• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

Diksha

Active Member
673
530
93
Update # 5


Subah jab Pari sokar uthi to Himansh pahle hk uth chuka tha . Usne breakfast bana kar table prepare kar di . Pari jab taiyar hokar aayi to wo bahut bhookhi thi par yahan ka to manjar alag tha . Bhookhe pet 1 hr use table manner seekhna pada . Shuru me to Pari ko irritation ho rahi thi lekin baad me maja aane laga . Nashta karne ke baad Himansh aur Pari mall pahunch gaye jahan par Pari ne khoob shopping ki lekin Himansh ne Pari ki sari shopping ko hata diya aur khud Pari ke liye shopping shuru ki . Pari mini skirt and shorts ko dekh kar khauf jada ho rahi thi jabki Himansh kapdon ki rack se agla Jhatka us tak la raha tha .


Pari - abb ye kya hai sir ?

Himansh - yahi dress to tumko Valentine night ki party me pahnana hai .

Pari - ye kuchh jyada hi ajeeb nahi hai ?

Himansh - isme ajeeb kya hai ?

Pari - itni badi hai ye , isme mai kho nahi jaungi ?

Himansh - to kya mai bhi chalu trial room me , tum change karna mai tumko khone se bachata rahoonga :lol:

Pari - chheeee aap kitne gande ho :mad:

Himansh - ok sorry baba ise party gown kahte hain . jao pahan kar aao dekhu to kaisi lag rahi ho ?

Pari Himansh se dress lekar chali gayi jabki Himansh ki hasi ab bhi nahi ruk rahi thi . Pari ka sath Himansh ko ras aa raha tha . Himansh Pari ke bare me hi soch raha tha tabhi wo samne se party gown pahne aa bhi gayi . Black colour me uska doodhiya rang chandni ki tarah chamchama utha tha . Himansh to hakka bakka sirf uski khoobsurti ko dekhe ja raha tha . Jab Himansh kafi der kuchh bhi nahi bola to Pari ne darte huye pooncha ,


Pari - achchha nahi lag raha na ?

Himansh - tum sahi bol rahi thi .

Pari - Mujhe pata tha :( maine apko pahle hi bola tha :( mai change kar ke ati hoon .

Himansh - are nahi mai to ye bolna chah raha hoon ki tumne sahi kaha tha ki tum kho jaogi . Is dress ko pahnane ke baad tum sach much ki Pari pari lag rahi ho :love:

Pari ne Himansh ki baat sun kar rahat ki saans li aur samne rakhe aadam kad sheeshe me khud ko niharne lagi jabki Himansh ki najrein Pari par se hat hi nahi rahi thi . Shopping poori hone ke baad Himansh Pari ko food court le gaya . Dono hi bahut khush the . Ek taraf Himansh Reveka ke aham ko kuchlne wala tha to doosri taraf Pari ne kabhi is janam me mall jane , itni mahngi shopping aur food cort ke lajawab khane ke bare me socha bhi nahi tha . Sab kuchh unexpected tha uske liye . Khair mall se pari ko lekar Himansh usi Lakme beauty saloon pahuncha janhan uski ek purani dost pahle se majood thi .

Pari muh khole wahan maujood cream , powder , shampoo ko dekh rahi thi kyu ki un sab ka daam Pari ki soch se bhi upar tha . 10 min bad ek ladki Pari ko apne sath ek cabin me le gayi .
Hello!
It feels really good to be able to read a story like this here...
I was inactive here from a very long time and when I logged in to my ID after a very long time ....my eyes caught this name "Notebook"....a very unique but somewhat familiar :dontknow:
Then today I just logged in to read your story and it is fabulous....
The way you write,and the way you reply to the comments of the readers,reminds me of someone who isi a really great writer...
All in all I love this story...simple but affective....the language and its impact is incredible....
I am not exaggerating here...maybe some of it is beacube of your writing style of which I am really fond of...
The starting point where Raveka and Himanshu were fighing and the twists in the plots where an orphan girl came into Himanshu's life.....and their conversation....which became familiar in just 1 day along with some spice of comical moments were Adorable..
Thanks for writing this story...and I am sure that you will complete it for sure ☺️
I am feeling very sad,because I am not active here...
But feeling very happy as your writing skills are damn good,and of course familiar too ....
Keep rocking like this always :)
 

Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
31,620
92,251
189
Pari ke baju me chup chap ake baithne wala sayed himesh hoga :hmm:
... ek baat samajh me na ai ye vamp revaka - vevaka har ek baat ke liye Monty monkey ko hi kyun call karti hai.sayed revaka ki paltu ho ... See, ab pari ko himesh ki mom samne bura dikhane ke liye monty monkey ko hi subut tor pe pesh kar rahi hai.... bechari himesh ki mom bhi bina kuch jane hi apni khoon jala rahi hai..
Btw brilliant update sir....
 

Notebook

Active Member
1,511
2,978
143
Hello!
It feels really good to be able to read a story like this here...
I was inactive here from a very long time and when I logged in to my ID after a very long time ....my eyes caught this name "Notebook"....a very unique but somewhat familiar :dontknow:
Then today I just logged in to read your story and it is fabulous....
The way you write,and the way you reply to the comments of the readers,reminds me of someone who isi a really great writer...
All in all I love this story...simple but affective....the language and its impact is incredible....
I am not exaggerating here...maybe some of it is beacube of your writing style of which I am really fond of...
The starting point where Raveka and Himanshu were fighing and the twists in the plots where an orphan girl came into Himanshu's life.....and their conversation....which became familiar in just 1 day along with some spice of comical moments were Adorable..
Thanks for writing this story...and I am sure that you will complete it for sure ☺️
I am feeling very sad,because I am not active here...
But feeling very happy as your writing skills are damn good,and of course familiar too ....
Keep rocking like this always :)
Thanks:yo: itni khoobsurat cmnt ke baad kya bolu , bahut shukriya mere hausla afjayi ke liye :love:
 

Notebook

Active Member
1,511
2,978
143
Pari ke baju me chup chap ake baithne wala sayed himesh hoga :hmm:
... ek baat samajh me na ai ye vamp revaka - vevaka har ek baat ke liye Monty monkey ko hi kyun call karti hai.sayed revaka ki paltu ho ... See, ab pari ko himesh ki mom samne bura dikhane ke liye monty monkey ko hi subut tor pe pesh kar rahi hai.... bechari himesh ki mom bhi bina kuch jane hi apni khoon jala rahi hai..
Btw brilliant update sir....
Thanks:yo: Reveka ka kya karna chahiye ?? Akhir kya saja honi chahiye:hmm: dekhte hai kaun hai pari ke baju baithne wala,:D
 
Top