gayi jao main tumse baat nahin karungi, katti!”

Shweta ne Ruhi ke taraf dekh kar ‘hihihi” kiya aur Abhi ke sar ke baalon par haath ferrte hue kaha,

“Aap ke baal bhi bheeg gaye hai aap baahar the nah? Manoj bhai ke baal bhi bheeg gaye main nahin bheegi bilkool!”

To Abhi ne Shweta ko chumte hue kaha,

“Hmm sach hai; jao ab tum apni Ruhi didi ke paas varna wo tumse baat bhi nahin karegi aur dekho usske paas kitne saare cakes hein wo tumko nahin degi!”

Shweta nahin chorr rahi thi Abhi ko aur kaha,

“naiii main aap ke saat hi rahungi, aap aaj yahin rahoge?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar Ruhi ke taraf dekha, phir usski maa ko dekha, donon bade pyar se Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh rahe the aas paas khade, Dadaji bhi wahin khada dekh raha tha, uss waqt Abhi aur Shweta main attraction bane hue the kitchen mein.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pyar se jawaab diya ke haan aaj wo yahin rukega. Tab tak ek towel se apne baal ko ponchte hue Manoj ghar se kitchen mein aya aur Ruhi se kaha,

“tum kab jaogi shooting dekhne, jaogi bhi ya nahin?!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue apne kaandhon ko uchkaya, to Ruhi ki maa ne manoj se kaha,

“Abhi ko towel dedo, dekho usske baal bhi bheege hue hein!”

To Manoj aur Abhi ne ek dusre ko dekha aur ussne Abhi ko muskuraate hue towel diya….. Abhi ne towel se apne baal par rub kiya to Shweta ne kaha,

“Mujhe do main ponchti hoon!”

Ab Abhi ek to tangon par baitha hua tha, ab Shweta ne usske haath se towel le liya to Abhi ko apne sar ko aur niche jhukana para taake Shweta usske baal ko rub kare towel se…..

Manoj wapas andar chala gaya TV dekhne, aur dada ji bhi usske piche gaya.

Kitchen mein Ruhi ne Shweta ke haath se towel liya aur ussne Abhi ke baalon mein towel rub kiya usske baal sukhaane ke liye. Abhi ke sar par bahot baal the, usske baal bhi thick the aur usska hairstyle khubsurat tha jiss se usska look aur bhi behtar hota tha. bahot baal the Abhi ke sar par, full kale baal jo usske gore rang ko bada suit karta tha. Ruhi jab usske sar ko rub kar rahi thi to Shweta Abhi ke kaan ko apne muthi mein pakar kar noch rahi thi, jaise ek khilona tha abhi ke kaan, aur Ruhi ne Shweta ke muthi par chotta sa chamaat lagate hue kaha,

“kyun mere Abhi ke kaan noch rahi ho tum!”

Abhi ko wo moment bahot pyara lag raha tha ke Ruhi usske baalon mein towel rub kar rahi thi, ussko lag raha tha wo apne ghar mein hai aur usski patni wo sab kar raha tha…..

Shweta ne jawaab diya Ruhi ko,

“kia yeh aap ki Abhi hai? Kyun yeh aap ka Abhi hai didi?!”

To jaldi se Ruhi ne Shweta ke munh par apne haath rakha taake andar se Manoj usski awaaz nah sunein, aur Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi.

Ab Manoj se kyun Ruhi, Abhi ke saath apna rishta chhupa rahi thi yeh wohi jaane, magar Manoj ko sab dikh to raha tha kyunke shuru se jab bhi Abhi aur Ruhi baat karte ya aas paas hote the to Manoj donon ko dekh kar muskurata tha hamesha, matlab ussko personally pata tha ke donon ek dusre ko pasand karte hein, phir bhi pata nahin kyun Manoj se Ruhi ya to darrti thi ya chhupana chahti thi. Manoj Ruhi ka bada bhai tha, ghar ka bada beta tha, Mahesh, Ruhi se chhota tha, aur badi behen jisski shadi ho chuki hai wo Manoj ke baad thi. Matlab Manoj pehla aulad tha uss family ka.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne Ruhi se ahiste se kaha ke ussko nahana hai, aur underwear nahin hai usske paas, aur raat ko sone ke liye kapde bhi nahin hai.

To Ruhi ne yeh baat apni maa se kaha to maa ne Mahesh ka ek underwear, short aur Tshirt diya Abhi ko.

Jab Abhi nahane jaa raha tha thik tabhi Manoj bhi apne kamre se nikla towel aur underwear ke saath, aur dekha Abhi nahane jaa raha hai to Abhi se kaha,

“okay pehle tum ho aao,” Aur Abhi ne kaha, “nahin its okay pehle tum ho aao tab main naha lunga”

Magar aakhir mein Abhi hi gaya nahane.

Jab Abhi naha raha tha tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke saamne apni maa se sawaal kiya,

“Meri samajh mein nahin araha ke kyun aur kaise aaj Abhi hamare yahan thehra hai, aap samjao mujhe maa!”

Maa ne Ruhi ko dekha aur Ruhi apni maa ko. To Manoj ne Ruhi se pucha,

“Tu bata sakti hai? Kia yeh tere kehne par ruka hai? Ya tere liye ruka hai?!”

Maa ne jawaab diya,

“are ahin ussko late ho gaya tha aaj aur usske sheher jaane wale buses miss ho gaye to main ne hi kaha ke kyun taxi ko pata nahin kitna paisa dena padega, to hamare yahan ruk jaaye!”

Manoj ne phir bhi Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Magar tu badi khush ho rahi ke wo yahan thehra hai kyun? Kahan gaye the tum donon mere ghar aane se pehle?!”

Ruhi sar jhukaaye hue niche dekh kar hanssi aur kaha,

“wo apne ghar phone karke bataane gaye the ke wo aaj ghar nahin arahe hein!”

Tab Manoj ne kaha,

“magar usska taxi ka bhaada to Mehboob ko dena chahiye tha nah? ya ussko Mehboob ke yahan rukna tha hamare ghar kyun aya yeh jaanna chahta hoon main!”

Maa ne kaha,

“are tum kyun itne sawaal karne lage main ne khud ussko yahan rukne ke liye kaha kaun si badi baat ho gayi?”

Tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue hi kaha,

“badi baat yeh hai ke Ruhi ke liye ruka hamare yahan wo aur Ruhi khush hai ke Mehboob ke bajae hamare yahan ruka!”

Ruhi ne dhime awaaz mein kaha,

“To kia hua bhai?!”

Manoj: “kia lagta hai wo tera?!”

Ruhi: “kuch nahin!”

Manoj: “to tujhe kyun Khushi hai ke wo hamare yahan ruke?!”

Ruhi: “main ne kab kaha ke mujhe Khushi hai?!”

Manoj: “dikh raha hai mujhe!”

Maa ne donon ko rokte hue kaha

“Chhup ho jao tum donon, are Manoj donon dost hein, humumar hein ek dusre se baatein karte hein din mein ek dusre se jaan pehchaan ho gaye hein to kia ho gaya?!”

Manoj: “maa ya aur koyi baat hai? Main kuch aisi waisi baat nahin sunna chahta hoon, agar mujhe kuch aisi waisi baat ka pata baad mein chala to mujhse bura koyi nahin hoga keh deta hoon. Aaj ruk gaya hai, ghar aaye mehmaan ko kuch nahin keh sakta, magar khabardaar agar aayinda aisa hua to!”

Itna kehkar Manoj wahan se nikal gaya aur Ruhi rone lagi apni maa ke seene se lag kar. Maa ne uss se kaha,

“Chhup kar wo aisa hi hai usski fikar mat kar…. “

Dinner ke time sab kitchen mein ekatha hue. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi uss se doorie kiye hue hein. Abhi baar baar Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha aur ussko acha nahin lag raha tha ke Ruhi uss se door hai. Ruhi ko bhi pata tha ke Abhi ko acha nahin lag raha hoga to usska mann behlaane ke liye ussne Shweta ko Abhi ke paas jaane ko kaha dhire se.

Shweta jab Abhi ke paas gayi to Abhi ke goad mein ghuss ke baith gayi, Ruhi aur usski maa dinner serve karne lage. Ruhi ne dhire dhire apne maa se kuch kaha serve karte waqt. Dada ji ko, Manoj ko aur khud maa ne apne liye serve kar liya table par. Abhi ko nahin serve kiya. To dada ji ne pucha,

“Are Abhi ko bhi khane do nah!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“hum kamre mein khayenge dada ji!”

Aur Manoj ne ek nazar Ruhi ko dekha magar kuch nahin kaha.

Ruhi ne tab uss din ki tarah khud ki aur Abhi ka khana apni room mein legayi aur Abhi ko aane ko kaha. Shweta Ruhi ke maa ke saath chali gayi. Aur Abhi gaya Ruhi ke room mein.

Abhi yehi to chahta tha, usski dili tamanna thi ke donon akele ek saath khana kaaye aur ussi kamre mein khane ka mann tha usse yehi baat Ruhi se kehne ko socha tha nahate waqt magar naha kar wapas nikla to mauka nahin mila ussko Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. To kitna khush hua yeh dekh kar ke Ruhi ne bhi bilkool wohi socha jo Abhi ke dil mein tha. Donon ke beech jaise ek anjana connection hota tha, Jo Abhi sochta hota tha wohi Ruhi bhi sochti thi. Donon ke beech ek gehra connection tha…. roohani thi ya kia tha magar donon ek dusre se jaise bandhe hue the kissi tarah se. Aisa Abhi ko lagta tha aur sochta tha wo.

Jab donon Ruhi ke kamre mein chale gaye to Manoj shuru hua kitchen mein.

“Yeh kia hai? Kyun ussko especial treatment diya ja raha hai? Ghar ka jamai raja hai kia wo? Kyun Ruhi ke saath dinner karna chahiye usse? Hamaare saath yahan nahin kha sakta wo?!”

Dada ji ne kaha,

“are bache hein donon khane do ek saath kia burai hai?!”

Manoj ne apne dada ji ko bade bade aankhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“aap to chhup hi raho to behtar hai aap ki raye nahin maanga hai main ne!”

Budha dada chhup ho gaya, aur chup chaap khane laga. Usski jaise koyi ehmiyat hi nahin thi ghar mein. Budha tha 77 years ka, kamzor tha, patla sa tha, apne mein hi gum rehta tha magar ussko sab dikhta tha. Aur ussko pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko passand karte hein aur ussko rishta passand tha.magar uss ghar mein usska koyi nahin sunta tha, sab ussko ignore maarte the, jaise wo tha hi nahin uss ghar mein.

Manoj ne apni maa se dobara pucha ke kyun Abhi aur Ruhi kamre mein khaa rahe hein, to maa ne bhi chhutkara paane ke liye kaha,

“Tu khud jaa kar Ruhi se kyun nahin puchta? Puch sakta hai? Jaa wahan jaakar puch le Ruhi se”

Maa ko pata tha ke Manoj itna to budtamiz nahin ke ek ghar aaye mehmaan ke samne jaakar kuch ghalat karega.

Raat ko kuch der baad sab log TV ke saamne baite serial dekh rahe the, unn dinon “HUM LOG” chalta tha har roz, jiss mein Ashok kumar kahani ko bayan karta tha. Bahot prachalit aur successful serial raha tha wo. Ab yaad nahin ke repeat tha ya first telecast tha. – Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ke bagal mein baithe the aur chhupa kar haath pakre hue the ek dusre ke. Jiss jagah par Manoj baita tha ussko nazar nahin ata donon ka haath pakarna.

Phir baat hui ke Abhi kahan soyega. Abhi ka bada mann tha ke Ruhi ke saath soye magar ussko pata tha ke wo mumkin nahin tha. Phir bhi kuch pal wo Ruhi ke aaghosh mein beetana chahta tha.

Ruhi ne kaha ke dada ji ke kamre mein soyega Abhi. Wahan ek bed khali tha iss liye. Ruhi ko pata tha ke ussne kyun dada ji ke kamre mein Abhi ko sone ko kaha. Usska kamra thik Ruhi ke kamre ke side mein tha, aur kabhi bhi Abhi Ruhi ke paas aa sakta tha ya Ruhi usske paas jaa sakti thi.

Karib 10 baje Manoj chala gaya sone aur Ruhi ki maa bhi Shweta ko lekar chali gayi apni kamre mein. Dada ji, Ruhi aur Abhi baithe rahe TV ke saamne. Ab Abhi ne Ruhi ko bahon mein bhar liya tha, donon kiss karte to kabhi phussur phussur baat karte, ke suna dada ji armchair par kharaate maar rahe hein to Ruhi ne ussko jagaya aur apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha. Ussi time Abhi ke bed ko bhi tayaar kar diya Ruhi ne aur donon gaye Ruhi ke kamre mein usski bed par kuch der saath rehne ke liye.

Kuch der sath baith kar ek dusre ko caress kiya, kiss kiya aur Ruhi ne kaha ussko change karna hai, apni nightdress pehenna tha usse. To ussi kamre mein Abhi ke maujoodgi mein Ruhi ne dress chahge kiya magar almaari ke darwaze ko khol kar usski aadh mein change kiya…. Phir bhi Abhi usski jism ke kuch hisson ko dekh paa raha tha jaise usski peeth, kaandhe par bra ke strap aur Ruhi ne bra utara jo Abhi ne full dekha, aur wo utejit hua….

Jab Ruhi wapas aayi bed par apni nightdress mein, wo lamba tha full niche tak, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke andar bra nahin pehna tha Ruhi ne aur usski gori baahein dikh rahe the pura kyunke dress sleevless tha.

Abhi ne Ruhi ko jakar liya aur bed par leyta kar chumne laga. Ruhi ne surrender kar diya tha khud ko, jaise wo chahti thi ke Abhi uss se humbistar hoe. Abhi ka haath dhire dhire kiss ke dauraan Ruhi ke baazu ko sehlaate hue upar usski kaandhe tak ruke, phir dusra haath Ruhi ke dress ke niche usski tang par ferrte hue kaafi upar usski jaanghon tak pahunch chuka tha aur iss se pehle ke aur upar jata Ruhi ne usska haath rok liya apne haath ko upar se daba kar.

Abhi Ruhi ke upar chadh chuka tha, aur ab wo Ruhi ke gardan par apne jeeb ferr raha tha, Ruhi hanff rahi thi aur Abhi ka ek haath ab usski urujon ko daba raha tha, to Ruhi ne tadapti awaaz mein ahiste se kaha,

“please ruk jao, Stop Abhi mujh se saha nahin jaega, main khud ko rok nahin paungi, please stop nah!

Ruhi ke boobs ko aur dabaate hue Abhi ne ghurrate hue kaha,

“yehi to main chahta hoon sweetheart, khud ko mere hawaale kardo nah, puri tarah se….”

Abhi ki awaaz daba hua tha, usske bhi saansein jaise full rahe the, aur usska haath iss baar Ruhi ke dress ko itna upar utha chuka tha jiss se ruhi ke boobs Abhi ke saamne tha, tab Abhi ne niche ke taraf dekha to Ruhi ki pantie dikh raha tha, Abhi ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne usski nightdress ko utna upar utha liya tha….. Ruhi ko adhnangi dekh kar Abhi sharminda hua aur jaldi se usski dress ko niche karke ussko dhaank diya aur Ruhi se sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne Abhi ke gaal ko sehlaate hue pyar se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“You do not have to be sorry Abhi, I was letting you move up my dress, main aap rok nahin rahi thi, issme tumhari koyi ghalati nahin hai.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“mujhe hosh hi nahin tha ke main ne itna utha diya tha tumhare dress ko, pata hota to nahin karta…. Sorry again.”

Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekhte hue kaha,

“Abhi samajh lo ke yeh hamari first night hai shadi ke baad tab bhi tum aisa karte kia?!”

Abhi ne bade pyar se Ruhi ko chumte hue kaha,

“Tab baat aur hoti, tab main tumhare nahin apne ghar mein hota, aur tab sab official hota nah? hamare pas yeh sab karne ki license hota, abhi alag baat hai nah!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chaati ko chumte hue kaha,

“uss din to tum kuch ziada hi karna chahte the to aaj kyun nahin?!”

Abhi: “pata nahin aaj mahaul alag lag raha hai, uss din ghar par koyi nahin tha, aaj dimaagh mein yeh baat hai ke Manoj hai, aunty hai, Shweta bhi hai…to mahaul bilkool alag hai aaj aur upar se raat hai aaj!!”

Lag raha tha aaj Ruhi utejit ho rahi thi, kyunke ussne khud apne haath ko Abhi ke short ke upar usske ling ke upar rakha aur ek rijhaati hui ada mein kaha,

“uss din to aap ne mere haath ko khinch kar yahan rakha tha aur mujhse kuch aur chahte the aap, aaj wo nahin chahiye aap ko?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue, aur Ruhi ki tarasti nazron ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Sweetheart chahiye to mujhe bahot kuch, bahot ziada kuch chahiye tumse, tumhari gehraayi mein samaa jaane ko dil karta hai, tumhare saanson mein ghul jaane ko maan karta hai, tumhare aahon mein mil jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare dil mein utar jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare ek ek ang ko apne angon mein basaane ko mann karta hai magar darrta hoon; darta hoon ke tumko ruswa nah kardun, dar hai ke yeh sab karke tumko kho nah baithun, darrta hoon ke kal tum yeh nah kaho ke main ne ghalat faeda uthaya tumhara iss liye behtar hai ke uss kamre mein chala jaun ab!”

Abhi dada ji ke kamre mein sote hue soch raha tha ke aaj ussne Ruhi ko pyasa chorr diya. Usski pyas nahin bujhayi ussne. Ruhi pyasi thi isska ehsaas ho raha tha Abhi ko.

Abhi gehri neendh mein thi, bich raat mein Ruhi teen baar usske paas aayi thi isska Abhi ko bilkool pata nahin chala, pata chala to yeh ke Ruhi ussko subha 6 baje jaga rahi thi uthne ke liye, kaam par jaane ke liye.

To be continued…. (3520 words)

Badhya aur majedar update.
Shweta as usual too cute the darling. Manoj ko aate dekh kar bus ke piche chhupna majrdar tha.
Phir abhi ka shweta se milna... Ruhi ka kehna uss se ke mere Abhi ka jaan mat nocho aur Shweta ka puchna k aap usski Abhi ho is too cute.
Manoj ka sawal karna aur eiteaj karna k kyun Abhi wahan ruka hai aur Mehboob k yahan rukna tha usse - wo sahi bhi hai. Manoj ka badon se baat karna very bad.
Baad mein Ruhi aur Abhi ka romance jabardast. Nighty pehena Abhi ke saamne superb.
Phir Abhi ka kych mat karna fantastic.
Shaandar update bhai. Afsos Ruhi pyasi reh gayi.
 

Vikram singh rana

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Update 25 Ruhi Reveals It

Shaam ke 5.15 se 6.45 tak Abhi ne Ruhi se baat kiye, aur usski maa sath thi uss waqt. Maa ki haaziri mein sab kuch kaha suna gaya, thoda English mein thoda hindi mein baatein kiye donon ne, rona dhona bhi hua, aur maa ne bhi beech beech mein baat kiye.

Mehboob ne jab dekha saare kaam karne wale chale gaye aur Abhi Ruhi ke kitchen ke chaukath par khada hai to pucha,

“are Abhi aaj ghar nahin jana hai kia tumko?”

Rahima ne Abhi ki jagah jawab diya apne pati ko,

“lagta hai aaj Abhi Ruhi ke saat dinner karke jaega ya ussi ke yahan rahega!”

Ruhi hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Mehboob ne kaha,

“Acha yeh baat hai, to thik hai kal subha phir sab se pehle kaam shuru kar dena tumko door se nahin ana padega.”

Aur Abhi ne Ruhi aur usski maa se kaha,

“Dekha, sahi to keh raha hai Mehboob, main yahin theher jaata hoon aaj ek jagah milega kia raat beetane ke liye?”

Donon maa beti hanss rahe the aur Ruhi ne thoda gambhirta se kaha,

“Aap sapnon ki dunya se nikaliye nah Abhi main ne aap se kaha nah ke it’s too late now main kissi aur ki amaanat hoon!”

Abhi ko thoda ghussa aya aur usska dil ne chaha ke chilla kar Ruhi se kahe “phir kia naatak kar rahi hai itne dinon se usske saath, kyun ussko kiss kiya kyun uss se milne aati rahi ghar ke piche, kyun ussko lunch par invite kiya, kyun ussko jeeb se chidhati hai kyun itna kuch kiya, khilwaad samajh rakah hai kia?!!”

Magar Abhi ne sayyam rakhte hue araam se kaha,

“please ghar ke piche aao nah tumse akele mein baat karni hai mujhe, bahot serious baatein karni hai.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nahin jo kuch kahna hai yahin kehiye aap.”

Abhi ne usske maa ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“Magar hum donon ke beech ki baatein hein tumhari mummy ki zaroorat nahin hai nah yaar!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“are meri mummy ko sab kuch pata hai nah usske saamne hum kuch bhi baat kar sakte hein!”

Aur mummy ji ne kaha,

“haan Abhi mere saamne baat karoge to koyi sawaal bhi nahi karega nah, agar Ruhi ke saath akele piche gaye to sawaal uthenge!”

To Abhi ne kaha okay thik hai aur baton baton mein aise hi ek ke baad ek baat nikalte gaye.

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap ko nahin yakeen ke koyi hai jo mera intezar kar raha hai to meri mummy se puch lijiye.”

Abhi ne usski maa ke taraf dekha to ussne kaha,

“Haan yeh sach hai, Ruhi ko propose kar diya gaya hai shadi ke liye humne ladke walon ko zubaan de diye hein to kuch nahin kar sakte nah ab!”

Abhi bhi serious hua aur kaha,

“Main yakeen nahin karta,yeh sab aap donon ne milkar khichdi pakaaye hue hein hai nah?!”

Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue jaise usski haar par khush ho rahi thi jab usski mummy ne wo sab kuch kaha to. Aur Ruhi boli,

“kia meri maa aap se jhoot bolegi?”

Abhi: “haan jaise subha kaha tha ke tum apni nani ke ghar chali gayi ho!”

Abhi ne uss aadmi ke baare mein pucha, to Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo wahin ka rehne wala hai jahan isski naani rehti hai.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Aap Ruhi ko France bhej rahi ho, itni door aap ko pata bhi hai wahan isski kia haal ho sakta hai?!”

Mummy ji ne kaha,

“khair dekhte hein isski kismat mein kia hai, Ruhi ko hamesha se foreign jaane ki tamanna thi to jane diya jaye main ne socha.”

Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“issi liye main ne tumse kuch der pehle pucha tha kia tumko life ki luxuries chahiye?!”

Abhi bahot depressed feel karne laga tha yeh usski chehre se zaahir tha, jab bhi Abhi udaas hota ya koyi bhi chiz ussko pareshan karta to Abhi ke chehre pe saaf nazar ata tha aur wo Ruhi ko achi tarah se pata tha, wo Abhi ke chehre mein hi dekhe jaa rahi thi, ussko pata tha ke Abhi ko gehri choat lagi hai yeh sab baatein sunkar…… Abhi itna khushnuman insaan tha ke usske chehre par hamesha ek raunak hua karta tha, doston ke beech bhi koyi bhi usske chehre se pehchan leta tha jab bhi Abhi ko koyi pareshani hoti thi, kyunke Abhi tha hi aisa ke usska chehra sab bata deta tha. Abhi ek joyful happy going insaan tha. ab aise insaan ko choat lage to saaf dikhta hai.

To Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekh kar samajh sakti thi ke Abhi ghayal hua hai aur khud Ruhi ke aankhen bhar aayi abhi ko weise dekh kar.

Abhi ne sar jhuka liya tha aur kuch der tak kuch nahin bola, aur jab phir se Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to Ruhi ne ussko jeeb se chidhaya. Iss baar Abhi ko usska chidhana acha nahin laga, Abhi ne bahot seriously Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha ur ek gehra saans liya….

Bina kuch kahe Abhi ne apne kadam ko jaane ke liye moda, sar jhukaate hue to Ruhi ki maa ne usskko roka yeh kehte hue,

“are ruko to, abhi sirf 15 mins baat kiye hein aur jaane lage thehro to aur baatein karte hein nah!”

Abhi ne dabbe awaaz mein kaha,

“Ab kia kehna baki hai aunty?!”

Abhi ne ek cigarette jalaya, aur Ruhi ko piche apne kamre ki khidki ke paas aane ko kaha. Magar usski maa ne kaha,

“nahin wo ab aap se akeli baat nahin karegi, jo kuch kehna hai mere saamne kehye nah aap!”

To bhi ne kaha,

“To aap bhi wahin aaiye usski kamre mein wahin baat karte hein nah yahan Mehboob aur Rahima hamaare baton ko sun sakte hein nah!”

To Abhi piche gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas aur dekha ke Ruhi wahan uss se pehle pahunch gayi hai aur apne donon kehuniyon ko khidki se tek kar sar baahar nikaal kar muskuraate hue Abhi ko aate hue dekh rahi thi…. Jab Abhi wahan reach hua to dekha usski maa usske piche khadi hai.

Abhi ne ruhi ke aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi ab main apne gharwalon se, Naina se, doston se kia kahunga?!”

Donon maa beti ne ek saath kaha,

“Yeh aap ki ghalati hai kyun sabko bataya aap ne?!”

Baatein gambhir hote gaye, Abhi bahut hi seriously baat kar raha tha, ussne apni maa ke baare mein kaha Ruhi ko, uss se kaha ke ussko usski maa ki jaisi saas life mein kahin nahin milegi, usskki maa itni achchi hai…..

Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ke thartharaate hue honth ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Ab yahan rona mat Abhi….”

Abhi ne kaha,

“nah, yahan nahin yeh tab hoga jab akele tanhaayi mein hunga tab…”

Jab Abhi ne weisa kaha to dekha ke Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aaye aur ansoo chalak gaye… Abhi ne turant apna haath badhaya usske chehre ke taraf aur Ruhi ne ek kadam piche kiya aur Abhi ne usski honton ko kaampte dekha…. Usski maa wahin rahi bina hille to Abhi ne usski maa se kaha,

“Ab aap mujhe yeh samjhao ke Ruhi kyun rone lagi? Dil mera tuta nah? dard mujhe hua, takliff mujhko ho rahi hai to Ruhi kyun ro rahi hai? Samjhaiye aap mujhe yeh baat! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to ussko kyun aise mere haal par rona ata?!”

Ruhi apni bed par leyt kar ro rahi thi apne aankhon se aansoo poncte hue, to Abhi ne ussko bulaya, paas aane ko kaha…. Aur kaha,

“Ab tumhi batao mujhe Ruhi, ke kyun rone lagi tum? Rona to mujhe tha nah? wo main ghar jaakar kar lunga ya bus mein jaate hue munh chhupa kar ro lunga magar tum kyun rone lagi agar mujhse pyar nahin hai to?!”

Ruhi ne aur zor se rona shuru kiya apni takiye mein munh dabaate hue to Abhi ke bhi aankhen bhar aaye aur chalak bhi gaye aur tadapti awaaz mein, rote hue Abhi ne kaha,

“aao nah Ruhi ek saath milkar rote hein aao rona share karte hein donon aah nah Ruhi!!”

Abhi Ruhi ko zorse apne seene se lagaana chahta tha uss waqt, magar wo ghar ke baahar tha aur Ruhi andar thi apni bed par thi to behte aansoowon se Abhi ne usski maa ko dekha aur kaha,

“Please aap piche wala darwaza open karo nah, main Ruhi ko hug karna chahta hoon chaahe wo aakhri baar hi kyun nah ho, kholo nah please….”

Ruhi ki maa ne nah mein sar hillaya magar Ruhi apne aansoo ponchte hue uth kar piche wale darwaze ko khol diya, to jhapat kar Abhi wahan gaya aur uss chawkat par Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhar kar rone laga… donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhade ro rahe the, maa dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Ruhi!! ahista sabko batana hai kia sssshhhh”

Aur maa ne uth kar darwaza band kiya aur donon ko bed par baithne ko kaha, khidki ke parde ko khinncha aur donon ko bilkool aahiste baat karne ko kaha, magar baat kahan donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rote jaa rahe the do chhote bachon ki tarah…..

Aur ab Ruhi ne kal ki tarah dobara apni maa ke saamne pucha,

“aap mere saare ghalatiyan maaf kar sakte ho Abhi?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke aankhon ko ponchte hue kaha,

“are baba kal keh diya nah HAAN” HAAN” HAAN” sab maaf kiya main ne kuch bhi ho!”

Tab Ruhi ne English mein baat kiye….

“And if I am not what I am looking to you, if I am someone else, different then?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”
To be continued…. (5,752 words from all 3 updates)
Hmmmmmmmmmm
Good update.....
But not satisfactory......
I mean......I'm a little disappointed from this update......

Ye to waise go gaya jaise aapne apni kisi ko excitement ke shikaar par chada diya or phir real baat jaise hee pata chali waise hee jameen se bhi neeche gira diya....

Pichle kaafi updates....se aap yahi bata rahe ho ki Ruhi ka koi raaz hai...jise ki wo chhupa rahi hai....OK
Lekin jab usne raaz ka khula sab kiya to....I mean really.....

Baat kare virginity ki to.....
Ye sach hai ki ak normal ladki.....bhale hee wo kisi bhi zamaane ki ho.....uske kai raaz ho sakte hai.....jinhe ki wo logo se chhupa na chahti hai....OR usme kuch galat nahi hai.....

Uske raaz hote hai Jaise ki.....love failure.....pregnancy.....abortion.....OR aaammm......physical harassment.....sexual assault.....premerital virginity lose... etc.....

OR wo unhe chhupa kar rakhti hai....OR wo sahi bhi hai..kyoki izzat bahut badi chij hai....ak ladki ke liye....
Iss baat ko mai to kya koi bhi ladka nahi samajh sakta.....bas ak ladki hee samajh sakti hai....

Lagbhag 75 % youth ke gf bf hope hai.....OR unme se max logo me physical relationship hota hai.....to unme to virginity ka koi issue hota hee nahi.....

Baat kare singles ki to....ladki ko agar mauka mile....ya phir uska dil mane ki karna hai...to konsi badi baat hai....
Agar kisi single ladke ko mauka mile to wo konsa piche hat jayega.....wo bhi karega hee na....
Phir unme bhi virginity ka koi matlab nahin hota.....


Ab baat kare story me current situation ki.....to....
Jab banda kah raha hai...ki bhai bhale hee tum vidhwa ho.....bhale hee tum divorcee ho....ya phir.....bachche ki maa.....
Use phir bhi accept hai.....you phir kya dikkat hai bhai....
Ab isme 2 situation hai.....
1 jab ye 3 me se ak bhi situation ho....to iska matlab hai ki virginity hona possible nahi.....agar baal vivah wala topic chhod de to....
2...lagta hai Ruhi ke kaan kam kaam karte hai....to usne ya to suna nahi.....
Ya phir samjha nahi.....
Iss baat mai me khud bhi KAAMDEV bhai ke comments se puri tarah salamat hu or agree bhi karta hu......
OR isiliye maine unka comment niche add kiya hai.....


SENSELESS.........ACTUALLY MEANINGLESS
when he is agry to marry her if she had a child, even if she is a divorcee, even if she is a widow
then what is the value of virginity...... thereafter
.................................
you haven't given the details of .........whatever ruhi and her mother said..............
but hinted ........ that she has a fiance...... her marriage is fixed

the big question.............. why her mother....... not only supported but promoted their affair........
if the fate was this,,,,,,,,,,,,knowingly

anyway...............waiting for the next

this twist is making the story a thriller with lot of drama, suspense and adventures
...................... emotional part is only belongs to abhi
i've no sympathy with crocodile tears of ruhi

Ab baat kare Ruhi ki maa ki...to....
Ye Ruhi ki advisor hai......protector hai....timer hai......gourd hai....ya or kuch hai......

Kabhi wo khud Ruhi ko ghar par akela chhod kar jaati hai....taaki abhi se mil le....
Kabhi kahti hai ki akele nahi mil sakte.....

Kabhi kahti hai iske saamne hee baat karo....OR jab Abhi jane lagta hai to use rokti bhi hai.....
Kal khud use ghar chhod a tha.....jab wo ghar nahi thi....aaj khud ki mojudgi me bhi gate kholne se mana kar rahi hai.....

Ye character puri tarah se out of my mind jaa raha hai.....totally senseless.......

Apne pura update normal rakha....lekin last virginity waali line ko bold kar diya.....
Like jaise readers ko shock dena chahte ho.....
But mujhe nahi lagta ki kisi ko shock to dur is se koi farak bhi pada hoga......

Ab baat kare abhi or Ruhi ke rone ki to Abhi ka to thik hai.....wo ro raha hai kyoki uska dil tuta hai.....
Lekin Ruhi kyo.....jabki use pata tha aisa hona hee hai.....


Or mera ak dusra nazariya bhi hai....OR wo ye ki ye sab very well planned tha.....OR kaafi suspicious bhi......

Aaj ka update mujhe laga ki aapne kaafi jaldi jaldi me likha hai.....aap ak bar khud ise dubara padhi ye.....mere kahne se.....ho sakta hai aapko bhi samajh aa jaaye....mera matlab......

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Thanks
 

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Hmmmmmmmmmm
Good update.....
But not satisfactory......
I mean......I'm a little disappointed from this update......

Ye to waise go gaya jaise aapne apni kisi ko excitement ke shikaar par chada diya or phir real baat jaise hee pata chali waise hee jameen se bhi neeche gira diya....

Pichle kaafi updates....se aap yahi bata rahe ho ki Ruhi ka koi raaz hai...jise ki wo chhupa rahi hai....OK
Lekin jab usne raaz ka khula sab kiya to....I mean really.....

Baat kare virginity ki to.....
Ye sach hai ki ak normal ladki.....bhale hee wo kisi bhi zamaane ki ho.....uske kai raaz ho sakte hai.....jinhe ki wo logo se chhupa na chahti hai....OR usme kuch galat nahi hai.....

Uske raaz hote hai Jaise ki.....love failure.....pregnancy.....abortion.....OR aaammm......physical harassment.....sexual assault.....premerital virginity lose... etc.....

OR wo unhe chhupa kar rakhti hai....OR wo sahi bhi hai..kyoki izzat bahut badi chij hai....ak ladki ke liye....
Iss baat ko mai to kya koi bhi ladka nahi samajh sakta.....bas ak ladki hee samajh sakti hai....

Lagbhag 75 % youth ke gf bf hope hai.....OR unme se max logo me physical relationship hota hai.....to unme to virginity ka koi issue hota hee nahi.....

Baat kare singles ki to....ladki ko agar mauka mile....ya phir uska dil mane ki karna hai...to konsi badi baat hai....
Agar kisi single ladke ko mauka mile to wo konsa piche hat jayega.....wo bhi karega hee na....
Phir unme bhi virginity ka koi matlab nahin hota.....


Ab baat kare story me current situation ki.....to....
Jab banda kah raha hai...ki bhai bhale hee tum vidhwa ho.....bhale hee tum divorcee ho....ya phir.....bachche ki maa.....
Use phir bhi accept hai.....you phir kya dikkat hai bhai....
Ab isme 2 situation hai.....
1 jab ye 3 me se ak bhi situation ho....to iska matlab hai ki virginity hona possible nahi.....agar baal vivah wala topic chhod de to....
2...lagta hai Ruhi ke kaan kam kaam karte hai....to usne ya to suna nahi.....
Ya phir samjha nahi.....
Iss baat mai me khud bhi KAAMDEV bhai ke comments se puri tarah salamat hu or agree bhi karta hu......
OR isiliye maine unka comment niche add kiya hai.....




Ab baat kare Ruhi ki maa ki...to....
Ye Ruhi ki advisor hai......protector hai....timer hai......gourd hai....ya or kuch hai......

Kabhi wo khud Ruhi ko ghar par akela chhod kar jaati hai....taaki abhi se mil le....
Kabhi kahti hai ki akele nahi mil sakte.....

Kabhi kahti hai iske saamne hee baat karo....OR jab Abhi jane lagta hai to use rokti bhi hai.....
Kal khud use ghar chhod a tha.....jab wo ghar nahi thi....aaj khud ki mojudgi me bhi gate kholne se mana kar rahi hai.....

Ye character puri tarah se out of my mind jaa raha hai.....totally senseless.......

Apne pura update normal rakha....lekin last virginity waali line ko bold kar diya.....
Like jaise readers ko shock dena chahte ho.....
But mujhe nahi lagta ki kisi ko shock to dur is se koi farak bhi pada hoga......

Ab baat kare abhi or Ruhi ke rone ki to Abhi ka to thik hai.....wo ro raha hai kyoki uska dil tuta hai.....
Lekin Ruhi kyo.....jabki use pata tha aisa hona hee hai.....


Or mera ak dusra nazariya bhi hai....OR wo ye ki ye sab very well planned tha.....OR kaafi suspicious bhi......

Aaj ka update mujhe laga ki aapne kaafi jaldi jaldi me likha hai.....aap ak bar khud ise dubara padhi ye.....mere kahne se.....ho sakta hai aapko bhi samajh aa jaaye....mera matlab......

Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....
Thanks

Iss review ka reply turant de deta hoon.
Tehe dil se shukriya Vikram bhai itni detailed aur analysed review k liye.
Jawaab mein aap ko ek do baat ka jawaab deta hoon.
1. Aap ne kaha k update main ne shayad jaldi mein likha aur laga jaise itne dinon se kissi ko intezaar karaya kissi chiz ka aur waqt aaya to niche gira diya..... jawab ye hai bhai - aap to parts mein update padh rahe ho nah bhai? Jab time mile to ek update ta 2 updates ko padh lete ho, magar bhai aap ne notice nahin kiya ke wo ek tripple update tha, 5700 words likh chuka tha main, thak chuka tha utna likh kar, agar update 26 bhi saath mein likh kar post karta to uss din update nahin post kar paata, issi liye uss update ko wahin rok diya varna update 26 ek saath ata aur aap ko shikayat ka mauka nahin milta.
2. Aap ne kaha ke Abhi ka rona thik tha kyunke usska dil tuta tha to rona laazmi tha, magar Ruhi kyun royi. Are bhai lagta hai aap ko aisi ladkiyon se abhi tak paala nahin pada jo baat baat par rote hein Ruhi unn mein se ek thi. Jab ussne dekha k Abhi rone wala hai jo usski maa ne kaha, tab Ruhi ko Abhi k dil tutne ka ehsaas hua to usska bhi rona laazmi hi tha kyunke ussko Abhi ki loss k liye rona araha tha. Aur jab ek tuta hua dil wala khud uss se kehta hai ke aao saath milkar rote hein to uss ladki ko aur rona nahin aega jab ussko pata hai k usski vajah se Abhi ka dil tuta hai? Ussko to rona bilkool ata aur shuru k updates mein bata diya gaya hai ke Ruhi choti choti baton mein ro deti thi aur ye choti baat nahin thi nah?
3. Ruhi ka kehna k wo virgin nahin jissko Kaamdev bhai ne senseless kaha usska jawab update 26 mein mil jaega aap ko. Ruhi uss waqt yehi bataane ko baithi thi ussko khud umeed nahin thi k uss de pehle Abhi usso wo sab keh dega..
4.mujhe ek baar phir update ko padhne ko kaha aap ne :D lagbhag 11 baar iss tripple update ko padh chuka hoon 5700 plus likha tha.....
5. Ruhi ki maa aisi hi hai, ussko koyi samajh nahin paya k kia karna chahti hai kia nahin aage aap aur confuse honge uss aurat se. She is never constant she is never sure of herself.
Anyhow Vikram bhai I hope main ne aap ke kuch baaton ko clear karne mein madad kiya.
Thanks bhai aise hi saath dete chalna, abhi aur bahot door tak chalna hai :D
 
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Update 27 Abhi Spent The Night At Ruhi’s

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.


Ab aaguey….

Jiss waqt donon bus ke piche uss darkhat ke paas kiss kar rahe the ek donon ko baahon mein bhade tabhi lane mein Shweta ki awaaz sunaayi diye kehte hue,

“naiii main nahin bheegi hoon aap ke sar ke baal bheeg gaye hein”

Ruhi darr gayi aur Abhi ko itna zor se jakra ke Abhi ko laga usski pasliyan tutne wale hein, to Ruhi ne darrte hue kaha,

“uff manoj bhai aur Shweta, agar humko yahan dekh liya to musibat ajaegi ab kia karen Abhi?!”

Abhi ne phusphusate hue kaha,

“Sshhhh andhera hai koyi humko nahin dekh paega, buss niche baith jao yahin aur bilkool khamosh raho, jab donon ghar ke andar chale jaenge tab hum unnke piche jaenge….”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko jakre hue hi baith gaye. Ab of course kyunke andhera tha aur donon buss ke uss taraf the, aur halki si barish bhi thi to Manoj tez kadmon se seedhe apne kitchen ke darwaze tak gaya bina idhar udhar dekhe aur Shweta ko utara kitchen mein…..

Utarte hi Shweta chillaayi,

“Ruhiiiiiiii didiiiiiiiiii main agayiiiiiiii”

Idhar Bus ke kone mein Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Ufff wo mera hi naam phukaar rahi hai, mujhko dhundne gayi hogi, chalo ab jaldi….”

To donon piche se gaye kitchen mein jaise daakhil hue Shweta andar se wapas laut rahi thi Ruhi ko dhundte hue, andar Ruhi ki maa ne Shweta se kaha ke Ruhi ghar par nahin hai iss liye wo wapas kitchen mein arahi thi aur jaise Abhi ko dekha wahin ruk gayi jahan reach hui thi achanak! Phir zor se “Abhiiiiiiii” chilaate hue usske taraf badhi donon baahon ko khole to Abhi apne tangon par baith gaya usske nanhi baahon ko apne kaandon par lene ke liye….

Tab tak Manoj toilet gaya hua tha aur ussne andar se Shweta ko Abhi ka naam utna zor se chillaate hue suna to ussko taahjub hua ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi kitchen mein agayi thi. Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko wo plastic bag thama diya aur tangon par baithe hue baby Shweta ke hug mein gum raha. Ussko zor se seene se lagaya hua tha. Dada ji bhi aaye apni Tv program chorr kar aur Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh kar bola;

“Bahot lagao ho gaya isski Abhi ke saath, ho bhi kyun nahin Abhi bada pyara bacha khud hai”

Iss baat ko Manoj ne suna kyunke tab tak wo baahar nikal chuka tha toilet se aur khada Shweta ko Abhi ke baahon mein dekh raha tha, aur muskura raha tha Ruhi ko aur apni maa ko dekhte hue. Ussne ishaare se Ruhi se pucha ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise. To Ruhi ne phusphussate hue kaha,

“aaj hamare yahan rahega!”

To manoj Ruhi ko dekh kar hanssa aur andar chala gaya.

Tab Ruhi ne Shweta se kaha,

“Ari wah re Shwetu, ab bhi mujhse nahin mili tu, phukaar to mujhe rahi thi aur Abhi ke paas chali gayi jao main tumse baat nahin karungi, katti!”

Shweta ne Ruhi ke taraf dekh kar ‘hihihi” kiya aur Abhi ke sar ke baalon par haath ferrte hue kaha,

“Aap ke baal bhi bheeg gaye hai aap baahar the nah? Manoj bhai ke baal bhi bheeg gaye main nahin bheegi bilkool!”

To Abhi ne Shweta ko chumte hue kaha,

“Hmm sach hai; jao ab tum apni Ruhi didi ke paas varna wo tumse baat bhi nahin karegi aur dekho usske paas kitne saare cakes hein wo tumko nahin degi!”

Shweta nahin chorr rahi thi Abhi ko aur kaha,

“naiii main aap ke saat hi rahungi, aap aaj yahin rahoge?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar Ruhi ke taraf dekha, phir usski maa ko dekha, donon bade pyar se Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh rahe the aas paas khade, Dadaji bhi wahin khada dekh raha tha, uss waqt Abhi aur Shweta main attraction bane hue the kitchen mein.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pyar se jawaab diya ke haan aaj wo yahin rukega. Tab tak ek towel se apne baal ko ponchte hue Manoj ghar se kitchen mein aya aur Ruhi se kaha,

“tum kab jaogi shooting dekhne, jaogi bhi ya nahin?!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue apne kaandhon ko uchkaya, to Ruhi ki maa ne manoj se kaha,

“Abhi ko towel dedo, dekho usske baal bhi bheege hue hein!”

To Manoj aur Abhi ne ek dusre ko dekha aur ussne Abhi ko muskuraate hue towel diya….. Abhi ne towel se apne baal par rub kiya to Shweta ne kaha,

“Mujhe do main ponchti hoon!”

Ab Abhi ek to tangon par baitha hua tha, ab Shweta ne usske haath se towel le liya to Abhi ko apne sar ko aur niche jhukana para taake Shweta usske baal ko rub kare towel se…..

Manoj wapas andar chala gaya TV dekhne, aur dada ji bhi usske piche gaya.

Kitchen mein Ruhi ne Shweta ke haath se towel liya aur ussne Abhi ke baalon mein towel rub kiya usske baal sukhaane ke liye. Abhi ke sar par bahot baal the, usske baal bhi thick the aur usska hairstyle khubsurat tha jiss se usska look aur bhi behtar hota tha. bahot baal the Abhi ke sar par, full kale baal jo usske gore rang ko bada suit karta tha. Ruhi jab usske sar ko rub kar rahi thi to Shweta Abhi ke kaan ko apne muthi mein pakar kar noch rahi thi, jaise ek khilona tha abhi ke kaan, aur Ruhi ne Shweta ke muthi par chotta sa chamaat lagate hue kaha,

“kyun mere Abhi ke kaan noch rahi ho tum!”

Abhi ko wo moment bahot pyara lag raha tha ke Ruhi usske baalon mein towel rub kar rahi thi, ussko lag raha tha wo apne ghar mein hai aur usski patni wo sab kar raha tha…..

Shweta ne jawaab diya Ruhi ko,

“kia yeh aap ki Abhi hai? Kyun yeh aap ka Abhi hai didi?!”

To jaldi se Ruhi ne Shweta ke munh par apne haath rakha taake andar se Manoj usski awaaz nah sunein, aur Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi.

Ab Manoj se kyun Ruhi, Abhi ke saath apna rishta chhupa rahi thi yeh wohi jaane, magar Manoj ko sab dikh to raha tha kyunke shuru se jab bhi Abhi aur Ruhi baat karte ya aas paas hote the to Manoj donon ko dekh kar muskurata tha hamesha, matlab ussko personally pata tha ke donon ek dusre ko pasand karte hein, phir bhi pata nahin kyun Manoj se Ruhi ya to darrti thi ya chhupana chahti thi. Manoj Ruhi ka bada bhai tha, ghar ka bada beta tha, Mahesh, Ruhi se chhota tha, aur badi behen jisski shadi ho chuki hai wo Manoj ke baad thi. Matlab Manoj pehla aulad tha uss family ka.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne Ruhi se ahiste se kaha ke ussko nahana hai, aur underwear nahin hai usske paas, aur raat ko sone ke liye kapde bhi nahin hai.

To Ruhi ne yeh baat apni maa se kaha to maa ne Mahesh ka ek underwear, short aur Tshirt diya Abhi ko.

Jab Abhi nahane jaa raha tha thik tabhi Manoj bhi apne kamre se nikla towel aur underwear ke saath, aur dekha Abhi nahane jaa raha hai to Abhi se kaha,

“okay pehle tum ho aao,” Aur Abhi ne kaha, “nahin its okay pehle tum ho aao tab main naha lunga”

Magar aakhir mein Abhi hi gaya nahane.

Jab Abhi naha raha tha tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke saamne apni maa se sawaal kiya,

“Meri samajh mein nahin araha ke kyun aur kaise aaj Abhi hamare yahan thehra hai, aap samjao mujhe maa!”

Maa ne Ruhi ko dekha aur Ruhi apni maa ko. To Manoj ne Ruhi se pucha,

“Tu bata sakti hai? Kia yeh tere kehne par ruka hai? Ya tere liye ruka hai?!”

Maa ne jawaab diya,

“are ahin ussko late ho gaya tha aaj aur usske sheher jaane wale buses miss ho gaye to main ne hi kaha ke kyun taxi ko pata nahin kitna paisa dena padega, to hamare yahan ruk jaaye!”

Manoj ne phir bhi Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Magar tu badi khush ho rahi ke wo yahan thehra hai kyun? Kahan gaye the tum donon mere ghar aane se pehle?!”

Ruhi sar jhukaaye hue niche dekh kar hanssi aur kaha,

“wo apne ghar phone karke bataane gaye the ke wo aaj ghar nahin arahe hein!”

Tab Manoj ne kaha,

“magar usska taxi ka bhaada to Mehboob ko dena chahiye tha nah? ya ussko Mehboob ke yahan rukna tha hamare ghar kyun aya yeh jaanna chahta hoon main!”

Maa ne kaha,

“are tum kyun itne sawaal karne lage main ne khud ussko yahan rukne ke liye kaha kaun si badi baat ho gayi?”

Tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue hi kaha,

“badi baat yeh hai ke Ruhi ke liye ruka hamare yahan wo aur Ruhi khush hai ke Mehboob ke bajae hamare yahan ruka!”

Ruhi ne dhime awaaz mein kaha,

“To kia hua bhai?!”

Manoj: “kia lagta hai wo tera?!”

Ruhi: “kuch nahin!”

Manoj: “to tujhe kyun Khushi hai ke wo hamare yahan ruke?!”

Ruhi: “main ne kab kaha ke mujhe Khushi hai?!”

Manoj: “dikh raha hai mujhe!”

Maa ne donon ko rokte hue kaha

“Chhup ho jao tum donon, are Manoj donon dost hein, humumar hein ek dusre se baatein karte hein din mein ek dusre se jaan pehchaan ho gaye hein to kia ho gaya?!”

Manoj: “maa ya aur koyi baat hai? Main kuch aisi waisi baat nahin sunna chahta hoon, agar mujhe kuch aisi waisi baat ka pata baad mein chala to mujhse bura koyi nahin hoga keh deta hoon. Aaj ruk gaya hai, ghar aaye mehmaan ko kuch nahin keh sakta, magar khabardaar agar aayinda aisa hua to!”

Itna kehkar Manoj wahan se nikal gaya aur Ruhi rone lagi apni maa ke seene se lag kar. Maa ne uss se kaha,

“Chhup kar wo aisa hi hai usski fikar mat kar…. “

Dinner ke time sab kitchen mein ekatha hue. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi uss se doorie kiye hue hein. Abhi baar baar Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha aur ussko acha nahin lag raha tha ke Ruhi uss se door hai. Ruhi ko bhi pata tha ke Abhi ko acha nahin lag raha hoga to usska mann behlaane ke liye ussne Shweta ko Abhi ke paas jaane ko kaha dhire se.

Shweta jab Abhi ke paas gayi to Abhi ke goad mein ghuss ke baith gayi, Ruhi aur usski maa dinner serve karne lage. Ruhi ne dhire dhire apne maa se kuch kaha serve karte waqt. Dada ji ko, Manoj ko aur khud maa ne apne liye serve kar liya table par. Abhi ko nahin serve kiya. To dada ji ne pucha,

“Are Abhi ko bhi khane do nah!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“hum kamre mein khayenge dada ji!”

Aur Manoj ne ek nazar Ruhi ko dekha magar kuch nahin kaha.

Ruhi ne tab uss din ki tarah khud ki aur Abhi ka khana apni room mein legayi aur Abhi ko aane ko kaha. Shweta Ruhi ke maa ke saath chali gayi. Aur Abhi gaya Ruhi ke room mein.

Abhi yehi to chahta tha, usski dili tamanna thi ke donon akele ek saath khana kaaye aur ussi kamre mein khane ka mann tha usse yehi baat Ruhi se kehne ko socha tha nahate waqt magar naha kar wapas nikla to mauka nahin mila ussko Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. To kitna khush hua yeh dekh kar ke Ruhi ne bhi bilkool wohi socha jo Abhi ke dil mein tha. Donon ke beech jaise ek anjana connection hota tha, Jo Abhi sochta hota tha wohi Ruhi bhi sochti thi. Donon ke beech ek gehra connection tha…. roohani thi ya kia tha magar donon ek dusre se jaise bandhe hue the kissi tarah se. Aisa Abhi ko lagta tha aur sochta tha wo.

Jab donon Ruhi ke kamre mein chale gaye to Manoj shuru hua kitchen mein.

“Yeh kia hai? Kyun ussko especial treatment diya ja raha hai? Ghar ka jamai raja hai kia wo? Kyun Ruhi ke saath dinner karna chahiye usse? Hamaare saath yahan nahin kha sakta wo?!”

Dada ji ne kaha,

“are bache hein donon khane do ek saath kia burai hai?!”

Manoj ne apne dada ji ko bade bade aankhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“aap to chhup hi raho to behtar hai aap ki raye nahin maanga hai main ne!”

Budha dada chhup ho gaya, aur chup chaap khane laga. Usski jaise koyi ehmiyat hi nahin thi ghar mein. Budha tha 77 years ka, kamzor tha, patla sa tha, apne mein hi gum rehta tha magar ussko sab dikhta tha. Aur ussko pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko passand karte hein aur ussko rishta passand tha.magar uss ghar mein usska koyi nahin sunta tha, sab ussko ignore maarte the, jaise wo tha hi nahin uss ghar mein.

Manoj ne apni maa se dobara pucha ke kyun Abhi aur Ruhi kamre mein khaa rahe hein, to maa ne bhi chhutkara paane ke liye kaha,

“Tu khud jaa kar Ruhi se kyun nahin puchta? Puch sakta hai? Jaa wahan jaakar puch le Ruhi se”

Maa ko pata tha ke Manoj itna to budtamiz nahin ke ek ghar aaye mehmaan ke samne jaakar kuch ghalat karega.

Raat ko kuch der baad sab log TV ke saamne baite serial dekh rahe the, unn dinon “HUM LOG” chalta tha har roz, jiss mein Ashok kumar kahani ko bayan karta tha. Bahot prachalit aur successful serial raha tha wo. Ab yaad nahin ke repeat tha ya first telecast tha. – Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ke bagal mein baithe the aur chhupa kar haath pakre hue the ek dusre ke. Jiss jagah par Manoj baita tha ussko nazar nahin ata donon ka haath pakarna.

Phir baat hui ke Abhi kahan soyega. Abhi ka bada mann tha ke Ruhi ke saath soye magar ussko pata tha ke wo mumkin nahin tha. Phir bhi kuch pal wo Ruhi ke aaghosh mein beetana chahta tha.

Ruhi ne kaha ke dada ji ke kamre mein soyega Abhi. Wahan ek bed khali tha iss liye. Ruhi ko pata tha ke ussne kyun dada ji ke kamre mein Abhi ko sone ko kaha. Usska kamra thik Ruhi ke kamre ke side mein tha, aur kabhi bhi Abhi Ruhi ke paas aa sakta tha ya Ruhi usske paas jaa sakti thi.

Karib 10 baje Manoj chala gaya sone aur Ruhi ki maa bhi Shweta ko lekar chali gayi apni kamre mein. Dada ji, Ruhi aur Abhi baithe rahe TV ke saamne. Ab Abhi ne Ruhi ko bahon mein bhar liya tha, donon kiss karte to kabhi phussur phussur baat karte, ke suna dada ji armchair par kharaate maar rahe hein to Ruhi ne ussko jagaya aur apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha. Ussi time Abhi ke bed ko bhi tayaar kar diya Ruhi ne aur donon gaye Ruhi ke kamre mein usski bed par kuch der saath rehne ke liye.

Kuch der sath baith kar ek dusre ko caress kiya, kiss kiya aur Ruhi ne kaha ussko change karna hai, apni nightdress pehenna tha usse. To ussi kamre mein Abhi ke maujoodgi mein Ruhi ne dress chahge kiya magar almaari ke darwaze ko khol kar usski aadh mein change kiya…. Phir bhi Abhi usski jism ke kuch hisson ko dekh paa raha tha jaise usski peeth, kaandhe par bra ke strap aur Ruhi ne bra utara jo Abhi ne full dekha, aur wo utejit hua….

Jab Ruhi wapas aayi bed par apni nightdress mein, wo lamba tha full niche tak, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke andar bra nahin pehna tha Ruhi ne aur usski gori baahein dikh rahe the pura kyunke dress sleevless tha.

Abhi ne Ruhi ko jakar liya aur bed par leyta kar chumne laga. Ruhi ne surrender kar diya tha khud ko, jaise wo chahti thi ke Abhi uss se humbistar hoe. Abhi ka haath dhire dhire kiss ke dauraan Ruhi ke baazu ko sehlaate hue upar usski kaandhe tak ruke, phir dusra haath Ruhi ke dress ke niche usski tang par ferrte hue kaafi upar usski jaanghon tak pahunch chuka tha aur iss se pehle ke aur upar jata Ruhi ne usska haath rok liya apne haath ko upar se daba kar.

Abhi Ruhi ke upar chadh chuka tha, aur ab wo Ruhi ke gardan par apne jeeb ferr raha tha, Ruhi hanff rahi thi aur Abhi ka ek haath ab usski urujon ko daba raha tha, to Ruhi ne tadapti awaaz mein ahiste se kaha,

“please ruk jao, Stop Abhi mujh se saha nahin jaega, main khud ko rok nahin paungi, please stop nah!

Ruhi ke boobs ko aur dabaate hue Abhi ne ghurrate hue kaha,

“yehi to main chahta hoon sweetheart, khud ko mere hawaale kardo nah, puri tarah se….”

Abhi ki awaaz daba hua tha, usske bhi saansein jaise full rahe the, aur usska haath iss baar Ruhi ke dress ko itna upar utha chuka tha jiss se ruhi ke boobs Abhi ke saamne tha, tab Abhi ne niche ke taraf dekha to Ruhi ki pantie dikh raha tha, Abhi ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne usski nightdress ko utna upar utha liya tha….. Ruhi ko adhnangi dekh kar Abhi sharminda hua aur jaldi se usski dress ko niche karke ussko dhaank diya aur Ruhi se sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne Abhi ke gaal ko sehlaate hue pyar se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“You do not have to be sorry Abhi, I was letting you move up my dress, main aap rok nahin rahi thi, issme tumhari koyi ghalati nahin hai.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“mujhe hosh hi nahin tha ke main ne itna utha diya tha tumhare dress ko, pata hota to nahin karta…. Sorry again.”

Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekhte hue kaha,

“Abhi samajh lo ke yeh hamari first night hai shadi ke baad tab bhi tum aisa karte kia?!”

Abhi ne bade pyar se Ruhi ko chumte hue kaha,

“Tab baat aur hoti, tab main tumhare nahin apne ghar mein hota, aur tab sab official hota nah? hamare pas yeh sab karne ki license hota, abhi alag baat hai nah!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chaati ko chumte hue kaha,

“uss din to tum kuch ziada hi karna chahte the to aaj kyun nahin?!”

Abhi: “pata nahin aaj mahaul alag lag raha hai, uss din ghar par koyi nahin tha, aaj dimaagh mein yeh baat hai ke Manoj hai, aunty hai, Shweta bhi hai…to mahaul bilkool alag hai aaj aur upar se raat hai aaj!!”

Lag raha tha aaj Ruhi utejit ho rahi thi, kyunke ussne khud apne haath ko Abhi ke short ke upar usske ling ke upar rakha aur ek rijhaati hui ada mein kaha,

“uss din to aap ne mere haath ko khinch kar yahan rakha tha aur mujhse kuch aur chahte the aap, aaj wo nahin chahiye aap ko?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue, aur Ruhi ki tarasti nazron ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Sweetheart chahiye to mujhe bahot kuch, bahot ziada kuch chahiye tumse, tumhari gehraayi mein samaa jaane ko dil karta hai, tumhare saanson mein ghul jaane ko maan karta hai, tumhare aahon mein mil jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare dil mein utar jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare ek ek ang ko apne angon mein basaane ko mann karta hai magar darrta hoon; darta hoon ke tumko ruswa nah kardun, dar hai ke yeh sab karke tumko kho nah baithun, darrta hoon ke kal tum yeh nah kaho ke main ne ghalat faeda uthaya tumhara iss liye behtar hai ke uss kamre mein chala jaun ab!”

Abhi dada ji ke kamre mein sote hue soch raha tha ke aaj ussne Ruhi ko pyasa chorr diya. Usski pyas nahin bujhayi ussne. Ruhi pyasi thi isska ehsaas ho raha tha Abhi ko.

Abhi gehri neendh mein thi, bich raat mein Ruhi teen baar usske paas aayi thi isska Abhi ko bilkool pata nahin chala, pata chala to yeh ke Ruhi ussko subha 6 baje jaga rahi thi uthne ke liye, kaam par jaane ke liye.

To be continued…. (3520 words)

Beautiful update mate. Worth another read. Beautifully narrated and described.
Man, this cutie pie Shweta is such a darling and you really write so cute about her. Her lines are so very well thought and placed. Superb. She is a love. And she loves Abhi so much that she neglects Ruhi when Abhi is around. Funny, interesting and lovely all that she says and does. And I hv noticed that you really give a very particular attention each time that you write about her.
Yes she was the main attention in the kitchen with Abhi its true.
Manoj seems to be upset as Abhi is staying at their place. He seems arrogant with elders. Being the elder son of the house may be he has the right to. But to talk that way to grandfather, I condemn that.
The mother at present seems to be favouring Abhi and Ruhi. But as I said in earlier reviews that is may be only because she is sympathizing with both as they cried so much in her presence. Buy I dont feel she will support them ahead, I dont know why I am feeling like that regarding her.
The sweet moments Abhi and Ruhi had together was too good. But it was obvious that Ruhi was seducing Abhi by getting undressed in his presence, removing her bra etc... I thought there was going to be an erotic scene but Abhi decided otherwise which I think was intelligent from him.
Ruhi visited him thrice in the middle of the night shows the urge Ruhi had to get Abhi on bed. This part makes me think odd of Ruhi.
Anyhow beautiful update and I really liked it.
Thanks very much mate.
 

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Iss review ka reply turant de deta hoon.
Tehe dil se shukriya Vikram bhai itni detailed aur analysed review k liye.
Jawaab mein aap ko ek do baat ka jawaab deta hoon.
1. Aap ne kaha k update main ne shayad jaldi mein likha aur laga jaise itne dinon se kissi ko intezaar karaya kissi chiz ka aur waqt aaya to niche gira diya..... jawab ye hai bhai - aap to parts mein update padh rahe ho nah bhai? Jab time mile to ek update ta 2 updates ko padh lete ho, magar bhai aap ne notice nahin kiya ke wo ek tripple update tha, 5700 words likh chuka tha main, thak chuka tha utna likh kar, agar update 26 bhi saath mein likh kar post karta to uss din update nahin post kar paata, issi liye uss update ko wahin rok diya varna update 26 ek saath ata aur aap ko shikayat ka mauka nahin milta.
2. Aap ne kaha ke Abhi ka rona thik tha kyunke usska dil tuta tha to rona laazmi tha, magat Ruhi kyun royi. Ate bhai lagta hai aap ko aisi ladkiyon se abhi tak paala nahin pada jo baat baat par rote hein Ruhi unn mein se ek thi. Jab ussne dekha k Abhi rone wala hai jo usski maa ne kaha, tab Ruhi ko Abhi k dil tutne ka ehsaan hua to usska bhi rona laazmi hi tha kyunke ussko Abhi ki loss k liye rona araha tha. Aur jab ek tuta hua dil wala khud uss se kehta hai ke aao saath milkar rote hein to uss ladki ko aur rona nahin aegs jab ussko pata hai k usski vajah se Abhi ka dil tuta hai? Ussko to rona bilkool ata aur shuru k updates mein bata diya gaya hai ke Ruhi choti choti baton mein to deti thi aur choti baat nahin thi nah?
3. Ruhi ka kehna k wo virgin nahin jissko Kaamdev bhai ne senseless kaha usska jawab update 26 mein mil jaega aap ko. Ruhi uss waqt yehi bataane ko baithi thi ussko khud umeed nahin thi k uss de pehle Abhi usso wo sab keh dega..
4.mujhe ek baar phir update ko padhne ko kaha aap ne :D lagbhag 11 baar iss tripple update ko padh chuka hoon 5700 plus likha tha.....
5. Ruhi ki maa aisi hi hai, ussko koyi samajh nahin paya k kia karna chahti hai kia nahin aage aap aur confuse honge uss aurat se. She is never constant she is never sure of herself.
Anyhow Vikram bhai I hope main ne aap ke kuch baaton ko clear karne mein madad kiya.
Thanks bhai aise hi saath dete chalna, abhi aur bahot door tak chalna hai :D
1....To bhai 3 updates ak saath dene ki kya jarurate thi.....aap agar week me 3 update bhi denge to bhi thik hai.....
Aise khud ko takleef dekar likhe few to kaha tak thik hai.....
OR mana ki aapne 5700 words likhe hai....lekin ye aapka khud ka faisla tha....kisi ne kaha nahi tha.....
I mean....aaram se sab chalne do.....kyo bhaag rahe ho yaar....na to aap jaldi karo ....Na hum.....

Iss se safar lamba chalega or maza bhi aayega....

Ak update aadmi deta hai to wo usme bhi kaafi soch kar chalta hai.....kabhi kabhi bahut jyada dimaag laga kar 2 de deta hai....
Lekin aapne 3 updates diye.....OR ye baat to nai daave se kah sakaratmak hu ki least mai aapne ye hee socha hoga....ki bas jaldi se khatm karta hu ise.....
Aap or aapka dimaag dono thak gaye honge....

2....bhai me bhi insan hu or mera bhi vast a pada hai ladkiyon se.....tabhi to aapse ak bar kaha tha ki iss story se mai khud ko relate kar paa raha hu.....

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Update 26 The Unexpected Happened

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”

Ab aaguey….

Ruhi ki uss baat ko sunkar Abhi ko nah shock laga, nah heyraan hua nah kuch kyunke Abhi ko yakeen ho gaya tha ke aisi hi koyi baat hogi jissko Ruhi “apni life ki ghalatti” kehti ya maanti thi. To bina soche turant on the spot Abhi ne kaha,

“Main tab bhi tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayyaar hoon Ruhi”

Ruhi kuch der khamosh rahi, tab pucha,

“Are you sure Abhi?”

Palak jhapakne se pehle Abhi ne kaha,

“YES I AM SURE A THOUSAND, A MILLION, A BILLION PERCENT SURE”

Aur Abhi ne tutant pucha,

“kia yehi vajah thi ke tum mere proposal ko refuse kar rahi thi?!”

Sar jhuaaye hue, zameen taakte hue, aankhon ko saaf karte hue Ruhi ne udaas awaaz mein kaha,

“haan”

Phir Abhi ke chehre mein ek chamak dikhaayi diya aur Khushi se pucha,

“Aur phir baaki jo kuch bhi tumne kaha ke kissi ka tumhara intezaar karna, wo Amit, wo abroad wala, sab planned tha nah? sab naatak the nah?!”

Ruhi thodi si hanssi, Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Now, please don’t tell this matter to anyone, I have not told anybody about it”

Abhi ne pucha,

“your relatives hereabout know about it?”

Ruhi: No, No, No one.”

Abhi: “your father?”

Ruhi: “Noooooo”

Abhi: “your bothers?”

Ruhi: “No Abhi not at all!!!”

Abhi: “hmm only your mother knows all!”

Ruhi: “No, even she does not know!”

Aur Ruhi ki maa uss waqt hanss rahi thi to lag raha tha ke wo donon ke baton ko samajh rahi thi halaan ke English mein baat kar rahe the donon.

To Abhi ne kaha,

“Now you must be lying, your mother must be aware of all, I am sure!”

Ruhi: “No Abhi, she is not aware, no one else know it!”

Phir kuch der kamre mein bilkool sannata ho gaya, khamoshi chah gayi, koyi kuch nahin bol raha tha, Abhi Ruhi ki saanson ko sun sakta tha uss waqt.

Ruhi ka haath Abhi ke haath mein tha, donon bed par baithe hue the, maa, do kadam bagal mein khadi donon ko dekh rahi thi. Baahar andhera hone laga tha, suraj dhal chuka tha, kamre mein thoda andhera hone laga tha…. Abhi ne ek haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, usski gardan ko khud se sataaya, usski gaal ko chuma, tab mudhkar usski maa ko dekha ek smile ke saath, aur Abhi uss baare mein Ruhi se swaaal karna chahta tha, socha ke puchein ya nahin puchein, mauka sahi tha uss topic par hi baat karne ko kyun ke wo topic cheda gaya tha, magar Abhi soch raha tha usske sawaal karne se Ruhi ko takliff ho sakta hai, phir socha ke abhi nahin pucha to kabhi bhi puchega tab bhi takliff hi hogi, to ya iss baat ko kabhi nah karen ya aaj hi sab puch kar khatam karen, to Abhi ne Ruhi se puchne hi jaa raha tha ke Ruhi ne kaha,

“aap ko aur kuch puchna hai to puchiye, main sab bataungi,

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Who did that to you? The one who is abroad?”

Ruhi ne sar jhukaaye hue hi jawaab diya,

“No, not he”

Abhi jhuk kar Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue phir pucha,

“when did that happen? Long time ago or recently?”

Ruhi: “A long time ago!”

Abhi: “then who did that?”

Ruh bahot upset dikh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Oh, I don’t want to talk about it, please.”

Abhi: “OKAY…NEVER MIND….. SO RUHI NOW ITS ALL OKAY BETWEEN ME AND YOU? ALL IS FINE? SEE I LOVE YOU DESPITE THAT, YOU MUST BE HAPPY RIGHT?”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur kaha,

“Maa andhera ho gaya light on karo nah mujhe Abhi ka chehra nahin dikh raha thik se!”

Usski maa ne light ko on kiya, aur chali gayi baaki ke Kamron mein light on karne tab Ruhi ne Abhi ko baahon bharkar kaha,

“yes, it’s all okay now Abhi. Thank you Abhi.”

Abhi ne ne usske peeth ko thapthapaate hue kaha,

“Dekho Ruhi ab mere tumhare beech mein koyi doorie nahin honi chahiye okay?”

Ruhi ne apni dheemi, meethi, pyari awaaz mein kaha,

“OKAY ABHI”

Aur baahar baarish sunaayi diye, to Ruhi ki maa wapas kamre mein aayi aur kaha,

“Baarish hone lagi, Manoj Shweta wapas nahin aaye Abhi tak, bheeg jayenge donon!”

Maghrib ki namaz ki azaan sunaayi diye phir, aur Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“Aazan ho rahi hai Mehboob masjid jaega ab!”

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Mehboob religious hai? Mujhe nahin pata tha din mein to bilkool nahin jata wo!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Sunset ke baad aur raat ki last prayer ko jaate jein wo.”

Tab Ruhi ki maa ne donon ko dekhte hue Abhi se kaha,

“Abhi tum kitne lambe ho aur Ruhi tumhare saamne kitni chhoti hai”

Abhi ne turant kaha,

“jisski biwi chhoti usska bu bada naam hai”

Iss par Ruhi hanssi aur Abhi ko maara usske haath par.

Phir Abhi ne continue kiya

“goad mein bithalo bachche ka kia kaam hai…”

Ruhi zor se hanssi aur phir Abhi ko maarna chaha magar Abhi wahan se hatt gaya to Ruhi ne ussko miss kiya iss liye aur bhi hanssne lagi….

Phir achanak Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha,

“Are you sure that you still love me despite that?... you see I do not want to deceive you that’s why it was my duty to tell you the truth”

Abhi ne phir usske kaandhe par haath rakh kar kahaa,

“yes sweetheart I love you and will always do, look Ruhi, I told you I am a very sentimental person, I need LOVE AND YOU WILL GIVE ME MUCH MUCH LOVE AND THAT LOVE WILL COVER EVERYTHING ELSE.”

Abhi ke baat ko sunkar Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YES.”

Abhi ne phir pucha,

“Can you give me that much love Ruhi?”

Ruhi kuch der khaamosh rahi, to Abhi ne sawaal ko dohraya, tab Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“YESSSS”

Abhi bahot hi khush hua, ussko jaise naachne ka mann kar raha tha, jhumne ko mann kar raha tha, socha Khushi se aaj bus mein safar karega….

Aur tab Abhi ne kaha,

“okay ab mujhe jana hoga, kaafi der ho gayi hai…”

Ruhi ne achanak Abhi ka haath zor se pakra aur udaas hokar kaha,

“Aap jaa rahe ho? Main ne socha aap rahoge, please aaj yahin theher jao nah please!”

Abhi ko heyraani hui aur Usski maa ke chehre mein dekhne laga. To maa ne kaha,

“thik hair reh jaiye aaj, kal chale jana nah!”

Abhi ne sapnon mein aisa kayi baar socha tha aur aaj usska sapna pura hote dikhaayi de raha tha ke wo Ruhi ke ghar mein raat guzaarega….. phir bhi ussne pucha,

“magar abhi Manoj aakar sawaal karega to kia jawaab denge ussko?!”

Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo aap mujh par chor do, wo kuch nahin kahega hum uss se kahenge ke aap ko rehne ka mann kiya buss aur phir dada ji hai nah ghar mein aur ussko to pata hai”

Tab Abhi ne kaha,

“mere ghar par sab intezaar karenge, yahan kiss ke paas phone hai main ghar phone karke bata dun ke kal ghar aunga….”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein ghaur se dekhte hue pucha,

“Aap ke yahan phone hai Abhi?”

Abhi: “lines lagaa rahe hein telecom waale ek do mahine mein lag jaega, main ne application kar diya hai, abhi paas ke dukaan mein phone karke ghar bataane ko kahunga.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Hum ne bhi apply kiya hua hai, papa Saudi Arabia se uss filling station wale ke yahan phone karta hai to humko weh log bulaate hein tab hum jaate hein papa se baat karne ke liye, chaliye aap uss dukaan se phone kar sakte ho jahan aap cigarette kharidne jaate ho……. Maa main Abhi ko phone karane lejaa rahi hoon!”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ghar se nikle, main road ke taraf jaate hue dikhe uss aangan mein jahan Abhi ne sapna dekha tha ke wo Ruhi ke saath wahan weise hi chalega kabhi. Andhera tha, street light to main road par tha uss aagan mein to nahin, to Ruhi ne chalte hue khud Abhi ke baazu ko pakra hua tha, wo Abhi ke right hand side mein thi to usske right arm ko apne donon haathon se thaame hue thi.

Abhi ko kitna achcha feel ho raha tha, usska dil machal raha tha wo itna khush tha ke ussko zoron se chilla kar apni Khushi ko izhaar karne ka mann kar raha tha uss waqt. Wo uss pal ko jee bhar ke jina chahta tha, Ruhi ko thaamna chahta tha magar Ruhi ne usske baazu pakre hue the aur wo ussko disturb nahin karna chahta tha.

Aur Abhi ne araam se aur dhimi awaaz mein jhuk kar Ruhi ne gardan ke paas apne munh ko laakar kaha,

“kitna romantic lag rahe honge hum donon iss waqt aise chalte hue, kaash koyi hum donon ki film utaarta aise, ya Manoj hamara ek photo leta iss position mein!”

Ruhi ne thoda sa darr dikhaate hue kaha,

“uff wo ata hi hoga Shweta ke saath, hum ussko cross kar sakte hein raaste par….”

Aur Ruhi ne turant Abhi ke baazu ko chorr diya.

Tab Abhi ne Ruhi ke kaandhe par hath rakh kar ussko khud se sataya, to Ruhi ne kaha,

“ofo chorro nah main road agaya, yahan kitne log honge, dekho dukaan wahan hai jahan se phone karna hai…”

Ruhi ne phir filling station ko dikhaate hue kaha,

“aur wo hai filling station, usska maalik piche rehta hai, wahin papa phone karta hai humko!”

{main ne sketch mein uss filling station ko lagana bhool gaya. Wo station main road par nikalte hi thik opposite mein hai Ruhi ke ghar se wo filling station dikhta hai, agar Ruhi apne kitchen ke chaukath par khadi hoti hai to seedha filling station ki maalik ka ghar, aur aadha filling station saamne dikhta hai main road ke uss paar --- yeh iss liye bata raha hoon kyunke uss filling station ke baare mein baad mein kuch part aane wala hai}

To Abhi aur Ruhi uss dukaan tak gaye, kuch log pee kar ladkhadaate hue dukan se nikal rahe the, kuch log pee rahe the kone mein, Ruhi Abhi ke piche hokar jaise usske piche chhup rahi thi wo sab dekhte hue.

Abhi ne phone kiya apne mohalle ki dukaan par aur by chance uss waqt usske pita wahin tha uss dukaan mein, wo bhi daru hi pine gaya hua tha udhar, to dukaandar ne Abhi se kaha ke usska pita wahin hai uss waqt to ussi ko phone diya baat karne ko.

Abhi ne apne pita se keh diya ke aaj wo ghar nahin araha kal sham ko aayega. Baap ne sawaal kiya ke kahan rehega kiss ke ghar, to Abhi ne kaha jisska bus bana raha hai ussi ke ghar par rukega aaj ki raat.

Phir Abhi ne Ruhi ke liye chocolates kharida, aur kuch snacks aur pucha ke Shweta kia passand karti hai, to Ruhi ne Abhi ko unn chizon ko dikhaya jo Shweta ko passand hai aur Abhi ne ek plastic bag bhar ke cakes aur sweets liya sabke liye, Ruhi aur usski maa ke liye ice creams bhi liye Abhi ne, aur apne liye cigarettes chhupa kar liya bina Ruhi ko dikhaaye.

Wapas aate hue Ruhi ne abhi se kaha,

“kitna kharch karte ho aap, itna kuch kharidne ki kia zaroorat thi, Rs.250 ke cakes hmmm?!”

Abhi ne buss Ruhi ko jakar liya aur us aangan mein donon ne ek dusre ke kamar mein haath daale hue chal kar ghar aaye….. Aur jab bus tak pahunche jahan Abhi har roz kaam karta tha to Ruhi ne kaha,

“rukiye nah ek baat bataati hoon aap ko….”

Abhi ruk gaya bus ke paas, to Ruhi ne Abhi ka haath khinch kar uss bade darkhat ke paas gayi aur Abhi ke gale mein apne bahon ko lapet kar kaha,

“Har shaam ko jab aap chale jaate ho nah to main yahan aakar aap ko yaad karti hoon, din bhar jo kuch aap ne kiya, kahan kahan kaam kiya sab unn jagahon par jaakar dekhti hoon ke Abhi aaj yahan kaam kar raha tha, yeh kar raha tha wo kar raha tha yahan se mujhko dekh raha tha…..”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhadte hue kaha,

“Ruhi tum bhi mere jaise feelings rakhti ho, are main ne tumko letter mein yeh sab kaha hai nah? Main bhi har subha ata hoon to tumko har uss jagah par feel karta hoon jahan jahan tum mujhe dikhti ho, yaar yeh hum donon ek jaise hein yaar!!”

Aur donon ne ek dusre ko uss darkhat ke niche kiss kiya. Ek lamba aur passionate kiss. Ruhi ko jaise Abhi ko chorrne ka mann hi nahin tha.

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.

To be continued…… (2307 words)
Woooooo hmmmm
Good update bhai.....

Aakhir Abhi or Ruhi ki baat clear ho hee gayi......good

Lekin bhai.....Ruhi ko dekh kar lagta hai ki abhi bhi kuch baat Adhuri hai......kuch hai jo batana rah gaya hai.....chhupa liya gaya hai.....
Aapne kaha tha ki update 26 me sab clear hoga.....but mujhe to sab suspicious lag raha hai.....

Finally Abhi ka wo dream pura ho raha hai jisme usne Ruhi ka haath pakad kar....uske saath isi aangan me k humne ka sapna dekha tha.....

Iss update ke bare me kuch khas hai nahi likhne ke liye.....
Anyways
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai...
Thanks.....



Yes one more thing....
Aapne mere 25 update ke review me ak line thi.....SUSPICIOUS ACT waali uska reply nahi diya.....
Thanks
 

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1....To bhai 3 updates ak saath dene ki kya jarurate thi.....aap agar week me 3 update bhi denge to bhi thik hai.....
Aise khud ko takleef dekar likhe few to kaha tak thik hai.....
OR mana ki aapne 5700 words likhe hai....lekin ye aapka khud ka faisla tha....kisi ne kaha nahi tha.....
I mean....aaram se sab chalne do.....kyo bhaag rahe ho yaar....na to aap jaldi karo ....Na hum.....

Iss se safar lamba chalega or maza bhi aayega....

Ak update aadmi deta hai to wo usme bhi kaafi soch kar chalta hai.....kabhi kabhi bahut jyada dimaag laga kar 2 de deta hai....
Lekin aapne 3 updates diye.....OR ye baat to nai daave se kah sakaratmak hu ki least mai aapne ye hee socha hoga....ki bas jaldi se khatm karta hu ise.....
Aap or aapka dimaag dono thak gaye honge....

2....bhai me bhi insan hu or mera bhi vast a pada hai ladkiyon se.....tabhi to aapse ak bar kaha tha ki iss story se mai khud ko relate kar paa raha hu.....

Thanks

3 update ek saath kaun dena passand karega bhai.
Samjhata hoon baat kia hui thi.
Itne dinon se, kitne update pehle se sab readers wait kar rahe the ke Ruhi ki askhir kia secret hai. To main me socha ab baat ki reveal karne ka time agaya kyunke 6/7 update piche se isska intezaar kiya jaa raha tha. To hab main ne update 24 likhna shuru kiya to socha uss mein Ruhi wali baat ajaegi ?
Magar nahin aya. To socha ek double update likh deta hoon uss mein zaroor ajaega... uss mein bhi nahin reach hua.... to majbooran teesra update likhna pada uss baat tak pahunchne ki aur thik jav likha ke Ruhi ne Abhi se pucha ke and if am not a virgin..... tab to continue karna tha updare 26 ko usske saath, tab main ne dekha ke 5700 words hi gaye hein 6 ghanton se likh raha tha bhai to bus WAHIN rok diya update ko!!
Well planned aur suspicious wali baat update mein aega kabhi. :D
Haan ek baat aur.... aap kahani se relate karte ho, khushi hui ...
Aur ye kahani mere dil ke bahot kareeb hai.
 
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Update 27 Abhi Spent The Night At Ruhi’s

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.


Ab aaguey….

Jiss waqt donon bus ke piche uss darkhat ke paas kiss kar rahe the ek donon ko baahon mein bhade tabhi lane mein Shweta ki awaaz sunaayi diye kehte hue,

“naiii main nahin bheegi hoon aap ke sar ke baal bheeg gaye hein”

Ruhi darr gayi aur Abhi ko itna zor se jakra ke Abhi ko laga usski pasliyan tutne wale hein, to Ruhi ne darrte hue kaha,

“uff manoj bhai aur Shweta, agar humko yahan dekh liya to musibat ajaegi ab kia karen Abhi?!”

Abhi ne phusphusate hue kaha,

“Sshhhh andhera hai koyi humko nahin dekh paega, buss niche baith jao yahin aur bilkool khamosh raho, jab donon ghar ke andar chale jaenge tab hum unnke piche jaenge….”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko jakre hue hi baith gaye. Ab of course kyunke andhera tha aur donon buss ke uss taraf the, aur halki si barish bhi thi to Manoj tez kadmon se seedhe apne kitchen ke darwaze tak gaya bina idhar udhar dekhe aur Shweta ko utara kitchen mein…..

Utarte hi Shweta chillaayi,

“Ruhiiiiiiii didiiiiiiiiii main agayiiiiiiii”

Idhar Bus ke kone mein Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Ufff wo mera hi naam phukaar rahi hai, mujhko dhundne gayi hogi, chalo ab jaldi….”

To donon piche se gaye kitchen mein jaise daakhil hue Shweta andar se wapas laut rahi thi Ruhi ko dhundte hue, andar Ruhi ki maa ne Shweta se kaha ke Ruhi ghar par nahin hai iss liye wo wapas kitchen mein arahi thi aur jaise Abhi ko dekha wahin ruk gayi jahan reach hui thi achanak! Phir zor se “Abhiiiiiiii” chilaate hue usske taraf badhi donon baahon ko khole to Abhi apne tangon par baith gaya usske nanhi baahon ko apne kaandon par lene ke liye….

Tab tak Manoj toilet gaya hua tha aur ussne andar se Shweta ko Abhi ka naam utna zor se chillaate hue suna to ussko taahjub hua ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi kitchen mein agayi thi. Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko wo plastic bag thama diya aur tangon par baithe hue baby Shweta ke hug mein gum raha. Ussko zor se seene se lagaya hua tha. Dada ji bhi aaye apni Tv program chorr kar aur Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh kar bola;

“Bahot lagao ho gaya isski Abhi ke saath, ho bhi kyun nahin Abhi bada pyara bacha khud hai”

Iss baat ko Manoj ne suna kyunke tab tak wo baahar nikal chuka tha toilet se aur khada Shweta ko Abhi ke baahon mein dekh raha tha, aur muskura raha tha Ruhi ko aur apni maa ko dekhte hue. Ussne ishaare se Ruhi se pucha ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise. To Ruhi ne phusphussate hue kaha,

“aaj hamare yahan rahega!”

To manoj Ruhi ko dekh kar hanssa aur andar chala gaya.

Tab Ruhi ne Shweta se kaha,

“Ari wah re Shwetu, ab bhi mujhse nahin mili tu, phukaar to mujhe rahi thi aur Abhi ke paas chali gayi jao main tumse baat nahin karungi, katti!”

Shweta ne Ruhi ke taraf dekh kar ‘hihihi” kiya aur Abhi ke sar ke baalon par haath ferrte hue kaha,

“Aap ke baal bhi bheeg gaye hai aap baahar the nah? Manoj bhai ke baal bhi bheeg gaye main nahin bheegi bilkool!”

To Abhi ne Shweta ko chumte hue kaha,

“Hmm sach hai; jao ab tum apni Ruhi didi ke paas varna wo tumse baat bhi nahin karegi aur dekho usske paas kitne saare cakes hein wo tumko nahin degi!”

Shweta nahin chorr rahi thi Abhi ko aur kaha,

“naiii main aap ke saat hi rahungi, aap aaj yahin rahoge?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar Ruhi ke taraf dekha, phir usski maa ko dekha, donon bade pyar se Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh rahe the aas paas khade, Dadaji bhi wahin khada dekh raha tha, uss waqt Abhi aur Shweta main attraction bane hue the kitchen mein.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pyar se jawaab diya ke haan aaj wo yahin rukega. Tab tak ek towel se apne baal ko ponchte hue Manoj ghar se kitchen mein aya aur Ruhi se kaha,

“tum kab jaogi shooting dekhne, jaogi bhi ya nahin?!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue apne kaandhon ko uchkaya, to Ruhi ki maa ne manoj se kaha,

“Abhi ko towel dedo, dekho usske baal bhi bheege hue hein!”

To Manoj aur Abhi ne ek dusre ko dekha aur ussne Abhi ko muskuraate hue towel diya….. Abhi ne towel se apne baal par rub kiya to Shweta ne kaha,

“Mujhe do main ponchti hoon!”

Ab Abhi ek to tangon par baitha hua tha, ab Shweta ne usske haath se towel le liya to Abhi ko apne sar ko aur niche jhukana para taake Shweta usske baal ko rub kare towel se…..

Manoj wapas andar chala gaya TV dekhne, aur dada ji bhi usske piche gaya.

Kitchen mein Ruhi ne Shweta ke haath se towel liya aur ussne Abhi ke baalon mein towel rub kiya usske baal sukhaane ke liye. Abhi ke sar par bahot baal the, usske baal bhi thick the aur usska hairstyle khubsurat tha jiss se usska look aur bhi behtar hota tha. bahot baal the Abhi ke sar par, full kale baal jo usske gore rang ko bada suit karta tha. Ruhi jab usske sar ko rub kar rahi thi to Shweta Abhi ke kaan ko apne muthi mein pakar kar noch rahi thi, jaise ek khilona tha abhi ke kaan, aur Ruhi ne Shweta ke muthi par chotta sa chamaat lagate hue kaha,

“kyun mere Abhi ke kaan noch rahi ho tum!”

Abhi ko wo moment bahot pyara lag raha tha ke Ruhi usske baalon mein towel rub kar rahi thi, ussko lag raha tha wo apne ghar mein hai aur usski patni wo sab kar raha tha…..

Shweta ne jawaab diya Ruhi ko,

“kia yeh aap ki Abhi hai? Kyun yeh aap ka Abhi hai didi?!”

To jaldi se Ruhi ne Shweta ke munh par apne haath rakha taake andar se Manoj usski awaaz nah sunein, aur Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi.

Ab Manoj se kyun Ruhi, Abhi ke saath apna rishta chhupa rahi thi yeh wohi jaane, magar Manoj ko sab dikh to raha tha kyunke shuru se jab bhi Abhi aur Ruhi baat karte ya aas paas hote the to Manoj donon ko dekh kar muskurata tha hamesha, matlab ussko personally pata tha ke donon ek dusre ko pasand karte hein, phir bhi pata nahin kyun Manoj se Ruhi ya to darrti thi ya chhupana chahti thi. Manoj Ruhi ka bada bhai tha, ghar ka bada beta tha, Mahesh, Ruhi se chhota tha, aur badi behen jisski shadi ho chuki hai wo Manoj ke baad thi. Matlab Manoj pehla aulad tha uss family ka.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne Ruhi se ahiste se kaha ke ussko nahana hai, aur underwear nahin hai usske paas, aur raat ko sone ke liye kapde bhi nahin hai.

To Ruhi ne yeh baat apni maa se kaha to maa ne Mahesh ka ek underwear, short aur Tshirt diya Abhi ko.

Jab Abhi nahane jaa raha tha thik tabhi Manoj bhi apne kamre se nikla towel aur underwear ke saath, aur dekha Abhi nahane jaa raha hai to Abhi se kaha,

“okay pehle tum ho aao,” Aur Abhi ne kaha, “nahin its okay pehle tum ho aao tab main naha lunga”

Magar aakhir mein Abhi hi gaya nahane.

Jab Abhi naha raha tha tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke saamne apni maa se sawaal kiya,

“Meri samajh mein nahin araha ke kyun aur kaise aaj Abhi hamare yahan thehra hai, aap samjao mujhe maa!”

Maa ne Ruhi ko dekha aur Ruhi apni maa ko. To Manoj ne Ruhi se pucha,

“Tu bata sakti hai? Kia yeh tere kehne par ruka hai? Ya tere liye ruka hai?!”

Maa ne jawaab diya,

“are ahin ussko late ho gaya tha aaj aur usske sheher jaane wale buses miss ho gaye to main ne hi kaha ke kyun taxi ko pata nahin kitna paisa dena padega, to hamare yahan ruk jaaye!”

Manoj ne phir bhi Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Magar tu badi khush ho rahi ke wo yahan thehra hai kyun? Kahan gaye the tum donon mere ghar aane se pehle?!”

Ruhi sar jhukaaye hue niche dekh kar hanssi aur kaha,

“wo apne ghar phone karke bataane gaye the ke wo aaj ghar nahin arahe hein!”

Tab Manoj ne kaha,

“magar usska taxi ka bhaada to Mehboob ko dena chahiye tha nah? ya ussko Mehboob ke yahan rukna tha hamare ghar kyun aya yeh jaanna chahta hoon main!”

Maa ne kaha,

“are tum kyun itne sawaal karne lage main ne khud ussko yahan rukne ke liye kaha kaun si badi baat ho gayi?”

Tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue hi kaha,

“badi baat yeh hai ke Ruhi ke liye ruka hamare yahan wo aur Ruhi khush hai ke Mehboob ke bajae hamare yahan ruka!”

Ruhi ne dhime awaaz mein kaha,

“To kia hua bhai?!”

Manoj: “kia lagta hai wo tera?!”

Ruhi: “kuch nahin!”

Manoj: “to tujhe kyun Khushi hai ke wo hamare yahan ruke?!”

Ruhi: “main ne kab kaha ke mujhe Khushi hai?!”

Manoj: “dikh raha hai mujhe!”

Maa ne donon ko rokte hue kaha

“Chhup ho jao tum donon, are Manoj donon dost hein, humumar hein ek dusre se baatein karte hein din mein ek dusre se jaan pehchaan ho gaye hein to kia ho gaya?!”

Manoj: “maa ya aur koyi baat hai? Main kuch aisi waisi baat nahin sunna chahta hoon, agar mujhe kuch aisi waisi baat ka pata baad mein chala to mujhse bura koyi nahin hoga keh deta hoon. Aaj ruk gaya hai, ghar aaye mehmaan ko kuch nahin keh sakta, magar khabardaar agar aayinda aisa hua to!”

Itna kehkar Manoj wahan se nikal gaya aur Ruhi rone lagi apni maa ke seene se lag kar. Maa ne uss se kaha,

“Chhup kar wo aisa hi hai usski fikar mat kar…. “

Dinner ke time sab kitchen mein ekatha hue. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi uss se doorie kiye hue hein. Abhi baar baar Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha aur ussko acha nahin lag raha tha ke Ruhi uss se door hai. Ruhi ko bhi pata tha ke Abhi ko acha nahin lag raha hoga to usska mann behlaane ke liye ussne Shweta ko Abhi ke paas jaane ko kaha dhire se.

Shweta jab Abhi ke paas gayi to Abhi ke goad mein ghuss ke baith gayi, Ruhi aur usski maa dinner serve karne lage. Ruhi ne dhire dhire apne maa se kuch kaha serve karte waqt. Dada ji ko, Manoj ko aur khud maa ne apne liye serve kar liya table par. Abhi ko nahin serve kiya. To dada ji ne pucha,

“Are Abhi ko bhi khane do nah!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“hum kamre mein khayenge dada ji!”

Aur Manoj ne ek nazar Ruhi ko dekha magar kuch nahin kaha.

Ruhi ne tab uss din ki tarah khud ki aur Abhi ka khana apni room mein legayi aur Abhi ko aane ko kaha. Shweta Ruhi ke maa ke saath chali gayi. Aur Abhi gaya Ruhi ke room mein.

Abhi yehi to chahta tha, usski dili tamanna thi ke donon akele ek saath khana kaaye aur ussi kamre mein khane ka mann tha usse yehi baat Ruhi se kehne ko socha tha nahate waqt magar naha kar wapas nikla to mauka nahin mila ussko Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. To kitna khush hua yeh dekh kar ke Ruhi ne bhi bilkool wohi socha jo Abhi ke dil mein tha. Donon ke beech jaise ek anjana connection hota tha, Jo Abhi sochta hota tha wohi Ruhi bhi sochti thi. Donon ke beech ek gehra connection tha…. roohani thi ya kia tha magar donon ek dusre se jaise bandhe hue the kissi tarah se. Aisa Abhi ko lagta tha aur sochta tha wo.

Jab donon Ruhi ke kamre mein chale gaye to Manoj shuru hua kitchen mein.

“Yeh kia hai? Kyun ussko especial treatment diya ja raha hai? Ghar ka jamai raja hai kia wo? Kyun Ruhi ke saath dinner karna chahiye usse? Hamaare saath yahan nahin kha sakta wo?!”

Dada ji ne kaha,

“are bache hein donon khane do ek saath kia burai hai?!”

Manoj ne apne dada ji ko bade bade aankhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“aap to chhup hi raho to behtar hai aap ki raye nahin maanga hai main ne!”

Budha dada chhup ho gaya, aur chup chaap khane laga. Usski jaise koyi ehmiyat hi nahin thi ghar mein. Budha tha 77 years ka, kamzor tha, patla sa tha, apne mein hi gum rehta tha magar ussko sab dikhta tha. Aur ussko pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko passand karte hein aur ussko rishta passand tha.magar uss ghar mein usska koyi nahin sunta tha, sab ussko ignore maarte the, jaise wo tha hi nahin uss ghar mein.

Manoj ne apni maa se dobara pucha ke kyun Abhi aur Ruhi kamre mein khaa rahe hein, to maa ne bhi chhutkara paane ke liye kaha,

“Tu khud jaa kar Ruhi se kyun nahin puchta? Puch sakta hai? Jaa wahan jaakar puch le Ruhi se”

Maa ko pata tha ke Manoj itna to budtamiz nahin ke ek ghar aaye mehmaan ke samne jaakar kuch ghalat karega.

Raat ko kuch der baad sab log TV ke saamne baite serial dekh rahe the, unn dinon “HUM LOG” chalta tha har roz, jiss mein Ashok kumar kahani ko bayan karta tha. Bahot prachalit aur successful serial raha tha wo. Ab yaad nahin ke repeat tha ya first telecast tha. – Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ke bagal mein baithe the aur chhupa kar haath pakre hue the ek dusre ke. Jiss jagah par Manoj baita tha ussko nazar nahin ata donon ka haath pakarna.

Phir baat hui ke Abhi kahan soyega. Abhi ka bada mann tha ke Ruhi ke saath soye magar ussko pata tha ke wo mumkin nahin tha. Phir bhi kuch pal wo Ruhi ke aaghosh mein beetana chahta tha.

Ruhi ne kaha ke dada ji ke kamre mein soyega Abhi. Wahan ek bed khali tha iss liye. Ruhi ko pata tha ke ussne kyun dada ji ke kamre mein Abhi ko sone ko kaha. Usska kamra thik Ruhi ke kamre ke side mein tha, aur kabhi bhi Abhi Ruhi ke paas aa sakta tha ya Ruhi usske paas jaa sakti thi.

Karib 10 baje Manoj chala gaya sone aur Ruhi ki maa bhi Shweta ko lekar chali gayi apni kamre mein. Dada ji, Ruhi aur Abhi baithe rahe TV ke saamne. Ab Abhi ne Ruhi ko bahon mein bhar liya tha, donon kiss karte to kabhi phussur phussur baat karte, ke suna dada ji armchair par kharaate maar rahe hein to Ruhi ne ussko jagaya aur apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha. Ussi time Abhi ke bed ko bhi tayaar kar diya Ruhi ne aur donon gaye Ruhi ke kamre mein usski bed par kuch der saath rehne ke liye.

Kuch der sath baith kar ek dusre ko caress kiya, kiss kiya aur Ruhi ne kaha ussko change karna hai, apni nightdress pehenna tha usse. To ussi kamre mein Abhi ke maujoodgi mein Ruhi ne dress chahge kiya magar almaari ke darwaze ko khol kar usski aadh mein change kiya…. Phir bhi Abhi usski jism ke kuch hisson ko dekh paa raha tha jaise usski peeth, kaandhe par bra ke strap aur Ruhi ne bra utara jo Abhi ne full dekha, aur wo utejit hua….

Jab Ruhi wapas aayi bed par apni nightdress mein, wo lamba tha full niche tak, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke andar bra nahin pehna tha Ruhi ne aur usski gori baahein dikh rahe the pura kyunke dress sleevless tha.

Abhi ne Ruhi ko jakar liya aur bed par leyta kar chumne laga. Ruhi ne surrender kar diya tha khud ko, jaise wo chahti thi ke Abhi uss se humbistar hoe. Abhi ka haath dhire dhire kiss ke dauraan Ruhi ke baazu ko sehlaate hue upar usski kaandhe tak ruke, phir dusra haath Ruhi ke dress ke niche usski tang par ferrte hue kaafi upar usski jaanghon tak pahunch chuka tha aur iss se pehle ke aur upar jata Ruhi ne usska haath rok liya apne haath ko upar se daba kar.

Abhi Ruhi ke upar chadh chuka tha, aur ab wo Ruhi ke gardan par apne jeeb ferr raha tha, Ruhi hanff rahi thi aur Abhi ka ek haath ab usski urujon ko daba raha tha, to Ruhi ne tadapti awaaz mein ahiste se kaha,

“please ruk jao, Stop Abhi mujh se saha nahin jaega, main khud ko rok nahin paungi, please stop nah!

Ruhi ke boobs ko aur dabaate hue Abhi ne ghurrate hue kaha,

“yehi to main chahta hoon sweetheart, khud ko mere hawaale kardo nah, puri tarah se….”

Abhi ki awaaz daba hua tha, usske bhi saansein jaise full rahe the, aur usska haath iss baar Ruhi ke dress ko itna upar utha chuka tha jiss se ruhi ke boobs Abhi ke saamne tha, tab Abhi ne niche ke taraf dekha to Ruhi ki pantie dikh raha tha, Abhi ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne usski nightdress ko utna upar utha liya tha….. Ruhi ko adhnangi dekh kar Abhi sharminda hua aur jaldi se usski dress ko niche karke ussko dhaank diya aur Ruhi se sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne Abhi ke gaal ko sehlaate hue pyar se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“You do not have to be sorry Abhi, I was letting you move up my dress, main aap rok nahin rahi thi, issme tumhari koyi ghalati nahin hai.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“mujhe hosh hi nahin tha ke main ne itna utha diya tha tumhare dress ko, pata hota to nahin karta…. Sorry again.”

Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekhte hue kaha,

“Abhi samajh lo ke yeh hamari first night hai shadi ke baad tab bhi tum aisa karte kia?!”

Abhi ne bade pyar se Ruhi ko chumte hue kaha,

“Tab baat aur hoti, tab main tumhare nahin apne ghar mein hota, aur tab sab official hota nah? hamare pas yeh sab karne ki license hota, abhi alag baat hai nah!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chaati ko chumte hue kaha,

“uss din to tum kuch ziada hi karna chahte the to aaj kyun nahin?!”

Abhi: “pata nahin aaj mahaul alag lag raha hai, uss din ghar par koyi nahin tha, aaj dimaagh mein yeh baat hai ke Manoj hai, aunty hai, Shweta bhi hai…to mahaul bilkool alag hai aaj aur upar se raat hai aaj!!”

Lag raha tha aaj Ruhi utejit ho rahi thi, kyunke ussne khud apne haath ko Abhi ke short ke upar usske ling ke upar rakha aur ek rijhaati hui ada mein kaha,

“uss din to aap ne mere haath ko khinch kar yahan rakha tha aur mujhse kuch aur chahte the aap, aaj wo nahin chahiye aap ko?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue, aur Ruhi ki tarasti nazron ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Sweetheart chahiye to mujhe bahot kuch, bahot ziada kuch chahiye tumse, tumhari gehraayi mein samaa jaane ko dil karta hai, tumhare saanson mein ghul jaane ko maan karta hai, tumhare aahon mein mil jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare dil mein utar jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare ek ek ang ko apne angon mein basaane ko mann karta hai magar darrta hoon; darta hoon ke tumko ruswa nah kardun, dar hai ke yeh sab karke tumko kho nah baithun, darrta hoon ke kal tum yeh nah kaho ke main ne ghalat faeda uthaya tumhara iss liye behtar hai ke uss kamre mein chala jaun ab!”

Abhi dada ji ke kamre mein sote hue soch raha tha ke aaj ussne Ruhi ko pyasa chorr diya. Usski pyas nahin bujhayi ussne. Ruhi pyasi thi isska ehsaas ho raha tha Abhi ko.

Abhi gehri neendh mein thi, bich raat mein Ruhi teen baar usske paas aayi thi isska Abhi ko bilkool pata nahin chala, pata chala to yeh ke Ruhi ussko subha 6 baje jaga rahi thi uthne ke liye, kaam par jaane ke liye.

To be continued…. (3520 words)

Casi ji sab se pehle ek sawaal, aap mujhe Shweta ko goad lene do nah.
Aap ne kaise itni cute baby doll ko create kiya iss kahani mein my dear. Jiss update mein bhi te aayi hai update mein 4 chand laga diya hai Shweta ne.
Aap usski part alag tarike se hi likhte ho. Kitni pyari, kitni cute, kiyni pyari pyari aur masoom usski baatein, kitna bholapan aaawwww.
Ok ab aate hein puri update par. Shweta ki parts ko chorr kar Manoj mujhe ab Vilain lagne laga hai. Kis issi ki vajah se donon lovers separate honge? Usska apne dada ji baat karne ka tarika dikhata hai ke wo kitna badtamiz ladka hai.
Ussko nahin passand k Abhi usske ghar thehra hai, chalo iss baat ko maanti hoon k wo ghar mein bada bhai hai, mard hai, magar usski maa uss se pehle ata hai, aur jab maa ne Abhi ko rehne ke liye keh diya to ussko kia padi hai itna kuch bolne ko?
Aur aati hoon maa par. Wo Abhi ko andar aane k liye darwaja kholne se inkaar kiya tha, magar phir Abhi ko rukne ke liye maan gayi? Wo kyun? Kuch atpata laga ye baat.
Rahi baat Ruhi aur Abhi ke milan ki to bechari Ruhi aaj bechara Abhi nahin aaj ki update mein Ruhi bechari hui kyunke iss update mein Ruhi thi jo Abhi ke saath humbistar hona chahti thi magar iss baar Abhi ne mana kiya, kyun, kisd liye pata nahin. Abhi k liye mahol aur mood sahi nahin tha shayad.
Update bahut hi acha tha Casi ji aur bahut passand kiya humne.
Aise hi ache ache updates dete chalo.
Thanks very much. :claps: :claps: :claps:
 

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Update 27 Abhi Spent The Night At Ruhi’s

Abhi behad khush tha, yeh ussko sab ek sapna jaisa lagne laga tha. Ussko yakeen nahin ho raha tha ke yeh sab sach mein ho raha hai. Haan ussne yeh sab khayaalon mein kayi baar socha tha magar sab hakikat mein badal jaega yeh ussne bilkool nahin socha tha. Tha to wo bilkool positive, hamesha bhala hi sochta tha, aur umeed karta tha ke jo soch raha hai wo sach aur sahi ho jaaye magar weisa sach mein hoga wo nahin sochta tha. Aur aaj jo ho raha tha usske saath wo buss ek dream come true tha.


Ab aaguey….

Jiss waqt donon bus ke piche uss darkhat ke paas kiss kar rahe the ek donon ko baahon mein bhade tabhi lane mein Shweta ki awaaz sunaayi diye kehte hue,

“naiii main nahin bheegi hoon aap ke sar ke baal bheeg gaye hein”

Ruhi darr gayi aur Abhi ko itna zor se jakra ke Abhi ko laga usski pasliyan tutne wale hein, to Ruhi ne darrte hue kaha,

“uff manoj bhai aur Shweta, agar humko yahan dekh liya to musibat ajaegi ab kia karen Abhi?!”

Abhi ne phusphusate hue kaha,

“Sshhhh andhera hai koyi humko nahin dekh paega, buss niche baith jao yahin aur bilkool khamosh raho, jab donon ghar ke andar chale jaenge tab hum unnke piche jaenge….”

Aur Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko jakre hue hi baith gaye. Ab of course kyunke andhera tha aur donon buss ke uss taraf the, aur halki si barish bhi thi to Manoj tez kadmon se seedhe apne kitchen ke darwaze tak gaya bina idhar udhar dekhe aur Shweta ko utara kitchen mein…..

Utarte hi Shweta chillaayi,

“Ruhiiiiiiii didiiiiiiiiii main agayiiiiiiii”

Idhar Bus ke kone mein Ruhi ne Abhi se kaha,

“Ufff wo mera hi naam phukaar rahi hai, mujhko dhundne gayi hogi, chalo ab jaldi….”

To donon piche se gaye kitchen mein jaise daakhil hue Shweta andar se wapas laut rahi thi Ruhi ko dhundte hue, andar Ruhi ki maa ne Shweta se kaha ke Ruhi ghar par nahin hai iss liye wo wapas kitchen mein arahi thi aur jaise Abhi ko dekha wahin ruk gayi jahan reach hui thi achanak! Phir zor se “Abhiiiiiiii” chilaate hue usske taraf badhi donon baahon ko khole to Abhi apne tangon par baith gaya usske nanhi baahon ko apne kaandon par lene ke liye….

Tab tak Manoj toilet gaya hua tha aur ussne andar se Shweta ko Abhi ka naam utna zor se chillaate hue suna to ussko taahjub hua ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi kitchen mein agayi thi. Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko wo plastic bag thama diya aur tangon par baithe hue baby Shweta ke hug mein gum raha. Ussko zor se seene se lagaya hua tha. Dada ji bhi aaye apni Tv program chorr kar aur Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh kar bola;

“Bahot lagao ho gaya isski Abhi ke saath, ho bhi kyun nahin Abhi bada pyara bacha khud hai”

Iss baat ko Manoj ne suna kyunke tab tak wo baahar nikal chuka tha toilet se aur khada Shweta ko Abhi ke baahon mein dekh raha tha, aur muskura raha tha Ruhi ko aur apni maa ko dekhte hue. Ussne ishaare se Ruhi se pucha ke Abhi iss waqt yahan kaise. To Ruhi ne phusphussate hue kaha,

“aaj hamare yahan rahega!”

To manoj Ruhi ko dekh kar hanssa aur andar chala gaya.

Tab Ruhi ne Shweta se kaha,

“Ari wah re Shwetu, ab bhi mujhse nahin mili tu, phukaar to mujhe rahi thi aur Abhi ke paas chali gayi jao main tumse baat nahin karungi, katti!”

Shweta ne Ruhi ke taraf dekh kar ‘hihihi” kiya aur Abhi ke sar ke baalon par haath ferrte hue kaha,

“Aap ke baal bhi bheeg gaye hai aap baahar the nah? Manoj bhai ke baal bhi bheeg gaye main nahin bheegi bilkool!”

To Abhi ne Shweta ko chumte hue kaha,

“Hmm sach hai; jao ab tum apni Ruhi didi ke paas varna wo tumse baat bhi nahin karegi aur dekho usske paas kitne saare cakes hein wo tumko nahin degi!”

Shweta nahin chorr rahi thi Abhi ko aur kaha,

“naiii main aap ke saat hi rahungi, aap aaj yahin rahoge?!”

Abhi ne mudhkar Ruhi ke taraf dekha, phir usski maa ko dekha, donon bade pyar se Abhi aur Shweta ko dekh rahe the aas paas khade, Dadaji bhi wahin khada dekh raha tha, uss waqt Abhi aur Shweta main attraction bane hue the kitchen mein.

Abhi ne Shweta ko pyar se jawaab diya ke haan aaj wo yahin rukega. Tab tak ek towel se apne baal ko ponchte hue Manoj ghar se kitchen mein aya aur Ruhi se kaha,

“tum kab jaogi shooting dekhne, jaogi bhi ya nahin?!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke taraf dekhte hue apne kaandhon ko uchkaya, to Ruhi ki maa ne manoj se kaha,

“Abhi ko towel dedo, dekho usske baal bhi bheege hue hein!”

To Manoj aur Abhi ne ek dusre ko dekha aur ussne Abhi ko muskuraate hue towel diya….. Abhi ne towel se apne baal par rub kiya to Shweta ne kaha,

“Mujhe do main ponchti hoon!”

Ab Abhi ek to tangon par baitha hua tha, ab Shweta ne usske haath se towel le liya to Abhi ko apne sar ko aur niche jhukana para taake Shweta usske baal ko rub kare towel se…..

Manoj wapas andar chala gaya TV dekhne, aur dada ji bhi usske piche gaya.

Kitchen mein Ruhi ne Shweta ke haath se towel liya aur ussne Abhi ke baalon mein towel rub kiya usske baal sukhaane ke liye. Abhi ke sar par bahot baal the, usske baal bhi thick the aur usska hairstyle khubsurat tha jiss se usska look aur bhi behtar hota tha. bahot baal the Abhi ke sar par, full kale baal jo usske gore rang ko bada suit karta tha. Ruhi jab usske sar ko rub kar rahi thi to Shweta Abhi ke kaan ko apne muthi mein pakar kar noch rahi thi, jaise ek khilona tha abhi ke kaan, aur Ruhi ne Shweta ke muthi par chotta sa chamaat lagate hue kaha,

“kyun mere Abhi ke kaan noch rahi ho tum!”

Abhi ko wo moment bahot pyara lag raha tha ke Ruhi usske baalon mein towel rub kar rahi thi, ussko lag raha tha wo apne ghar mein hai aur usski patni wo sab kar raha tha…..

Shweta ne jawaab diya Ruhi ko,

“kia yeh aap ki Abhi hai? Kyun yeh aap ka Abhi hai didi?!”

To jaldi se Ruhi ne Shweta ke munh par apne haath rakha taake andar se Manoj usski awaaz nah sunein, aur Ruhi ki maa hanssne lagi.

Ab Manoj se kyun Ruhi, Abhi ke saath apna rishta chhupa rahi thi yeh wohi jaane, magar Manoj ko sab dikh to raha tha kyunke shuru se jab bhi Abhi aur Ruhi baat karte ya aas paas hote the to Manoj donon ko dekh kar muskurata tha hamesha, matlab ussko personally pata tha ke donon ek dusre ko pasand karte hein, phir bhi pata nahin kyun Manoj se Ruhi ya to darrti thi ya chhupana chahti thi. Manoj Ruhi ka bada bhai tha, ghar ka bada beta tha, Mahesh, Ruhi se chhota tha, aur badi behen jisski shadi ho chuki hai wo Manoj ke baad thi. Matlab Manoj pehla aulad tha uss family ka.

Kuch der baad Abhi ne Ruhi se ahiste se kaha ke ussko nahana hai, aur underwear nahin hai usske paas, aur raat ko sone ke liye kapde bhi nahin hai.

To Ruhi ne yeh baat apni maa se kaha to maa ne Mahesh ka ek underwear, short aur Tshirt diya Abhi ko.

Jab Abhi nahane jaa raha tha thik tabhi Manoj bhi apne kamre se nikla towel aur underwear ke saath, aur dekha Abhi nahane jaa raha hai to Abhi se kaha,

“okay pehle tum ho aao,” Aur Abhi ne kaha, “nahin its okay pehle tum ho aao tab main naha lunga”

Magar aakhir mein Abhi hi gaya nahane.

Jab Abhi naha raha tha tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke saamne apni maa se sawaal kiya,

“Meri samajh mein nahin araha ke kyun aur kaise aaj Abhi hamare yahan thehra hai, aap samjao mujhe maa!”

Maa ne Ruhi ko dekha aur Ruhi apni maa ko. To Manoj ne Ruhi se pucha,

“Tu bata sakti hai? Kia yeh tere kehne par ruka hai? Ya tere liye ruka hai?!”

Maa ne jawaab diya,

“are ahin ussko late ho gaya tha aaj aur usske sheher jaane wale buses miss ho gaye to main ne hi kaha ke kyun taxi ko pata nahin kitna paisa dena padega, to hamare yahan ruk jaaye!”

Manoj ne phir bhi Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Magar tu badi khush ho rahi ke wo yahan thehra hai kyun? Kahan gaye the tum donon mere ghar aane se pehle?!”

Ruhi sar jhukaaye hue niche dekh kar hanssi aur kaha,

“wo apne ghar phone karke bataane gaye the ke wo aaj ghar nahin arahe hein!”

Tab Manoj ne kaha,

“magar usska taxi ka bhaada to Mehboob ko dena chahiye tha nah? ya ussko Mehboob ke yahan rukna tha hamare ghar kyun aya yeh jaanna chahta hoon main!”

Maa ne kaha,

“are tum kyun itne sawaal karne lage main ne khud ussko yahan rukne ke liye kaha kaun si badi baat ho gayi?”

Tab Manoj ne Ruhi ke taraf dekhte hue hi kaha,

“badi baat yeh hai ke Ruhi ke liye ruka hamare yahan wo aur Ruhi khush hai ke Mehboob ke bajae hamare yahan ruka!”

Ruhi ne dhime awaaz mein kaha,

“To kia hua bhai?!”

Manoj: “kia lagta hai wo tera?!”

Ruhi: “kuch nahin!”

Manoj: “to tujhe kyun Khushi hai ke wo hamare yahan ruke?!”

Ruhi: “main ne kab kaha ke mujhe Khushi hai?!”

Manoj: “dikh raha hai mujhe!”

Maa ne donon ko rokte hue kaha

“Chhup ho jao tum donon, are Manoj donon dost hein, humumar hein ek dusre se baatein karte hein din mein ek dusre se jaan pehchaan ho gaye hein to kia ho gaya?!”

Manoj: “maa ya aur koyi baat hai? Main kuch aisi waisi baat nahin sunna chahta hoon, agar mujhe kuch aisi waisi baat ka pata baad mein chala to mujhse bura koyi nahin hoga keh deta hoon. Aaj ruk gaya hai, ghar aaye mehmaan ko kuch nahin keh sakta, magar khabardaar agar aayinda aisa hua to!”

Itna kehkar Manoj wahan se nikal gaya aur Ruhi rone lagi apni maa ke seene se lag kar. Maa ne uss se kaha,

“Chhup kar wo aisa hi hai usski fikar mat kar…. “

Dinner ke time sab kitchen mein ekatha hue. Aur Abhi ne dekha ke Ruhi uss se doorie kiye hue hein. Abhi baar baar Ruhi ke taraf dekh raha tha aur ussko acha nahin lag raha tha ke Ruhi uss se door hai. Ruhi ko bhi pata tha ke Abhi ko acha nahin lag raha hoga to usska mann behlaane ke liye ussne Shweta ko Abhi ke paas jaane ko kaha dhire se.

Shweta jab Abhi ke paas gayi to Abhi ke goad mein ghuss ke baith gayi, Ruhi aur usski maa dinner serve karne lage. Ruhi ne dhire dhire apne maa se kuch kaha serve karte waqt. Dada ji ko, Manoj ko aur khud maa ne apne liye serve kar liya table par. Abhi ko nahin serve kiya. To dada ji ne pucha,

“Are Abhi ko bhi khane do nah!”

Tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“hum kamre mein khayenge dada ji!”

Aur Manoj ne ek nazar Ruhi ko dekha magar kuch nahin kaha.

Ruhi ne tab uss din ki tarah khud ki aur Abhi ka khana apni room mein legayi aur Abhi ko aane ko kaha. Shweta Ruhi ke maa ke saath chali gayi. Aur Abhi gaya Ruhi ke room mein.

Abhi yehi to chahta tha, usski dili tamanna thi ke donon akele ek saath khana kaaye aur ussi kamre mein khane ka mann tha usse yehi baat Ruhi se kehne ko socha tha nahate waqt magar naha kar wapas nikla to mauka nahin mila ussko Ruhi se baat karne ke liye. To kitna khush hua yeh dekh kar ke Ruhi ne bhi bilkool wohi socha jo Abhi ke dil mein tha. Donon ke beech jaise ek anjana connection hota tha, Jo Abhi sochta hota tha wohi Ruhi bhi sochti thi. Donon ke beech ek gehra connection tha…. roohani thi ya kia tha magar donon ek dusre se jaise bandhe hue the kissi tarah se. Aisa Abhi ko lagta tha aur sochta tha wo.

Jab donon Ruhi ke kamre mein chale gaye to Manoj shuru hua kitchen mein.

“Yeh kia hai? Kyun ussko especial treatment diya ja raha hai? Ghar ka jamai raja hai kia wo? Kyun Ruhi ke saath dinner karna chahiye usse? Hamaare saath yahan nahin kha sakta wo?!”

Dada ji ne kaha,

“are bache hein donon khane do ek saath kia burai hai?!”

Manoj ne apne dada ji ko bade bade aankhon se dekhte hue kaha,

“aap to chhup hi raho to behtar hai aap ki raye nahin maanga hai main ne!”

Budha dada chhup ho gaya, aur chup chaap khane laga. Usski jaise koyi ehmiyat hi nahin thi ghar mein. Budha tha 77 years ka, kamzor tha, patla sa tha, apne mein hi gum rehta tha magar ussko sab dikhta tha. Aur ussko pata tha ke Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ko passand karte hein aur ussko rishta passand tha.magar uss ghar mein usska koyi nahin sunta tha, sab ussko ignore maarte the, jaise wo tha hi nahin uss ghar mein.

Manoj ne apni maa se dobara pucha ke kyun Abhi aur Ruhi kamre mein khaa rahe hein, to maa ne bhi chhutkara paane ke liye kaha,

“Tu khud jaa kar Ruhi se kyun nahin puchta? Puch sakta hai? Jaa wahan jaakar puch le Ruhi se”

Maa ko pata tha ke Manoj itna to budtamiz nahin ke ek ghar aaye mehmaan ke samne jaakar kuch ghalat karega.

Raat ko kuch der baad sab log TV ke saamne baite serial dekh rahe the, unn dinon “HUM LOG” chalta tha har roz, jiss mein Ashok kumar kahani ko bayan karta tha. Bahot prachalit aur successful serial raha tha wo. Ab yaad nahin ke repeat tha ya first telecast tha. – Ruhi aur Abhi ek dusre ke bagal mein baithe the aur chhupa kar haath pakre hue the ek dusre ke. Jiss jagah par Manoj baita tha ussko nazar nahin ata donon ka haath pakarna.

Phir baat hui ke Abhi kahan soyega. Abhi ka bada mann tha ke Ruhi ke saath soye magar ussko pata tha ke wo mumkin nahin tha. Phir bhi kuch pal wo Ruhi ke aaghosh mein beetana chahta tha.

Ruhi ne kaha ke dada ji ke kamre mein soyega Abhi. Wahan ek bed khali tha iss liye. Ruhi ko pata tha ke ussne kyun dada ji ke kamre mein Abhi ko sone ko kaha. Usska kamra thik Ruhi ke kamre ke side mein tha, aur kabhi bhi Abhi Ruhi ke paas aa sakta tha ya Ruhi usske paas jaa sakti thi.

Karib 10 baje Manoj chala gaya sone aur Ruhi ki maa bhi Shweta ko lekar chali gayi apni kamre mein. Dada ji, Ruhi aur Abhi baithe rahe TV ke saamne. Ab Abhi ne Ruhi ko bahon mein bhar liya tha, donon kiss karte to kabhi phussur phussur baat karte, ke suna dada ji armchair par kharaate maar rahe hein to Ruhi ne ussko jagaya aur apne kamre mein jaane ko kaha. Ussi time Abhi ke bed ko bhi tayaar kar diya Ruhi ne aur donon gaye Ruhi ke kamre mein usski bed par kuch der saath rehne ke liye.

Kuch der sath baith kar ek dusre ko caress kiya, kiss kiya aur Ruhi ne kaha ussko change karna hai, apni nightdress pehenna tha usse. To ussi kamre mein Abhi ke maujoodgi mein Ruhi ne dress chahge kiya magar almaari ke darwaze ko khol kar usski aadh mein change kiya…. Phir bhi Abhi usski jism ke kuch hisson ko dekh paa raha tha jaise usski peeth, kaandhe par bra ke strap aur Ruhi ne bra utara jo Abhi ne full dekha, aur wo utejit hua….

Jab Ruhi wapas aayi bed par apni nightdress mein, wo lamba tha full niche tak, magar Abhi ko pata tha ke andar bra nahin pehna tha Ruhi ne aur usski gori baahein dikh rahe the pura kyunke dress sleevless tha.

Abhi ne Ruhi ko jakar liya aur bed par leyta kar chumne laga. Ruhi ne surrender kar diya tha khud ko, jaise wo chahti thi ke Abhi uss se humbistar hoe. Abhi ka haath dhire dhire kiss ke dauraan Ruhi ke baazu ko sehlaate hue upar usski kaandhe tak ruke, phir dusra haath Ruhi ke dress ke niche usski tang par ferrte hue kaafi upar usski jaanghon tak pahunch chuka tha aur iss se pehle ke aur upar jata Ruhi ne usska haath rok liya apne haath ko upar se daba kar.

Abhi Ruhi ke upar chadh chuka tha, aur ab wo Ruhi ke gardan par apne jeeb ferr raha tha, Ruhi hanff rahi thi aur Abhi ka ek haath ab usski urujon ko daba raha tha, to Ruhi ne tadapti awaaz mein ahiste se kaha,

“please ruk jao, Stop Abhi mujh se saha nahin jaega, main khud ko rok nahin paungi, please stop nah!

Ruhi ke boobs ko aur dabaate hue Abhi ne ghurrate hue kaha,

“yehi to main chahta hoon sweetheart, khud ko mere hawaale kardo nah, puri tarah se….”

Abhi ki awaaz daba hua tha, usske bhi saansein jaise full rahe the, aur usska haath iss baar Ruhi ke dress ko itna upar utha chuka tha jiss se ruhi ke boobs Abhi ke saamne tha, tab Abhi ne niche ke taraf dekha to Ruhi ki pantie dikh raha tha, Abhi ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne usski nightdress ko utna upar utha liya tha….. Ruhi ko adhnangi dekh kar Abhi sharminda hua aur jaldi se usski dress ko niche karke ussko dhaank diya aur Ruhi se sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne Abhi ke gaal ko sehlaate hue pyar se usske chehre mein dekhte hue kaha,

“You do not have to be sorry Abhi, I was letting you move up my dress, main aap rok nahin rahi thi, issme tumhari koyi ghalati nahin hai.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“mujhe hosh hi nahin tha ke main ne itna utha diya tha tumhare dress ko, pata hota to nahin karta…. Sorry again.”

Ruhi Abhi ko ghaur se dekhte hue kaha,

“Abhi samajh lo ke yeh hamari first night hai shadi ke baad tab bhi tum aisa karte kia?!”

Abhi ne bade pyar se Ruhi ko chumte hue kaha,

“Tab baat aur hoti, tab main tumhare nahin apne ghar mein hota, aur tab sab official hota nah? hamare pas yeh sab karne ki license hota, abhi alag baat hai nah!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke chaati ko chumte hue kaha,

“uss din to tum kuch ziada hi karna chahte the to aaj kyun nahin?!”

Abhi: “pata nahin aaj mahaul alag lag raha hai, uss din ghar par koyi nahin tha, aaj dimaagh mein yeh baat hai ke Manoj hai, aunty hai, Shweta bhi hai…to mahaul bilkool alag hai aaj aur upar se raat hai aaj!!”

Lag raha tha aaj Ruhi utejit ho rahi thi, kyunke ussne khud apne haath ko Abhi ke short ke upar usske ling ke upar rakha aur ek rijhaati hui ada mein kaha,

“uss din to aap ne mere haath ko khinch kar yahan rakha tha aur mujhse kuch aur chahte the aap, aaj wo nahin chahiye aap ko?!”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans lete hue, aur Ruhi ki tarasti nazron ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Sweetheart chahiye to mujhe bahot kuch, bahot ziada kuch chahiye tumse, tumhari gehraayi mein samaa jaane ko dil karta hai, tumhare saanson mein ghul jaane ko maan karta hai, tumhare aahon mein mil jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare dil mein utar jaane ko mann karta hai, tumhare ek ek ang ko apne angon mein basaane ko mann karta hai magar darrta hoon; darta hoon ke tumko ruswa nah kardun, dar hai ke yeh sab karke tumko kho nah baithun, darrta hoon ke kal tum yeh nah kaho ke main ne ghalat faeda uthaya tumhara iss liye behtar hai ke uss kamre mein chala jaun ab!”

Abhi dada ji ke kamre mein sote hue soch raha tha ke aaj ussne Ruhi ko pyasa chorr diya. Usski pyas nahin bujhayi ussne. Ruhi pyasi thi isska ehsaas ho raha tha Abhi ko.

Abhi gehri neendh mein thi, bich raat mein Ruhi teen baar usske paas aayi thi isska Abhi ko bilkool pata nahin chala, pata chala to yeh ke Ruhi ussko subha 6 baje jaga rahi thi uthne ke liye, kaam par jaane ke liye.

To be continued…. (3520 words)

Superb, awesome.
Very well written update casi bro. In fact was rather expecting an erotic update as knew Abhi will spent the night with Ruhi. But was quite surprised to read the content regarding them.
Lets start from the beginning.
Shweta, yessss this cutie pie is a real love. I really love to read when you write about her. And you really put a plus i hv noticed every time you write about her. There is something more which looks there in the script when you mention Shweta and that really enhances the update. Believe me. When Shweta is around there is lots of noise and thats how Ruhi and Abhi learned that they are coming only because Shweta's voice came first to make the lovers aware and they got the chance to hide behind the bus.
Shweta still dominated the scene in the kitchen when she got stuck to Abhi after surprisingly seeing him there.
All others' eyes were on them only. They then stole the attentions.
Coming to Manoj I dont want to mention him as someone alike was a bar in my love way also :D
So the erotic scene turned into mild romantic one as Abhi was NOT in the mood or he had another personal reason which he did not mention. I felt sad for Ruhi as she was ready to mate but her partner was not :lol:
Beautiful update bro. Loved it. :love:
 
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