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UPDATE—92
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Hospital me shree abhi bhi behosh thi….charo dost vahi hospital ke bahar ruk kar uske hosh me aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the….kyon ki hospital ke andar rukne dene se Jaykaal ne mana kar diya tha.

Pangu—shree ke hosh me aate hi hum usse kahenge kya….?

Chuttad—abe tubelight…..isme sochna kya hai….hum usko sab sach sach bata denge…..?

Pangu—sab sach sach bata denge….jaise ki vo hamari baat par yakin kar hi legi…..yakin karna to door sunegi tak nahi vo hamari aisi baate…

Chuttad—kyo nahi sunegi….? Akhir hamne uski jaan bachayi hai….? Use sunna hi hoga…

Gangu—nahi yaar….pangu theek kah raha hai….dharti ke log dusri duniya ke hone ki baat par yakin nahi karte hain….aise me shree ke samne apni baat rakhna bahut mushkil kaam hoga….aur vaise bhi usne hame kaha dekha dekha hai bachate huye..vo to behosh ho gayi thi.

Nangu—to ab kya kare….?

Gangu—karna kya hai…hame apni baat to kahni hi padegi.

Chuttad—mere paas ek idea hai….

Teeno—kyaa….?

Chuttad—beshak shree hamari kisi baat ka yakin kare ya na kare…..lekin rishi ka naam sun kar uske mann me kuch na kuch to jarur halchul paida hogi.

Nangu—ye bhi ho sakta hai.

Idhar ye sab apas me baate karne me lage the udhar Jaykaal jo ki ek famous scientist aur kale jadu ka jankar bhi tha apni laboratory me baith kar Kilwish se sampark sthapit karne me laga hua tha….sampark sthapit hote hi vo teleport hokar uske paas pahuch gaya.

Jaykaal—kilwish ki jay ho…

Kilwish—Andhera kayam rahe….kaho jaykaal kya khabar hai….?

Jaykaal—andhera kayam rahega tamraj kilwish…..maine kuch samay pahle yaha dharti me rajnandini ko dekha hai.

Kilwish (chounk kar)—kyaaa…rajnandini aur dharti lok me….? Kuch samay pahle hi to Usne akaal aur bakaal ke hatho se pari lok ki rajkumari sonalika ko chhuda kar gayi thi….vo pari lok se yaha kyo aayi….?

Jaykaal—aap kaho to aaj hi usko khatam kar du….?

Kilwish—nahi jaykaal….rajnandini ko khatam karna tumhare bas ki baat nahi….uske paas tumse adhik khatarnak shaktiya hain…..tum uske upar nazar rakho aur ye janne ka prayas karo ki uske dharti lok me aane ke piche uska maqsad kya hai…..? jarur vo hamare khilaf koi bade sadyantra ki rachna kar rahi hai.

Jaykaal—aap chinta mat kaijiye maha mahim…vo meri nazaro se ab ojhal nahi ho payegi.

Kilwish—iss kaam me chaho to tum shaitan lok ki mashahoor jadugarni Damdami mayi aur tantrik Jhinga lala ki madad le sakte ho.

Kilwish ne dono ko bula kar jaykaal ke sath jane ko kaha…dono me halanki bahut kam banti thi….jhinga lala, hardam damdami mayi ke piche hi pada rahta tha lekin vo usko bhaav nahi deti thi.

Udhar subah hote hi shree ko hosh aaya to khud ko hospital ke bed par dekh ke chounk gayi….uske sir par aur jaha kahi bhi sharir ke hisso me chot aayi thi vaha patti bandhi huyi thi.

Usko hosh me aate dekh kar nurse doctor ko bulane chali gayi….shree ki ankho ke samne kal raat ki sari baate phir se ghumne lagi aur uski ankhe dard se nam ho gayi.

Doctor turant nurse ke sath aa gaya lekin unko shree vaha kahi nahi dikhi….unhone socha ki shayad vo bathroom me hogi kintu jab kafi samay baad bhi koi bathroom se bahar nahi aaya to unhone vaha check kiya…par bathroom me bhi koi nahi tha.

Unhone poora hospital dekh liya….charo dosto ko bhi andar bula kar iss ghatna ke vishay me bataya, sath hi jaykaal ko bhi inform kar diya.

Ye baat sabhi ke liye chounkane wali thi ki shree achanak kaha gayab ho gayi…..? itna jaldi usko dharti nigal gayi ya phir aasman kha gaya….? Main gate se bahar nikalte bhi usko kisi guard ne nahi dekha tha.

Udhar swarg lok me adii ne munish ke prastav par priyamvada se vivah karne ki baat swikar kar li….priyamvada bhi behad khush ho gayi.

Rishi vishwamitra adii ko apne sath himalaya ke ghane junglo ke beech apne ashram par le aaye aur vaha usko yuddh kala koushal me nipun karne lage….ashram ke aas paas me aur bhi kayi ashram the unme aur bhi kayi rishi aur unke pariwar rahte the…ye sabhi rishi vishwamitra ke shisya the.

Ashram me gaay aur bhainso ki koi kami nahi thi….jinka doodh pi kar adii aur bhi tandurust ho raha tha…. vishwamitra ne rishi ko bhi samjha diya tha.

Vahi agni khatra aur chitra ke sath kanak rishi ke ashram kshetra me pahuch gayi dono ki madad se…kintu khatra aur chitra ne jaise hi ashram me pravesh karne ka prayas kiya to ashram ke charo oor laga hua adrishya suraksha kawach ne dono ko bahar phenk diya.

Agni—lagta hai ki ashram ke charo oor suraksha kawach ka ghera hai…tum dono meri yahi pratiksha karo.

Khatra—jo agya malkin.

Agni ashram ke andar chali gayi …vaha pahuch kar usne anya rishiyo ke puchne par usne bataya ki vo kanak rishi se milne aayi hai….

Ek shisya—aap kuch der yahi intazar kariye devi…main gurudev ko aap ke baare me suchit kar deta hu.

Agni—apka bahut bahut dhanyawad.

Vo shisya ashram ke andar bani huyi ek kutiya ke bhitar chala gaya….jaha usne kanak rishi ko agni ke vishay me bataya…kanak rishi uss samay vishram kar rahe the.

Kanak—theek hai, unn devi ko aadar sahit mere paas le aao.

Shisya—ji gurudev……(bahar aane ke baad)—aap mere sath andar chaliye…gurudev apki pratiksha kar rahe hain.

Agni—ji, chaliye.

Agni us shisya ke sath kutiya ke andar aa gayi….kanak rishi bistar se uth kar apne aasan me virajman ho chuke the agni ne unhe pranam kiya.

Agni—kanak rishi ke charno me ek tuksh sadhvi ka pranam.

Kanak—aao…devi agni..tumhara mere iss ashram me swagat hai.

Agni—ye to mera aho bhagya hai ki mujhe apke darshano ka saubhagya prapt hua.

Kanak—aap koi sadharan kanya nahi hain devi….aap to agni kund se uttapann huyi hain…agni putri hain….phir bhi kahiye devi agni….main apki kya sahayta kar sakta hu….?

Agni—hey muni shrestha…main apne pati aditya rajvansh ki talash me apke shri charno tak aayi hu…kripaya mera marg darshan kijiye.

Kanak—aap dhanya hain devi….aur dhanya hai apki pati bhakti…aap ke sumadhur vachno ne mera hriday bhi jeet liya hai, putri….main avashya hi apki madad karne ka har yatha sambhav prayas karunga jaha tak mere adhikar kshetra ki seema ke tahat sambhav ho sakega.

Agni—main sadaiv apki abhari rahungi munivar.

Rishi kanak apni ankhe band kar ke dhyan mudra me aasin ho gaye.....dhyan me jate hi unhe sab gyat ho gaya ki agni kis ke vishay me janne ke liye yaha aayi huyi hai....dhyan me kuch der rahne ke baad unhone apni ankhe kholi.

Kanak—putri....baat aaj se kayi varsh pahle ki hai.....jab main ek baar bramha ji ki tapasya karne ke liye ja raha tha.

Zabardast bhai aakhir kaar agni ki patnindharam.ne shayad adii ka rehasya ugaagar karwa hi legi ab dekhtay hainki shree kaha gayab ho gayi aur sath sath Rajnandini bhi dharti pe pohach chuki.hai dekhay ab shree aur rahnandini ki jugal bandi kia gul khilati hain.

 

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