Fantasy CHAMATKAR (Completed)

[Naina]

so agni, Chitra aur katra, shree samajh ke rajnandini se mil bethe.. chalo achhi baat hai... kam se Kam rajnandini adi ke family walo se mil legi. sayed kuch help bhi kar de..

ye story me kuch ek power rakhne wale apach me hi ladte hai.. pehle boh damdami aur Jhinga.. ab ye dono Chitra aur katra... ladne ke liye bas ek issue chahiye... phir kya.. ho gya jhagda suru.
Waise nangu pangu ne phir se Jhinga ko ullu banaya...

Oh to idhar adi ko asal baat samajh me aaya to udhar uske guru ka bulawa aaya... Hmm... damnak aise gussa me hai ki jaise kisine ushe 40, 50 misch ek sath khila diya ho..
Agar, Chitra, khatra & Agni, rajnandini mili to phir shree kaha hai?
kya nangu pangu shree ko dhund payenge?
ye dono aur kitne bar Jhinga aur damdami ko ullu banyenge.?
Let's see what happens next..
Brilliant update Anand ji.. Keep it up...

 

[Radhe]

Mast update maja aa gya bro
Update dete rhe
Aap ki story bahut acchi hai

 

[Yuvraj singh]

Nyc update bro

 

[aks 21]

Superb awesome update bhai

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai jankalyan karte karte bat lag gaya phirse.... Jis hisav se chal raha hai lagta hai bahut der lagne bali hai milne me adi ko..... Dekhte hai

 

[Kalyansurya]

Bhut he mast update hai bhai bichara aadi ki lagne wali hai fir se what

 

[Zas23]

UPDATE-95​

Idhar dharti lok me agni, khatra aur chitra ke sath urmila se milne ja rahi thi….raste me chitra ne agni ko vo jagah dikhayi jaha par adii ke upar hamla hua tha.

Agni doudte huye adhir ho kar uss jagah aa gayi aur jaha adii khada tha uss jagah ki mitti ko pranam kar ke apne mathe aur maang me laga liya….khatra aur chitra, agni ki aisi pati bhakti dekh kar nat mastak ho gaye.

Kuch samay vaha rukne ke baad vo jaise hi chalne ko huye to unki nazare kisi ko dekh kar buri tarah se chounk gayi.

Teeno (chounk kar)—shreeeeeeeeee……..‼

Ab Aage…….

Khatra (khushi se)—shree malkin bhi jinda hain…malkin hame mil gayi.

Chitra—lekin yaha kyo aayi ye…?

Agni—shayad aadi ki talash me.... ? lekin aaj shree ke chehre par itna tez kaisa hai…? Ek alag hi chamak dikhi usme mujhe….shree ke chehre par theek vaisa hi soundarya jhalak raha hai jaisa ki kanak rishi ne rajnandini ka bataya tha.

Chitra—ye baat to jarur hairan karne wali hai….shree to vaise bahut sundar pahle se hi hai kintu aaj uski sundarta chaand ko bhi phika kar rahi hai.

Khatra—chalo unko bhi malik ke jinda hone ki khush khubari dete hain…sab shree malkin ko jinda dekh kar bahut khush honge.

Chitra—hmmm..chalo

Sab tezi se shree ki taraf jane lage jo udhar hi aa rahi thi…lekin ye kya shree to unke bagal se aise nikal gayi jaise ki usne inn logo ko dekha hi na ho ya phir jaan bujh kar na pahchana ho.

Agni (shocked)—shree ne hame pahchana kyo nahi….?

Chitra—vahi soch kar to main bhi hairan hu.

Agni (jor se)—shree…ruk jao

Khatra—ruk jaiye malkin…..

Chitra—shree ruk jaooo……aadii jinda haiiiii

Jaha shree khatra aur agni ki baato ko ansuna kar ke aage chali ja rahi thi vahi chitra ki baat sunte hi uske kadam jaha ke taha ruk gaye…vo chounk ke palat kar teeno ko dekhne lagi…asal me jise vo shree samajh rahe the vo shree nahi balki rajnandini thi.

Khatra—malkin aap nahi janti ki apko jivit dekh kar mujhe kitna harsh ho raha hai….aap achanak uss khayi me girne ke baad kaha gayab ho gayi thi…?

Chitra—haan..shree apko pareshan hone ki jarurat nahi hai…..adii jinda hai….kanak rishi ne sab bata diya hai adii ke bare me.

Rajnandini (mann me)—yaha to aur koi bhi nahi hai mere alawa….to phir ye log mujhe shree ke naam se kyo pukar rahe hain….? Main to inn logo ko nahi janti….par ye log adii ko kaise jante hain…?

Agni—aise hairani se kya dekh rahi ho shree... ? main agni hu..kya mujhe bhul gayi... ?

Rajnandini (mann me)—agni ke baare me to rajguru ne bataya tha...to kya ye vahi agni hai... ? aur kya sach me mera rishi jinda hai.... ?

Itna sochte hi uski ankho me nami utar aayi...akhir usne kitne hi varsho se jiske aane ki pratiksha me raaho me ankhe bichhaye baithi thi shayad vo shubh ghadi jaldi hi aane wali hai.

Rajnandini (bhavuk ho kar)—kaha hai vo..... ? mujhe uske paas le chalo..

Agni—vo iss samay brahmarishi vishwamitra ke paas kisi agyant jagah par shiksha grahan kar rahe hain.

Rajnandini (vyakul)—aap ka bahut bahut shukriya...main unhe khoj lungi

Agni—tum unhe kaha talash karogi shree…hame unki pratiksha karni chahiye…jaldi hi vo loutenge.

Rajnandini (adhirta purvak)—ab mujhse aur intazar nahi hota...sadiyo se to to pratiksha hi karti aa rahi hu.

Teeno (chounk kar)—sadiyo se..... ?

Agni—kahi aap…….rajnandini……..?

Rajnandini (chounk kar)—tumhe mera naam kaise malum……?

Agni—kanak rishi ne mujhe aap ke baare me sab bata diya hai….aaj main dhanya ho gayi….aaj mujhe aap jaisi prem ki pratimurti ke darshan prapt ho hi gaye…mera jivan safal ho gaya….aap ka prem dhanya hai didi…..kya main apko didi bula sakti hu….? Mujhe apne charno me thodi si jagah de do…jindgi bhar daasi ban ke aap dono ki sewa karungi.

Rajnandini—ye tum kya kah rahi ho agni…main to khud unke prem ki daasi hu…bhala ek daasi kisi aur ko daasi kaise bana sakti hai…tum mujhe jarur didi kah sakti ho agni.

Rajnandini ne aage badh kar agni ko apne gale se laga liya…dono hi iss samay behad bhavuk ho gayi thi…un dono ko dekh kar chitra aur khatra ki ankhe bhi aisa nishchal pyar dekh kar dabdaba uthi.

Khatra—malkin main malik ka sewak khatra jinn hu.

Agni (shocked)—kyaaa jinn….?

Khatra—haa…choti malkin…..main ek jinn hu…aur chitra ek chudail….ye hamara vastavik roop nahi hai….

Agni (shock)—chu…..chudaillllllllll

Khatra—ji chhoti malkin..chitra ek chudail hai…..aaaaa….maar dala

Chitra (gusse se)—khabardar jo mujhe phir se chudail bola to.

Khatra—mujhe kyo patak diya tune...ab chudail ko chudail nahi bolu to kya bolu.... ?

Chitra (gusse se)—mujhe bhi choti malkin bola kar..samjha

Khatra (shocked)—kyaaaa.... ? kya tu aur malkin....kahi tera dimag to kharab nahi hai... ? tu ek chudail hai...chudail

Chitra (gusse me)—ab main tujhe nahi chhodungi..ruk..abhi batati hu tujhe.

Chitra phir se khatra se ladne lagi...rajnandini ne dono ko alag kar ke chitra ko kisi tarah shant kiya....phir chitra ne apne baare me sab bataya jise sun kar sab ko dukh laga.

Rajnandini—tum bhi mujhe apni didi kah sakti ho chitra.

Chitra (khush)—sach

Rajnandini—hmmm ...sach me tumhare sath bahut bura hua hai chitra….

Agni—ab ghar chalte hain didi…maa ji ki tabiyat bahut kharab hai…jab se vo gaye hain tabhi se vo coma me hain.

Khatra—haa malkin….malik ne maa ji ki jimmedari mujhe di thi lekin main unki suraksha nahi kar paya…

Rajnandini—theek hai chalo.

Sab rajnandini ke sath urmila ko dekhne ke liye nikal gaye…..udhar nangu pangu damdami aur jhinga lala se apni pahchan chhupane ke liye nakli dadhi moonchh laga kar shree ki talash karne lage.

Har jagah talash karne ke baad bhi jab shree ka koi pata nahi chala to unhone dusre city me ja kar dhoodne ki soch kar train me sawar ho gaye dusri city jane ke liye….

Badkismati se Ussi dibbe me jhinga lala bhi rajnandini ki talash karte huye aa tapka aur nangu pangu ke samne wali seat me baith gaya.

Nangu (dhire se)—arey yaar ye to yaha bhi aa gaya…kahi pahchan to nahi liya isne hame…?

Pangu (kanafusi karte)—lagta hai ki hamari mout pakki hai….jarur isne pahchan liya hoga…picha hi nahi chhod raha hai ye sala tantrik…

Tabhi uss dibbe me hariyana ka ek choudhary aaya aur apni moonchho par taav deta hua ek sardar ji ke bagal me baith gaya...nangu aur pangu me ek dusre ki oor dekhte huye ankho hi ankho me kuch ishara kiya...aur dhire dhire aise baat karne lage ki jisse jhinga lala ko sunayi de jaye.

Nangu—yaar maine suna hai ki moonchho wale admi ke samne usko dikha dikha ke taav do aur kisi sardar se ye puch lo ki barah baj gaye kya to har manovanchhit ichchha poori ho jati hai.

Ye sunte hi jhinga lala ke kaan khade ho gaye...vo mann hi mann me behad khush ho gaya ki rajnandini ko vo ab talash kar lega agar aisa kar diya to.

Bas phir kya tha, mann me ye suvichar aate hi usne uss choudhary ko dikhate huye apni safachat mooncho par taav dene lag gaya....ye dekh kar choudhary ko gussa a gaya..vo apni jagah se utha aur jhinga lala ke gaalo par jad diye kas ke do thappad.

Choudhary—sale bina kheti ke hi hal chala riya hai tu...

Jhinga lala (gaal sahlate huye mann me)—isne mujhe mara kyo... ? ab isse nahi puchunga.....uss sardar se puchta hu...vo achcha admi lagta hai.

Jhinga lala (sardar se)—oye...sardar ....barah baj gaye kya..... ?

Uske itna puchte hi sardar ji ne aav dekha na taav jhinga lala ko teen char baar utha utha ke patak diya....jhinga lala dard se bilbilane laga.

Sardar—sale khotya nu...tere ko main manmohan singh lagta hu jo chup rahunga.

Jhinga lala (mann me)—aaaa….salo ne maar dala…..kaha hain vo dono….unke idea ki aisi ki taisi…..abhi unn dono ko sabak sikhata hu.

Jhinga lala unn dono (nangu aur pangu) ko sabak sikhane ke liye gusse me muda to chounk gaya kyon ki jhinga lala ki pitayi shuru hote hi dono mouka dekh kar vaha se khisak chuke the.

Vahi dusri jagah adii ne jaise hi suna ki damnak rishi ki ladki ka naam radha hai to vo chounk gaya...usko damnak ke gussa hone ka karan pata lag gaya tha.

Adii (shocked)—tumhara naam radha haiiii….?

Radha (laaz se)—hmmm….aap ne pita ji se aise kyo kaha mere bare me…?

Adii (mann me)—yaar ye to bahut badi gadbad ho gayi…..main to radha unki cow (gaay) ko bolta hu aur uske doodh pine ki baat kar raha tha…par ye to kuch aur hi samajh rahi hai…..inn ladkiyo ne to mera hi kalyan kar rakha hai......badi mushkil se unn sabse picha chhuta tha, ye ek aur aa gayi.....pahle vo munish ne jan kalyan jan kalyan kar kar ke mera kalyan kar diya….ab pata nahi guru vishwamitra mujhse koun sa jan kalyan karwana chahte hain... ?

Radha adii ki taraf dekhti mushkurati aur phir nazare jhuka leti.....tabhi vaha ek shisya aa gaya aur bataya ki adii ko guru vishwamitra ne bulaya hai turant.

Shisya—adii tumhe gurudev ne turant bulaya hai.

Adii—kyo koi khas kaam hai kya.... ?

Shisya—kaam ka to pata nahi lekin damnak rishi jarur bahut gusse me lag rahe the.

Adii—chal beta …ho gaya tera jan kalyan aaj to…‼

Nice update

 

[Sheera18]

Superb update

 

[Govindsonic]

Superb update

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome update