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Kya baat he bhai... Aisa lag raha he Atharva ke liye bahot apna pan jhalak raha he.. Sala kahi kahe bade tofaan ke aane ke pahle ki khusi to nhi... Maja aane wala he samane... Sala aaj Atharv ne agar dono ko propose bhi kardiya rahta toh dono Atharva ke naam ki ungali dal ker fatak se haa bhi...

I am waiting bhau:vhappy1::cowboy1:

Arre Madhu ke maa ka bhosda, Update ka reply dete dete aur ek update mil gay....Sala kismat bhi mast chal rahi he lagta he.... per sala asli mudde per aane se pahle hi update khatam.... Kya bhai Pura mudda to bata ke jaya karo , ab sala raat bhar neend nhi aayengi.... sochte bhetna padega Atharv...

Aur kya bolte bidu maje me kya .....Apan toh bam maje me he aur update padker toh aur bhi maje aa gaye..... Aur kya tarif kare bhai aapki ab toh sabd bhi nhi bache.... Apun ko jaisi story chahiye thi waisich story mil rahi he bole toh ekdum rapchik maaldhar ke mafik chikni.... Me toh pure pyar...

Arre bhau kya mast peki jabardast likh rahe ho, bole to jhakass, fadoo ekdum rapchik ki mafik update diyla ho... Jo kami sala school me rahgayi wo sab yahi per ho rahi aisa lag raha.... Ekdum sala dil se dimag se ya kahi se bhi soch kar likh rahe hoge per sala hamare pure jdilodimag me bas gaya...

Kya baat he bhai..... Jitna socha tha usse bhi kahi jyada maza aaya update padhkar..... Soch se pare tha bhai..... Sath hi Athrva ko Clarity mil rahi he, sala karna kya he aage aur uske hi sath apna Athrva banda uske plan ke according chal raha.....Ab aage dekhte he kitne lawde lagte he aur...

Wah bhai sala aakhri wali line kya mast chapi he ... Sala teen type mootna bhi kya hota he aaj pata chala..:what1:

Kya haal he Gyani bhai..... Srry thoda late aaya per kya karu sala exam chal rahe he bhai toh thoda schedule gadabada gaya he.... Pan apun aaj hi saare update pad dale.... Aur saare update ek saath padne ke baat bhai dil ko itna sukun mila sabdo me baya nhi kiya jaa sakta..... Apki lekhayi me...

Kya baat he bhai kya mast short story chape ho.... Pahli baat toh Gyani bhai ka naam dekhke hi samjh gaya ki bhai mast peki story chap di hogi..... Gyani bhai ki story bole toh ek alag hi level rehta he....jo ki mujhe nhi lagta yaha per kisi bhi writer ke pass is type ki skill hoga....He was the...

Jai ho Gyani bhai ki:claps:...... Mast pe ki nayi story chaprele ho bidu..... Ekdum kadak bole to dil prashan ho gaya apki story dekh kar:cool1:..... Bohot dinno bad xforum me kadm rakhe aur aate barabar apki story dikh gayi..... 'The Three Girls of my Life'.....:partyjump:Bhai lagta is baar...

Bhai story bahot mahol he bole to fadu..... manu ka kirdar bhi mast fit huva he .riston me emotion, pyar sab kuch sahi ja raha...... Even story ka plot bhi mast he... Aur apna hero Manaav toh aur mahol he.... Per bhai thoda confusing he bhai apne itne londiya dal diye ki sala padne wala...

Hey bhai.... I have read the story 'Mayavi Duniya' its really amazing. I know that what are you thinking why I am commenting on this story because I just want to read whole story. Its really love to see the writer of 'AgniVarsha' is back.... and I really want see the story full completed. I have...

:congrats:for starting the dhassu story.. Biddu abhi maza aaienga na... Bole toh apna rapchik manus Gyani bhau wapas lautela he... Abhi toh iss khel me mera matlab he story padne me maza aaienga.. Bole to bhai abhi se hi update dena suru kardo.. Apun wait nhi ker sakta.... Bahot tadapa liya ab...

Hey hii... This story is amazing. I have read previous part also which was 'AgniVarsha' both the part are amazing. I don't know why the writer left the story from middle but you have completed 2nd part of story. Story has various twist and turn, it conclude with romance, friendship, revenge and...

Hi...

Are Hariya bhai kya dhasu update chape ho bhai, puri planning ke sath lene per tule ho sabki....... Sala Vikram banda bhi kitna saiyna he matlab sabkuch pahle se hi decide kar ke rakha he kiske gand me kitna lamba bambu ghusenga aur kiske gand me ungiliyo se kaam chal jaienga:lol:,..... Bole toh...

Are Hariya babu kya story likh rahe ho yaar maja aagaya salla. Ek baar padne betha toh man hi nhi kiya uthne ka. kya faddu story chap rahe ho bhai.Salla do din me story pad dali. Bole toh ek se ek update jabardast he. sallla apne toh mahol hi aisa create kar diya ki hamare dimag ke laude lag...

:congrats: for restarting the story... :cheers:Ab toh bidu intezaar nhi ho raha jaldi se dahi sakhar kha ker update pel do:rock1:

Bc kya update tha...pura mahol hi thok dala sala ....Akhri end tak laga bhai ghapaghap hoga.... Per akhri me Daksh ka dimag thikhane pe aahi gaya....Jo bhi ho bande ko samaj me toh aahi gaya.....Per sala guilt ke chakker me mar na jaye nhi toh sala bande ka badla kaise pura hoga bhai ... Solid...

Sala Hrithik marne vala he kya...:angrysad: Agle update me chances lag rahe he Bahot tivst and turn he bc...