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Thriller Haveli - The Deadly Mistry (Completed)

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Is story ke original writer Harshit1890 hain .
Thanx to Harshit bhai for such an epic story .
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Mardo ka shauk hota hai aurton ko bhogna , unke uppar chadna aur apni takat dikhate hue unke uppar apni havas mita dena. Mardo ke bhogne ka shauk aaj se nahi balki sadiyun se chalta aya hai, jab unka man karta hai, jahan aur jiskisi ke sath unhe sambhog karna hota hai vo kar baithte hain. Sadiyun se is khel mein ya toh aurat mardon ke sath sambhog karne mein unka sath deti hai aur bharpur anand prapt karti hai vahin kuch aurtein sirf mardon ke niche laitti hai aur mard apni havas ya phir yun keh lijeye apne sharir ki sharirik icha ko mitate hai.
Gaon mein ye pratha kuch kuch aisi hi hoti hai jahan mard uppar chadta hai aurat niche laiti hui hoti hai aur mard apni din bhar ki thakan ko mitane ke liye uske sharir ko bhogta hai. Aurat mard ki is icha ke virudh kuch nahi kehti bas apne pati ya us mard ke sambhog ki kriya ke samapt hone ka intezar karti hai.
Kuch yahi roz ana goan ke kache ghar mein hua karta hai. Gaon ke kache gharon mein jalti hui sirf ek matr roshni ka jariya laltain ek kone mein jal rahi hoti hai aur use kuch duri par dusre kone mein khat par aurat aur mard sambhog mein lage hue hote hain. ' aahh -hh ' mard apni kriya khatam karke khada hota hai aur laltain funk se bhuja kar niche chatai par pasar jata hai. Wahin aurat khat par apne kapde theek karti hai aur karwat lekar nayi subah dekhne ke liye so jati hai.
Ye sirf ek hi ghar ki nahi balki har ghar ki kahani hoti hai , laltain bhujti jati hai jise ye sabit ho jata hai ki mardon ne apna kaam kar dia hai aur sone ka waqt aa gaya hai. Par jahan gaon ke logon ke liye raat hoti thi vahin gaon ke hisse se thodi dur ek Haveli mein subah hoti thi.
Jahan gaon ke har ghar ke hisse mein andhera hota hai vahin Haveli ke andar lighton se ujala faiala hua tha , jahan gaon ke gharon mein shanti cha jati hai vahin Haveli ke andar nach ganne ka shor gunjta hai.
Haveli jo thakun Bhanu ke naam se jani jati hai, vo thakur bhanu jiska vansh kab se is Haveli ka raja raha hai aur tabse lekar aaj tak us raja ko bhagwan se jada puja jata hai. Tabhi mandir mein bhagwan ki murti ke sath thakur ki murat ko bhi rakha jata hai. Thakur bhanu apni Haveli se apne rutbe se sabse jada pyar karta hai aur iske baad vo kisi chiz se pyar karta hai toh vo hai alag - alag aurton ke jism ko nachta dekh, apne niche sulana uska shauk raha hai.
Haveli ke andar nach gana zoron shoro par tha, ye sirf aaj ka nahi balki roz ka program hua karta tha. Par aaj kuch khas tha, aaj Thakur Bhanu ke sabse chote bete Rajveer Thakur ka janamdin tha. Issi khushi mein Thakur Bhanu ne sangeet ke kala-kar dur se kahin bulaye the. Jisme jism ki behad sundar aurtein nirtye karti hui sabhi ke man ko rijha rahi thi. Puri Haveli husn ki malikaon aur Thakur Bhanu ke khas logon se bhari padi thi.
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Thakur ki mandli kuch jada badi nahi thi par usme vo log the jo is Haveli se hamesha se jude rehte the. Haveli aur thakur ki jaan uske 5 bete jisme uska bada beta Mahaveer, use chota beta Tejasveer, dono judwa bete the lekin Mahaveer use 5 minute bada tha isliye use bada mana jata tha. Aur uske baad Deepak, Kaushal aur sabse chota beta Rajveer jiska aaj janamdin tha aur usi ke janamdin ke liye yahan mehfil jamai gayi thi. Mehfil mein nachne ganne walon ke alawa , Haveli ke naukar chakar , Haveli ki suraksha ke liye admi charon taraf faile hue the. Iske alawa Thakur bhanu ke khas log jo uska kam kaaj se jude the.
5 bahion ke shauk apne baap ki tarah hi rangele the, panchon ko bhi jism ke sath vaisi hi lat lagi thi jaise ki khud Thakur bhanu ko. Thakur bhanu jahan jawan aur bich umar ki aurton ke sath soya karta tha jabki uski umar 60 ke aas pass thi vahin uska sabse chota beta Rajveer jo abhi apni kachi umar ko bhi par nahi kar paya tha vo apni se daugani umar vali aurton ke sath bistar garam kiya karta tha. Ye sab thakuron ka shauk hai aurton ko apne bistar mein garam karna aisa kehna tha sabse bade bete yani Mahaveer ka. Vo yahi samjhta tha ki thakur khandan ke kuch niyam hote hain, jisme aish ki zindagi bitana, raub se sabko ko apne niche rakhna aur aurton ke sath apni ichaon ko puri karna. Isi ne apne dono chote bhaion ko sar par chada rakha tha.
Filal aaj Rajveer ka janamdin tha isliye sab ussi mein mashul the. Haveli mein gana bajana chal raha tha jisme husn ki pariyan apne jalwe bikhair rahi thi. Kabhi apni kamar matakti toh kabhi apni chatiyun ko istemal karke apne hath pair chalati toh kabhi apni gand ke zor par hi nachti. Itna hi kafi tha sabhi mardon ka soya hua lund khada karne ke lie. Nach ganne ke sath sabhi ko sharab bhi parosi jaa rahi thi aur naukar is baat ka dhayan rakh rahe the ki kisi chiz ki kami na ho.
Thakur bhanu ke chehre par khushi aur raub saaf nazar aa raha tha. Vo is nachne ganne ka luft utha rahe the vahin Rajveer ka aaj janamdin tha isliye use mukhye kursi par bithaya gaya tha jiske theek samne vo nachne valli nachne ka program kar rahi thi.
Der raat jahan pura gaon so chuka tha vahan abhi is program ki shuruwat hui thi kyun ki abhi raat rangeen honi baki thi. Nachne ganne ka program ab khatam ho chuka tha. Sabhi kala-kar kala ka abdbhut nazara dikha kar shant ho chuke the. Ab barri thi batware ki jo ki aurton ki honi thi. Jitne jane pehchane log the vo kuch der pehle hi apne apne kamre mein apni pasnd ki aurtein le jaa chuke the jinka unhone intezam kiya tha. Ab bache the toh thakur aur uske panchon bete.
" agya chahte hain thakur sahab, ab hamare jane ka samay ho gaya hai " us kala-kar ke mukhye aur ek matr purush sadasye ne apne hath thakur bhanu ke samne jodte hue kaha.
" itni bhi kya jaldi hai manohar, abhi toh humne in kala ki deviyun ko ache se dekha hi nahi hai " thakur bhanu ne raub jatate hue kaha.
" mein apki vyatha samjhta hun malik. Par abhi ye sab thak chuki hai varna mein apko nirash nahi karta " usne usi tarah hath jode kaha.
" hum tumhe aur paise denge, uski fikar mat karo " thakur bhanu ne phir usi andaz mein kaha.
" maaf kijyega malik. Paison ki baat hi nahi hai. Par ab meri ye kala ki deviyan thak chuki hai ye aur nahi nach payegi. Aap mujhe kal tak ka waqt dein mein kal apke liye dubara is tarah ka ... " manohar abhi kuch kehta use pehle thakur bhanu ne use bich mein rok dia.
" mein nachne ki baat nahi kar raha hun manohar. " thakur bhanu ne muskurate hue kaha. Uski nazar vahan khadi un kala ki deviyun mein se ek ki chatiyun par tiki hui thi.
" pitaji ka matlab hai ki hume ye sab aaj ki raat ke liye chahie " is baar Mahaveer ne kaha. Jiski baat sun kar manohar apni ankhein fade dekhne laga.
" aisa nahi ho sakta malik " jab use kuch samajh nahi aya ki kya kahe toh usne sachai keh di. Jise sun kar muskura rahe thakur bhanu ke chehre par gusse ka bhav aa gaya.
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Mardo ka shauk hota hai aurton ko bhogna , unke uppar chadna aur apni takat dikhate hue unke uppar apni havas mita dena. Mardo ke bhogne ka shauk aaj se nahi balki sadiyun se chalta aya hai, jab unka man karta hai, jahan aur jiskisi ke sath unhe sambhog karna hota hai vo kar baithte hain. Sadiyun se is khel mein ya toh aurat mardon ke sath sambhog karne mein unka sath deti hai aur bharpur anand prapt karti hai vahin kuch aurtein sirf mardon ke niche laitti hai aur mard apni havas ya phir yun keh lijeye apne sharir ki sharirik icha ko mitate hai.
Gaon mein ye pratha kuch kuch aisi hi hoti hai jahan mard uppar chadta hai aurat niche laiti hui hoti hai aur mard apni din bhar ki thakan ko mitane ke liye uske sharir ko bhogta hai. Aurat mard ki is icha ke virudh kuch nahi kehti bas apne pati ya us mard ke sambhog ki kriya ke samapt hone ka intezar karti hai.
Kuch yahi roz ana goan ke kache ghar mein hua karta hai. Gaon ke kache gharon mein jalti hui sirf ek matr roshni ka jariya laltain ek kone mein jal rahi hoti hai aur use kuch duri par dusre kone mein khat par aurat aur mard sambhog mein lage hue hote hain. ' aahh -hh ' mard apni kriya khatam karke khada hota hai aur laltain funk se bhuja kar niche chatai par pasar jata hai. Wahin aurat khat par apne kapde theek karti hai aur karwat lekar nayi subah dekhne ke liye so jati hai.
Ye sirf ek hi ghar ki nahi balki har ghar ki kahani hoti hai , laltain bhujti jati hai jise ye sabit ho jata hai ki mardon ne apna kaam kar dia hai aur sone ka waqt aa gaya hai. Par jahan gaon ke logon ke liye raat hoti thi vahin gaon ke hisse se thodi dur ek Haveli mein subah hoti thi.
Jahan gaon ke har ghar ke hisse mein andhera hota hai vahin Haveli ke andar lighton se ujala faiala hua tha , jahan gaon ke gharon mein shanti cha jati hai vahin Haveli ke andar nach ganne ka shor gunjta hai.
Haveli jo thakun Bhanu ke naam se jani jati hai, vo thakur bhanu jiska vansh kab se is Haveli ka raja raha hai aur tabse lekar aaj tak us raja ko bhagwan se jada puja jata hai. Tabhi mandir mein bhagwan ki murti ke sath thakur ki murat ko bhi rakha jata hai. Thakur bhanu apni Haveli se apne rutbe se sabse jada pyar karta hai aur iske baad vo kisi chiz se pyar karta hai toh vo hai alag - alag aurton ke jism ko nachta dekh, apne niche sulana uska shauk raha hai.
Haveli ke andar nach gana zoron shoro par tha, ye sirf aaj ka nahi balki roz ka program hua karta tha. Par aaj kuch khas tha, aaj Thakur Bhanu ke sabse chote bete Rajveer Thakur ka janamdin tha. Issi khushi mein Thakur Bhanu ne sangeet ke kala-kar dur se kahin bulaye the. Jisme jism ki behad sundar aurtein nirtye karti hui sabhi ke man ko rijha rahi thi. Puri Haveli husn ki malikaon aur Thakur Bhanu ke khas logon se bhari padi thi.
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Update 2


Thakur ki mandli kuch jada badi nahi thi par usme vo log the jo is Haveli se hamesha se jude rehte the. Haveli aur thakur ki jaan uske 5 bete jisme uska bada beta Mahaveer, use chota beta Tejasveer, dono judwa bete the lekin Mahaveer use 5 minute bada tha isliye use bada mana jata tha. Aur uske baad Deepak, Kaushal aur sabse chota beta Rajveer jiska aaj janamdin tha aur usi ke janamdin ke liye yahan mehfil jamai gayi thi. Mehfil mein nachne ganne walon ke alawa , Haveli ke naukar chakar , Haveli ki suraksha ke liye admi charon taraf faile hue the. Iske alawa Thakur bhanu ke khas log jo uska kam kaaj se jude the.
5 bahion ke shauk apne baap ki tarah hi rangele the, panchon ko bhi jism ke sath vaisi hi lat lagi thi jaise ki khud Thakur bhanu ko. Thakur bhanu jahan jawan aur bich umar ki aurton ke sath soya karta tha jabki uski umar 60 ke aas pass thi vahin uska sabse chota beta Rajveer jo abhi apni kachi umar ko bhi par nahi kar paya tha vo apni se daugani umar vali aurton ke sath bistar garam kiya karta tha. Ye sab thakuron ka shauk hai aurton ko apne bistar mein garam karna aisa kehna tha sabse bade bete yani Mahaveer ka. Vo yahi samjhta tha ki thakur khandan ke kuch niyam hote hain, jisme aish ki zindagi bitana, raub se sabko ko apne niche rakhna aur aurton ke sath apni ichaon ko puri karna. Isi ne apne dono chote bhaion ko sar par chada rakha tha.
Filal aaj Rajveer ka janamdin tha isliye sab ussi mein mashul the. Haveli mein gana bajana chal raha tha jisme husn ki pariyan apne jalwe bikhair rahi thi. Kabhi apni kamar matakti toh kabhi apni chatiyun ko istemal karke apne hath pair chalati toh kabhi apni gand ke zor par hi nachti. Itna hi kafi tha sabhi mardon ka soya hua lund khada karne ke lie. Nach ganne ke sath sabhi ko sharab bhi parosi jaa rahi thi aur naukar is baat ka dhayan rakh rahe the ki kisi chiz ki kami na ho.
Thakur bhanu ke chehre par khushi aur raub saaf nazar aa raha tha. Vo is nachne ganne ka luft utha rahe the vahin Rajveer ka aaj janamdin tha isliye use mukhye kursi par bithaya gaya tha jiske theek samne vo nachne valli nachne ka program kar rahi thi.
Der raat jahan pura gaon so chuka tha vahan abhi is program ki shuruwat hui thi kyun ki abhi raat rangeen honi baki thi. Nachne ganne ka program ab khatam ho chuka tha. Sabhi kala-kar kala ka abdbhut nazara dikha kar shant ho chuke the. Ab barri thi batware ki jo ki aurton ki honi thi. Jitne jane pehchane log the vo kuch der pehle hi apne apne kamre mein apni pasnd ki aurtein le jaa chuke the jinka unhone intezam kiya tha. Ab bache the toh thakur aur uske panchon bete.
" agya chahte hain thakur sahab, ab hamare jane ka samay ho gaya hai " us kala-kar ke mukhye aur ek matr purush sadasye ne apne hath thakur bhanu ke samne jodte hue kaha.
" itni bhi kya jaldi hai manohar, abhi toh humne in kala ki deviyun ko ache se dekha hi nahi hai " thakur bhanu ne raub jatate hue kaha.
" mein apki vyatha samjhta hun malik. Par abhi ye sab thak chuki hai varna mein apko nirash nahi karta " usne usi tarah hath jode kaha.
" hum tumhe aur paise denge, uski fikar mat karo " thakur bhanu ne phir usi andaz mein kaha.
" maaf kijyega malik. Paison ki baat hi nahi hai. Par ab meri ye kala ki deviyan thak chuki hai ye aur nahi nach payegi. Aap mujhe kal tak ka waqt dein mein kal apke liye dubara is tarah ka ... " manohar abhi kuch kehta use pehle thakur bhanu ne use bich mein rok dia.
" mein nachne ki baat nahi kar raha hun manohar. " thakur bhanu ne muskurate hue kaha. Uski nazar vahan khadi un kala ki deviyun mein se ek ki chatiyun par tiki hui thi.
" pitaji ka matlab hai ki hume ye sab aaj ki raat ke liye chahie " is baar Mahaveer ne kaha. Jiski baat sun kar manohar apni ankhein fade dekhne laga.
" aisa nahi ho sakta malik " jab use kuch samajh nahi aya ki kya kahe toh usne sachai keh di. Jise sun kar muskura rahe thakur bhanu ke chehre par gusse ka bhav aa gaya.
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Hariya kaka ne Thakuro ki aiyashi badi nupunta se likhi he :claps: sharab, shabab aur kabab me dhutt mehfile aur un mehfilo ke baad ki mehfile:hint:
Gajab ka update tha, waiting for reaction of Thakur Bhanu
 
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Xp pe padhni reh gayi thi ye par ab puri karunga :yesss:
Hariya kaka ne Thakuro ki aiyashi badi nupunta se likhi he :claps: sharab, shabab aur kabab me dhutt mehfile aur un mehfilo ke baad ki mehfile:hint:
Gajab ka update tha, waiting for reaction of Thakur Bhanu

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" jante ho tum kiske samne khade ho. Pitaji ko mana karne ka anjam nahi jante " mahaweer turant bol utha.
" shama kare malik mera vo matlab nahi tha. Lekin ye sab kalakar hai . Sirf kalakari karte hain " manohar ise aage kuch kehta use pehle thakur bhanu bol pada.
" dekho manohar, hum bhi kala ki izzat karte hain lekin ab humne man bana lia hai aur vaise bhi hamare sath bistar par rehna inki kala ko aur badayega. Hum tumhe paise ki koi kami nahi hone denge. Thakur hai hum juban se kabhi nahi mukarte."
" jaisa aap kahe malik. Apko jo chahie aap apni marzi se le sakte hain " manohar ne kuch der sochne ke baad apni sabhi nirtye karne wali aurton ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. Vo sabhi kalakar maohar ko dekhti rahi aur itne mein sabhi thakrun ne apne saude lagane shuru kar die ki kaun sa thakur kiske sath soyega.
Kul 6 aurtien thi jinka batwara hona tha panch thakuron ke bich. Sabse chote thakur rajveer ka janamdin tha isliye is khushi mein use do aurtein mili aur sabne apni apni pasand ki aurton ko chuna aur ratri ke ghor andhere mein sabhi apne apne kamre mein chal die.
Mehal itna bada tha ki raat ke andhere mein sabhi apne apne kamron mein jake kaid ho gaye alag alag jismo ke sath. Sabhi aaj ki thakan ke karan so chuke the, gaon ke log bhi is raat ke andhere mein so chuke the bas kuch log jaag rahe the toh sirf vo jinhe aaj raat naye jismo ko bhogna tha aur vo bhi vo jism jo sirf kala ke liye bane the na ki thakuron ke bistar garam karne ke lie.
Kaushal abhi abhi apna sambhog karke hanfta hua bistar par pada tha uske niche laiti aurat nangi laiti hui uske bhar ko apne uppar mehsus kar rahi thi. Aur apni yoni se abhi abhi kaushal ke chhode gaye pani ko mehsus kar rahi thi. Chehre par saaf tha ki abhi abhi usne jo kiya usme uska man bilkul nahi tha lekin thakur ke hukum ke aage vo kuch nahi bol sakti thi. Kaushal hanfta hua uske uppar se hata aur uske side lait gaya. Laiite hi usko kuch siskiyan sunai di jise sun kar use samjhte der na lagi ki ye uske bhai Deepak ke sath sambhog kar rahi aurat ki hai.
Deepak abhi bhi apne sambhog kriya mein laga hua tha aur uske lund se chud rahi vo aurat lambi lambi siski le rahi thi, akhir man ke aage jism jo har raha tha. Bhale hi man se vo chudna nahi chahti thi lekin jism uske aage har man chuka tha aur iss wajah se vo deepak ke lund par chudti hui siskiyan bhar rahi thi.
" hamara bhai lagta hai apki sakhi ki bahut ache se seva kar raha hai " siskiyun ki awaz sunte hi kaushal ne apne sath laiti aurat se kaha aur uski chatiyun ko zor zor se dabane laga. " lagta hai apko maza nahi aya . " bolta hua kaushal uske uppar vapis chad gaya aur uske nipples muh mein dal kar chuste hue ek baar phir se sambhog ke liye khud ko taiyar karne laga.
" aahh -hh " thakur bhanu apne sharir ki takat lagate hue us auratki gand ko pakadte hue apne lund se uski chut mar raha tha. Vo aurat jhuki hui thi aur usne palang ko majbuti se pakda hua tha aur piche se thakur uski chut ko apne lund se chodne mein laga hua tha. Yahi khel har thakur ke kamre mein chal raha tha jahan
aurton ko apne bistar par bhoga ja raha tha aur is jismani rishte kahin aurat sath thi toh kahin nahi bhi.
Puri haveli so rahi thi bas thakuron ke kamre mein bati jal rahi thi aur andar se thap thap, aah - ah jaisi awazein aa rahi thi. Vo sab ye nahi jante the ki jis raat ke maze vo lut rahe hain us raat ki subah sab par na janne kitni bhari padne vali hai.
Agli subah jab suraj uga toh Haveli mein tehlka mach gaya, charon taraf afra tafri mach gayi, sab idhar udhar bhagne lage . Ek hi jhatke mein haveli ka sab kuch ujad gaya kyun ki ek hi raat mein sabhi thakuron ki maut ho chuki thi. Sabhi ke sabhi thakur apne apne kamre mein palang par mare pade mile.
Ek hi raat mein Haveli khatam ho gayi, uska vansh khatam ho gaya.
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