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Fantasy Karan

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King of light

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Mast update bhai

Is Raichand ne ab hero ko kidnapped to kar liya magar ab kya karega ye hero ke sath aur kon parwarish karega hero ki?

Aur dusra sawaal ye Vihaan aur uski wife ek saal se gayab the to kaha the ye log:hmm:
Kahani mai bohot se suspense hai tab to maza ajayega :rollball:

Aur ye kya bhai kajal ko abhi to apna bhaiyu mila tha itni jaldi alag bhi kar diya Tab to indono ke Milan ka intazar rahega.


Aur King of light bhai thank you kehne ki jarurat nahi hai we r always with you.
Aap sab Writers bina kisi Swaarat ke ham sab ka manoranjan karte ho to aap sabhi Writers ko ham sab Readers ki taraf se ek bohot bada wala

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Thanks bhai aapki itni sunder paratikiriya ke liye

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King of light

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Nice update bhai

Karan ab 20 saal ka hogaya magar is 20 saalon mai iske sath kya2 hua wo janna ab baki hai aur ye karan ko apni konsi ghar ki yaad arahi hai ye to agle update Mai pata chalega
Karan Ko kiski yaad aa rhi hai ye pta chalne Mai Abhi time hai bhai



So Eagerly waiting 4 next update
 

Raguhalkal

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Iss story ko ajj hi balki abhi pada hu bahut acha tha abhi tak lakin itni badi college me ek ladki chodker koi bi topper nahi hai balki acha marks lane wala nahi hai sub harami hai ye baat pachi nahi sorry agar bura laga to haan manta hu aap pehli baar story likh raha ho so pls or bi acha karne ki ummid karta hu pls bhai ye bilkul bi mat samjna ki me story ko jadge kar raha hu itni okaat bi meri nahi hai kyunki fantacy story likhna tho door soch bi nahi sakta so pls mere baat ko negetively naa leke positive lenge tho mujse jyada khush hone wala banda poori duniya me koi nahi milega
 
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Last benchers

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Update 5.

Recap- raat ke 12 baj gye the room no.86 Mai sab log so chuke the sivaye Karan ke kyuki vo aapni purani zindagi yaad kr rha tha. Sach khe to use aapne ghar ki yaad aa rhi thi

Ab aage-

Karan yhi sab soch rha tha ke usko pta hi nhi chala ke kab uski ankho se ansho aa gye.or pta nhi rote rote kab use nind aa gyi.

Next day

Subha sab se pehle Karan jagta hai usne clock ki taraf dekha to Abhi 5 baj rhe the. Ab ye Karan ki bachpan se hi aadat rhi hai. Vo Subha jaldi hi jag jata hai or kasrat krta hai. Vo hostel ke ground Mai jata hai ground kuch jyada bada nhi tha is liye Karan bahar jata hai.thodi hi dur use ek ground dikhta hai vo us Mai chala jata hai vha vo kasrat krta hai or yoga bhi krta hai. Isi trah time Gujar jata hai.ab Subha ke 8 baj gye the. Room no 86 Mai sab jag gye the or tyar bhi ho gye the. But abhi collage Jane Mai time tha is liye vo log Karan Ko aapne sath le jate hai ghomane ke liye.

Back to Karan

Aaj mera pehla din tha collage ka is liye Mai bahot exited tha.
Is liye jaldi tyar ho gya tha or mere sath baki teno bhi tyar ho gye the.

Vivek- to bhai tyar haina aaj tera first day hai collage mai.

Mai- ha bhai zindagi Mai pehli Baar itne bade collage mai jaoga.

Arjun- to chalo

Fir ham sab collage ke liye Nikal jate hai, collage paas Mai hi tha. Isliye jaldi pahunch gye.
Hum sab collage ke ander gye collage jitna bada bahar se lag rha tha andar se usse bhi bada tha. Sab students aapni aapni classes ki taraf ja rhe the kyuki pehli class ka time ho gya tha.

Vivek- chal bhai aaj tujhe ek bomb dikhata ho

Mai- chal bhai dekhte hai kaisa bomb hai

Fir ham dono aapni class Mai aa gye. Abhi teacher nhi aaya tha to sab students aapse Mai Masti kr rhe the.

Mai- are bhai ye kya Ajeeb baat hai

Vivek- kyu kya hua

Mai- sari class hi ulti hai kya last table Mai kuch ladke aapas Mai guse pade hai or ye sab se pehle table bilkul Khali hai.

Vivek- oh acha ye, are bhai pehle table pe kon bethta hai

Mai- kya mtlb students bethte hai

Vivek- are yr, pehle table pe toppers bethte hai or yha koi topper hai hi nhi sale sab ke sab harami hai.sivaye ek ladki Ko chod kr.

Mai- to kha hai vo ladki

Vivek- lgta hai aaj chutti pe hai

Mai- chal chod na bhai

Fir Vivek bhi second last wale table ki taraf Jane lga to Maine use pakad liya

Mai- are kha ja rha hai bhai

Vivek- or kha aapni seat ki taraf, Mai last table pr hi bethta hu.

Mai- nhi bhai Mai to pehle table par hi bethoga

Vivek- thik hai aaj tere liye ye qurbani bhi de hi deta hu.

Fir ham table pr Beth gye.

Abhi ham Bethe hi the ke ek teacher class Mai aayi.

Sab students- Gooddddddddd morningggggggggggg maammmmm(jaise hamare school or collage mai student Bolte hai vaise hi

Ma'am- Beth jao bacho

Ham sab Beth gye or Vivek nhi vo to khi or hi khoya tha

Mai- (dheere se) are bhi Beth ja

Fir vo hosh Mai say or beth gya

Vivek- Maine tujhe bola tha na ke ek bomb dikata ho yhi hai vo bomb

Savita ma'am



Mai- kya yr tu bhi, mujhe ye sab acha nhi lgta

Ma'am- Hello students Mai aap sab ki teacher savita.

Piche se ek ladka chup ke- hello Savita bhabhi.

Sab students hasne lge or Mai smjh gya ke ye class kaisi hai. Ma'am bichari ka face rone jaisa ho gya tha fir bhi unse aapne aap Ko sambhala or kha

Savita ma'am ki najar mujhe pe gyi- tum naye student lgte ho aapna intro do

Ab sab se aage ham the to is liye jaldi najar pad gyi thi maam ki .

Mai- hello dasto mera Naam Karan hai, Mai is shahar Mai Naya hu or umeed krta hu ke mera ye saal aap sab ke sath bahot acha jayega.

Is ke Baad baki sab teacher ne bhi mera intro hi liya. Or kuch khaas nhi hua or collage ke Baad ham sab hostel ke liye chale gye

Awesome update Bhai. ...Sach Mai story bahut achi hai.. waiting for next
 
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