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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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Canada ka ek pahadi ilaka jahan ke har parbat ne safed barf ki chadar oddi huwi thi aur wo raat ki chandni me aur bhi khubsurat lag rahi thi


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In road pe daurti char bike jo ek formation chal rahi thi..


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Usme samne chalti bike ka rider..


RIDER : JARVIS abhi hum unse kitni dur hai….aur wo log us ilake se kitna dur hai


JARVIS : sir calculation aur current location ke hissab se aap log theek 10 mint ke bad amne samne hoge…magar jaisa humne socha tha ye mission 30 mint me complete hoga magar ab nhi q ke unse kuch duri banaye huwe 30 bike rider unke piche arahe hai…




YASH : JARVIS ye information pehle nhi thi tumhare pass




JARVIS : Sir maine pehle bhi bataya tha unki building ke andar kya hai ye main scan nhi kar pa raha hun q ke us building ka server sirf andar se hack ho sakta hai aur ye sari bike building ke andar se nikli koi 5 mint ke bad aur ek kawach bhi hai us building ke aspas..




YASH : sorry JARVIS tumne bataya tha jab tak hum andar jake hack na kare to us building ka sara data humne nhi mil sakta.




JR : its ok sir..


Ye log apni hi taftar se agge badte chale ja rahe the…..


Aur second side se same char car chal rahi thi ek ke piche ek


Aur inke piche ek bada truck aur unke piche do aur car aur un caron ke piche 10 bike rider


Ab thoda janlete hai us track me kya hai…iske andar 10 gurads hai jinke pass high-tech guns hai aur ye log ek box ko gher ke khade hai jo pehle hi upar aur niche se spring type ke ek chamber me rakha huwa tha spring ki wajha se us box ko truck ke jhatke se koi farak nhi pad raha tha…


Ab ye waqt hai jahan dono side se ate log amne samne hone wale the ye ek thoda medan type area tha….


Dosri party ke pass ek Apache Helicorter bhi tha jo truck ke upar ud raha tha usne sab se pehle YASH ki char bike ko dekha jo chand ki roshini me usse saaf ate dekh rahi aur bike ki light aur uski awaz usne turant unpe firing karna shuru kar diya aur YASH and team usse chakma dene ke liye apni bike zik zak karte huwe chala rahe the


VEER : ladkion kahan ho yaar jaldi is helicopter ko khatam karo


Abhi wo helicopter unpe goli barsa hi raha tha ke ek missile sidha ake usse laga aur bombbbbbbbbbb


Jab helicopter ne YASH & team pe pehla fire kiya tabhi piche jo 10 bike rider the wo bhi samne chal rahi caron aur truck ko dono side se overtake karte samen agye the aur apne ek hath me talwar leye sidha YASH & team ki taraf bad rahe the unko samne se ata dekh


YASH : ok boys chalo dekhaye inhe hum kya chiz hai…


Itna sunna tha ke charon ne apni bike do agge aur do piche kar li


Aur bich ke kuch jagha choudi unko aisa karte dekhe riders ko laga wo inhe bich road me dono side se unhe apni talwar se khatam kar sakte hai…


RIA aur SIMI ye sab apne jet me lagye chote se screen pe dekh rahe the…


SIMI : yaar ye log kya karne wale hai chal hum hi inhe marke khatam kar dete hai..


RIA : tu sach me pagal hai abhi hum yaha se fire nhi kar sakte dekhe nhi inki tarfar agar humne yaha se goli chalai to shayad unhe bhi lag sakti hai…


JARVIS : RIA sahi hai….chalo jab tak jo piche arahe hai unhe maza chakhate hai


Fir ye log jo 30 bike rider piche arahe the jinhone ab apni rafter bada di thi helicopter ke blast ko dekhke YASH & team ki taraf tezi se bad rahe the…



HERO SIDE:


Jaisi hi wo 5 5 ke group ke bike rider YASH & team ke pahunche jo right side ke the unhone apni talwar apne left hand me pakdi thi aur jo left side me the unhone apni talwar apne right hand me pakdi thi.


Jab ye unke pass se kuch fasle pe the tab inhone apni bike YASH & TEAM ki bike se thoda aur chipka li ab waqt tha asli war ka jaise hi inki bike YASH & team ki bike se ek bike se phasle pe thi to do log apni bike right side aur do log apni bike ke left side bike ka handle pakde bike ke side niche beth ke tezi se nikal gaye aur talwar unke upar se bina koi nuksan ke nikal gai…



Pher YASH and team wapas apni bike pe beth gaye aur apni talwar nikal ke do do hoke caron aur truck ke wheels pe apni talwar se marte huwe agge nikalte chale gaye gaye..


Unke aisa karne se samne ki dono car misbalance hoke palti khate huwe 5 bike rider jo arahe the unpe giri..


Aur bombbbbbb


Unke piche ki dono caren ek ek side hoke road se niche utar gai


Truck road se nhi utra magar zamin se ghasarta huwe jake samne jo do car road pe jal rahi thi unse takraya tezi se jisse samne betha driver us takkar se sidha jake mirror se takraye aur wahin behosh ho gaye…


RIA aur SIMI SIDE :


Piche arahe bike rider pe jet se goliya chala rahe the kuch marte aur kuch bach jate jo bache unme se ek ne apni bike se RIA ke plane ko target kiya q ke ab wo plane ke piche se YASH ki side nikal raha tha usne bike se ek ke bad ek 5 missile fire ki unki taraf jet me alarm bajne se aur JR ke batane se


RIA jo plane ko uda rahi thi usne tezi se upar le jake aur fir niche just road se kuch upar fir se upar kiya isse ek missile jo just open ho rahi aur apne andar se aur bhi choti missile nikalne wali thi wo sidha jake road se takrai aur bombbbbbbbbbbbb is dhamake me aur ek do rider mare gaye q ke ye RIA ne badi tezi se kiya tha magar jabtak baki ke missile ne uski change location detect karli thi aur wo bhi ab RIA ke jet ke piche pade the


Fir plane ko kabhi left to right karti rahi aur ko chakma dene ki nakam kosish karti rahi…..fir usse ek mauka mila samne ek pahad tha…RIA tezi se us pahad ki taraf badi jisse dekh SIMI jo RIA ke piche bethi thi…ye dekh


SIMI : RIA tu ye kya kar rahi hai hum mar jaye ge pagal…


RIA : bas abhi bas abhi aur yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaaaaaaahooooooo..


RIA jaise hi us pahadi ke pass pahunchi usne apne jet ko us pahadi ke just parallel ki aur jo do missile usse sab se karib thi..unke ane ka bas 1 sec. wait kiya aur jaise hi wo takrati usne apne engine total full horsepower jisse jet asman ki tarat tezi se bada aur do missile pahad se takrake khatam ho gai…




Magar abhi do inke piche thi……RIA ne jet protector bomb ko use kiya magar inki kismat shayad aaj kharab thi….. protector bomb se sirf ek hi missile khatam huwi…


RIA last missile se bachne ki nakam kosish kar rahi thi….aur gusse me


RIA : sala ye council walon ki ek bhi chiz sahi nhi hoti hai jab bhi inki di huwi chiz use karo to aise hi maut ke muh me khad to pate hai…


SIMI : yaar abhi kya kare ye to picha hi nhi choud rahi sala….


RIA : JV koi madad kar sakte ho…


JV : nhi ye kuch mujhe alag missile lag rahi hai…iski banawat aam missile jaisi nhi hai q ke iske andar ki har ek choti missile me kuch red liquid type hai sorry main koi madad nhi kar sakta


RIA : ab ek hi rasta hai humme jet se nikalna hoga…


SIMI : ye to pehle se taye tha RIA chalo jaldi karo….


RIA : nhi hum apni team se kafi dur agaye hai humme bas kaise bhi karke untak pahunchna hai uske bad hi hum jet choude sakte hai..


SIMI : yaar isme bahut khatra hai hum direct us missile ke nishane pe…


RIA : nhi SIMI hum apni team ko aise nhi choud sakte..


Itna bol RIA turant jet ko upar ghuma ke wapas apni team ki location pe nikal jati hai..


Jaise2 sec. nikal raha tha missile unke aur pass hoti ja rahi thi….


SIMI : dekh hum abhi bhi unse 10 mint se road phasle pe hai abhi nikalna theek hoga..


RIA : JV


JV : han abhi…


RIA apni seat aur SIMI apni seat ke niche ek button press karte hai aur wo jet se bahar nikal jate hai…..


Aur unke nikalte hi jet me bomb……


Abhi dono ko apni team se milne me 10 mint ka waqt hai..


TO CHALTE HAI THODA PICHE:

Jab YASH ki team piche nikli tabahi macha ke kuch agge jake charon ruke


VEER : JV ne bataya tha piche bhi wur log hai to ek kam karte hai main unhe dekhta hunt um teeno yahan dekho..


YASH : nhi ab hum alag nhi ho sakte ye kafi khatar naak ho sakta hai…


VISHAL : YASH sahi hai VEER humme ab kaise bhi us box ko nikal ke yahan se le jana hai…


Tabhi ABHY jo us taraf muh karke khada tha jis side se ye log aye the


ABHY : guys ready ho jao….


Uske aisa bolne se sabne apni bike turant turn ki alag2 style me


VEER : theek hai to lets start..


Itna bol sabse pehel VEER ne apni bike ko accelerate ki aur tezi se samne arahe ek bike rider ke bilkul samne pahuncha ke apni bike ko break lagaya jisse bike slide huwi aur jake samne wale ke tyre ko lagi jisse wo udta huwe team se kuch piche jake gira aur mar gaya…


VEER ne turant apni bike sahi ki aur agge nikal gaya magar samne se kuch 6 log aur unke sath turck ke andar ke andar ke 10 wo bhi bahar ake truch ko cover kar YASH ki team pe fire kar rahe the….


Fire se bachne ke liye puri team apni bike se kud ke utar gaya aur bike teezi se chalti huwi samne jo piche ki car thi usse takrai jisse wahan smoke bomb ka phuta is baat ka faida utha ke in charon ne badi tezi se apni talwar nikali aur turck ke samne pahunch gaya in sabne ek alag tarha ka suit pehna huwa tha do inhe human heat detect kar ke bata raha tha ke kon kahan hai…


Fir kya tha wo sab ko marte gaye…magr unki firing se ek goli VISHAL ko lag chuki thi…jo wo bina dekhe chala rahe the


Abhi smoke thoda kam hone laga tha….


VEER ne apne side se ek card nikal truck ke security system me lagaya…aur JV ne usse hack kar gate open kiya…


VEER aur ABHY andar gaye aur usse box ko nikal ke le aye…


Abhi kissi ko pata nhi tha ke VISHAL ko goli lagi hai…


VEER chalo kam ho gaya ab nikalte hai…


YASH : han theek hai…


Tabhi unhe aur bikes ki awaz ani shuru hui….


VEER : sala lagta hai aaj sab ko marne ki padi hai…


Aisa bol VEER ne wo box apni back beg me rakha fir sab truck se hat ke thoda medan me agaye…


Unko dekh wo rbike rider bhi medan me unki taraf badne lage…


Jisne RIA aur SIMI pe missile mari thi wo sab se agge chal raha tha…


YASH sab se thoda agge nikal ke khada ho gaya apne dono hath piche kiye bade itmenan se aur wo rider apni talwar liye YASH ko jaise hi marne ko huwa YASH ne badi tezi se apne dono hathon ko agge kiya ek hath se rider ka talwar wala hath aur dusre se uski gardan pakad li…wo rider hawa me YASH ke hathon me jhul raha tha….


YASH ne usse zameen pe khada kiya aur apna uske gale se hatake uske talwar wale pe de mara jisse uska hath bichme se tut gaya aur turant uske hath ko ghuma ke uski hi talwar uske gale ke par kardi…


Baki sab bhi YASH se agge nikal ke unpe war karne lage…


VEER ke samne se do bike arahi thi aur uske rider jaise hi veer ko marne ko huwe…..veer ne apni dono talwar se unke war ko lock karte huwe apne hath ko aur pehla diya jisse veer ki talwar dono ke gale ke par ho gai….aur dono ke saron ne agge jake unke sharir ka sath choud diya…


Abh bache rider ne apni bike rok ke niche utar gaye…


Koi ab sirf 15 hi bache thee..


YASH ko ladte waqt VISHAL kuch kamzor lag raha tha…

To YASH ne ABHY ko bol usse protect karne ka bola..


Ab wo samne 15 the aur hum 2..

VEER : to kya bolte ho YASH aaj kon jeete gaya..


MAIN : muskura ke harbar kon jeeta hai..


VEER : tum

Main bina bole aage bad gaya to samne se bhi teen log agge aye..


Wo meri taraf tezi se bad rahe the unke mere tak pahunchne se pehle hi maine apni taftar ka use kar unke upar se jump karte huwe unhe to pata nhi nhi chala ke main kaha gaya ek dum se jab teen ye samjhe pata tab tak VEER jo mere piche hi that ha usne apni dono talwar left aur right ke gale ke par kardi aur apne shoes pe chaku se bich wale ke chin pe piche se uske halak me ghusa di..


Piche khada koi kuch samjh pata main sidha jake jahan se teen log nikle the waha pahuncha do ke sar alag kar diye…


Ye koi samjh hi nhi paya aur main unke piche khada ho gaya..


Aur bola


MAIN : abee ghochuon samne kya dekh rahe ho piche dekho..


Tab sab ka dhiyan mere piche gaya ab unki anakhon me mujhe kuch dar dekh raha tha…


Chalo ek sath ao tum sab aur tum log veer ka wait karo


Mere bolte hi veer ki talwar ek sine se par hogai wait nhi aur veer lag gaya sab ki band bajane me


Mere side 10 log bade…


Main bhi unke side bada jo samne tha uske talwar wale hath pe war kiya aur jo uske bazo me tha uske dil pe…


Aur pehle wale ko apne right zor se dhakela jisse takra ke side 3 log gir gaye..


Magar main ruka nhi main apni left side palat ke teezi se apne ghutno pe slid hota huwa teen ke pair unke sharer se alag kar diye aur khada ho gaya..


Ab veer bhi mere sath agaya tha..


Fir kya tha sab ko upar pachuncha diya humne jab ye sab khatam huwa to hum ABHY, VISHAL ke pass agaye..


Tabhi RIA aur SIMI bhi pahunch gaye..


RIA : sala ye tumne acha nhi kiya yaaron pura khud hi saaf kar diya mere liye bhi kuch bachate na..


MAIN : un teen ki taraf ishara karke jaa wo bach hai tere liye


RIA : main adh marun ko nhi marti jane do..


Magar RIA ne apni gun nikali aur bina piche dekhe teen fire kar diya inke sar me


VEER : ye kya kiya yaar tumne abhi to bada giyan de rahi thi..


MAIN : guys sab bad me pehle VISHAL ko treatment ki jarurat hai..


MAIN : JARVIS humari sawari kahan hai..


JV : bas boss 2 mint me pahunch rahi hai..


RIA kuch bolne wali thi magar veer usse rukte huwe..


VEER : jo baat hai bad me pehle ek kam karte hai tum aur SIMI VISHAL ko base leke jao aur hum uss building me jake ate hai…aur ye beg bhi sambhal ke le jao….


Magar jaise hi veer ne beg nikala to usse beg halka laga…


VEER : yaar wo box kahan gaya..


MAIN : JARVIS.

JV : sir wo wahan hai


Itna bol JARVIS ne us box ki location sab ke suit ke display me dali..


VEER bada to main usse rukte huwe..


MAIN : veere yaar main dekhta hun tum ruko main dekhta hun pata to chale akhir itna khoon humne kiske liye bahaya hai logon ka


Ye bol YASH us box ke taraf bad gaya magar pata nhi YASH ko kya ho raha tha jaise2 YASH uske pass pahunch raha tha YASH ke sharer ke andar ek bahut takatwar urga mehsus ho rahi thi…

Aur jaise hi YASH us box ko chuwa ek dum asman se ek roshini YASH ke upar giri aur Bombbbbbbbbbbb ek dhamaka jiska asar YASH ke doston pe bhi huwa….





Ye sab kyun aur kaise huwa uska flashback agle update me include rahe ga.









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Full action pack dhamaka...sir ji
Fabulous mind-blowing update
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Superb one bhai.......excellent update
marvelous update bhai
Nice updates
Mast update
Awesome Update bro...
Waiting for next
Super update hai bhai
Bhut he jabardast update diya bhai but abe tak magic ka jyada use nai kiya hai fantasy story hai bhai thoda magic bdao
BHAI MAGIC BHI JALD DEKHNE KO MILE GA
Good for next update

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awesome fabulous update
bhai Rocky phir jinda ho RHA h
Superb awesome update bro
Awesome...A great update biradar
Nice update
Very nice update Bhai
Brilliant update writer sahab... bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap.... great going :applause::applause::applause:

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Fabulous update sir.......waiting for next.....
Nice update bhai yash ki powers ka bhi use karwao aur lagta hai yah boss wahi larki hai jis ko yash pyar karta tha aur usi ne hi yash ko marne ki koshish ki thi aur yah family ya office me se kon sa gaddar shamil hai is ka bhi jaldi pata lgao.

SAB PATA CHALE GA BHAI BAS AISE HI SATH BANE RAHIYE
Bahut hi mast update hai Bhai

Par ek bat jo ladki Neha Ki jagah office me Aayi hai wo koi informer to nahi

ASAL GADDAR KON JALD HI PATA CHALE GA BHAI BAS AISE HI SATH BANE RAHIYE
awesome one brother

NEHA ka character kaafi acha ho rha hai pehle se jo shi hai afterall vo story ki heroine hai aur hero ke layak bhi hai

BOSS ki beti ne kaha ki ap uske sine par vaar krna hai mtlb saaf hai yeh ladki vahi hai jisne pehle YASH ko betray kiya ho aur uske piche vaar kiya ho aur sabhi ko yahi lga ki ROCKY mar chuka hai but vo abhi bhi jinda hai jiss karan ab vo ladki dobara aayi hai aur iss baar plan kaafi tgda bn kr aayi hai like YASH ki family mai se hi kisi ko apni side kr rhi hai shayad vo POOJA ko torture kre kidnap krne ke baad USA se yan kisi ko YASH ke khilaf bhadkaye kuch samajh nhi aa rha abhi ki kon help krega uss ladki ki well yeh time pr pta chl jayega

hopefully uss ladki ki information aur YASH ka uss se related flashback bhi jald hi samne aaye

AMRISH ki maa ka ....
sala heroine se bakchodi krne ki soch rha hai iski toh alag se special vaali faadni chahiye

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Superb update he bhai fantastic
Excellent writing bhai... fantastic update... keep writing
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Nice update bro
awesome update bhai.............story kafi intense hoti jaa rahi hai.........waiting for the next update.
Zabardast update


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Nice update

Ye LADKI shayad wahi sapne wali hai jisne YASH aur NEHA ko piche se mara tha aur past mai bhi isi ne YASH urf ROCKY pe hamla kiya tha magar tab is bewafa ne piche se hamla kiya tha aur is baar samne se karegi YASH ke kisi family member ko apne sath mila ke aur wo gaddar kon hoga POOJA ke chance jyada hai lekin uske character ko pehle se bohot bura bana diya ab use isme involve karoge to sahi nahi hoga shayad se SANJANA ya SHIVANI ho well jo koi bhi ho uska baad me pata chalega filhal is bhosdiwala AMRESH ko thok do wo bhi sadharan tarike se na marna sale ko aisi mout dena ki uski body ko dekh uske baap ki ruh tak kaap jaye

Roshni shayad YASH ki powers hi hogi tab to use jald hi apne sare powers mil jayega

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Fantastic update :adore:
SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC LOVELY EMOTIONAL SHAANDAAR AUR DHAMAAKEDAAR AND INTERESTING UPDATES BHAI
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update sir Jo
Sach kahu to villan ke bare Mai padh kr mujhe dar lgne lga hai..ghar Mai aakhir Kon hai ...yrrr dusman kitna v bada ho apana hero always ready hai..but ghar kakoi hoga to Yash ko pka koi na koi nukasn hoga.....anyway Bhai.apan hero ka birthday aa RHA hai.to power v aayega ... ..Shivani or Yash I hope sage Bhai bahan hai...
Aage sir aap Jane story Mai Kiya twist dete ho....anyway waiting for update bhai

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