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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Dimaagh ka garam, Dil ka naram
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Bahut badhya bhai.
Chalo Ashikon ko ek behtar mauka to mila ek saath raat gujarne ki. Aise mauke milte kahan hein. Aaj ki raat lagta hai inn donon mein se koyi sone wala nahin.
Raat aankhon aankhon mein bitegi to kal Abhi kaam kaise karega wahan?
Bhai Update super fantastic, mindblowing hai. Jabardast
bahot shukriya Husein bhai
 

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Oh toh ruhi pehle se hi ek baari kisike sath kabaddi khel chuki hai.... :D
isliye sayad woh sochti hain woh abhi ke pyar ki layak nahi aur yeh sab drama kiya..
Par abhi ne toh bol diya ki ruhi jaisi bhi joh bhi hain accept karne ko taiyar hain...
Hmmm chahiye ant bhala toh sab bhala.... abhi aur ruhi phir se ek ho gaye...
Awww abhi ke man mein laddu futa.... aaj toh usko ruhi ghar rukne ko milega.... kahin raat illu illu naa ho jaye :hinthint2:

Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update casi sir..... Awesome writing skill :applause::applause::applause::applause::applause::applause:
bahot shukriya Naina dear appreciate karne ke liye
 

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“PENFRIENDS CORNER” maine kabhi nahi dekha :dazed:
shayd ye mere jawan hone ke pahle ki baat hai :D
:yo: story aise bhi 1986 me chal rahi hai aur mera janm hi 88 me hua tha :lol1:
sach me ek time me dairy aur chiththi likhne ka maja hi kuch alag tha , ab sab kuch short cut me chal rha hai :noo:
uska bhi apna hi maja tha :)
har love story me ek na ek roda to hota hi hai yanha ye reza hai :lol1:
:good: update casi bhai :)

chalo aap ko kuch to pata chala aaj
veise kaamdev bhai ne aap ko kaafi kuch bataya iss baare mein hope ke aap ne dekha
 

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Late reply ke liye sorry casi ji.
Abhi abhi 4 last update padhi main ne. Ye tripple update kamaal ke hein vasi ji. Dil jeette aaye ho aap aur kitni baar dil jeetoge aap.
Ek ek karke sab par review deti hoon.
To ye update 23. Uff kia kahun. Bahut hi pyari, khubsurat update hai.
Ruhi nazar nahin aayi lunch mein to 3 baje kitchen to ayegi Abhi ne socha iss liye apne kaam ko slow kiya aur gaya usske kitchen k saamne tin kaatne ko. Aur kia detail diya hai aap ne usske uss waqt ke karte hue kaam ko. Hats off. Tin kiss kissam ki kaichi se kaati jati hai mujhe pata nahin tha. Aap k kahaniyon se bahut seekh bhi milte hein hamein:adore:
To Ruhi se aamna saamna to hua magar update ko heroine to aaj Shweta ban gayi.
Kia cute tarike se aap ne iss update mein Shweta ko darshaya hai wow. Bahut passand aayi mujhe usski masoomiyat, bholapan aur bachpana. Issko bahut hi ache se darshaya hai aap ne casi ji hats off. Abhi ko bachon se bahut pyar hai iss update se prove hua. Wo ek bahut acha baap saabit hoga.
Very beautiful update.

bahot bahot shukriya Savi dear lateness ki koyi baat hi nahin
 

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Abhi apne khat ka jawab k liye utaavla ho raha tha. Ussne apna dil chidh kar likha tha khat ko umeed thi k uss chithi ka gehra assar hoga Ruhi par magar Ruhi ne kaha ke klhawab degi hi nahin. Ab abhi par kia beet raha hoga?
Jab uss geet ko donon ne gungunya wo bada romantic tha magar ab maa beti kia mazak laga rakha hai ke ruhi ka koyi wait kar raha hai abroad mein. Donon Abhi ko kyun itna tang kar rahe hein yaar ufff
bahot bahot shukriya appreciation keliye savi dear :love:
 

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5700 + words hamare liye likhne ke liye tehe dil se dhanyawad Casi ji :love:
Ab aate hein update pe.
Casi ji emotion dikhaane, feel karaane aur likhne mein aap pakka ustaad ho. Hats off isske liye :bow:
Rula hi diya aap ne mujhe. Lag raha tha rone wale scene aega aur jabardast aya. Wow.... ufff... mujhe ruk kar rona pada aage nahin padh paayi, kuch mins baad padhna jaari rakha to aur bhi rona aya.
Kia likhte hi aap Sir. Dhamaal, kamaal.
Pehla rona tab aya jab khidki k baahar se Abhi ke honth thartharaaye aur Ruhi ki maa ko dikh gaya aur ussne Abhi se kaha ke rona mat... aur ulta Ruhi ko Abhi ke chehre ko dekh kar rona agaya. Tab mere aankhen dabdaba gaye.
Phir jab Abhi ne jawab diya k kissi kone mein baad mein roega ya buss mein chehra chhupa k roega tab main fut padi Ruhi k saath...
Aur jab Abhi ne kaha aawo ek saath milkar rote hein aawo nah Ruhi.... tab mujhse sambhala nah gaya, padhna rok kar rona pada.
Padhna resume kiya to aur bhi jiada rone lagi jab Abhi ne rote hue kaha ke chot ussko lagi, dil usska tuta to Ruhi kyun ro rahi hai.... main ne fir padhna roka aur khub royi.
Phir royi jab Abhi ne darwaja kholne ko kaha ye kehte hue k wo Ruhi ko hug karna chahta hai magar maa ne mana kiya....
Aur jab khud Ruhi ne door open kiya aut jab donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhar kar rone lage to main bekaabu hokar rone lagi. Mujhe laga ke main hi Ruhi hoon aur mujh par sab beet rahi hai.....
Aap readers ko character k andar ghusaa dete ho casi ji yehi aap ka likhne ka kamaal hai hats off.
Baaki jo hua mere liye secondary hai
Thanks itni khubsurat lajawaab update dene k liye casi ji. :love:
:bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

itni khubsurat review ke liye dil ki gehraayi se thanks savi dear :love:
 
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