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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

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Bhai aaj ka update bhi dedo intzaar kafi lamba ho rha h
 

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UPDATE 24:


Rcp. Iske sath hi main sapne se jaga mera pura sharer pasine se bhiga huwa tha….tab hi mere room me teez roshini hui...





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Jab room me roshini kam hui to mujhe ek jhakta lag q ke mere samne ek admi khada tha…aur mujhe dekh muskura raha…


Uske ankhon aur hathon se teez nili color ki roshini nikal rahi thi uske sharer pe kale pade the aur wo is time aisa dekh raha tha…


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Isse pehle main kuch bolta usne mujhe pe waar kardiya mujhe RAPHAEL ne bataya to tha mere andar bahut sari shaktiyan hai magar unsab pe abhi barrier laga huwa hai jo mere 18 saal ke hone ke bad hi hate ga. unme se kuch to hatte hi main use kar sakta hun magar kuch ke liye mujhe kafi mehnat karni hogi.


Abhi main sirf aam insano se kuch alag to tha jaise main thakta nhi tha thodi speed bhi achi thi magar shayad jo admi aya tha uske mukable bahut kam thi howa aisa ke jaise hi usne mujhe pe apna pehla war kiya main apni puri rafter se apni jagha se hata magar mere hatte hi jaise main dosri side huwa abhi main waha pe pahuncha hi tha ke mujhe uska chooda gaya dosra waar ake laga aur main seedha jake diwar se takraya mere diwar se takrate hi diwar me darare pad gai aur main nich gira us waqt mere sharer me bahut teez dard ho raha tha….


Aur wo khada mujh dekh ke abhi bhi muskura raha tha..


Tab hi saya1 aur saya2 bhi waha agaye the magar abhi unko na to YASH aur wo admi dekh pa rahe the


Tabhi saya2 apna hath agge karke kuch karne wali thi ke saya1 ne usse rok diya..aur bola


Saya1 – LORD KING MESSENGER1


Saya2 – ATHENA DAUGHTER OF ZEUS


MESSENGER1 : ruko Athena…athena thoda gusse se MESSENGER1 ko dekhti hai mano kherahi ho ab bahut ho gaya…


Athena : wo usko maar dega apko dekh nhi raha hai…


MESSENGER1 : aise kuch bhi nhi ho ga han agar tumne ye shield hatai to us admi ke sath hum bhi mare gaye ge…


Athena : agar main humne abhi kuch nhi kiya to YASH ki jaan khatre me pad sakti hai…


MESSENGER1 : maine kaha na kuch nhi ho ga tum bas dekhti jao…


Yahan main abhi bhi dard me tarap raha tha aur usne firse mujhe pe ek aur nili roshini se waar kiya..ab to mujhe meri maut saf naraz arahi thi aur main apni mom ko aur papa ko yaad karne me laga tha ankhe band karke….abhi main yaad kar hi raha tha ke wo nili roshini mujhse takrai aur ek dard naak cheekh mere muh se nikli mera pura sharer kamp raha tha is waqt...


wo admi mere pass aya aur bola


Admi : tu to bada kazor nikla mujhe to bataya gaya tha ke tu bada shaktishali hai magar tu to ek kamzor insan se ziyada kuch bhi nhi….


Itna sunte hi meri anakhen band ho gai aur main behosh ho gaya….wo admi palta aur apna hath agge karke kuch karne laga abhi wo kuch karta usse pehle hi ek awaz pure room me gungiiiiiiiii


AWAZ : abhi to khel shuru huwa hai…………


Awaz sunke manao usko kuch yaad aya aur uske hath paon mano kampne lage jaise usne ye awaz pehle bhi suni ho aur wo dheere2 palta…


Is waqt uski gardan darke mare niche thi jab wo pura patal gaya to awaz firse ai…


AWAZ : agar mar ne ka itna ki shauq hai to marne ke liye bhi taiyar rehna chahiye…. jab maut aye to maut se anakh mila ke maro.. yun gardan jhukaye kayaron ki tarha nhi….


Wo admi apni gardan dheere2 upar karne lagta hai aur apni jhuki hui anakhon ke palkon ko bhi dheere2 upar karta hai aur jaise hi samne dekhta hai..


Wo aur dar jata hai jab usne awaz suni to uske hath pear hi kamp rahe the magar ab to uska pura sharer kamp raha tha…uske samne hawa me....



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Wo admi : mujhe maaf kar dijiye….


Abhi wo itna hi bola tha ke YASH ke sharer (han doston ye koi aur nhi balki YASH hi hai) teez roshini nili aur pure room me phel gai aur kuch deer waise hi rahi….


jab wo roshini kam hui to wo admi wahan se gayab tha, to usko kya howa wo bhi janlete hai…


jaise hi YASH ke sharer se nikli roshini us admi se takrai roshini dheere2 uske puri body me phelne lagi jisse usko itna dard huwa ke koi bata bhi nhi sakta hai. Roshini uske har ek cell to mitati ja rahi thi yahan takke uske dna ko bhi aise karte2 uske pure wajood ko hi khatam kar diya us roshini ne…per dheere2 roshini kam hone lagi aur wapas YASH ke body me samane lagi…..





abhi bhi yash ke body hawa me tehar rahi thi….puri roshini body me samane ke bad jo akar yash ne liya tha ab wo bhi badalne laga yash ki original body me jab ye sab khatam huwa tab yash ki real body dheere2 zameen pe agai..


YASH abhi bhi behosh hi tha….


Tabhi Athena me apna shield hataya aur seedha jake yash ka sar apni gud me rakh liye aur bade pyar se usko neharne lagi aur apna ek hath dhere se yash ke sar pe phirne lagi…yash ke muh se khoon bhi nikal raha tha aur jagha2 se yash ki body pe bhi ghao lage huwe the….


Jaise2 Athena apna hath yash ke sar pe phir rahi thi waise2 uski body ke ghao bhar rahe the aur YASH ke jism se nikalne wala khoon bhi uski body me sama raha tha…..


Jab Athena yash ko theek kar rahi thi theek ussi waqt MESSENGER1 bhi room ki halat ko theek karne me lage the…


Ab dono theek ho gaya tha yani yash ki body aur room…..


Fir Athena ne yash ko uthaya aur uske bed pe lejake usko sula diya aur yash ke forehead pe kiss ki….fir patal ke MESSENGER1 se boli


Athena : aap ko kaise pata ke hum bhi maar sakte hai aur ye sab kya huwa abhi aur un logo ki itni himmat ke wo yash pe seedha waar karne agge…


MESSENGER1 : mujhe nhi maloom tha itna hoga magar andaza tha ke aisa kuch ho sakta hai. nhi unhe abhi tak ye nhi pata ke yash hi wo hai yahan shayad RAPHAEL se kuch galti hui hai..aur rahi baat abhi jo YASH ne kiya to itna jan lo ye bhi unka ek roop hai ek aisi urja jo kuch bhi khatam kar sakti hai jo uska malik chahe ya yun kahun ke jo yash chahe magar ye urja abhi yash ke pass nhi..


Athena : ek mint ek mint apne kaha RAPHAEL. wo kab yash se milne aye… aur RAPHAEL ne kya galti kardi..aur jab yash ke pass ye urja nhi hai to yash isko use kaise kar paye…


MESSENGER1 : yaad hai humme kabhi2 raat ko yash nhi dekhta tha..(Update 11)


Athena : han yaad hai


MESSENGER1 : asalme RAPHAEL unke sath hota tha..thoda ruke


MESSENGER1 : aap ke dosare sawal ka jawab ye hai ke shayad RAPHAEL ne galti se yash ki shield ko hataya hoga kuch second ke liye jiski wajha se un logo ko pata laga hoga..


Fir MESSENGER1 apni baat cont. rakhte huwe..


MESSENGER1 : apke last sawal ka jawab ye hai ke iska jawab sirf RAPHAEL de sakta hai.


Athena : chaliye to hum unse hi puchte hai…


MESSENGER1 : RAPHAEL kissi ko nhi milne wala jab tak unka malik unhe kissi se milne ki permission na de…


Athena : RAPHAEL ka malik abhi hai….kon hai


MESSENGER1 yash ki taraf ungli karke ye hai….


Athena : full shock me, kyaaaaa yash RAPHAEL ke malik hai…


MESSENGER1 : han ab to ye tab hi pata lage ga jab yash iski permission RAPHAEL ko dege aur ye tab hi hoga jab yash ko apne bare me sab pata lage ga…


Athena : hmmmm yani hum jitna jante hai aur dekha hai ye sab usse bhi pehle se hai. Hai na MESSENGER1..


MESSENGER1 : han bas itna jan ligiye universe ke pehle din se….ab humme chalna chahiye…yash ke uthne ka time ho raha hai…


Fir dono chale jate hai unke jate hi YASH ko hosh agaya tha magar abhi bhi wo need me so raha tha….





abhi subha ke 4:30 pm ho rahe the jab meri anakh khuli…main utha aur apne daily ke kam karne laga jaise gym, yuga, running aur ek khas kam dhiyan me bethna


fir apne sab kam karne ke baad main ready hone chala gaya aaj colg ka pehla din tha to socha q na aaj kuch alag kiya jaye…


maine ek jeans t-shirt aur black coat select kiya aur ready hone chala gaya…jab ready ho ke mirror ke samne aya to aisa laga.






Fir main ne apna breakfast complete kiya abhi 9:00 am ho raha tha…


Fir main me intercom pe call karke driver ko apni car nikalne ko bola…uske bad maine apna phone nikal ke ROHIT ko call kiya…ek dam last ring pe ROHIT ne call uthaya..


MAIN : bhai utha ja mere kitna soye ga..


ROHIT : chal be main so thodi kar hun bas abhi naha ke aya hi tha ke tera call agaya…bol aaj bhi tujhe lene ao kya..hazak me aur hasne laga…


MAIN : nhi main khud hi araha hunt ere ghar aur waise bhi aunty aur uncle se us din ke bad mila bhi nhi.


Main bata dun mere palace se rohit aur shanaya ka bungalow 2 km ki duri pe tha..


Main abhi baat hi kar raha tha tab hi intercom baja…


MAIN : rohit se, chal main nikal raha hunt u jaldi ready ho bye..


ROHIT : aja bye..


Main bahar aya to samne wo hi car khadi thi jo MAMMA ne mujhe yahan ate hi gift di thi…




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Main car beth ke nikal gaya….rohit ko lene…


Jaise hi main rohit ke ghar ke bahar car noki gate keeper ne turant hi gate khola aur main car leke bungalow ke andar chal gaya main gate pe car nok ke…


Maine car se utra aur jake door bill baja di thodi deer me gate khula aur samne aunty khadi thi jo mujhe dekhte hi mujhe gale laga liya…


MALA AUNTY : mujhe se alag hoke, kaisa hai mera beta….


MAIN : bilkul badiya hun aunty aap sunao apni


Hum dono baat karte huwe andar agaye the….


MALA AUNTY : main bhi badiya hun magar main tujhese naraz hun..


MAIN : q aunty maine kya kiya hai..


MALA AUNTY : MADHU mumbai gai hai aur tum hoke apne naukaron ke hath ka khana kha rahe ho q yahan nhi asakte the…


MAIN : aree meri pyari aunty abhi apke narazgi ko dur karta hun aaj ka dinner apke yahan ab to has digiye…


MALA AUNTY bhi has deti hai tab hi uncle aur rohit dono niche ate hai aur uncle mujhe dekh bolte hai…hoda zakiya andaz me


UTKARSH UNCLE : kya baat hai mere hero aaj to kayamat lag rahe ho…


MALA AUNTY : chalo hato mere beta ko nazar mat lagao aur apni anakh se kajal nikal ke mere kan ke pich laga deti hai…


ROHIT : mom kal jab ye aise hi look me club gaya to jasmine khud ake isse friendship ki..magar kal ke mukable aaj ke katai zehar lag raha hai aaj to aisa na ho pure colg ki ladkiyan uspe fida hi na ho gaye..


MALA AUNTY : rohit se gusse me, kya tu kal fir club gaya tha aur mere bête ko bhi leke gaya tha ruk abhi tujjhe batati huu.


Aur mala aunty me rohit ko ek chapat lagdi.. aur fir boli


MALA AUNTY : aaj se tera club jana band samjh aur mujhe se, beta tum us jasmine se dur hi rehna..


MAIN : q aunty


MALA AUNTY : bas maine kaha na..


MAIN : ji aunty


Fir hum sab breakfast ke liye beth gaye main bahut mana kiya magar aunty me mujhe zabardasti fir se breakfast kar waya magar maine bhi thoda sa hi khaya…


Breakfast hone ke baad main aur rohit uncle aur aunty ka ashirwad leke collage ke liye nikal gaye…




Jab tak hum college pahunchte hai tab tak collage ke bare me jan lete hai…


Ye collage delhi ka sabse bada college hai NAAM hai (RAJPUT COLLAGE) yahan teen main stream hai 1) Secince (MBBS) 2) Engineering and last Management (Like MBA)






Yahan ziyadatar high figh bach hi ate hai magar inme kuch wo bhi hote hai jo shcolership pe bhi ate hai ja hamesh is collage me top karke apni life achieve karte hai q k bade ghar le bache sirf mast karne ate hai waise bhi unko konsa job karna hota hai unhe to bas apne baap ke paise udana hota masti karni hoti hai…


In collage:


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PRINCIPAL SIR : samne bethi mam se, BE Ist year me ek student ne admission liya hai(naam hai YASH RAJPUT) jab unka intro ho to mujhe bata dena theek hai..


MAM : ji sir theek hai I’ll inform you when I get him…but sir may I ask you why


PRINCIPAL SIR : he is very special for us and this collage you may go now and don’t forget it…


MAM : yes sir.





Mam ke jane ke bad principal sir kissi ko call karte hai..


PRINCIPAL SIR : mam apne jaisa kaha hai maine waisa hi kiya aaj unko bada surprise milne wala hai..


SAMNE SE : han mere bête ko ab ye sab accept karna hi hoga (jihan ye MADHU hi hai) main usse uski purani zingadi me nhi luatne dogi aaj usko ye mana hi hoga ke ab wo kya hai..usse dobara apni London life jeni ho gi nake jab wo yahan tha.


PRINCIPAL SIR : ji mam aisa hi ho ga…





Collage me sab ane lage the badi2 car bike yaha thi aur unme ane wale ladke ladkian bhi….jinme shamil hai… POONAM , SUPRIYA , POOJA aur wo club wali dono ladkian bhi ye log abhi do car se utre thi ek me se POONAM , SUPRIYA aur dosri se POOJA dono ladkian


Ye log abhi parking me hi khade ho ke apas me baat kar rahe the ke tab hi ek zabardas car accelerator ki “ghunnnnn jisi sport car me hoti hai” awaz ai..


Parking me khade sab hi student ki nazar gate se ati car pe padi un sare student me Priyanka aur Jasmine bhi the sab ke sab ussi car ko dekh rahe the tabhi jo wo club wali ladki me se ek boli car dekhke



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LADKI : didi kya car hai maine papa ko bola tha ye wali lene ko magar unhone saaf mana kar diya ye abhi tak india me launch bhi nhi huo hai..





POONAM : us ladki se, choti koi baat nhi main chachu se baat karo gi tu ghar ki sabse choti beti hai aur agar chachu nhi mane to main papa se bat karti hun..


Issike sath wo ladki jake POONAM ke gale gai aur boli


LADKI : thank you didi


Tab hi club wali dosri ladki boli


LADKI2 : agar ye india me launch nhi hui to iska matlab andar beth banda koi toop hi hoga

ab unhe kya pata agge inke jaan hi nikalne wali hai


Abhi ye sab baat hi kar rahe the car unse kuch hi duri pe ake ruki….sab ke sab bas car se utherne wale ko dekhne ke intezar me theeee….


Aur jaise hi YASH bahar aya wahan khade sab shock me chale gaye.. pehle jo shock howe wo thi ladkian jo YASH ko dekhke shock hui thi aur sath me bande bhi the ab YASH dekh hi aisa raha tha ke dekhne wale bas YASH ko dekh usme hi khote chale jarahe the….


Magar kuch logon ki to mano jaise saan hi unke gale me atak gai ho ye aur koi nhi balki humari NEHA ke sister’s the wo kabhi YASH ko to kabhi car dekhte….


MAIN jaise hi car se bahar aya to samne ye maharation ke fauj khadi dekh mujhe gussa to bahut aya magar main unko ignore kar ke rohit ki taraf chala gaya…


Mere rohit ke pass jate hi humme dekh Priyanka aur Jasmine bhi hamare pass aggee


Priyanka : ROHIT se, wow yaar rohit kya car li hai…mast hai..


Hamri baaten unlogo ko bhi sunai ja arahi thi. Priyanka bas itna hi boli thi ke


POOJA : mujhe sunane ke liye, apni akad se bola dekha ye uske dost ki car hai tab hi main sochon ke aise logon ki itni aukat kahan hai..


Ye baat maine sunli thi aur main kuch bolne hi wala tha ke tabhi ROHIT bhai ne muh khula..


ROHIT : priyanka se, ye meri nhi mere bhai ki hai….mere taraf ishara karke


ROHIT ke aisa bolte hi un sab ko ek jhakka laga magar unhe nhi pata tha ke ek aur jhakka unka intezar kar raha hai….


Jo ROHIT ne hi boom poda..


ROHIT : Aunty ne yash ke London se ane ka gift diya hai…


Ab to mano unki jaan hi nikal jaye gi wo sab ke muh shock se khula ka khula hi rehe gaya….

ye to wohi baat ho gai saanp bhi mar gaya aur lathi bhi nhi totti

Jasmine : wow yaar YASH congrts
MAIN : Thanks you….





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