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Story ne ek nayi moodh li hai Amit ko ab Masi ke pyaar mai Sandeh hai aur wo swaabhavik bhi hai to dekhte hai ab in dono k bich kya hota hai kyu ki Masi ab bhi Amit se Khafa hai aur wahi Neha ab Amit ke paas aana chahati hai.
Dono maa beti ajeeb hai ek paas ati hai to dusri dur jati hai.
Update 27
Isse pehle ki koi baat ho vo Neha ke kamre se bahar aa gaya.
Bahar aane par dekha ki Masi khadi hui hai. Masi ko dekh kar bina baat kiye apani aankhe neeche karke Amit apne kamre me chala gaya.
Apne kamre me ghuste hi Jab apni aankhe band ki aur diwar par ek jordar ghunsa maara. "ouch....."
Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai pehle Masi aur ab Neha. Amit soch me pad gaya ki vo kyon itna utejit ho jata hai. Upar se dono maa beti apane husn ke jalve dikha dikha kar use tang kar rahi hain
Aur kuchh galat hone par use hi doshi thahrate hue dutkar dengi.
Dono maa beti se bach kar rahana padega. Lekin Amit ka dil bar bar un makhmali chuchiyon, ubhre hue kulhe, mansal janghen, dilkash andaj ko yaad karte hue kah raha tha ki donon dil ki bahut achhi hain. Parantu usaka dimag keh raha tha ki ye sab fareb hai dhokha hai, bacho inse.
Amit isi anatarduand me decide karta hai ki sab vakt par chod deta hun aur dono se duri banate hue sirf kaam ki baat karunga.
Aise hi teen din nikal jate hain. Amit Masi se dur hi rahata tha aur sirf kaam ki bat jitna pucha jaye utna hi karta tha. Jyadatar koshish karta tha ki ghar se bahar rahe aur ghar me aakar apane kamre me simat jata tha. Beech beech me Raman aa jata tha baat karne ke liye ya koi game khelne ke liye. Kabhi kabhi Neha ke jhakmo par dawai lagane ya chot ki malish karne ke liye bulane aa jata tha. Koshish karta tha ki usse dur rahe aur jyada baat na karni pade.
Lekin Neha apane husn ke jalve dikha dikha kar Amit ko preshan karti Rehti thi. Kai baar to Amit ka haal kafi bura ho jata tha aur vo bathroom me jakar apane aap ko hastmaithun karke shant karta tha. Uska natija ye hota tha ki uski Neha ko pane ki ichha aur bhadak uthi thi.
Aise he teen din baad Neha Amit ko aawaj lagati hai"Bhaiya mujhe seedi se neeche utaro" vo ruansi hokar kehti hai.
Amit dekhta hai ki Neha bebas hokar bula rahi hai.
Amit jaakar Neha ki kamar me hath daal use neeche utarne laga. Waise Neha ki haalat itni bhi buri na thi ki wo chal fir na paaye. Ye sab Amit ko najdeek laane ka bahana tha. Amit usko utarte hue phir uttejit hone laga aur uska lund apani aukat dikhane laga.
Amit ne apne lund ko kaabu me karne ke liye sade huye tamaatar, char dino se pehne huye mojo ki badabu, behti huyi naak ki malayi, chipchipe bhadde kide aise aur bhi kayi khatarnaak chijo ko apni kalpana me laane laga.
Idhar Neha ne Amit ko tang karne ke irade se
" Waise Bahiya aapse ye kisne kah diya ki mai tumhe galo pe kissi denewali hu? " Neha ne mohini bankar uski is tapsya ko bhang kar hi diya. Amit ki jawab dene ki himmat nahi huyi.
Amit ne usse kaha" tum kya anap shanap bakati rehti ho. Apane hosh me raha karo"
Neha ke chehre par ek muskaan daud gayi"aapke sath main kaise hosh me ranhu." Ab uska iraada aur pakka ho gaya tha Chahe use jo bhi hathkande apnaane pade, wo Amit ka pyaar haasil kar ke rahegi.
Neha kaa swabhav hi aisa tha ki jo paane ki usne jid karli to fir chahe jo ho wo apni manjil ko paakar rahegi.
Idhar Amit hadbadaaya hua aaker dining table par jakar baith gaya. Neha ki baato se Uske lund phir se saavdhan sthiti me aa chuka tha.
Amit ne socha ki bathroom me jaakar iska ilaaj karna hi uchit hoga.
Amit ki uttejna shant nahi huyi thi balki aur badh gayi thi. Usne apne lund par hatho ko aage pichhe karne ki gati badhayi jisse wo manjil ke kareeb pahuch gaya.
Kaamsukh ke charam par pahuche hi Amit ne apne jhadne ki anubhuti hone Lagi.
Amit ke viry ki badh ne samne ki diwar aur farsh ko bhigo diya.
Amit ne lund ko saaf karne ke baad towel lapet liya.
Bathroom se nikal kar jab room me seeti bajate hue aaye to samne bed par leti Neha ko dekhkar uski seeti aisi band huyi jaise muh par ekaek dakkan lag gaya ho.
"Hi mere handsome bhaiya! " Neha ne lete lete hi kaha. Wo pet ke bal leti huyi thi aur kohniho ke sahare apna sar uper kiya hua tha.Usne ek safed shirt pehni thi jiske ooperi do botton khule the. Amit ki aankho ne baariki se apni behan ki shirt ke andar jhaank ke apna parikshan ka kaam shuru kar diya tha. Kuch hi der ki mammo ki jaanch me ye baat spasht ho gayi ki Bra naam ki koi cheej waha maujud nahi hai.
Amit ke lund ne Neha ko uske is saahsi kadam ke liye phir salaami di."Bhiya kya hua? Kya dekh rahe ho aap?" Neha ne baccho wali masoom awaaj me puccha.
Amit : Neha. Tum yanha kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe in kapdo me kisine dekh liya to......"
" kya hua hai mere kapdo me? Aur kisine mujhe yaha dekh liya to kya? Mai apne pyaare bhai ke kamre me nahi aa sakti kya?" Neha masumiyat ki sakshat devi bani huyi thi.
"Offo! Aakhir tumhe kya chahiye? Kaun sa khel hai ye?" Amit ekdam preshan ho chala tha.
"Khel? Main yaha khelne thodi na aayi hu. Wo actually meri kal ki chot ka dard fir ubhar aaya hai.
Thodi maalish kar do na please. Kal bahut aaram mila tha aapke hatho se." Neha ke bholepan ka jawab nahi tha.
Amit : savere to achchhi bhali thi tum. Achanak kaise dard hone laga?
Nhea : wo seedhiyo par chadhte wakt achaanak dard ubhar aaya. Kya tum apni pyaari bahan ki itni si madad nahi kar sakte."
" Thik hai, apni shirt thoda upar karo." Amit ne man hi man nishchay kar liya tha ki ab wo eent ka jawab patthar se dega. Wo jaakar seedha Neha ki jaango par baith gaya.
Neha ko Amit ke is kadam ki aasha nahi thi. Use apni manzil ab aur najdeek dikh rahi thi.
Amit ka towel baithne ke kaaran saamne se thoda sa khul gaya tha. Jiska matlab ye tha ki wo bina kisi pareshaani ke apna lund nikaal ya chhupa sakta tha.
Neha ne jaise hi apni shirt thodi uper ki Amit ne bed ke bagal me pada nariyal tel lekar uski suraahidar kamar ki maalish shuru kar di. Tel ki vajah se uske haath kamar par aisle fisal rahe the jaise makhan me chaaku.
Neha ne wahi patli track pehni hui thi. Amit ne apne lund ko towel ki phaanko ke beech se jara sa baahar nikal diya aur aage pichhe hokar uske kamar ki maalish karne laga. Usne apne lund ko aage le jaakar Neha ke chutado ke bich satata aur fir turant wapas le leta. Use yakeen tha ki Neha ko is harkat ki poori jaankari ho gayi hogi.
Amit ka ganit ekdam pakka tha. Neha ko malum tha uski gaand par jo chubh raha hai wo Amit ka lund hi ho sakta hai. Is jaankari ne use ashcharyachakit bhi kiya aur uttejit bhi. Uska dil chah raha tha ki Amit saari hade tod de aur uske jism se khul ke khel. Wo chahti thi ki Amit uske jism ki aag ko apne pyaar se bujha de. Lekin wo apne muh se ye kahna nahi chahti thi. Use us pal ka intejaar tha Jab Amit uske tan aur man dono ki jarurate pura karega.
Amit ko ab yakeen ho gaya tha ki Neha use apna jism dikhakar satana chahti hai. Aur wo bhi ye khel usike niyamo se khelega.
"Bas ho gaya ya aur dard hai? " Amit ne Neha ke pith pichhe muskurate huye puchha.
"Umm..thoda aur niche karo na."
Neha ne maano nashe me kaha.
Amit ko isi jawaab ki umeed thi. Usne bina hichkichaye Neha ka track khich kar jaangho tak kar diya.
"Bhaiya ye kya kar rahe ho?" Neha choke bina na rah saki.
"Tumhare track per tel na lag jaaye isliye neeche kar diya." Amit ne bhi masummiyat ki maa chodte huye kaha. Aur fir se maalish me jut gaya.
Ek taraf uska haath Neha ke chutro ko masal raha tha, to dusri taraf uska lund Neha ke panty ke uper se chut me ghusane ki hod me laga tha.
Kuch der isi tarah Neha ko tarsaane ke baad Amit ne Apna lund jor se Neha ki chut ki taraf dhakela aur fir turant hatkar Neha ka Track uper chadha diya.
Neha ki haalat us billi ki tarah thi Jisne abhi abhi kheer me muh daala tha aur kheer gaayab ho gayi. Usne peeche mudkar Amit ki taraf gusse se dekha.
"Ruk kyu gaye."
"Mujhe der ho rahi hai. College bhi jaana hai na." Amit ne darne ka shaandar abhinay kiya.
Neha uthi aur gusse me pair patakati waha se chali gayi. Amit muskura raha tha.
Amit apane man me sochta hai 'Mai use tadpaana chahta hu. Wo agar ye samajhti hai ki apna jism dikhake wo mujhe bebas kar sakti hai, to ye uski galtfahmi hai."
Isse pehle ki koi baat ho vo Neha ke kamre se bahar aa gaya.
Bahar aane par dekha ki Masi khadi hui hai. Masi ko dekh kar bina baat kiye apani aankhe neeche karke Amit apne kamre me chala gaya.
Apne kamre me ghuste hi Jab apni aankhe band ki aur diwar par ek jordar ghunsa maara. "ouch....."
Ye mujhe kya ho raha hai pehle Masi aur ab Neha. Amit soch me pad gaya ki vo kyon itna utejit ho jata hai. Upar se dono maa beti apane husn ke jalve dikha dikha kar use tang kar rahi hain
Aur kuchh galat hone par use hi doshi thahrate hue dutkar dengi.
Dono maa beti se bach kar rahana padega. Lekin Amit ka dil bar bar un makhmali chuchiyon, ubhre hue kulhe, mansal janghen, dilkash andaj ko yaad karte hue kah raha tha ki donon dil ki bahut achhi hain. Parantu usaka dimag keh raha tha ki ye sab fareb hai dhokha hai, bacho inse.
Amit isi anatarduand me decide karta hai ki sab vakt par chod deta hun aur dono se duri banate hue sirf kaam ki baat karunga.
Aise hi teen din nikal jate hain. Amit Masi se dur hi rahata tha aur sirf kaam ki bat jitna pucha jaye utna hi karta tha. Jyadatar koshish karta tha ki ghar se bahar rahe aur ghar me aakar apane kamre me simat jata tha. Beech beech me Raman aa jata tha baat karne ke liye ya koi game khelne ke liye. Kabhi kabhi Neha ke jhakmo par dawai lagane ya chot ki malish karne ke liye bulane aa jata tha. Koshish karta tha ki usse dur rahe aur jyada baat na karni pade.
Lekin Neha apane husn ke jalve dikha dikha kar Amit ko preshan karti Rehti thi. Kai baar to Amit ka haal kafi bura ho jata tha aur vo bathroom me jakar apane aap ko hastmaithun karke shant karta tha. Uska natija ye hota tha ki uski Neha ko pane ki ichha aur bhadak uthi thi.
Aise he teen din baad Neha Amit ko aawaj lagati hai"Bhaiya mujhe seedi se neeche utaro" vo ruansi hokar kehti hai.
Amit dekhta hai ki Neha bebas hokar bula rahi hai.
Amit jaakar Neha ki kamar me hath daal use neeche utarne laga. Waise Neha ki haalat itni bhi buri na thi ki wo chal fir na paaye. Ye sab Amit ko najdeek laane ka bahana tha. Amit usko utarte hue phir uttejit hone laga aur uska lund apani aukat dikhane laga.
Amit ne apne lund ko kaabu me karne ke liye sade huye tamaatar, char dino se pehne huye mojo ki badabu, behti huyi naak ki malayi, chipchipe bhadde kide aise aur bhi kayi khatarnaak chijo ko apni kalpana me laane laga.
Idhar Neha ne Amit ko tang karne ke irade se
" Waise Bahiya aapse ye kisne kah diya ki mai tumhe galo pe kissi denewali hu? " Neha ne mohini bankar uski is tapsya ko bhang kar hi diya. Amit ki jawab dene ki himmat nahi huyi.
Amit ne usse kaha" tum kya anap shanap bakati rehti ho. Apane hosh me raha karo"
Neha ke chehre par ek muskaan daud gayi"aapke sath main kaise hosh me ranhu." Ab uska iraada aur pakka ho gaya tha Chahe use jo bhi hathkande apnaane pade, wo Amit ka pyaar haasil kar ke rahegi.
Neha kaa swabhav hi aisa tha ki jo paane ki usne jid karli to fir chahe jo ho wo apni manjil ko paakar rahegi.
Idhar Amit hadbadaaya hua aaker dining table par jakar baith gaya. Neha ki baato se Uske lund phir se saavdhan sthiti me aa chuka tha.
Amit ne socha ki bathroom me jaakar iska ilaaj karna hi uchit hoga.
Amit ki uttejna shant nahi huyi thi balki aur badh gayi thi. Usne apne lund par hatho ko aage pichhe karne ki gati badhayi jisse wo manjil ke kareeb pahuch gaya.
Kaamsukh ke charam par pahuche hi Amit ne apne jhadne ki anubhuti hone Lagi.
Amit ke viry ki badh ne samne ki diwar aur farsh ko bhigo diya.
Amit ne lund ko saaf karne ke baad towel lapet liya.
Bathroom se nikal kar jab room me seeti bajate hue aaye to samne bed par leti Neha ko dekhkar uski seeti aisi band huyi jaise muh par ekaek dakkan lag gaya ho.
"Hi mere handsome bhaiya! " Neha ne lete lete hi kaha. Wo pet ke bal leti huyi thi aur kohniho ke sahare apna sar uper kiya hua tha.Usne ek safed shirt pehni thi jiske ooperi do botton khule the. Amit ki aankho ne baariki se apni behan ki shirt ke andar jhaank ke apna parikshan ka kaam shuru kar diya tha. Kuch hi der ki mammo ki jaanch me ye baat spasht ho gayi ki Bra naam ki koi cheej waha maujud nahi hai.
Amit ke lund ne Neha ko uske is saahsi kadam ke liye phir salaami di."Bhiya kya hua? Kya dekh rahe ho aap?" Neha ne baccho wali masoom awaaj me puccha.
Amit : Neha. Tum yanha kya kar rahi ho? Tumhe in kapdo me kisine dekh liya to......"
" kya hua hai mere kapdo me? Aur kisine mujhe yaha dekh liya to kya? Mai apne pyaare bhai ke kamre me nahi aa sakti kya?" Neha masumiyat ki sakshat devi bani huyi thi.
"Offo! Aakhir tumhe kya chahiye? Kaun sa khel hai ye?" Amit ekdam preshan ho chala tha.
"Khel? Main yaha khelne thodi na aayi hu. Wo actually meri kal ki chot ka dard fir ubhar aaya hai.
Thodi maalish kar do na please. Kal bahut aaram mila tha aapke hatho se." Neha ke bholepan ka jawab nahi tha.
Amit : savere to achchhi bhali thi tum. Achanak kaise dard hone laga?
Nhea : wo seedhiyo par chadhte wakt achaanak dard ubhar aaya. Kya tum apni pyaari bahan ki itni si madad nahi kar sakte."
" Thik hai, apni shirt thoda upar karo." Amit ne man hi man nishchay kar liya tha ki ab wo eent ka jawab patthar se dega. Wo jaakar seedha Neha ki jaango par baith gaya.
Neha ko Amit ke is kadam ki aasha nahi thi. Use apni manzil ab aur najdeek dikh rahi thi.
Amit ka towel baithne ke kaaran saamne se thoda sa khul gaya tha. Jiska matlab ye tha ki wo bina kisi pareshaani ke apna lund nikaal ya chhupa sakta tha.
Neha ne jaise hi apni shirt thodi uper ki Amit ne bed ke bagal me pada nariyal tel lekar uski suraahidar kamar ki maalish shuru kar di. Tel ki vajah se uske haath kamar par aisle fisal rahe the jaise makhan me chaaku.
Neha ne wahi patli track pehni hui thi. Amit ne apne lund ko towel ki phaanko ke beech se jara sa baahar nikal diya aur aage pichhe hokar uske kamar ki maalish karne laga. Usne apne lund ko aage le jaakar Neha ke chutado ke bich satata aur fir turant wapas le leta. Use yakeen tha ki Neha ko is harkat ki poori jaankari ho gayi hogi.
Amit ka ganit ekdam pakka tha. Neha ko malum tha uski gaand par jo chubh raha hai wo Amit ka lund hi ho sakta hai. Is jaankari ne use ashcharyachakit bhi kiya aur uttejit bhi. Uska dil chah raha tha ki Amit saari hade tod de aur uske jism se khul ke khel. Wo chahti thi ki Amit uske jism ki aag ko apne pyaar se bujha de. Lekin wo apne muh se ye kahna nahi chahti thi. Use us pal ka intejaar tha Jab Amit uske tan aur man dono ki jarurate pura karega.
Amit ko ab yakeen ho gaya tha ki Neha use apna jism dikhakar satana chahti hai. Aur wo bhi ye khel usike niyamo se khelega.
"Bas ho gaya ya aur dard hai? " Amit ne Neha ke pith pichhe muskurate huye puchha.
"Umm..thoda aur niche karo na."
Neha ne maano nashe me kaha.
Amit ko isi jawaab ki umeed thi. Usne bina hichkichaye Neha ka track khich kar jaangho tak kar diya.
"Bhaiya ye kya kar rahe ho?" Neha choke bina na rah saki.
"Tumhare track per tel na lag jaaye isliye neeche kar diya." Amit ne bhi masummiyat ki maa chodte huye kaha. Aur fir se maalish me jut gaya.
Ek taraf uska haath Neha ke chutro ko masal raha tha, to dusri taraf uska lund Neha ke panty ke uper se chut me ghusane ki hod me laga tha.
Kuch der isi tarah Neha ko tarsaane ke baad Amit ne Apna lund jor se Neha ki chut ki taraf dhakela aur fir turant hatkar Neha ka Track uper chadha diya.
Neha ki haalat us billi ki tarah thi Jisne abhi abhi kheer me muh daala tha aur kheer gaayab ho gayi. Usne peeche mudkar Amit ki taraf gusse se dekha.
"Ruk kyu gaye."
"Mujhe der ho rahi hai. College bhi jaana hai na." Amit ne darne ka shaandar abhinay kiya.
Neha uthi aur gusse me pair patakati waha se chali gayi. Amit muskura raha tha.
Amit apane man me sochta hai 'Mai use tadpaana chahta hu. Wo agar ye samajhti hai ki apna jism dikhake wo mujhe bebas kar sakti hai, to ye uski galtfahmi hai."
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Neha Menka banke apni saundarya se Amit ki tapasya bhang karna chahti hai parantu hamara Amit bhi 21st Century ka Vishvaamitr hai uski chaal usi pe chal di.
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