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Romance Usski Gali Mein Jaana Chorr Diya (Exclusively For XForum) COMPLETED

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Update 23 How Abhi Faced It

Subha usski maa ne tang khincha tha Abhi ka yeh keh kar ke Ruhi apni nani ke yahan hai, kia ek baar phir Ruhi ki maa ne jaan bujh kar khidki band kiya Abhi se sharaarat karne ke liye? Kia andar se maa beti sab dekh aur sun rahe hein?! Kia Ruhi ne apni maa ko sab bata diya jo Abhi ne khat mein likha hai? Bina awaaz ke Ruhi ne kia kaha tha Abhi se?

Abhi kaam karne chala gaya kyunke lunchtime end ho gaya tha magar nah khidki khuli aur naa hi Ruhi dikhi. Abhi ka dimaaghi haalat bahot kharab tha uss waqt. Ghussa bhi kar raha tha aur kaam sahi se nahin ho raha tha uss se. bus ke baahar ke panels par aluminium sheet measurement se kaat kar rivet se chipkana tha, din bhar ka kaam tha, shaam tak wohi karna tha, pehla hi sheet kata to ghalat kata, kum tha, ek sheet waste hue. Aur Saeed ne kaha,

“Agar Mehboob ko pata chala ke yeh sheet kharab hua to naraaz hoga iss sheet ko chhupado kahin!”

Abhi ne ghusse mein reply kiya,

“Kaun si badi baat hai? Kate hue sheet ko dusri jagah istemaal kiya jaa sakta hai, kayi jagahon par uss se bhi chhota dimension ke liye kaatna hai to uss bigre hue hisse se kaat lenge not a big deal!”

Tony Abhi ka help kar raha tha. Jab sheets ko kaatna tha to kissi ek ko dusre taraf sheet ko pakarna padta tha. aur kata jaata tha ek tin kaatne wale kainchi se jissko Tin Snip kehte hei wo aisa hota hai jaise iss tasveer mein hai:


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Ab measurement par kaatne ke liye, pehle bus ki panel par naap liya jata tha, aur ussi naap ko sheets par pencil se mark kiya jaata phir ek line khincha jata tha sheet par tab uss line par tin snip se kata jata tha. jaise ke agar naap hai 5mts by 7 mts and 15 cms. To sheet par itna naap kar line khincha jaata tab uss line par tin snipper ko chalaate hue kaatta tha Abhi.

Ab yeh saare kaam thik Ruhi ke kitchen ke saamne karna hota tha, wo blank space hai nah sketch mein uss hisse mein yeh sab kaam kiya jaata tha. to har baar jab Abhi tin kaatne jaata to kitchen ke andar dekhta magar wo khaali tha koyi bhi nahin tha kitchen ke andar, magar Abhi ko ek ummed thi ke 3 bajne ke baad ruhi ko kitchen mein ana hi padega pakaane ke liye aur tab se shaam 6 baje tak to kitchen mein hi rehti hai, so abhi uss waqt ka intezaar karta raha kaam karte hue.

Kate hue tin ko laakar bus ki panel par sahi se dabaa kar hole dril karna hota, aur uss hole mein rivet pop kiya jata tha. River Tony pop kar raha tha jabke Abhi tin ko sahi disha mein laga raha tha taake wo hille nahin bilkool. Ek panel ke tin ko chipkaane ke liye kareeb 25 holes drills karne hote the aur utna hi rivet lagana padta tha. to ek sheet ko kaat kar, wapas aakar panel par chipkaane mein koyi 30 mins lag raha tha…. Abhi ne jaan bujh kar slow kiya aur 45 se 50 mins liya ek sheet ko chipkaane ke liye taake Ruhi ko kitchen mein aane ke time Abhi ko ussko dekhne aur baat karne ka mauka mile.

Shaam 3 baje tak Abhi ne apne kaam ko slow chalaya….. aur jab 3 baja aur Ruhi kitchen ki chaukath par nazar aayi bus ke taraf dekhte hue, to Abhi gaya aluminium sheet kaatne…. Abhi ka dil phir bhi khush hua ke pehla chiz jo Ruhi ne kiya wo tha direct bus mein dekhna, matlab Abhi ko dhundna ya usske taraf dekhna.

To Abhi aur Tony gaye thik Ruhi ke kitchen ke saamne, Ruhi wahin khadi rahi jab Abhi ko uss taraf aate hue dekha. Ruhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue hi abhi wahan rakhe aluminium sheet par baitha, koyi 14 sheet rakhe hue the niche kuch blocks par. Ruhi ke chehre par ek muskan saji hui thi aur usski aankhon mein ek chamak dikh rahi thi, khush thi. Magar Abhi heyraan tha ke aaj mili nahin aur aise behave kar rahi hai jaise sab kuch normal hai.

Abhi ne measuring tape ka ek end Tony ko pakarne ko kaha aur apne pencil se measure ke hisaab se mark kar raha tha sheets par aur Ruhi ko baar baar dekhe jaa raha tha to Tony ne kaha,

“Bhai kahin koyi mistake mat kar dena firse, mujhe cross check karne do ke aap ne sahi measurement par mark dala hai ya nahin aap ka dhyan udhar ziada hai abhi….”

Abhi ne hansste hue tape Tony ko diya aur ussko khud measurement mark karne ko kaha, aur line khinchne ko bhi kaha jahan jahan tin snipper chalana hai tab tak wo ishare se Ruhi se baat karta raha. Ruhi ne sone ka ishara karke Abhi ko samjhaya ke wo so gayi thi, tab Abhi ko yaad aya ke raat bhar wo soyi nahin thi kal, issi liye ussne kidki band karke so gayi thi, abhi abhi uthi hai.

Abhi ne phir pucha ke khat ka jawaab likha ya nahin? To Ruhi ne na mein sar hillaya hansste hue. Tony baar baar sar utha kar Tuhi aur Abhi ko dekh raha tha to Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Abe tu kyun ab humko dekh raha hai? Tu markings kar nah!”

Phir Abhi baitha apne tangon par tin snip se sheet kaatne ke liye, shuru hi kiya tha ke Manoj Shweta ko lekar aangan mein aate hue dikha….. Aur Shweta Manoj ka haath chhura kar bhaagte hue seedhe Abhi par jhapki aur usske kaandhon par apni choti choti baazuwon ko lapet kar zorr se “Abhhhiiiiii” chilaate hue ussko gale lagaaya aur kayi puppiyan diya Abhi ko. Ek hafte baad Shweta wapas aayi thi aaj. Aisa lag raha tha Abhi ki beti apne papa ko pyar kar rahi thi….. Ruhi aur Manoj donon kitchen ke stairs par khade hansste hue dekh rahe the Shweta ko. Phir Manoj andar chala gaya aur Ruhi ne kaha,

“Shwetu, tu mujhse milne nahin aayi seedhe Abhi ke goad mein chali gayi, main teri kuch nahin lagti, Abhi sab kuch hai ab?!”

Tab tak Abhi ne Shweta ko goad mein utha kar khada ho gaya tha aur Ruhi ke taraf dekhte muskura raha tha, aur Shweta ne Ruhi ko jawaab diya,

“Aap to upar the aur Abhi niche baitha hua tha, yeh itna ooncha hai ke issko puppy dene ke liye innko jhukne ko bolna padta hai tab puppy de sakte hein to aaj innko niche dekha, to chali gayi usske goad mein aap jealous ho rahe ho kia?!”

Sab Shweta ki masoom baton ko sunkar hanssne lage, khud Ruhi zor se hansi aur Shweta ko reply kiya,

“haan main jealous hoon kyunke tumse pehle Abhi ko main jaanti hoon”

Shweta ne apne naazuk ungli ko daanton mein dabaya aur Abhi se dhire se kaha,

“Wo aap ko pehle se jaanti hai?!”

Abhi ne bhi ussko dhire se kaha,

“haan jaanti to hai, magar hum aap se bahuuuuuuut ziada pyar karte hein, Ruhi se utna nahin karte!”

Shweta ne “hihihihihihi” kiya phir Abhi ke kaan mein kaha,

“ab agar ussko pata chala ke aap mujhse bahuuuuuuut pyar karte ho tab aur ziada jealous hogi nah hihihihihi”

Abhi ne apne shak ko mitana chaha aur Ruhi ko weise hi goad mein lekar bus ke taraf chalta gaya usske kaan mein baat karte hue. Abhi ko uss bachi mein Ruhi ki bachpan dikh raha tha, wohi naak naksha, wohi Aankhen, wohi Muskaan, to apni shak ko mitaane ke liye Abhi ne Shweta ke kaan mein kaha,

“kiss ne aap ko kaha jhut muth ke Ruhi ko didi bulaane ko? Wo to mummy hai nah aap ki?!”

Ruhi ne jawaab nahin diya buss daanton mein apni ungli dabaayi. To Abhi ne Shweta se sawaal jaari rakha,

“achah batao aap rehte kahan ho aap ki address pata hai aap ko?”

Shweta ne apni sheher ka naam bataya Abhi ko, tab Abhi ne pucha,

“Aap apne papa ke ghar rehti ho?”

Shweta ne haan mein sar hillaya, phir Abhi ne pucha,

“aap ke papa ka kia naam hai, aur surname bhi batao, aur aap ka surname?!”

Ruhi ki surname “Nunhuck” hai, to Abhi jaanna chahta tha ke agar Shweta usski chacha ki beti to Shweta ki surname bhi wohi hogi nah…. aur Shweta ne jawaab diya,

“mere papa ka naam hai Anirud Nunkuck, aur mera Shweta Nunhuck”

Abhi ne ek gehri saans liya aur pucha,

“Aap ki mummy bhi rehti hai nah saath uss ghar mein?”

Shweta ne jawaab diya,

“haan hamare saath hi rehti hai, mummy nurse hai hospital jaati hai roz.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“hmmm to phir Ruhi aap ki badi didi hi hui nah baby!”

Shweta ne apni muthi kholke usse dolte hue kaha,

“haan wo badi didi hi hai meri”

Abhi ne ek gehra saans liya, ussko kabhi shak hota tha ke Shweta Ruhi ki beti hai aur yehi secret chhupa rahi thi Ruhi uss se aur issi baat ko apni ghalati batana chahti thi aisa Abhi ko laga tha, ab Shweta ne confirm kar diya tha ke wo Ruhi ki chacha ki beti thi.

Phir bhi Abhi ne ek sawaal aur kiya Shweta se,

“aap ka koyi aur bhai behen hein kia wahan ghar par? bada bhai ya badi behen ya chhota bhai ya chhoti behen?!”

Shweta ne apni masoom aur Ruhi ki jaisi awaaz mein kaha,

“main akeli hoon mera koyi bhai aur behen nahin hai!”

Abhi ke mann mein dobara shak ne ghar kiya, Ruhi ke chacha aur chachi ke koyi aulaad nahin iss liye Shweta ko apne naam dekar adopt kiya hoga….. Abhi iss liye aisa sochne laga kyunke wo sheher wala chacha Ruhi ka bada chacha tha, aur uss age mein itni chhoti Shweta ki umar ki bachi hona kuch ajeeb lag raha tha….

Tab tak Manoj apne camera ke saath ghar se nikla aur Shweta se kaha,

“chal tujhe Amitabh Bachchan ki shooting dikhaunga aaj chal Shwetu!”

Aur Manoj Shweta ko lekar chala gaya, aur kitchen ke chaukath se Ruhi ne oonchi awaaz mein Shweta se kaha,

“mujhe ek puppy bhi nahin diya, mujhse mili bhi nahin, Abhi ke goad mein chipki rahi aur bina mile jaane lagi shooting dekhne, mat aana mere paas Shweta!”

Shweta main road ke taraf jaate hue Ruhi ko wave kiye ja rahi thi hansste hue….

Aur Ruhi ki maa bhi nikli stairs par Shweta aur Manoj ko jaate hue dekhne, phir Abhi gayi Ruhi ke kitchen ke chaukath ke paas aur usski maa ke saamne kaha,

“Tum kyun nahin chali gayi shooting dekhne apne bhai ke saath?”

Ruhi ne Abhii se hansste hue kaha,

“main ne kissi aur ke saath jaane ko socha hai magar wo busy hai sirf kaam kaam kaam karta rehta hai!!

Yeh reply sunkar andar se Abhi ka dil khush to hua magar Ruhi ko jawaab diya Abhi ne,

“sirf kaam hi karta wo; to kal do ghante tumhare saath nahin hota aur aaj aadha ghanta tumhare kapde dhone wale pathar par baith kar wait nahin karta!”

Ruhi ki maa ne hansste hue kaha,

“le! Ab de jawaab ussko, wo itna tez hai ke tujhe hara dega hamesha sawaal jawaab mein tujhse bahot ziada tez hai Abhi”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“hmm very intelligent boy with witty replies always… aap se baat karna asaan nahin hai nah Abhi?!”

To be continued in the next update immediately
 
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Update 24 How Abhi Faced It (ii)

Abhi ne kaha,

“iss sawaal ke badle tumko yeh batana behtar suit karta ke tum kehti ke tum ne uss aadhe ghante tak kyun mujhe wait karwaya?!”

Ruhi ne jeeb ko daanton mein dabaate hue kaha,

“sorry Abhi, kal raat nahin soyi thi nah to 11 baje hi main gehri neendh mein thi, aap log bus mein kaam karte hue shor kar rahe the nah to main ne nahin mummy ne khidki band kar diye taake meri neendh nah tute!”

Abhi ne kuch nahin kaha thik tabhi uss taraf se Rahima ne Ruhi ko bulaya kuch dikhaane ke liye, aur Ruhi nikli aur yeh gungunaate hue Abhi ke bagal se guzri, “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..”

Abhi ne suna aur usska dil bahot khush hua Ruhi ko uss geet ko gungunaate hue sun kar.

Aur Ruhi turant wapas aayi Rahima se kuch haath mein lekar aur wohi geet gungunaate hue Abhi ke bahot karib se guzri, to turant Abhi ne bhi gungunaya, “pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna….” Ruhi ne mudhkar usse dekha, muskuraayi aur kitchen ke chaukath par apni maa ke paas khadi ho gayi.

Abhi gaya unn donon ke paas khada hua aur Ruhi se pucha,

“did you read the letter?”

Ruhi ne ek pyari si muskurahat mein kaha,

“oh yes, yes thank you very much hmmmm thanks very very much for that, its so, so nice of you. But you will not get any answer for that okay Abhi?”

Abhi: “And why I won’t get any reply?”

Ruhi: “I am not worth to reply to such a lovely letter.”

Ruhi bade pyar se muskuraate hue baat kar rahi thi Abhi se apni maa ke saamne. Maa sirf muskura rahi thi.

To Abhi ne pucha,

“Is you mum understanding what we are talking?”

Ruhi: “No she is not!”

Abhi: “So will you tell me, what about the mistake you were talking yesterday?”

Ruhi ne baat ko badalte hue kuch aisa kaha jiss se Abhi ka dil baith gaya, ussko ghutan sa feel hua, Ruhi ne kaha,

“chalo maan lo ke aap ke khat ka mera jawaab nah hua to?!”

Abhi ne koyi jawaab nahin diya, buss Ruhi ke chehre mein utarte hue chehre se dekkhta raha. Kuch tha hi nahin Abhi ke paas kehne ke liye. Ruhi phir bhi muska rahi thi… to Ruhi ne khud kaha,

“Aur agar main aap se kahun ke meri mangni ho chuki hai to?!”

Yeh sunkar Abhi ke dimagh ne kaam karna bandh kar diya. Usske samajh mein nahin aya ke wo ab kia jawaab de Ruhi ko!!

Kuch pal khamosh rehne ke baad Abhi ne kaha,

“Main nahin manta, impossible….. So, you have someone in your life?”

Ruhi ne bade asaani se kaha,

“No not in my life, but he is abroad.”

Abhi ne dil ko sambhaalte hue pucha,

“he will come back to stay?!”

Ruhi ne muskuraate hue Abhi ke aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha,

“No, he will not come to stay, he will return.”

Abhi ne phir kaha,

“phir meri duah hai ke wo kabhi bhi wapas nah aaye!”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha,

“Hey bhagwaan aisa bhi koyi kehta hai kissi ke liye?!”

Ruhi ki maa sab sun rahi thi aur hanssti jaa rahi thi.

Abhi ne tab Ruhi ka haath thaam kar kaha,

“To kia tum mere liye ussko chorr nahin sakti, ussko bhool kar meri nahin ho sakti tum?”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“I don’t know that depends on my parents!”

Abhi ne object karte hue kaha,

“tumhare parents tumhare liye decide nahin kar sakte,tumko apna choice karna tumhara haq hai, weh log tumhare liye decide nahin kar sakte!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“but it is my duty to obey my parents”

Abhi ne ussko jawaab diya,

“but it is also your duty to obey yourself”

Tab Ruhi zor se hanssi, to Abhi ne kaha,

“okay phir thik hai main abhi issi waqt tumhare mummy se shaadi ke kiye tumhara haath mangne jaa raha hoon….”

Iss par Ruhi aur bhi hanssne lagi…..

Abhi ko lagne laga ke jo kuch abhi Ruhi ne kaha sab banawti baatein the, magar usske dil mein darr tha ke kahin yeh sab sach nah ho….

Aur Ruhi ne kaha,

“have you ever realised how tall you are and how I am?”

Abhi ne turant kaha,

“That’s not important, how tall is Amitabh Bachchan and how tall is Jaya Badhuri?”

Ruhi iss par bahut hanssi usski maa bhi hanssti gayi Abhi ki baat sunkar….

Aur Abhi ne kaha pyar mein yeh sab nahin dekha jaata, lambaayi, rang, jaat paat sab koyi maene nahi rakhta….

Abhi ne tab Ruhi se kaha ke aaj kaam 5 baje end hoga magar wo 6 se 6.30 ya7 baje tak issi aangan mein rahega aur chahta hai ke Ruhi se akele mein baar kare…..

Phir Abhi kaam karne laga… Ruhi aas paas hi rahi aur apne jeeb se Abhi ko ghanton bhar chidhaati rahi, hanssti rahi, khush dikh rahi thi, chanchal adaaon se jaise Abhi ko rijha rahi thi apni maa ke saamne.

Ruhi ab Abhi ko nazar se bilkool bhi nahin chorr rahi thi. Abhi ko bus ke piche wale hisse par sheets chipkana tha, to kitchen se bus ke piche to nahin dikh raha tha, kafi derf tak Abhi wahan raha to Ruhi khud aayi udhar…. Ussne apne cousin ke yahan jaane ka bahana kiya taake Abhi ke paas aa sake…. To Abhi ne ussko roka, aur bus ke andar dekhte hue Ruhi ne kaha,

“dekho tumhara boss tumko dekh raha hai”

Abhi ne kaha,

“dekhne do ussko sab pata hai!”

Ruhi ne kaha:

“what ussko sab pata hai? To main chali bye bye….”

Abhi ko bolna pada ke nahin saeed ko kuch pata nahin hai tab Ruhi ruki Abhi se baat karne ke liye…. Aur Abhi ne kaha,

“mere taraf dekho to!”

Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein, balke aankhon mein dekhne lagi, to abhi ne kaha,

“Dekho Ruhi, agar tum mujhe nahin mili, agar tum meri nahin hui, to main zindagi bhar kabhi shaadi nahin karunga, mujhe sirf aur sirf tum chahiye”

Ruhi ke donon Aankhen bhar aaye Abhi ko sunkar, ekaat katre aansoo ke chalak bhi gaye aur aasmaan taakte hue Ruhi ne roni awaaz mein kaha,

“oh my god, kyun aakhir kyun?

Abhi ne seriously kaha,

“kyunke main iss Ruhi ko nahin khona chahta ek ko kho diya hoon aur nahin khona mujhe!”

Ruhi samjhi nahin, ussne socha Abhi aise hi keh raha hai, Ruhi ne apne aansoo pochte hue kaha,

“Ab main jaa rahi hoon, main ab kuch dinon mein apni nani ke yahan chali jaungi.”

Abhi ne heyraan hote hue kaha,

“What?”

Ruhi rote rote hanss pari

Phir Abhi ne kaha,

“To yahan mera kia hoga? Main kaise kaam karunga yahan? Main kisse dekhunga har baar yahan, main Ruhi ke bina kia karunga phir yahan?”

Ruhi ne tab hansste hue kaha,

“phir dusre jagah kaise kaam karoge aap?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Issi liye to tumhari ek tasveer mangi hai nah main ne? Please ek photo de do apni, please.”

Ruhi: “nah, main kabhi kissi ko apni koyi bhi photo nahin dene wali”

Abhi ne kayi baar manga, request kiya, minatein kiye magar Ruhi ne mana kiya.

Abhi ne tab uss abroad rehne wale aadmi ke baare mein pucha, aur Ruhi ne kaha wo France mein hai, aur usska naam Amit hai. Abhi ne kaha ke wo abhi abhi uss naam aur aadmi ko khud CREATE kar ke bata rahi hai weisa koyi hai hi nahin, to Ruhi ne kaha ke nahin wo hakikat hai.

Tab Abhi ne kaha,

“ya tum iss liye mana kar rahi ho kyunke meri yeh Naukri tumko aur tumhari maa ko nahin passand, main ganda rehta hoon, mere kapde gande hein iss liye?”

Ruhi ne jo jawaab diya wo Abhi ko passand aayi,

“kyun iss mein kia hai? Koyi bhi kaam ho, kaam to kaam hota hai”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“ya phir tumko eysh o araam wali life chahiye, luxuries chahiye, amir aadmi ke saath hona passand hai tumhe jisske paas car, naukar chaakar ho, jo abroad rehta ho….”

Ruhi ne kaha

“nahin bilkool bhi nahin main weisi nahin hoon!”

To Abhi bola;

“Shakespeare ne kaha hai – ‘Uneasy lies the head that wears a crown’ isska matlab pata hai nah?”

Ruhi ne phir kaha,

“Aap kitne padhe likhe ho Abhi, kia kuch nahin pata aur yaad hai aap ko hmmm?!”

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa ne ussko awaaz diya to Ruhi ne kaha ab ussko jaana hai aur wo phir wohi geet gungunaate hui gayi, “pyar karte hein hum……”

Abhi ek bhaaripan feel karne laga, phir bhi ussko Ruhi se bus ke piche itni der baat karke achcha laga.

Aur kuch hi der baad Abhi ko ab bus ke andar ke ceiling ke liye kuch istemal karna tha jo Ruhi ki lounge mein rakha hua tha to wo gaya wahan usse lene, Ruhi ki maa ne darwaza khola aur deewar se tek laga kar khadi Abhi ko dekh rahi thi to Abhi ne uss se kaha,

“Ruhi se keh dijiye main ek baar phir usske ghar ke andar aya hoon”

Ruhi ne dusre kamre se jawaab diya,

“kehdo unnko ke danda padega ab unnko!

Kuch der baad Abhi wapas panels par sheets chipka raha tha jo Ruhi ke terrace ke paas tha aur Ruhi aur usski maa donon wahi the aur baar baar phir Ruhi ne ussi tarah apni maa ke saamne Abhi ko apne jeeb se chidhaya… Abhi ko to Ruhi ka uss tarah se jeeb se chidhaana bahot pasand tha to Abhi ne socha ke Ruhi ka wohi “I love you” bolne ka tarika tha shaayad.

Aur kuch der baad aur Ruhi apni khidki par tek lagaye hue dekhi gayi, aur Abhi ussko fix dekh raha tha, to dhire se Ruhi ne kaha,

“Kia dekh rahe ho aap? Uss tarah se mat dekhiye mujhe.

Magar abhi ne aur behtar position liya Ruhi ko behtar se dekhne ke liye tab Ruhi ne kaha,

“aap bilkool paagal ho!”

Abhi ne jawaab diya ke “haan hoon main paagal!”

Ab Ruhi ki maa baahar nikli aur Ruhi chaukath par aayi aur Abhi ko ishaare se bulaya, to Abhi kaam chorr chaar kar gaya usske paas, Ruhi kuch kehne jaa rahi thi Abhi ko magar jab Abhi usske paas pahuncha to Ruhi ne kaha,

“main ne aap ko nahin bulaya!”

To wapas lautte hue Abhi ne kaha,

“mere jaane ka time ho gaya, please yahin rehna jab main jaane lagun mujhe tum dikhna chahiye jaate hue, varna main nahin jaunga aaj yahin rahunga! I will stay at your place all night!”

Ruhi ne Khushi se hansste hue kaha,

“Really aap yahin rahoge hamare yahan? Yeh to Khushi ki baat hai rehye nah!”

Uss waqt Abhi ke haath mein ek cigarette tha aur Ruhi ne kaha,

“kitna cigarette peete ho aap, feinkiye isse Abhi issi waqt!”

Abhi ko Ruhi ka weise kehna bahot achcha laga, ussko laga jaise ek wife apni husband ko cigarette feinkne ko keh rahi hai to Abhi ne jawaab mein kaha,

“Wo kab hoga tumko keh diya hai main ne, agar chahti ho ke hamesha ke liye cigarette feink dun to wo din jaldi se aaye pray karo! Matlab jab tum meri ban jaogi tab!”

Aur Abhi ne sach mein soch liya aur khud se kassam kha liya tha ke jiss din Ruhi usska hua wo cigarette kabhi nahin piyega uss din se.

Abhi ne phir yaad kiya ke ussne Abhi tak apni wo baat nahin bataayi hai to kaha,

“Ari suno to, kiss baat ke liye kal tum ne kaha tha ke kia main tumhari ghalatiyon ko maaf kar sakta hoon ya nahin? Tumne abhi tak kuch kaha hi nahin, sunon jab sab chale jaenge tab main rukunga, late tak piche ana hum baat karenge….”

Ruhi ne haan mein sar hillaya…..

Ab tak jitna kuch hua wo sab Abhi soch raha tha ke sab Ruhi ki maa ki banaayi hui plan hai Abhi ko aazmaane ke liye. Jo kuch Ruhi ne kaha, jaise wo behave karne lagi thi sab kuch Abhi samajh raha tha ke sab uski maa ne Ruhi ko seekhaya hai Abhi ko parakhne ke liye usska imtehaan lene ke liye Ruhi waisa kar aur keh rahi thi.

To be continued in the next update immediately
 
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Update 25 Ruhi Reveals It

Shaam ke 5.15 se 6.45 tak Abhi ne Ruhi se baat kiye, aur usski maa sath thi uss waqt. Maa ki haaziri mein sab kuch kaha suna gaya, thoda English mein thoda hindi mein baatein kiye donon ne, rona dhona bhi hua, aur maa ne bhi beech beech mein baat kiye.

Mehboob ne jab dekha saare kaam karne wale chale gaye aur Abhi Ruhi ke kitchen ke chaukath par khada hai to pucha,

“are Abhi aaj ghar nahin jana hai kia tumko?”

Rahima ne Abhi ki jagah jawab diya apne pati ko,

“lagta hai aaj Abhi Ruhi ke saat dinner karke jaega ya ussi ke yahan rahega!”

Ruhi hansste hue Abhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha, aur Mehboob ne kaha,

“Acha yeh baat hai, to thik hai kal subha phir sab se pehle kaam shuru kar dena tumko door se nahin ana padega.”

Aur Abhi ne Ruhi aur usski maa se kaha,

“Dekha, sahi to keh raha hai Mehboob, main yahin theher jaata hoon aaj ek jagah milega kia raat beetane ke liye?”

Donon maa beti hanss rahe the aur Ruhi ne thoda gambhirta se kaha,

“Aap sapnon ki dunya se nikaliye nah Abhi main ne aap se kaha nah ke it’s too late now main kissi aur ki amaanat hoon!”

Abhi ko thoda ghussa aya aur usska dil ne chaha ke chilla kar Ruhi se kahe “phir kia naatak kar rahi hai itne dinon se usske saath, kyun ussko kiss kiya kyun uss se milne aati rahi ghar ke piche, kyun ussko lunch par invite kiya, kyun ussko jeeb se chidhati hai kyun itna kuch kiya, khilwaad samajh rakah hai kia?!!”

Magar Abhi ne sayyam rakhte hue araam se kaha,

“please ghar ke piche aao nah tumse akele mein baat karni hai mujhe, bahot serious baatein karni hai.”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“nahin jo kuch kahna hai yahin kehiye aap.”

Abhi ne usske maa ke taraf dekha aur kaha,

“Magar hum donon ke beech ki baatein hein tumhari mummy ki zaroorat nahin hai nah yaar!”

Ruhi ne kaha,

“are meri mummy ko sab kuch pata hai nah usske saamne hum kuch bhi baat kar sakte hein!”

Aur mummy ji ne kaha,

“haan Abhi mere saamne baat karoge to koyi sawaal bhi nahi karega nah, agar Ruhi ke saath akele piche gaye to sawaal uthenge!”

To Abhi ne kaha okay thik hai aur baton baton mein aise hi ek ke baad ek baat nikalte gaye.

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Agar aap ko nahin yakeen ke koyi hai jo mera intezar kar raha hai to meri mummy se puch lijiye.”

Abhi ne usski maa ke taraf dekha to ussne kaha,

“Haan yeh sach hai, Ruhi ko propose kar diya gaya hai shadi ke liye humne ladke walon ko zubaan de diye hein to kuch nahin kar sakte nah ab!”

Abhi bhi serious hua aur kaha,

“Main yakeen nahin karta,yeh sab aap donon ne milkar khichdi pakaaye hue hein hai nah?!”

Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekhte hue jaise usski haar par khush ho rahi thi jab usski mummy ne wo sab kuch kaha to. Aur Ruhi boli,

“kia meri maa aap se jhoot bolegi?”

Abhi: “haan jaise subha kaha tha ke tum apni nani ke ghar chali gayi ho!”

Abhi ne uss aadmi ke baare mein pucha, to Ruhi ki maa ne kaha,

“wo wahin ka rehne wala hai jahan isski naani rehti hai.”

Abhi ne kaha,

“Aap Ruhi ko France bhej rahi ho, itni door aap ko pata bhi hai wahan isski kia haal ho sakta hai?!”

Mummy ji ne kaha,

“khair dekhte hein isski kismat mein kia hai, Ruhi ko hamesha se foreign jaane ki tamanna thi to jane diya jaye main ne socha.”

Abhi ne tab Ruhi ko dekhte hue kaha,

“issi liye main ne tumse kuch der pehle pucha tha kia tumko life ki luxuries chahiye?!”

Abhi bahot depressed feel karne laga tha yeh usski chehre se zaahir tha, jab bhi Abhi udaas hota ya koyi bhi chiz ussko pareshan karta to Abhi ke chehre pe saaf nazar ata tha aur wo Ruhi ko achi tarah se pata tha, wo Abhi ke chehre mein hi dekhe jaa rahi thi, ussko pata tha ke Abhi ko gehri choat lagi hai yeh sab baatein sunkar…… Abhi itna khushnuman insaan tha ke usske chehre par hamesha ek raunak hua karta tha, doston ke beech bhi koyi bhi usske chehre se pehchan leta tha jab bhi Abhi ko koyi pareshani hoti thi, kyunke Abhi tha hi aisa ke usska chehra sab bata deta tha. Abhi ek joyful happy going insaan tha. ab aise insaan ko choat lage to saaf dikhta hai.

To Ruhi Abhi ke chehre mein dekh kar samajh sakti thi ke Abhi ghayal hua hai aur khud Ruhi ke aankhen bhar aayi abhi ko weise dekh kar.

Abhi ne sar jhuka liya tha aur kuch der tak kuch nahin bola, aur jab phir se Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha to Ruhi ne ussko jeeb se chidhaya. Iss baar Abhi ko usska chidhana acha nahin laga, Abhi ne bahot seriously Ruhi ke chehre mein dekha ur ek gehra saans liya….

Bina kuch kahe Abhi ne apne kadam ko jaane ke liye moda, sar jhukaate hue to Ruhi ki maa ne usskko roka yeh kehte hue,

“are ruko to, abhi sirf 15 mins baat kiye hein aur jaane lage thehro to aur baatein karte hein nah!”

Abhi ne dabbe awaaz mein kaha,

“Ab kia kehna baki hai aunty?!”

Abhi ne ek cigarette jalaya, aur Ruhi ko piche apne kamre ki khidki ke paas aane ko kaha. Magar usski maa ne kaha,

“nahin wo ab aap se akeli baat nahin karegi, jo kuch kehna hai mere saamne kehye nah aap!”

To bhi ne kaha,

“To aap bhi wahin aaiye usski kamre mein wahin baat karte hein nah yahan Mehboob aur Rahima hamaare baton ko sun sakte hein nah!”

To Abhi piche gaya Ruhi ke khidki ke paas aur dekha ke Ruhi wahan uss se pehle pahunch gayi hai aur apne donon kehuniyon ko khidki se tek kar sar baahar nikaal kar muskuraate hue Abhi ko aate hue dekh rahi thi…. Jab Abhi wahan reach hua to dekha usski maa usske piche khadi hai.

Abhi ne ruhi ke aankhon mein dekhte hue kaha,

“Ruhi ab main apne gharwalon se, Naina se, doston se kia kahunga?!”

Donon maa beti ne ek saath kaha,

“Yeh aap ki ghalati hai kyun sabko bataya aap ne?!”

Baatein gambhir hote gaye, Abhi bahut hi seriously baat kar raha tha, ussne apni maa ke baare mein kaha Ruhi ko, uss se kaha ke ussko usski maa ki jaisi saas life mein kahin nahin milegi, usskki maa itni achchi hai…..

Ruhi ki maa ne Abhi ke thartharaate hue honth ko dekhte hue kaha,

“Ab yahan rona mat Abhi….”

Abhi ne kaha,

“nah, yahan nahin yeh tab hoga jab akele tanhaayi mein hunga tab…”

Jab Abhi ne weisa kaha to dekha ke Ruhi ki aankhen bhar aaye aur ansoo chalak gaye… Abhi ne turant apna haath badhaya usske chehre ke taraf aur Ruhi ne ek kadam piche kiya aur Abhi ne usski honton ko kaampte dekha…. Usski maa wahin rahi bina hille to Abhi ne usski maa se kaha,

“Ab aap mujhe yeh samjhao ke Ruhi kyun rone lagi? Dil mera tuta nah? dard mujhe hua, takliff mujhko ho rahi hai to Ruhi kyun ro rahi hai? Samjhaiye aap mujhe yeh baat! Agar Ruhi mujhse pyar nahin karti to ussko kyun aise mere haal par rona ata?!”

Ruhi apni bed par leyt kar ro rahi thi apne aankhon se aansoo poncte hue, to Abhi ne ussko bulaya, paas aane ko kaha…. Aur kaha,

“Ab tumhi batao mujhe Ruhi, ke kyun rone lagi tum? Rona to mujhe tha nah? wo main ghar jaakar kar lunga ya bus mein jaate hue munh chhupa kar ro lunga magar tum kyun rone lagi agar mujhse pyar nahin hai to?!”

Ruhi ne aur zor se rona shuru kiya apni takiye mein munh dabaate hue to Abhi ke bhi aankhen bhar aaye aur chalak bhi gaye aur tadapti awaaz mein, rote hue Abhi ne kaha,

“aao nah Ruhi ek saath milkar rote hein aao rona share karte hein donon aah nah Ruhi!!”

Abhi Ruhi ko zorse apne seene se lagaana chahta tha uss waqt, magar wo ghar ke baahar tha aur Ruhi andar thi apni bed par thi to behte aansoowon se Abhi ne usski maa ko dekha aur kaha,

“Please aap piche wala darwaza open karo nah, main Ruhi ko hug karna chahta hoon chaahe wo aakhri baar hi kyun nah ho, kholo nah please….”

Ruhi ki maa ne nah mein sar hillaya magar Ruhi apne aansoo ponchte hue uth kar piche wale darwaze ko khol diya, to jhapat kar Abhi wahan gaya aur uss chawkat par Ruhi ko zor se baahon mein bhar kar rone laga… donon ek dusre ko baahon mein bhade ro rahe the, maa dekh rahi thi aur kaha,

“Ruhi!! ahista sabko batana hai kia sssshhhh”

Aur maa ne uth kar darwaza band kiya aur donon ko bed par baithne ko kaha, khidki ke parde ko khinncha aur donon ko bilkool aahiste baat karne ko kaha, magar baat kahan donon ek dusre ke baahon mein rote jaa rahe the do chhote bachon ki tarah…..

Aur ab Ruhi ne kal ki tarah dobara apni maa ke saamne pucha,

“aap mere saare ghalatiyan maaf kar sakte ho Abhi?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke aankhon ko ponchte hue kaha,

“are baba kal keh diya nah HAAN” HAAN” HAAN” sab maaf kiya main ne kuch bhi ho!”

Tab Ruhi ne English mein baat kiye….

“And if I am not what I am looking to you, if I am someone else, different then?!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke uss baat ko sunkar, upar chhat ko dekha, usski aankhen phir bhar aaye aur ek bacchi ki tarah rote hue Abhi ka haath bahut zor se pakar kar Ruhi ne pucha;

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”
To be continued…. (5,752 words from all 3 updates)
 
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Woooooowww........
Very good update......
Very well written as well as described......
Mostly last part.....very good.....

Update me kuch kamiya bhi thi......May be wo bas mujhe hee nazar aayi ho.....ya aapke hisaab se na ho....lekin mujhe lagi ho......
Lekin unke baare me baad me baat karenge......

Now let's talk about update.......
Ye baat ak dum thik hai ki us time gharo ki banawat se hee standard ko tola jata tha.....
Even aaj bhi hai ye chij.....gaanv I me yanah tak ki kai shahro me bhi ye hee baato ko mana jata hai....
Bhale hee us bande ne apna manaane bada banaane ke liye pushteni zameen bech di ho ya logo se bhar bhar ke loan le rakha ho.....
Lekin use bada aadmi or standard mana jata hai.....

Ab baat kare abhi ke darr ki to....yar darr to lagega hee....aakhir apne pyar se milne jaa raha hai.....pakde jaane ka darr.....
Kisi ke dekh lene ka darr.....intimacy me khalal padne ka darr......

OR sabse bada darr.....Jo socha hai wo na hua ya uska ulta hee ho gaya to......

Khair aisa kuch nahi hua.....OR abhi aakhir andar chala hee gaya.....

Shaayad kisi ko yaad na ho.....lekin yanha abhi ki.....first wish......puri ho gayi.....
Jo ki usne tab maangi thi jab usne Ruhi ko khana pakaate hue dekha tha.....
Tab sabse pahle ye hee uske dimaag me baat aayi thi.....ki.....
KYA KABHI RUHI USKE LIYE BHI KUCH BANAAYEGI.....KYA KABHI USE BHI WO KUCH PAKA KAR KHILAAYEGI......
RUHI KAISA KHANA BANATA HOGI.....ETC.

to aaj inn sab me apne bhai ka ye khwaab to pura ho hee gaya....awesome

DONO ka kiss or physical ak dusre ke kareeb aana....ak dusre ke naajuk ango ko touch karna....with a feeling and understanding.....that was good....

And now the best part of update.....
Ruhi's sudden crying......
Ye to pakka hai ki ye jo bhi atmosphere create hua hai.....use Ruhi nahi Ruhi ki maa ne racha hai.....

Ruhi ki maa ka achanak ghar se bahar jana.....with his son.....
Ruhi ka abhi ko lunch ke liye invite karna....jabki use pata hai ki wo apna lunch.....saath me hee lekar aata hai.....
Phir use piche ke darwaaze se bulana....jabki agar use abhi ko khana hee khilata tha to wo use rasoi me se hee kisi chij me daal kar de sakti thi.....
Ruhi ke ghar me akele hona.....ha akeli kyoki....dada ji ka hona na hona barabar hai.....
Ye saari baate iss baat ki taraf point karti hai ki ye saari situation Ruhi ki maa ne hee create kiya tha.....taaki Ruhi apne dil ki baat khol kar....abhi ke saamne rakh paaye.....apna past use bata paaye....

Lekin abhi ko khone ke darr or uske pyar ne use aisa karne nahi diya.....OR may be baat kuch aisi ho jise Ruhi bol na paa rahi ho.....
OR Ruhi ke na bol paane ka kaaran ak to use abhi ko khone ka darr or uska pyar hai....OR dusra baat shaayad koi aisi hai jise wo khud bhi yaad nahi karna chahti.....

Ab baat karte hai.....us kami ya deficiency ki jo ki mujhe lagi.....ho sakta ki wo bas mujhe hee lagi ho...
So now let's start.....

1-Ho sakta aapko dhyaan na raha ho.....lekin aapne Ruhi jo khana laayi thi uska nam pahle CURRY bataya tha.....OR baad me khaate time....BUTTER CHICKEN.....
ab curry or butter chicken me kaafi difference hai.....

2-doodh me makkhi ki tarah.....really.....
Ye to bilkul hee funny type ho gaya.....aisi cozy situation me ye bilkul odd lagta hai.....jaise kisi ne aasman me baithe kisi ko ak dum se niche gira diya ho....

3- mai jaanta bhi hu....OR maanta bhi....ki ye ak AUTOBIOGRAPHY hai......dusre shabdo me kahu to aapne ise ak autobiography type likha hai.....and I know ki isme changes possible nahi hai.....

Lekin romance ko itna deep le jana.....bhale hee unn dono ne physical relation na banaya ho.....but that time....agar Ruhi na rokti to Abhi....wo bhi kar chuka hota.....OR aisa usne soch ke rakha bhi tha....
Brother that is not love.....kisi ko physical paane ki chaah.....not good....kahani ki iss stage par to bilkul nahi.....

4- Ruhi physically kuch jyada hee active hai.....usne HUG khud saamne se kiya....kiss khud saamne se kiya....yanha tak ki jab Abhi ne uska haath abhi ke internal part par rakha....tab usne use badi hee aasani se hold kiya.....
Na sirf hold kiya.....balki use sehlaya bhi.....

I mean.....koi bhi ladki apni first meeting mai aisa nahi karegi.....OR wo bhi uss zamaane ki.....upar se jiske saath pahle bhi kuch galat ho chuka ho.....

To ye kuch chije thi jo mujhe thik nahi lagi.....ho sakta hai aage aap inhe explain kar paaye.....

Anyways
Good update....
Thanks....

Thanks so very very much Vikram bro. Very happy with your review.
You are allowed to point things which you found not right.
But the FACTs REMAINS the same as they HAPPENED EXACTLY that way.
Rahi baat butter chicken aur curry ki to butter chicken hi ek kissam ki curry hai bhai. Ussi de roti bhi khaya jata hai aur chawal bhi. :D
Aur baat sexual feeling ki to kuch ghalat nahin tha kyunke Abhi Ruhi ko apni wife maan chuka tha to ussko apni wife ke saath itna closeness upar upar sex karne ki chaah banta hai.... aap shayad 1986 ko ziada old ya door samajh rahe ho.... bhai uss zamaane mein bahot khulam khula sab kuch hone laga tha..... sabhi 1980's ke movies dekho samajh jaoge.
Ye gana yaad hai nah "khulam khula pyar karenge hum donon, iss dunya se nahin darenge hum donon..... movie Julie yaad hai, shadi se pehle sex kar liya aur pregnant ho gayi thi..... "my heart is beating, keeps on repeating yaad hai Vikram bhai? Uss zamane mein ye sab start ho chuka tha.... sab chalta tha bhai.... Abhi tab ki full modern ladka tha, in tha, trendy tha. To obviously wo sab karna chahta tha apni hone wali wife se.....
Aap kehto ho that is not love.... to aage padhte rehna phir ek din aap ko aaj ki baat yaad dilaunga :D
Aur haan Ruhi ne Abhi ki pant ke upar haath rakha tha. Apne aap nahin, Abhi ne usska hath apne haath se khinch kar wahan kiya tha.... aur bus halke se haath chalaya tha uss jagah..... Ab Ruhi ne weisa kyun kiya tha wo aap aaj ki update padhne k baad shayad samajh jaoge. Aap ne yahan bhi kaha k uss zamaane ki ladki to weisa nahin karti to aaj ke updates aur baaki k updates padhne k baad your opinion will be changed.
Thanks Vikram bro for reading in depth, I loved it.
 
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“It makes no difference to whatever it be! I would accept to marry you even if you had a child, even if you are a divorcee, even if you are a widow!”

“AND IF I AM NOT A VIRGIN ABHI??!”
SENSELESS.........ACTUALLY MEANINGLESS
when he is agry to marry her if she had a child, even if she is a divorcee, even if she is a widow
then what is the value of virginity...... thereafter
.................................
you haven't given the details of .........whatever ruhi and her mother said..............
but hinted ........ that she has a fiance...... her marriage is fixed

the big question.............. why her mother....... not only supported but promoted their affair........
if the fate was this,,,,,,,,,,,,knowingly

anyway...............waiting for the next

this twist is making the story a thriller with lot of drama, suspense and adventures
...................... emotional part is only belongs to abhi
i've no sympathy with crocodile tears of ruhi
 

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Update 14 Did the Quarrel End? How?

Subha Abhi late utha. Ziada peene ki vajah se sota raha. 8.30 ko bus mein tha kaam ke liye jaane ko. Yeh pehli baar hua tha jiss din se wahan kaam kar raha tha.

Pahunchne se pehle bus mein jaate waqt Abhi of course sirf Ruhi ke baare mein hi soch raha tha aur kal ke hue wakiye ko…. Abhi ab yeh sochne laga tha ke subha ko sabse pehle kaam par reach hone wala aaj 8.30 ko reach nahin hua hai, aur socha ke Ruhi kia soch rahi hogi 6 baje se 8.30 tak jab ussko wahan nahin dekha hoga to? Abhi sochne laga,

“Kia Ruhi mujhko dhund rahi hogi? 6 baje se meri raah dekh rahi hogi nah? kissi se puchne aayi hogi ke main kyun nahin aya hoon? Are yaar kahin wo yeh nah soche ke iss liye ke ussne kaha tha ke main nahin aunga to bala tal gayi usski; iss liye main nahin aya hoon…..”

Ab Abhi ke dil mein phir se wo baat aayi ke Ruhi ne uss se kaha tha ke usske liye bala tal jaegi agar ussne wahan aana band kar diya to…. Yeh sochne ke baad Abhi ko bus se utarne ka mann nahin kiya, socha ke ab kaam par jaaye hi nahin. Wo abhi tak hurt feel kar raha tha uss baat ko soch kar…. Aur ek pal ke liye Abhi ne socha ke hamesha ke liye issi waqt se wahan jaana band karde aur uss kaam ko chorr de! Tab hamesha ke liye saare lafde khatam!!

Aisa soch to liya dil mein Abhi ne magar wahan pahuchne par bus se uss bus stop par hi utra jahan utarna tha, yaane Ruhi ke ghar ke paas wale bus stop par. 9 bajne wala tha aur tab abhi uss aangan mein chalte hue nazar aya. Saeed aur Vinay bus ke uss side par the jiss taraf wo bada darkhat tha, aur Tony bus ke paas tap one ke paas kuch kar raha tha, abhi washroom pahuncha to Tony usske paas gaya aur kaha,

“are yaar main ne socha tu nahin aega, Saeed ghussa kar raha tha aur bura bhala bhi kehne laga tha tujhe!”

Abhi ne kapde badalte hue aur Ruhi ke kitchen ke andar dekhte hue kaha,

“bhai goli maar Saeed ko aur yeh bata Ruhi nazar aayi ke nahin yaar?!”

Tony: “Abhi wo subha se kayi chakkar laga chuki hai, rone wali surat banaayi hui hai, khud mujhse kayi baar puch chuki ke tu kidhar hai aur usski maa aayi Saeed se puchne ke tu kyun nahin aya aaj!”

Abhi ne shirt pehente hue kaha,

“Really? That’s nice yaar, that’s very good news, magar ab kidhar hai wo ladki mujhe paagal banaane wali?!”

Tony: “Tujhko andar se zaroor dekh rahi hogi aur muskura rahi hogi, tere expression ko read kar rahi hogi ke tu abhi tak ghussa to nahin, ussko pata hoga ke kal tere liye wo saamne nahin aayi to tu ghussa hoga, andar muskuraate hue tujhe dekh rahi hogi. Bahot hi khush ho rahi hogi ke tu agaya hai. Dekna abhi zaroor
tere saamne aegi.”

Abhi: “Achah? To bala kaise talegi agar main aata hi raha to?! Ho sakta hai ke yeh bhi keh rahi hogi ke yeh bala phir agaya!”

Tony? “Ab chorr yaar, abhi tak tu uss baat ko dil mein liye baitha hai? Wo tujhse bahot pyar karti hai tujhe paagalon ki tarah dhund rahi thi!”

Abhi: "terrace par jhadu laga diya ussne, poncha laga diya kia?”

Tony: “nahin kuch nahin kiya sirf teri raah dekh rahi hai subha se, usski nazrein sirf main road par aur aate hue bus par rehti thi subha se!

Abhi: “yaar tony to ab kyun nahin dikh rahi hai? Mere saamne aa nahin sakti kia? Marr gayi kia wo?!”

Tony: “are yaar itna ghussa kyun karne laga achaanak tu? Wo sun legi yaar. Kamaal hai udhar Saeed ghussa kar raha hai idhar tu kia ho gaya hai? Kissi ki nazar to nahin lagi hein kahin?!”

Abhi: “bhaad mein jaaye saeed kaun si badi toap hai wo, chal karte hein jo kaam karna hai…..”

Jab Abhi aur Tony bus ke taraf jaane lage to Abhi ko Ruhi ki blue dress ki ek choti si jhalak dikhaayi diya lounge mein hawa se parde ke hillne ki vajah se. Matlab Abhi ko pata tha ke Ruhi ussko andar se dekh rahi thi.

Aur 9.15 ko Abhi ne kaam karna start kiya aur Saeed shuru hua;

“kia hai abhi? Aise kaam kiya jaata hai kia? Subha ke 9.15 ko kaam shuru hota hai kia?

Ek to Abhi pehle se ghusse mein tha Ruhi ki kal wale vyohaar ko lekar aur ab Saeed uss par chilla raha tha to Abhi ne bhi ghusse mein aur oonchi awaaz mein Saeed ko jawaab diya.

Donon mei tutu main main hone laga aur tension badhne lage…. Awaaz door tak sunaayi dene lage donon ke aur dhadpdaate hue Mehboob apne ghar se baahar aya aur donon ko shaant karne ki koshish kiye…. Saeed Abhi ko suna raha tha aur Abhi saeed ko…. Saeed ne ek baar kaha,

“yahan herogiri karne nahin aate hein kaam karne aate hein, Mehboob ne humko kaam karne ke liye paise diye hein flirt karne ke liye nahin, kia karta rehta hai tu kaam karne ke waqt, kia karne jata hai wahan uss washing stone ke paas? Kaam wahan hota hai kia?”

Ruhi aur usski maa sab sun rahe the, aur Ruhi ne apni maa ke chehre mein dekha, udaasi aur darr ke saath….. Ruhi ne kabhi nahin socha tha ke kuch aisa hoga….

Abhi ne Saeed ki uss baat ka yeh jawaab diya chilaate hue,

“kyun be tere gaand mein kyun aag lagta hai agar main wahan jata hoon to? Kaam to pura karta hoon tujh se bahut ziada kaam main ne kiya hai iss bus mein dikhaun tujhko, naap lagayega tum ne kitna kaam kiya aur main ne kitna?”

Mehboob ko pata tha ke Abhi ne bahut ziada kaam kiya hua hai to ussne Abhi ke kaandhe par haath rakh kar ussko ek taraf karne ki koshish kiya, magar Saeed ne bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha ke ussko bataaye ke kaise Abhi ne ziada kaam kiya hai, to ussi tone mein, ghusse mein Abhi ne kaha,

“yeh dekh shuruwaat yahan se kiya tha main ne front side, jo back side se 50 gunah ziada complicated aur mushkil hai phir bhi tujh se pehle main ne right panel ko banana shuru kar diya aur tu back side par hi laga hua tha, jab main ne front side aur right panel pura kar diya tab jahan tujhko left panel pura karna tha wo bhi uss mein aadha se ziada main ne complete kiya, main ne upar ke kaam bhi aadha se ziada kar diya, to tere mukable 100 gunah ziada kaam kiya hai main ne iss bus mein sala mujhko 2 ghante ki lateness ke liye sunata hai? Main tujhko sunaunga to tere adhe paise mere hone chahiye, suna tum ne mujhe ghussa mat dila varna sab chorr chaar ke chala jaunga yahan se ek to bala banke mandra raha hoon kissi ke liye, nikal hi jaun to achchah hai!”

Abhi itna ghusse mein tha ke Mehboob ussko sambhal nahin paa raha tha, Ruhi aur usski maa terrace par nikal gaye the sab dekhte hue, to Mehboob ko laga ke sirf Ruhi Abhi ko shant kar paegi, to Mehboob ne Ruhi ke maa ke taraf dekha aur ishaare se ussko kuch kaha, aur Ruhi ki maa aayi Abhi ke bazu pakra aur apne terrace ke taraf lejaate hue ahiste aur araam se kaha,

“Idhar chalo aao aao ssshhhh ghussa thuk do aao nah dekho Ruhi tumko bula rahi hai aao nah beta, aisa nahin karte, thand rakho beta…” tab tak chalte hue Ruhi ghar ke piche wale hisse mein jaa chuki thi aur apni maa ko Abhi ko apne saat laate hue dekh rahi thi….

Wo hissa ghar ke piche tha washing stone se thoda door, Ruhi ki aankhe bhar aayi thi kyunke ussne sab suna ke Abhi ne kuch der pehle kaha ke kissi ke liye wo bala ban chuka hai to behtar hai ke sab chorr chaar kar chala jaaye… ruhi apni kahi hui baat par bahot pachta rahi thi aur jaise Ruhi ki maa Abhi ko uss kone mein laaya Ruhi Abhi se lipat gayi rote hue aur Abhi ke peeth par apne komal kalaayi ko ferrte hue Ruhi kayi baar rote hue kehti gayi,

“I am sorry, I am very very sorry, please forgive me, will you? Mujhe maaf kardo Abhi mujhse ghalati hui, mujhe kal wo nahin kehna chahiye tha I am so sorry Abhi!”

Abhi ka jism shake kar raha tha ghusse se, aur jitna zor se Ruhi ne ussko apne baahon mein jakra tha Ruhi usske jism ki wo thartharaahat feel kar rahi thi…. Aur Ruhi khud kaampne lagi rote hue aur maafi maangte hue. Ruhi ki maa sab dekh rahi thi aur apni beti ko rote hue dekh kar wo khud apni aankh se aansoo ponch rahi thi.

Abhi jaise hosh mein nahin tha uss waqt. Usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kia ho raha hai…. Ussko laga ke sab ek sapna tha… aur ahiste ahiste Abhi ne apne baahon ko uthaya aur Ruhi ke kaandhe par kiya, Ruhi ka badan pura Abhi ke jism se chipki hui thi uss waqt, Aur oonche kad ke hone ke kaaran Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chaati par tha aur wo Abhi ke dil ki dhadkanon ko saaf sun rahi thi. Ruhi ke donon baahein Abhi ke baazu ke niche se hokar ussko jakre hue the…. Ruhi ke aankhon se ab bhi ashk jaari the, aur jis pal ko Ruhi ne Abhi ke haathon ko apne kaandhe par feel kiya tab usski aankon ke aansoo ruke aur usski maa wahan se wapas terrace par chali gayi aur Mehboob ne uss se kaha ke Abhi ko kuch der udhar hi rehne de taake wo shant ho sake. Ruhi ki maa tab Mehboob aur saeed se baatein karne lage jaanne ke liye ke jhagda kyun aur kaise shuru hua. Dhire se Mehboob ne Ruhi ki maa se kaha ke iss mein Abhi ki ghalati nahin hai ussne sach mein saeed se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai bus mein.

Udhar jab Abhi ke haath Ruhi ke kaandhe par gaye to Ruhi ne apne chehre ko usske chhati par sattaye hue hi kaha,

“Aap mujhe apne baahon mein bharna chahte the nah? Lo bhar liya aapne mujhe apne baahon mein ab khush?!”

Abhi ki saansein tez chal rahe the aur wo thoda hannff raha tha, to Ruhi ne ussi position mein kaha,

“Baap re itna ghussa uff mujhe nahin pata tha aap itne ghusse wale ho, aap to bahot cool aur sweet dikhte the itne dinon se aap ko sambhaalna bada mushkil hai!”

Abhi kuch nahin bol raha tha, jaise ab bhi kisi shock mein dooba hua tha, to Ruhi ko sar upar utha kar Abhi ke chehre mein dekhna pada, aur dekha ke abhi khoya hua hai to kaha,

“Aap ka ghussa mujh par tha nah? Mere wale ghussa aap nikaal rahe the nah? kal se ghussa paal rahe the aap mere khilaaf Abhi? Main nahin dikhi thi iss liye? Main ne saare parde khinch liye the iss liye? Main ne bala tal jaegi kaha tha iss liye? Main ne to buss mazaak kiya tha Abhi, I did not mean it at all! I am so sorry ke mere munh se wo shabd nikal gaye the Abhi. Main kal hi aap ko sorry kehne ke liye wait kar rahi thi lunch time ke waqt magar aap aaye hi nahin main wait karti rahi, to mera bhi mood off hua issi liye main shaam ko nahin nikli thi magar main aap ko andar se jaate hue dekh rahi thi Abhi. Pleaae forgive me nah!”

Abhi ne ek bahot lambi sanns liye jiss se Ruhi ki chaati aage badhi phir piche hue Abhi se chipki hui jo thi. Do jism ek jaan lag rahe the donon uss waqt.

Ruhi ne phir usske seene par apne gaal ko satta diya aur kaha,

“Aap mere liye bala kaise ho sakte ho bhala? Main to chahungi ke aap umar bhar har roz yahan aao aur main aap ko issi aangan mein dekhun zindagi bhar Abhi! …. Abhi aaj aap meri vajah se late aaye? Bataiye nah, kia aap nahin aane wale the aaj? Meri kal ki kahi hui baat ki vajah se? Pata hai, main aaj subha 4 baje se uth chuki hoon aur aap ki raah dekhti rahi dekhti rahi, socha 6 bajne se pehle ajaoge aaj kyunke kal shaam ko aap ne mujhe nahin dekha tha nah, iss liye main barpaayi karna chahti thi Abhi magar aap aaye hi nahin…. Aap ko pata hai mujh par kia beet rahi thi jab sab log aagaye aur aap nain aaye? Pata hai main ne kitna dhunda aap ko? Main ro pari thi Abhi, main apni maa se saari baatein kehte hue fut fut kar ro rahi thi, maa ko bheja tha saeed ji se puchne ke aap kyun nahin aaye ho, mujhe darr tha ke kahin meri kahi hui baat ki vajah se aap ab kabhi bhi nahin awo…. Main kia karti tab? Aap kyun late aaye aaj abhi? Boliye nah, mujhe sazaa dene ke liye hmm? You were punishing me?!”

Ruhi ki meethi awaaz mein tadap thi, aaj pehli baar jiss awaaz ko sunne ke liye Abhi tarasta tha uss awaaz mein itna tadap mehsoos kar raha tha.

Tab Abhi ne apna sar niche jhukaya, Ruhi ki thudi ko apne ungliyon se apne chehre ke taraf uthaya, Ruhi ke aankhon ne Abhi ke ankhon mein dekha, Abhi ne jhuk kar apne honton ko Ruhi ke honton par rakh diya…. Ruhi apne toes par khadi hui aur Abhi ko kiss karne lagi ziada zoron se Abhi ko jakarte hue….

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

To be continued…. (2450 Words)
Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!
ruhi kheli khai hai lag raha hai :lol1:
:good: update casi bhai :)
 

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Update 15 The Calm Is Back

Abhi ne life mein kabhi kissi ladki ko kiss nahin kiya tha, usske samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kaise kia karein, sirf apne honth ko Ruhi ke honton se takraya tha ussne, magar Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi, Abhi ko ussi pal laga ke ussko kiss karna to ata hi nahin magar Ruhi ko kiss karna ata tha!!

Ab aaguey….

Ruhi ki chaati Abhi ke seene par dabbe hue the, usski boobs chipke hue the Abhi ke chest par, aur Ruhi ne Abhi ko bade zor se jakra hua tha. Abhi ke saans lene se usski boobs jaise push ho rahe the, Abhi ne sar jhukaate hue usski thodi se Mulayam cleavage dekha, kitni mulaayam tha wo hissa jo Abhi ko nazar arahe the aaj pehli baar wo bhi apni khud ki baahon mein…. Ruhi ko jaise feel hua ke Abhi usski cleavage dekh raha tha, to halke se nazar ko upar kiya Abhi ke chehre mein dekhne ke liye to paaya ke haan Abhi ke aankeh usski seene ke andar hi dekh rahe the to Ruhi ne ek saans lete hue kaha,

“Aap ne nahin bataya ke aaj aap kyun late aaye abhi? Kia wo mujhko punish karne ke liye tha?”

Abhi ne dhire se gehri awaaz mein kaha,

“Tumhara dress maila ho jaega, mere kapde maile hein tum maile kapde par chiipki hui ho Ruhi!”

Abhi to apne working clothes mein tha, maile to the hi, par Ruhi ko koyi parwah nahin tha uss waqt, aur ussne kaha,

“Mere sawaal ko avoid kar rahe ho reply karne ko nah? issi liye dusri baat bana rahe ho Abhi?!”

Abhi ne usski gaal sehlaate hue kaha,

“yeh baat nahin hai Ruhi, mujhe acha nahin lag raha ke iss maile kapde mein tumhare saath iss position mein rahun main apne dusre kapde mein hota to baat aur thi nah.”

Ruhi ne ek Muskaan mein kaha,

“mujhe to koyi farak nahin padta, acha batao ab khush hue aap mujhe baahon mein bhar liya nah?!”

Abhi ne halke se hansste hue kaha,

“baahon mein tumne mujhe bhara hua hai main ne to sirf tumhare kaandhe par haath rakha hai!”

Ruhi ne ussko aur zor se jakarte hue ek bachche ki adaa mein kaha,

“To bharro nah mujhko apne baahon mein jaise main ne aap ko liya hua hai”

Abhi: “iss libaas mein main tumko nahin lena chahta apni baahon mein mujhe odd feel ho raha hai, tumhare kapde gande ho jayenge Ruhi!”

Itna kaha ke Mehboob ki awaaz aur usske kadam unn donon ke taraf badhte hue sunaayi diye, Mehboob yeh kehte hue araha tha,

“Abhi, ghussa thanda hua ke nahin ajao chalo kaam jaari rakho nah bhai!”

Usski awaaz sunkar Ruhi ne jhat se Abhi ko chorrte hue alag hua do kadam, tab tak Mehboob wahan pahunch gaya aur Ruhi se hi pucha,

“issko cool kiya tumne apni baton se nah?!” Aur Abhi ka haath thaam kar Mehboob ne usse chalne ko kaha.

Tab tak Ruhi ki maa bhi agayi Ruhi ke paas aur pucha,

“kia kaha ussne kyun itna late aya aaj?”

Ruhi: “pata nahin maa, mujhe yakeen hai ke meri hi vajah se late aya, ab bhi thoda ukhda ukhda sa hai, hope normal ho jaega kuch der baad, main jaati hoon terrace saaf karne usske aankhon ke saamne to rahungi, kuch der pehle main taras rahi thi ussko wahan dekhne ke liye…”

Ruhi ki maa ne pucha;

“Tumne ussko jakra hua tha, wo bhi mere saamne ussko jakar liya besharaam kahin ki, Mehboob jab aya to tujhko uss position mein nahin dekha nah?!”

Ruhi ne bata diya ke usske aane ke awaaz sunte hi Ruhi Abhi se do kadam door khadi ho gayi thi.

Ruhi chali gayi terrace par jhadu lagaane aur Abhi ko nazron se chorr hi nahin rahi thi. Abhi bhi ussko dekhte hue hi kaam kiye jaa raha tha. Aur Ruhi ussko dekhte hue khud se keh rahi thi;

“Iss aangan mein pehli baar ek naam itna goonji hai ABHI. Iss naam ko main to har roz weise hi sunna chahti hoon. Iss se pehle kabhi bhi yeh naam mere aangan mein nahin suna tha main ne, jab suna to itna suna ke iss naam ko sune bina raha nahin jata, agar yeh naam iss aangan mein goonjna band ho jayega to mujh par kia guzregi wo main soch rahi hoon aaj!!”

Aur achanak Ruhi ka dil dhadka aur khud se kaha;

“Abhi ne to mujhe ishare se sab kuch keh diya hai halaan ke saaf nahin kaha main usske mann ki baat ko padh chuki hoon, magar main apni baat ussko kaise bataun? Mere baare mein ussko pata chala tab kia hoga? Kaise react karega wo? Chala gaya to main kia karungi? Kyun main ussko dil de baithi? Itne dinon tak to kissi ke saath aisa feel nahin hua tha kyun Abhi se main ne shuru mein hi sab kuch nahin keh diya? Agar ussne socha ke main ne dhoke mein rakah usse tab kia hoga? Maa ne kehne se mana kiya hai, magar mujhe lagta hai ke ussko sab sach sach bata dena chahiye. Aur agar mere baare mein usske gharwalon ko pata chal gaya to koyi bhi accept nahin karega mujhe yakeen hai…. Main maa ko sunun ya apne dil ki? Kia karun main? Hey bhagwaan help me!”

Ruhi ke chehre par udaasi dekh kar Abhi ne ishaare se pucha kia hua, magar Ruhi ne kuch nahin mein sar hillaya.

Unn dinon ek geet mashoor tha jo Abhi aksar gungunaya karta tha aur usske situation par fit lagta tha, Abhi ne uss geet ko seeti bajaate hue gaya, wo Ruhi ke liye hi tha, aur Ruhi ussko pyar bhade nazron se dekhne lagi aur jab Abhi ne gaane ke mukde ko whistle kiya bilkkol sur mein to Ruhi ki Aankhen bhar aaye, gana yeh tha;

“Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..

Dil mein kab tak karoge basera

Saath kab tak nah chorroge mera

Dharti chorre nah suraj ka phera

Saath chorrenge yun hum nah tera

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankhen to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Zindagi ka tumhi ho irada,

Yaad rakhoge kia tum yeh wada

Nahin bhulenge hum tumhein aise

Dil nah bhule dharakna jaise

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankehn to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare

Din guzarte hein kaise tumhare

Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna

Do aankeh to kia do jahan mein samaaye nah jitna

Pyar karte hein hum tumhein itna…..”



Iss gaane ko agar aap log issi waqt sunna chaahe to you tube ka yeh link par hai:

Manhar aur Asha bhonsle ke gaaye hue bahot hi mashoor gana tha yeh unn dinon aur har roz subha shaam radio par sunaayi deta tha… har kissi ke zuban par yeh geet hua karta tha unn dinon.

Ab Abhi itna zor se iss gaane ko seeti bajaate hue chala jaa raha tha Ruhi ko dekhte hue ke usski aankhen bhar aayi, wo ro padi aur chali gayi wahan se apna chehra dhone ko.

Khud Abhi ke bhi aankh bhar aaye kyunke wo iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha seeti bajaate hue

Jeete hai hum tumhare sahare

Dun guzarte hein kaise tumhare

Ab judaayi nah she payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Aur tahjub ki baat yeh thi ke jab Abhi seeti bajaate hue iss part ko dil mein gaa raha tha ussi pal ko Ruhi issi part ko hi dil mein gaa rahi thi, yaane ke yeh part jo female voice mein thi wohi Ruhi gaa rahi thi issi liye ro padi thi

Ab judaayi nah seh payenge hum

Tumse bichde to mar jayenge hum

Yeh kudrat ka Karishma tha ya kia magar hua aisa hi tha….. aur uss din ke baad wahan aakhri din tak kaam karte hue har roz, din bhar Abhi iss gaane ko seeti se oonche sur mein bajata tha… jab kabhi Ruhi nazar nahin aati thi to Abhi ko buss iss gaane ko seeti mein bajana hota tha aur Ruhi daudi chali aati thi usske saamne…. Donon iss gaane se jaise bandhe hue the unn dinon. Ab sochna agar bichde honge to kia haal hota hoga donon ka jab iss geet ko kabhi sunte honge to!! Yun sochiye ke 15 saal baad donon ek dusre se door hai aur iss gaane ko sun rahe hein ussi waqt par alag alag jagah par aur ek dusre ko yaad kar rahe hein to manzar kia hota hoga!! (yeh likhte hue main bahot bhaavuk ho gaya)

Uss din Abhi ka din bahot acha guzra. Saaed bhai aur wo phir se mamooli tarah se baat karne lage jaise ke kuch hua hi nahin tha. Shayad Saeed bhai ne apna kusoor maan liya tha aur ussko pata tha ke Abhi ne bus mein uss se bahot ziada kaam kiya hai.

Ruhi baar baar Abhi ke saamne aati rahi ussko apne jeeb se chidhaati jo Abhi ko behad passand tha…. ab jeeb nikaal kar honton ke beech kuch pointed jaise karke ek ladke ko dikhana isska sexual matlab bhi hota hai aisa Abhi ne socha kia Ruhi ko pata bhi hai ke wo kia ishara karti hai uss tarah se jeeb se usse mock karke? Magar kyunke usski uss adaa se, jiss adaa se Ruhi Weise karti thi wo bahot pyara hota tha iss liye Abhi ko bahot passand tha usska weise karna. Ek baar to Ruhi ne apni maa ke saamne weise jeeb se abhi ko mock kiya. Abhi heyraan reh gaya ke usski maa ne kyun kuch nahin kaha Ruhi ko aur weisa karne diya…. Maa hanss rahi thi jab Ruhi Abhi ko uss tarah se jeeb se mock kar rahi thi… aur weisa mock karna har roz hota raha. Chalta raha ruhi ke taraf se. ruhi khud darrta tha ke kahin kabhi Mehboob, ya saeed nah dekhle Ruhi weisa karte hue….

Ab aate hein kiss wale baat par.

Abhi kaam karte waqt uss kiss ko bhi gehraayi se sochta raha. Kyunke usska pehla kiss tha ussko pata tha ke wo anari tha aut kiss ahi se nahin kar paaya, ussko wo mehsoos hua tha uss waqt ke Ruhi ussko kiss kar rahi thi wo Ruhi ko nahin.

Ab kia Abhi ko pata chala ke Ruhi ne pehle life mein kiss kiya hua hai? Bilkool nahin. Abhi ko kaise pata chalta kyunke ussne life mein aaj pehli baar ek ladki ko kiss kiya, to ussko kia pata ke sahi kiss kaisa hota hai… haan tassavur mein Ruhi ko hi kiss karta hai khayaalon mein to sochta hai honthon ko honton par rakh kar chumte hein jaise gaal ko chumte hein. Magar usske honthon ko Ruhi chuss rahi thi kiss ke dauraan, balke Abhi ke jeeb ko takriban le liya tha apni munh mein kiss karte waqt….. yeh part Abhi ko bahot accha laga tha magar ussne expect nahin kiya tha ke weisa bhi kiss kiya jaata hoga.

Magar ab, tanhaayi mein jab Abhi soch raha tha to mehsoos kiya ke agar kiss weisa kiya jaaye aur agar usske munh mein Ruhi ka jeeb ajaaye to wo zaroor usske rass ko chuss lega, pee lega…. Aur ab akele mein Abhi soch raha tha ke uss waqt ussko wohi karna chahiye tha magar khud ko hi anari kaha ussne…. Aur Ruhi ki cleavage ko bhi socha Abhi ne aur ussne apne erection feel kiya aur utejina ne ghar kiya usske andar, phir Abhi ne Ruhi ko dekhna chaha ussi pal, to dekha ke Ruhi apni khidki se teke hue Abhi ko bade pyar se dekh rahi thi. Abhi ko ussi waqt Ruhi ko apne baahon mein bharne ka man kiya aur ab Abhi Ruhi ki jism ko dekhna chahta tha ussko mehsoos karna chahta tha apne haath se usski jism ko chhuhna chahta tha. lunch time karib araha tha to Abhi ne Tony se kaha ke wo pani lene jaa raha hai, aur Abhi terrace par gaya, Ruhi ne jab ussko waha dekha to jaldi se baahar aayi, aur Abhi ke saamne apni nili dress mein muskurati hui dekhne lagi. Abhi ab upar se niche Ruhi ko nihaar raha tha aur usski boobs ka form dekh raha tha usski dress ke upar, uss ubhaar ko admire kar raha tha, to Ruhi usske chehre mein dekhte hue pucha,

“kia hua? Kia dekh rahe ho Abhi?”

Abhi ne kaha,

“tumko phir se weise apne seene se lagaane ka mann kar raha hai, piche aao nah!”

Ruhi ne hansste hue kaha

“paagal ho kia? Dekho Saeed ji aur Mehboob donon bus mein hein weh dekh to nahin rahe magar unn ko pata hai ke tum yahan ho!”

Abhi ne kaha,

“tum behad khubsurat ho aur aaj main ne pehli baar tumko feel kiya, mera mann nahin bhara hai…”

Ruhi ne ussi Muskaan aur apni rijhati adaaon mein kaha,

“Okay milungi piche, tum lunch karne ke baad ana; hamare paas 30 mins tak to honge nah, aur haan cigarrete mat peena varna mujhe kiss nahin karne dungi, samjhe aap Abhi?”

Abhi bahot khush hua aur kaam par wapas gaya... Ruhi ko kiss karne ka, apne baahon mein bharne ko, usski jism ko chaaron taraf feel karne ko sochte hue…..

To be continued….
ye post mujhe confuse karta lekin galti se maine jab pichhla comment kiya to, aaye hue commets padh liye jo ki 25th update me aaye the:lol1:
mera pura suspense hi kham ho gaya :noo:
chalo koi nhi fir bhi padhte hai jaldi jaldi ..
 

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Update 16 Both Are Getting Closer

Lunch karne ke baad Abhi ko kuch meetha peena ka, jaise coke ya Pepsi, usske baad cigarrte pine ki aadat thi. Cigarette pina jaise usske liye khaane se ziada zaroori hota tha. Aur Ruhi ne keh diya tha cigarette pee kar mat ana varna wo kiss nahin karne degi. Abhi to kiss karne ke liye nahin ussko baahon mein buss bharne ke liye milna chahta tha magar bina puche Ruhi ne khud kiss wali baat kahi thi to iss baat ko soch kar Abhi ke andar kuch ho raha tha aur Ruhi ki jism ko apne jism se chipkaane ko soch kar utejit hote jaa raha tha khana khaate waqt.

Iss se pehle ke wo lunch end karta Ruhi apni kamre ki khidki ke paas wait karne lagi thi, aur ek mithi strawberry flavour wala sweet munh mein chabah rahi thi wo iss liye ke Abhi ko kiss karne ke liye wo tayyaar thi.

Udhar khana khaate waqt Abhi ne socha ke jaldi se cigarette ka ekaat kasht laga lega phir munh dhokar jaega Ruhi ke paas. To Khana ho gaya Abhi ka to ussne jaldi se thoda juice piya jo ghar se laata tha aur ek cigarette jalaya. Jaldi jaldi kasht laga raha tha to Tony aur saeed ne bhi pucha, ke kyun weise pee raha hai. Abhi ne aadha cigarette peekar baaki ke aadha Tony ko de diya, Tony hamesha Abhi se hi Cigarette leta tha pine ko kyunke usske paas kabhi paisa hota hi nahin tha cigarette kharidne ke liye aur Abhi har roz ek packet jeb mein rakhta tha. aur Abhi ne aaj jo cigarette jalaya tha packet ka last tha, ussko lunch mein jana tha kharidne ke liye magar kyunke abhi Ruhi se milna tha to socha baad mein kharidega.

Tony ne Abhi ka aadha chorra hua cigarette lete hue kaha,

“kyun bhai aaj aadha hi hai mere hisse mein? Har roz to ek full dete ho?”

To vinay ne kaha, “mujhe bhi ek de dete bhai!!”

Phir Abhi munh dhone gaya, soap se munh dhoya, sab ne dekha aur hansste hue Saeed ne kaha,

“are, saboon hai bhai toothpaste nahin, aisa kyun kar raha hai?”

Abhi ne muskuraate hue kaha,

“cigarette ki bhuh ussko nahin passand bhai samjha karo nah!”

Saeed ne hansste hue kaha,

“Oh ye baat hai to phir sahi kiya jo dho liya munh ko andar se, magar meri baat maan kyunke wo cigarette nahin peeti ussko turant pata chal jaega ke tumne abhi abhi cigarette piya hai!”

Abhi saeed ko dekhte hue pucha,

“are bhai saboon se dho diya ab to saboon ke aroma aega nah munh se, ab bhi cigarette ki mehek aegi kia?”

Saeed ne kaha,

“yakeen nahin to jaa baat karke dekh ke ussko pata chalta hai ke nahin!”

Abhi ne tab Tony ko 50 rupay diya aur cigarette kharidne ko kaha aur uss mein se ek Vinay aur ek saeed bhai ko dene ko kaha aur ek apne liye le lene ko kaha.

Aur Abhi ne apne kaam karne wala shirt nikala aur uss shirt ko pehna jiss se subha ghar se bus mein aya tha.

Wo dekh kar saeed ne hansste hue kaha,

“hahahaha launda apni mehbooba se milne jaa raha hai, jaise apni mangitar ke ghar jaa raha hai, abe pant bhi change karle! Aur sun Abhi sirf 30 mins hai tere paas khabardaar agar 1 min bhi ziada udhar spend kiya to haan”

Abhi ne saeed se kaha,

“fikar mat karo 5 mins pehle hi ajaunga bhai”

To saeed ne kaha:

“are nahin mazaak kar raha hoon, pata hai tu late bhi aya to compensate kar dega kaam ko, don’t worry take your time my dear”

Abhi ne tab pucha,

“Really Saeed bhai 10 mins late kiya to chalega?!”

Tony ne saeed ki jagah kaha,

“chaelga bhai tum aaoge to uss 10 mins ke badle 30 mins ka kaam kar doge nah!”

To saeed ne kaha,

“Ek problem hai Abhi, Mehboob dhundega aur puchega to kia kehna hai hamein wo bhi batate jao!”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“are haan phir to 5 mins pehle hi ana padega, Mehboob abhi apne ghar ke andar hai wo zaroor aega thik time par.”

Tab Abhi washroom se nikla aur Ruhi ke kamre ke taraf badha.

Ruhi ne jaise Abhi ko khidki ke paas se guzarte hue dekha to uth kar jaldi se piche wala darwaza khola jo washing stone ki left mein thi aur jo ghar ke piche wale hisse par khulta tha jo bus ke taraf se bilkool nazar nahin ata tha, aur ussi jagah kuch der pehle kiss kiye the donon ne.

Abhi ne aaj tak notice hi nahin kiya tha ke wahan bhi ek darwaza tha, jab Ruhi wahan se nikli tab Abhi ko pata chala uss darwaze ki. Ruhi ne Abhi ke chehre mein dekha, apni jeeb nikaal kar ussko mock kiya aur bina kuch kahe uss se lipat gayi. Iss baar Abhi ne bhi khub kaske Ruhi ko jakra ke Ruhi ki aah nikal gayi.

Donon ek dusre ke baahon mein jakre hue the, Ruhi ka sar Abhi ke chest par tha, aur phir se wo Abhi ki dhadkanon ko sun rahi thi, aur Abhi, Ruhi ke sar ki baalon ki khushbhoo sung raha tha apne chehre ko usski sar par kiye hue. Ruhi ki baahein Abhi ke kamar se hokar usske peeth par hue the aur abhi ke baahein Ruhi ke kaandhon ko apne baahon mein lapeta hua tha. ussi position mein dhire se aur araam se Abhi ne pucha,

“Jiss darwaze se tum nikli wo andar se koyi bhi kholke baahar aa sakta hai nah? Tumhari mummy kidhar hai, Mahesh aur dada ji kidhar hein, wo aagaye to?!”

Ruhi ne usske seene se lage hue hi jawaab diya,

“Aap usski fikar mat karo koyi nahin kholega yeh door. Yeh sirf main aur mummy kholte hein jab hum kapde dhone jaate hein tab.”

Abhi ne Ruhi ke sar ko chum kar kaha,

“Aur mummy ne khola aur hummo iss tarah dekha to?!”

Ruhi, ne abhi ke seene ko shirt ke upar hi chumte hue kaha,

“Wo kuch nahin kahegi. Okay?!”

Abhi ne ek lamba saans liya aur Ruhi ke chehre ko apne haath se sehlaya.

Aur ruhi ne pucha,

“Shirt change kiya hai aap ne? Mere liye? kaun sa perfume use karte ho, kitna acha smell araha hai iss shirt par hmm? You love perfumes Abhi?!”

Abhi: “Soir De Paris” hai Bourgeois wala.”

Unn dinon Bourgeois French make perfumes dunya bhar mein behad mashoor the, dunya ke best perfumes maane jaate the, magar fake bhi hote the imitation wale jo sungh kar hi pata chal jata tha ke wo fake hai magar Abhi ne asli wala Bourgeois lagaya tha. sach mein Abhi ko perfumes ka bada shaukh tha. Wo best hi kharidta tha, toilet soap bhi best chunn kar kharidta halaan ke kum kamaata tha, gharib tha magar usska choise hamesha best hua karta tha, apne pita se zid karta tha paison ke liye unn chizon ko kharidne ke liye kabhi. Ab jab se private kaam karne laga aur thoda paisa aya to of course sabse best hi istemaal karega nah.

Ruhi ne usske shirt ko tatola aur uss jagah naak lagaayi jahan se perfume ki khushbhoo arahi thi, uss waqt Abhi pyar se Ruhi ke chehre mein dekh raha tha aur kaha,

“Tumko passand hai? To main tumko ek exactly yehi perfume dunga ladies wali okay?!”

Ruhi ne munh banaate hue, kuch nakhre wali adaa se ek bachon wali awaaz mein kaha,

“Hmmm nah baba, yeh make jo aap ne kaha mujhe pata hai sab se mehnga perfume hai mujhe itni keemti chizein nahin chahiye!”

Abi ne phir ussi andaz mein pyar se pucha,

“to kia chahiye tumhein?!”

Ruhi: “kuch bhi nahin, buss mujhe aap chahiye!”

Abhi: “Aur mujhe tum chahiye…. Mar jaunga tumhare baghair main!”

Ruhi ne apne ungliyon ko Abhi ke shirt ke button wale hisse ke beech se usske chaati par ferra aur wahan se ek baal ko khincha halke se yeh kehte hue,

“mujhe yahan apna sar rakhna hai abhi!”

To Abhi ne kaha,

“To rakho kiss ne mana kiya hai?!”

Ruhi ne bachkani awaz mein kaha,

“yahan shirt ke buttons lage hue hein issko kholna hai nah!”

Abhi nahin samjha ke wo usske shirt ke buttons ko kholne ke liye keh rahi thi… to kaha,

“tumhi khol ke apna sar wahan rakh lo!”

Aur jiss waqt Ruhi ki patli patli ungliyan Abhi ke shirt ke buttons ko kholne lage, Abhi ne unnki ungliyon ko apne chaati ke baalon par feel kiya aur Ruhi ne apni hatheli ko halke se usske chaati par ferrte hue wahan ek chumban kiya jiss se Abhi ziada hi utejit hua aur usska samaan khada hua jissko Ruhi ne apne peth par mota hote hue feel kiya magar Abhi se satti rahi, wahan se hatti bilkool bhi nahin balke apne peth ko aur dabaya Abhi ke jism se…..

Abhi ki saansein ne raftaar pakre aur dil ki dhadkanein tez hui, phir Abhi ne sar jhuka kar turant Ruhi ke honthon ko chumne laga. Ruhi ne gardan upar kiye hue kiss ko respond kiya magar turant ruki aur kaha,

“Aap ne cigarette piye mere mana karne ke bawajud hai nah?!”

Abhi ka chehre laal hua aur Saeed ki baat ko socha phir Ruhi ko sorry kaha.

Ruhi ne kaha,

“Aap ko chorrna padega cigarette peena Abhi, mujhe nahin passand bilkool, mere family mein koyi nahin peeta, papa, bhai, dada koyi bhi….”

Abhi ne wo kaha jo Ruhi ne bilkool expect nahin kiya tha. Abhi ne usske chehre ko apne donon haathon mein liya aur Ruhi ki Aankhon ki gehraaiyon mein dekhte hue kaha;

“Buss meri ban jao hamesha ke liye chorr dunga peena, umar bar nahin piyunga yeh wada hai mera, aur main wada nibhaane mein awwal hoon!”

Itna hi kaha Abhi ne ke Ruhi rone lagi, usska jism thartharane lagi Abhi ke jism ko jakre hue. Abhi ussko roti dekh kar heyraan hua yeh sochte hue ke kia ussne kahin kuch ghalat to nahin keh diya…. To Ruhi ko hanssaane ke liye Abhi ne kaha ;

“okay okay ro mat thik hai cigarette pina nahin chodunga, aur bhi ziada piyunga ab khush!!”

To Ruhi usska mazaak samajh gayi aur rote rote hanssne lagi Abhi ke chhati par mukka maarte hue…

Phir Ruhi ne kaha,

“Achah agar main kahun ke abhi kaam par wapas jaane ke baad bilkool cigarette nahin pina shaam tak to nahin piyoge?”

Abhi ne ussko aur zor se jakarte hue aur usski donon gaalon ko chumte hue kaha,

“are baba abhi nahin, main ne kaha nah ke pehle tum meri ho jao usske baad chorrunga pina!”

Ruhi ne Abhi ke seene ke baalon mein apne ungliyan ferrte hue kaha;

“Aur main aap ki banungi kaise?”

Abhi ne ussko dobara chumte hue kaha,

“jab officially tum meri ho jaogi tab”

Ruhi: “aur wo kaise hota hai?!”

Abhi: “Jab donon taraf ke pariwaar milkar hum donon ko green light denge ke haan hum donon ek ho sakte hein, jiss din main ne tumko ek anguthi pehnaayi ussi din ussi pal se ek bhi cigarette nahin piyunga. Yeh mera wada hai tumse, mard ka wada issko zindagi bhar nibhunga!”

Ruhi ke aankehn phir bhar aayi Abhi ke baton ko sunne se aur kaampte honton se pucha,

“Aur agar tumhare pariwaar wale ne green light nahin diye to?!”

Abhi: “Impossible. Main ne ghar par sabko bata diya hai ke yahan meri Ruhi mili hai mujhe, khaas kar meri chhoti behen ko, Naina, wo wait kar rahi hai ke kab wo din aaye ke wo tumko dekhe aur ussne bhi mujhe tumse ek photo lene ke liye boli hai, yaar ek tasveer to do nah apna!”

Ruhi: “naah, to thik hai aap ko bhi meri photo tabhi milegi jiss din aap smoking hamesha ke liye chorr doge, it’s a deal okay?!”

Abhi ne kuch socha phir kaha,

“okay deal accepted then, magar yaar abhi tum ek ya do photo de deti to official din ke aane tak to main tumhare tasveer ko takiye ke niche rakh kar sota nah!”

Ruhi phir hanssi aur kaha,

“Mujh mein aisa kia hai Abhi ke aap meri tasveer chahte ho, mujhe baar baar dekhna chahte ho, ghar jaane se pehle muhko dekhte hue jaana chahte ho? kia khaas hai mujh mein Abhi?!”

Abhi ne Ruhi ko iss baar seedhe usske honth ko chumte hue kaha (jab lips ko chuma to Ruhi ne kiss ke form mein apne lips ko kar diya),

“Main bayaan nahin kar sakta kia hai tujh mein Ruhi, magar likh kar de sakta hoon… tumko padhna passand hai nah wo bhi English, to likh kar iss sawaal ka jawaab dunga tumko okay?”

Ruhi muskuraayi aur kaha,

“Aap English mein likhoge?

Abhi: “yeah of course, and you will love to read what I have written!”

Ruhi ne sar upar utha kar abhi ko thoda gaur se dekha aur kaha,

“Aap bahot padhe likhe ho nah Abhi?! Aap bahot intelligent bhi ho, dikhta hai, aap intelligently jawaab dete ho, aap itna padhe likhe hote hue bhi aisa kaam kyun karte ho abhi?!”

Abhi: “lo! Tumne phir iss kaam ko underestimate kiya, tumko nahin pata yeh kaam karne ke liye kitna brain use karna padta hai, it is almost an engineering level of mindset to deal with this job, tum kyun iss kaam ko itna nicha samajhti ho Ruhi?!”

Ruhi: “main nahin samajhti, mummy kehti hai ke yeh kaam thik nahin hai, mujhe to kuch samajh mein nahin ata!”

Abhi “Then don’t talk about my work okay?! Let’s talk about ourselves.”

Ruhi: “You speak English better than me, how far have you studies Abhi?”

Abhi: “not much 12th only.”

Ruhi ki Aankhen chamki aur kaha,

“Really? Me too, but you seem to be much more qualified then me, surely you have had much better marks than I did, main to kayi subjects mein fail bhi hui hihihihi, buss English mein good marks paayi hoon”

Abhi: “mere liye yehi kaafi hai ke tum English samajhti aur bolti ho.”

Ruhi kuch aur bolne jaa rahi thi magar Abhi ne ussko bolne ka mauka nahin diya aur Ruhi ke honth abhi ke honthon se locks ho gaye….. abhi ka haath Ruhi ke peeth par ferrta gaya jiss dauraan wo ruhi ko kiss kiye jaa raha tha woni Ruhi bhi kar rahi thi but ruhi ne muhn open kiya aur iss baar Abhi ne ruhi ki jeeb ko apne jeeb se chhua…. Ussne phir wait kiya ke Ruhi kia karti hai, to ruhi ne abhi se ziada chipakte hue, apne boobs ko Abhi ke chaati par crush karte hue abhi ke jeeb ko apne munh mein lekar almost chussne lagi, Abhi issi ka wait kar raha tha, to iss baar Abhi ne bhi wohi kia, apne jeeb ko Ruhi ke munh se baahar kiya, usski honton par apne jeeb ko ferra… uss time usska bilkool erection Ruhi feel kar rahi thi apne peth par dabba hua, aur Abhi ko awkward feel hua, sharam laga Abhi ko ke usska sex Ruhi ke peth par uss tarah se daba hua hai, phir bhi Abhi ne iss baar Ruhi ka jeeb apne munh mein liya aur usski juice nichorra chusste hue, aur apne sex ko usski peth par thoda ragadhte hue Abhi ne apne tangon ko thoda curb kiya to usska sex Ruhi ke peth ke niche wale hisse par,alomos Ruhi ki yoni ke upar dabba to jhat se Ruhi ne kiss break karte hue kaha,

“sunon they have already started working in the bus…..”

Kitni jaldi 30 mins khatam ho gaye donon ko pata hi nahin chala…. Ruhi ne apne baal ko chehre se ek taraf karte hue abhi ke pant ke upar uss jagah dekha jahan usska erection nazar araha tha, Ruhi ne nazrein churrate hue dekha, magar Abhi ne achchi tarah se dekha ke Ruhi ki nazrein kahan gaye the.

Ruhi ne turant Abhi ke chehre mein dekha aur apni pyari dhime awaaz mein pucha,

“Saeed ji naraz nahin honge aap se nah?”

“Bilkool nahin, kyunke ussko pata hai main tumse milne aya hoon!” Abhi ne jawaab diya, phir ab ussne Ruhi se kaha,

“Ek baar aur baahon mein aao nah jaane se pehle, mera mann nahin bhara!”

Ruhi do kadam aur piche hote hue kaha,

“Aaj ke liye kaafi hai thoda kal ke liye bacha kar rakhna chahiye Abhi ji!” aur hanss di Ruhi ne jaise abhi ko tease karte hue phir apni jeeb se mock kiya abhi ko piche ka darwaza open karte hue.

To abhi ne pucha,

“dekho to zara time kia hua hai?!”

Ruhi ne kamre ke andar time dekh kara ghabraayi hui awaaz mein kaha,

“Abhi 1:10 ho gaya 12:45 ko work resume karte ho nah jao jao ab jaldi jao!”

Abhi bhi ghabra gaya aur jaldi se Ruhi ko ek flying kiss dete hue wahan se wapas gaya bus ke taraf, jahan Tony ne usska working wala shirt aur cigarette ka packet lekar usska wait kar raha tha.

To be continued…. (2921 words)
“Aap ko chorrna padega cigarette peena Abhi, mujhe nahin passand bilkool, mere family mein koyi nahin peeta, papa, bhai, dada koyi bhi….”
ye chuiyapa chalu :lol1:
jab mujhe koi ladki aisa bolti thi to main ladki ko hi chhod deta tha :approve:
chalo gadi chal padi hai , kissi wissi ho rahi hai dekhte hai aage kya hota hai :)
 
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